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A London Extra; A Hannah/James Sequel to A French Connection
Topic Started: January 9, 2012, 12:42 am (25,143 Views)
CarpeDiemBaby
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James was very rude with Fran :angry

at this point I don't know if I'm in Fran's team or Hanna's team :lol:
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fiometal
January 17, 2012, 4:40 am
James was very rude with Fran :angry

at this point I don't know if I'm in Fran's team or Hanna's team :lol:
One thing's for sure: I don't wanna be Ray next chapter! :lol:
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fiometal
January 17, 2012, 4:40 am
James was very rude with Fran :angry

at this point I don't know if I'm in Fran's team or Hanna's team :lol:
Take your pick! :lol: :heart:

James is mighty pissed with her, he has every right to be. I suppose she could say the same.
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Auluna Raie
January 17, 2012, 4:42 am
fiometal
January 17, 2012, 4:40 am
James was very rude with Fran :angry

at this point I don't know if I'm in Fran's team or Hanna's team :lol:
One thing's for sure: I don't wanna be Ray next chapter! :lol:
Indeed!

I'll see if I can put this chapter together before bed.... :)
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‘Ray? Can I come in?’ Francesca knocked on the guest room door with a worried hand. She had just got off the phone from James, and she was utterly confused—she had not got any of the answers she had expected. She couldn’t understand what James’ new son had to do with Ray. Ray opened the door in nervous surprise. She looked around anxiously.

‘Ray we need to talk’ she walked into his room without being invited, it was her house after all. He sat nervously on the edge of his bed. He had an uncomfortable flashback of the two of them in here some 12 years earlier. She had come to him, just like this, and kissed him hotly. He was sure it was a reaction for saving their marriage—he had successfully convinced him to leave Carlos. Somehow, she had channelled her energy towards him that day, and they had ended up moments from making love—each in a terrible place in their lives. Ray was thankful it had not happened after all. And now, Francesca’s nervous face looked at him for answers once more.

‘I just spoke to James! He said that…’ she wiped her tears from her eyes. She shook her head as her tears fell fast, she was thinking of her poor youngest daughter’s recent discovery that her father was cheating. She started from the beginning.

‘Ray, do you remember that girl who James was seeing? A call girl, named Hannah?’ her eyes searched his face with worry. Ray gulped, he couldn’t reply. They were working towards a fateful conclusion. He knew she would find out eventually. He nodded, unable to speak.

‘James has fathered a child with her!’ she cried. ‘A baby boy! There’s photos of them together with him, all over the internet! Marcella found them!’ she cried the last of her words with an openly wailing mouth.

Ray’s mind whirled. Hannah was with James? She had taken off with him since Ray had left London?!

‘I just called James to ask him about it, and he said that I should ask you! What does he mean?’ she composed herself with remarkable clarity and Ray froze, he didn’t want to tell her. He admired and respected Francesca more than he ever dared express.

‘The baby boy, he’s not James’ son’ Ray began.

‘He’s not?’ Francesca’s face was shocked and confused.

‘No’ Ray took a deep revealing breath.

‘He’s my son’ Ray raised his face to take in Francesca’s expression. Her forehead clenched into a stunned pose.

‘Pardon? Why is James looking after your son?’ Ray couldn’t reply. He’d rather let his guilty silence explain itself. After ten seconds of silence, her face was terrified from guessing.

‘Well? Ray! Tell me!’ she shrieked.

‘Hannah is my wife!’ Ray revealed. Francesca’s face dropped in a knowing angry gasp. Her face turned stern and tense. She was furious once more.

‘You mean to say, that you knew about James sleeping with Hannah, all this time!’ she screamed. ‘YOU KNEW!’ Ray nodded, he cried, he had been forced to keep James’ secret for fear of ruining their marriage.

‘I fell in love with her when James was seeing her’ he explained. ‘Yes, I left you and your family to follow her back to London. I loved her’ he explained honestly, but his words didn’t placate Francesca.

‘I trusted you!’ she sobbed.

‘If it’s any consolation, she isn’t speaking to me and she’s clearly taken off with James’ Ray concluded, thinking of the photos of James with his wife and son. He had had no contact with Hannah at all since leaving London.

‘I don’t care if you ruined your own marriage, but you will NOT ruin mine!’ she cried.

‘GET OUT OF MY HOUSE!’ she screamed. ‘I never want to see you again!’ her hands trembled violently, she couldn’t believe what she was saying. The awful fact was that Ray had once overheard her say the very same thing to James.

‘You brought that whore into our lives!’ she screamed. ’James was clean! We had our life back! You will never truly know the damage you have done to me, to us! James will never love me again. Hannah is young and beautiful, and I’m old and tired. This is all your fault!’ she screamed.

‘GET OUT!’ she yelled again.
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Auluna Raie
January 17, 2012, 4:42 am
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January 17, 2012, 4:40 am
James was very rude with Fran :angry

at this point I don't know if I'm in Fran's team or Hanna's team :lol:
One thing's for sure: I don't wanna be Ray next chapter! :lol:
Agree! :lol: :lol:

James is gonna kick his ass, poor guy, well at last he deserve it! :biggrin

All men deserve it! :rolleyes:


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Well done Fran!!!!

I'm with you mate! :horns2
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January 17, 2012, 5:45 am
Well done Fran!!!!

I'm with you mate! :horns2
It's an ultimate betrayal, even though Ray wasn't the one having the affair in the first place. Perhaps she was a little harsh on him. She didn't let him say he was keeping the secret to protect her. :o
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Just read the updates. OMG! I can't believe James and Hannah are really planning to be together as a family, they can't be serious :o

And I think Fran overreacted, I agree with her, but it's not only his fault. I also think he was kind naive to believe that Hannah would be alone or to be surprised she's with James! :rolleyes:

What a drama, yes! :biggrin :heart:
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Well, I love the situation between James and Hanna :heart: New happy family, hopefully.
Ray wants Fran, Fran wants James and Ray, Hanna wants James and will kick Rays ass, James wants Hanna. There will be a nice confrontation going on :lol:

Yes, yes, yes things are going to be very interesting :nanner:
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Nah Bruno
January 17, 2012, 3:36 pm
Just read the updates. OMG! I can't believe James and Hannah are really planning to be together as a family, they can't be serious :o

And I think Fran overreacted, I agree with her, but it's not only his fault. I also think he was kind naive to believe that Hannah would be alone or to be surprised she's with James! :rolleyes:

What a drama, yes! :biggrin :heart:
:D Thanks! Glad you liked all the updates!

Fran did overreact, but she realised that if Ray had just been honest up front, he might've saved Marcella and Fran their upset at discovering what seemed to be,photos of James and his new son.
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January 17, 2012, 4:23 pm
Well, I love the situation between James and Hanna :heart: New happy family, hopefully.
Ray wants Fran, Fran wants James and Ray, Hanna wants James and will kick Rays ass, James wants Hanna. There will be a nice confrontation going on :lol:

Yes, yes, yes things are going to be very interesting :nanner:
Fran doesn't want Ray--she still secretly wants James.

Ray doesn't really want Fran seriously, he just misses her friendship. Ray wants Hannah, but he doesn't realise the extent of her new relationship with James yet.

Yes, there will be confrontations soon
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*tightens helmet* Remember people, duck and cover; just like we practiced...
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January 17, 2012, 10:31 pm
Some_Kind_Of_Monster
January 17, 2012, 4:23 pm
Well, I love the situation between James and Hanna :heart: New happy family, hopefully.
Ray wants Fran, Fran wants James and Ray, Hanna wants James and will kick Rays ass, James wants Hanna. There will be a nice confrontation going on :lol:

Yes, yes, yes things are going to be very interesting :nanner:
Fran doesn't want Ray--she still secretly wants James.

Ray doesn't really want Fran seriously, he just misses her friendship. Ray wants Hannah, but he doesn't realise the extent of her new relationship with James yet.

Yes, there will be confrontations soon
Got ya :P

Thanks :lol:
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Just read several parts and wow... there is so much going on. So much drama! And I have a feeling that there is going to be a lot more dramatic scenes on the way! :lol:

More? :biggrin :heart:
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