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| Psycho Holiday; 3rd Person POV, Het & Biography | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: January 23, 2012, 11:16 am (2,352 Views) | |
| Anselmo's Girl | January 23, 2012, 11:16 am Post #1 |
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Phil crazy!
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Chapter 1 July 6th, 1989 Phil woke up to the sound of the phone ringing, he could the feel the crick in his neck and dreaded getting up. The sun was beating in like it was the deep depths of hell and his throat was bone dry. He coughed and slowly opened his eyes, he looked around without moving his head and seen Rex passed out on the floor with a girl on him. Phil just grumbled and slowly rose, "Oh god my neck hurts". He sighed and slowly got up from the couch in just a pair of white boxers. He slowly made his way over to the old tan phone that hung on the wall. He picked it up, "Hello?" he said in a deep and sleepy voice with a bit of grogginess mixed in. His mother giggled, "Hi sleepy head your voice starting to change what's next?". He sighed, "Ma I just woke up". She giggled again, "Ok I just wanted to call and see how you were doing I mean you haven't really called lately". He stood cleaning the cold out of his eyes, "I'm fine mom just been busy". She nodded, "Mmhm don't be having babies now Philip that's the last thing you need". He blushed a little as the girl entered the kitchen and he grumbled, "Ma I ain't having babies" he said in a low tone almost a whisper. The girl looked at him opening the fridge door, "Mmmhm I'm sure theres a girl in the apartment with you right now". He looked at the girl, "Something wrong sugar?" she asked. He just stared at her breast as he could feel himself getting hard, she giggled. He swallowed and looked at her, "Ma I gotta go I got a show later and stuff I'll call you when I can". She nodded, "Ok baby be safe". He hung up and the girl walked past him slapping his ass, "Come see me if ya wanna relax". He jumped and looked at her, he shivered "I'm gonna pretend that didn't just happened" he whispered to himself. He opened the fridge and grabbed a water he took a big gulp and capped it. He walked back to the living room going to his and Rexs' room that they shared with only a few things in it an two single beds. Phil seen Rex laying in his bed back asleep and he just laid down, he covered up and rolled over rubbing his head. He sighed and got back up, the women sat on the couch doing her nails. He sat down by her, "Why are you always with Rex?". She shrugged, "I like him for him darlin you'll find yours one day and hopefully won't be a damn Hugh heffner". He laughed, "But if you like him why you touch me earlier?". She gave him a look, "Just kind of a joke". She finished painting her nails red, "Linda.." which was short for Belinda "will you please cut my hair" he pointed to his hair. She looked at him, "Cut all that long silky brown hair off? Let my nails dry honey and I will". Chapter 2 Phil sat in his plain white boxers in the kitchen slouched as Belinda stood with the buzzers shaving the sides. He smiled, "What made you wanna shave your head for the first time?". He shrugged, "It seems like it would be easy to maintain, it's something new and plus I'm tired of looking like a girl man I want something more manly and rockin". She giggled, "Whatever you say honey". She bent his ears and got around them, she stopped them and took the hair cutting scissors. She left a long strip of hair down the middle like a Mohawk, she cut it a little. She dropped the towel, "Go take a shower hun and let's check the new hair do". He walked away feeling his new haircut as it felt very different and the breeze on his head was terrific. He got in the shower and gently washed his body then washed rinsed and repeated with his hair. He shut the warm water off and got out slowly, the mirror was steamed up and his body dripping wet. He slowly dried of and put on some boxers, he came back out and sat down by Belinda. She smiled, "Looking good handsome". He smiled, "I think I'm gonna change my wardrobe too". She looked at him, "Ok I get the haircut but your wardrobe?". He nodded, "Look hair metal and glam bullshit is going next year it's gonna be nineteen ninety an plus if we're gonna be metal we don't need fancy clothes I mean really do we need big fancy hair?". Belinda looked at him thinking, "I guess not but still". He nodded, "Just think bout it why do we gotta look like a bunch of damn girls just to get famous as long as we play good it would be ok". She thought bout it some more, "Yeah but people like the look". He sighed, "Look I gotta talk to the guys make sure Rex is at Darrell's house in an hour". She nodded and he got up and went to his room getting dressed then leaving. Edited by Anselmo's Girl, July 26, 2012, 6:06 pm.
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| Nora_Tallica | January 23, 2012, 2:53 pm Post #2 |
Outlaw Torn
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i want to read MORE!!! awesome work devin!!
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| Anselmo's Girl | January 23, 2012, 2:58 pm Post #3 |
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Phil crazy!
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Yay! glad you love it Nora! I'm working on more
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| faroo7luvsmetallica | January 23, 2012, 3:24 pm Post #4 |
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Girl You Stank Take a BATH!
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wahoo!i like the intro,more bonquiqui!!MOOOREE!!
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| Anselmo's Girl | January 23, 2012, 3:26 pm Post #5 |
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Phil crazy!
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don't worry I'm working on more already
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| Anselmo's Girl | January 24, 2012, 5:25 am Post #6 |
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Chapter 3 Phil stood under the warm water, his eyes closed his hands against the wall and only the sound of the water. He let the warm comforting water wash over his face as his sore muscles loosened up. He sighed and slowly wiped his face, he turned the water off and got out. He slowly dried off and out on pajama pants, he made his way out and heard Belinda shouting from pleasure. He slowly plopped on the couch all alone, and turned the tv on. He got up again and made some popcorn, he put in an old black and white horror movie then sat down. He covered up with a blanket and quietly watched the movie eating the popcorn out of the blue see through bowl. The moaned continued and the sounds got louder as they came close to finishing. Phil just sat quietly his body aching and himself just missing home. They finally came to a finish and the sounds had stopped, a few minutes later Belinda sat by him. She stole a few pieces of popcorn, "Hey rockstar". He looked at her, "Hi" he said quietly. He went back to watching, "Why you so down?". He shrugged and just ate, "We too loud?". He shook his head, "Then what's wrong?". He sighed, "My body hurts and I miss home plus it would be nice to come home to somebody not a bowl of popcorn, a beer and a old movie like always". She smiled and got up kissing him on the head, "Don't worry hun you'll find that special one and you'll get to take her home and get a house and be successful I promise". She walked away going to the bathroom and the back to bed, Phil sighed and put the popcorn down. He turned the tv off and went to bed, he closed the door and laid down. He got comfortable and Belinda looked, at him smiling as she rubbed Rex's back. He looked at her for a second then rolled over, he turned his light off so it was completely dark. He pulled the covers up and looked out the window up at the moon. The moonlight enlightened his face and some of his bed as he wished he was home. He slowly closed his eyes and relaxed, he slipped into a deep sleep. |
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| faroo7luvsmetallica | January 24, 2012, 2:37 pm Post #7 |
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Girl You Stank Take a BATH!
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nice chapter!more!
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| The Cosmic Gerbil | January 24, 2012, 6:09 pm Post #8 |
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Ooh, good to see the prequel up Phil's mom is so awesome and funny Poor Phil though, he is lonely I hope he will be able to find a girlfriend soon
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| Anselmo's Girl | January 27, 2012, 5:29 pm Post #9 |
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Phil crazy!
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Chapter 4 Phil and his old high school friend Nora sat watching a horror movie on the couch. She was curled up to him shivering, and his popcorn in his lap. They slowly both reached in the bowl and they looked, Phil quickly pulled away. He shoved his hand kinda under him, "Sorry". She slowly grabbed some and ate it, "It's fine" she whispered. Phil's stomach kinda growled after that because he didn't reach for the popcorn again. The movie was over and Nora had fallen asleep, Phil sat quietly for a moment. The popcorn was gone and his beer was empty, he slowly sat the bowl down. He wrapped her up and slowly carried her to his room, she woke up. She looked, "Phil no I don't want to, we're friends". He looked at her a but offended, "I was just laying you down so you could sleep and not have to drive home tired". She felt bed for even thinking he'd take advantage of her and kinda blushed. She slowly sat up, "I'm sorry I should prolly go anyways". He looked at her really not wanting to be alone, "Don't go I'll sleep on the couch I promise I won't do anything". He looked at her with his big brown eyes that pleaded for her not to leave him all alone. She looked at him quietly, "Please I promise Nora" he said with a bit of sadness in his voice. She sighed and slowly got up hugging him, "Let me use the restroom and you can lay with me". He nodded and she slowly left using the bathroom, he quietly stood wondering what he should wear and what not to. Nora finally made it back to find him looking at his shirt, she slowly got in bed. He looked and decided not to take a chance by slowly laying down fully clothed even with socks. She took his shirt off and his socks, "I know you've got to be hot". He looked at her nervous, "Yeah". She cuddled up to him, laying her head and long brown hair on his smooth chest. His breathing got heavier, "Oh god" he whispered. He felt himself getting hard and shut his eyes tight, he bit his lip as he felt the sheets starting to tent. He swallowed and she watched the sheets slowly raise, "Please don't notice please don't notice please don't notice" he whispered. |
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| Anselmo's Girl | January 27, 2012, 8:42 pm Post #10 |
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Phil crazy!
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Chapter 5 Nora stood in the doorway, "I'm sorry I just can see that turning into something that I'm honestly not ready for considering a lot of things". Phil just put on his shoes and shut the door, "it's fine see you whenever I come home to new Orleans". He locked the door and walked away leaving her at the door feeling she had hurt him. He put his hands in his pockets and took the elevator, she ran and jumped in just as the doors closed. They stood quietly, and waited for them to reach the lobby. She grabbed him and kissed him on the lips, his eyes got big and he tried fighting it. His voice mumbled but he just stopped struggling after a bit and slowly kissed back. He slowly closed his eyes and pushed her against the wall, the doors opened and a old couple got in. Phil smacked the wall and fought her again, she pulled away breathing heavily. The couple looked at them then at each other in shock, "Dont pay attention Martha damn kids need to do it in privacy". Nora looked at him as her face got red, she quickly looked away and lefty the doors shut. Phil stopped them and ran after her wanting to know what just happened. He ran faster as she exited the building, he slid on the new buffed tile. He slammed into the door hitting his nose, "Fucking door move!". He pushed it holding his bleeding nose, he ran after her "Nora!". He sounded funny and quickly moved his hand and caught up to her. He grabbed her arm, "Nora please". She stopped and looked at him, "What...just...happened!?" he kind of shouted between breaths. She wiped the blood from his nose, "I don't know". They slowly looked at each other, "You taste like popcorn". She looked at him and just kinda giggled, "You taste like beer". He shrugged and stood up, "Look I didn't mean for that to happen back there just your pretty and always have been I guess during high school I've always liked you just didn't have the guts to ask you out, still don't really and this is the first time I've really told you all this and I really like you". She looked at him and he stood frozen hoping she wouldn't reject him. She opened her mouth to speak but didn't know what to say, "Really?" was all she managed to ask. He nodded and moved closer, "Nora?". He took her hand slowly, "Yeah?". He looked down at her because she was shorter, "Will you go out with me on a date?". Her heart did a flip flop and she jumped in his arms, "Yes" she quickly kissed him. He tangled his fingers in her wonderful brown hair that was so smooth and smelled wonderful from her shampoo. He kissed back adding tongue an tilted his head and she grabbed his face. He leaned against a car and made out with her for a few moment on the sidewalk. |
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| Anselmo's Girl | January 28, 2012, 5:07 am Post #11 |
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Phil crazy!
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Chapter 6 Phil laid Nora in his bed as Belinda and Rex were already home and cuddling talking quietly. Phil didn't care who was there at the moment he just at least wanted to make out. He quickly took off his shoes and then his socks, Nora helped him with his shirt and he took her pants off. He laid down and turned the light out making it dark, "Phil is that who I think it is with you?". He pulled the covers up, "Shut up Rex" he growled. Phil kissed Nora and she grabbed his face kissing back as they continued. Phil draped his arm around her and added tongue as well as she. He pressed his shivering body against hers and tilted his head more. Their tongues twisted and turned, battled and rubbed against each other as they made out. Phil kissed her harder and she ran her hand over his chest. She grabbed his hair and he started dry humping her, he pulled away and humped harder. He whimpered and breathed heavily, "I want you so bad Nora" he whispered to her. He kissed her neck and tightened his grip around her, "Oh Phil not tonight we haven't even been on a date yet". He humped faster as it started to burn their skin, he stopped and kissed her pushing his tongue in her mouth. She kissed back and wrapped her leg around him breaking the kiss. They both breathed heavily and he started growing a little hard against her. They looked at each other, "Calm down Phil not tonight, we just kiss and cuddle alright?". He whimpered and slowly nodded, he kissed her neck gently "Sorry for humping you so hard". She smiled rubbing his chest, "It's ok Phil just dont really wanna do it in front of others either". Phil kinda heard Belinda giggle, "Ok" he whispered. They cuddled up to each other and kissed for awhile that night as they laid entwined in each other. Edited by Anselmo's Girl, January 28, 2012, 5:09 am.
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| The Cosmic Gerbil | January 28, 2012, 6:32 pm Post #12 |
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Sorry I missed some chapters Hehehehe, yes Sounds like Phil and Nora are having lots of fun
Edited by The Cosmic Gerbil, January 28, 2012, 6:42 pm.
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| Anselmo's Girl | January 29, 2012, 12:12 am Post #13 |
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Chapter 7 The next day Phil sat on the couch watching tv seeing how it was a Saturday and the boys didn't play on Saturday. Nora got up wearing Phil's flannel that was big on her and her underwear. She yawned and scratched her head, she grumbled and sat down by him. She curled up to him, he wrapped his arm around her an kissed her on the head. She smiled, "Mornin sweetness". He rubbed her back, "Morning". She kissed his cheek and laid her head on his shoulder, "You want breakfast?". She turned his head and kissed him, he slowly laid her down and kissed back. He pulled away and kissed her jawline and her neck, "God you taste like...like...". He kissed again, "....Like left over pizza...Nora did you get into the leftovers while I slept?". She giggled, "I woke up and was hungry what was I suppose to do?". He got up, "Come on I'll make breakfast". She got up taking his hand and they went to the kitchen were she helped him make eggs. They sat at the small table and ate their breakfast as Belinda and Rex slowly came out. Phil looked at them quietly and then at Nora, "Looks like their hungover" he said quietly. Nora looked and agreed by nodding, "After this you should take a shower". She whined, "I took one yesterday". He leaned and smelt her, she pulled away giving him a weird look. He slowly pulled back, "Yeah but you kinda smell like pot...And me so yeah you prolly don't wanna smell like pot and me". She finished her breakfast, "But you guys only get cold water here". He sighed, "I'll be waiting outside to warm you up". He put their dishes in their sink, and she whined "Come on". He grabbed her arm and pulled her, "You cant make me". He pulled her in the bathroom, "Your taking a shower you stink" he hissed. She smacked him and his head jerked, he slowly looked at her and she covered her mouth. He have her a look that could kill and slammed a towel against her chest, "Your fucking lucky I don't go off right now take a shower you smell!" he growled. She swallowed feeling overpowered but blurted out the wrong words, "No". His face turned red and he turned on the water, he shoved her in the shower and threw a bar of soap at her, "Do it or you can fuckin leave". She stood shivering and he left slamming the door, Rex and Belinda looked at him. He went to the bedroom slamming the door, "Oh my god I'm gonna go check on her". Belinda ran to the bathroom and seen Nora crying, she quickly turned the water off and wrapped her up in a fresher towel. Rex helped Belinda get Nora dried and calmed down, by nightfall Phil finally exited the room calmed down. |
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| Nora_Tallica | January 29, 2012, 5:07 pm Post #14 |
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Poor Nora! she hates cold showers haha This is a funny one, I like it!
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| Anselmo's Girl | January 29, 2012, 6:17 pm Post #15 |
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Chapter 8 Nora curled up to Rex seeing Phil, "Shhh it's ok" he rubbed her back. Belinda got up and smacked him, he just kinda strayed looking at her knowing he did wrong. She grit her teeth and smacked his face again harder, he dropped his head and rubbed his burning red cheek. She stood not afraid of him, "My god Phil your mother would flip the fuck out and be ashamed of you if she even knew an ounce of what you just did to that poor girl she is gonna be scarred from that an will forever have issues trying to find a man all because of you and I swear to god if you don't march your ass over there as hope to fucking god she forgives you your gonna be in a world of god damn trouble you hear me mister!?" she hissed at him. If there's one woman that usually got Phil in his place it was Belinda, and if not her than Rita which was Darrell's girlfriend. He slowly nodded, "Move it!" she yelled as he barely moved. She grabbed him by the ear and pulled him over, "Ow ow ow ow Linda stop please". She smacked him and pulled his ear digging her nail in making it red almost draw blood. He shed a tear, "Ow Linda it hurts". She yanked him up an smacked him, "You better fucking kiss that girls ass right now!". She dug her nail in more, "Ow ow ok ok" he whimpered in pain. He looked at Nora his big brown eyes filled with pain, "I'm sorry Nora.... I'm really sorry....I didn't mean to....just when I'm mad..I only see red" he managed to get out in between his whimpers and call out of ow's. Belinda pulled his ear wanting to hear better as Nora listened and watched, "I'm sorry...I guess my dad rubbed off on me I'm sorry" he started crying remembering his childhood. Belinda let him go and Phil stumbled and quickly ran to the room so nobody would see him cry and shut the door locking it. He quietly cried as he remembered the times he'd get beat till sometimes he bled. His step dad mainly did the spankings with his belts rarely his hand and rarely a switch. He covered his face and sniffled, "Belinda I think that was a bit harsh" Nora said. Nora got up and knocked on the door, "I said I was sorry". Nora knocked again, so Phil cleaned himself up and hopped she wouldn't notice. He looked down, "I said I'm sorry". She stood on her tippy toes a lil and kissed him, "It's ok I guess apology accepted don't cry ok". He turned his head away, "It's allergies". He crossed his arms, "Phil your crying". He slammed the door in her face, "I am not" he yelled. Nora sighed and just left him alone for the night. |
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awesome work devin!!
don't worry I'm working on more already
Phil's mom is so awesome and funny
I hope he will be able to find a girlfriend soon

8:48 PM Jul 10