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| Some_Kind_Of_Monster | Jan 31 2012, 02:57 PM Post #1 |
☠ (R.I.P) Return Is Possible
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Hi!  Remember me  This is something that was in my head for some time. I don't know what will be next, I have few ideas and now I need to put it together and add some more  I know there is alot fanfic and I have one more 'On a Strange Land' but I just need to write a ending for that one  Well anyway, if you like it just let me know, if not let me know too Moderators if you see any misteaces in typing or grammar or anything else please don't hesitate and fix it  Total fanfic!!! Nothing of what I wrote is real and sorry for my english Chapter 1 Gabriela and Melissa were both born in the Highlands of Scotland. Gaby was born in winter 1963, Melissa was born eight years latter, but that is a different story. Their mother Annie was beautiful Scottish woman who fall in love in an American boy named Bruce, during their University years. It was a beautiful and perfect couple. They married in 1962 and soon afte, had their first fruit of love Gabriela. She was a very bubbly and smiley child. For eight years of her life she was the happiest child in the world. Her parents had little fruit farm. Gaby loved picking strawberries with her mom. Their both had long red hair and loved combed it once in the morning and once before going to bed. Love and happiness were present at her home, always. The dad was loving and caring. He treated his wife like a queen, and his little daughter like a princess. Bruce was taking his family to visit his mother in San Francisco once a year. Little Gaby loved the trips, and her granny. They had perfect life. When Gaby was seven her mom told her that she'll never be alone. Gaby with a bright eyes and pure little heart answered 'But I'm not, I have you, daddy, and granny Mell.' Mom smiled. 'Yes hun, but now you will have a little brother or sister too' her mom answered gently touching her face. Little Gaby jumped with joy and couldn't wait when her 'new' brother or sister will visit her. She waited and waited. And finally the big day had come. Rosie the neighbour from far 'next door' was taking care of her during the absence of her parents. It was ecsciting day for little Gaby. But instead of her mom, dad and new baby, only daddy and the baby had arrived home. Gaby was sitting in the living room patiently waiting for her parents to come back home. She was smiling wide and couldn't wait to see who it will be, but when the dooe opened, daddy wasn't smiling neither was Rosie. Little Gaby knew something was wrong. Her dad was holding the baby with tears in his eyes. - This is Melissa. - He said, showing heis daughter, the face of a new member of this perfect family. - She is your sister. - He smiled vaguely. Gaby looked at the little face and said. - Why she is so small and where is mom? Her father couldn't stop his tears. He lied Mell in her bed prepared by her mother and kneeled in front of his older daughter. - Remember how we talked about granny Gabriel? - She is in heaven with the Angels, right? - Yes, sweetie. And mom is...-He stopped; the words couldn't leave his mouth. - Where is mom? - Gaby continued. - She is with granny. - Tears flooded his face; he grabbed his daughter and hug her tight. Gaby was a smart little girl; she hugged her dad, and simply said. - Don't worry daddy, we will see her soon. She is an angel now. Bruce loved his little Gaby and new she was a child with pure heart, but she will be missing her mom very soon, and he wasn't wrong. Gaby was crying at night calling for her mom, but so was Mell. Mell was a laud child, she was crying and demanding attention almost all the time. Gaby as an older sister was taking care of the baby as best as she could, but demanding Mell always wanted more. When Mell was three and Gaby was ten, their dad decided to go to his mother Melissa. Both girls had their names after their grannies, Gabriel after her mother's mom, and Melissa after her father's mom. When granny Mell saw her two angels, she was ecstatic, for the first time she saw little Mell. Mell looked different from her sister; she had dark hair and eyes. Gaby was red with green eyes, not very pretty girl but with a heart of gold, always smiling and happy to help. Strictly speaking they were totally different, in their behaviour, looks and character. But their dad loved them both, with his whole heart. Granny Mell on the other hand had her favourite, it was Gaby. 'My little spark' she always said. Unfortunately after Annie death, Bruce was never the same. He missed his wife, love of his life. So Gaby has had her granny, dad and her little sister to take care of. But she never complained, she never said anything to make them feel guilty. Bruce lost his job and was sitting at home unemployed, granny wasn't feeling very well either, and little Mell? She was never worried, she had her little world and wasn't interesting in anything else, than herself. Girls and the dad lived there for five years. Gaby found some love and peace being Mell's granddaughter. When granny was sick for few months Gaby was reading her books and combing her hair, like she did to her mom. She was taking care of her with love. Granny Mell was grateful; Gaby could see it in her fading eyes. Gaby was sixteen and Mell was eight when their granny died. Gaby was devastated, she couldn't believe that her granny died and left her. She was alone again, dad was gone, drinking. Mell was now in school and was doing well. But to keep the house and theirs dad's alcoholism Gabriela had to go to work right after high school. She worked as waitress at Mac's Burgers. It wasn't a great job, but Mac was a decent man and paid good money. Two years into Gaby's work, Social Service took interest in their dad's activities. But Gaby wasn't stupid, she was eighteen now and almost a mother to Mell. When people from Social Service were coming, the house was sparkling, Mell was always wearing her best cloths, the fridge was filled with food and dad...well...dad was always 'out looking for job'. Thanks to Mac and Gaby's cleverness the Social Workers never had any issues with the Brown Family. Two years passed after granny Mell's death. Gaby was working hard even night shifts, to provide for Mell and her dad. Tired and lonely but she never complained. She knew what she needed to do. She had to take care of her family, they were all she had. Not much friends, well no friends at all, only people she worked with. Gaby never had time to socialise with them, no time what so ever, the dinner, cleaning, and Mell's homework was more important. She cried so many nights she couldn't count. She needed love, but every time she felt happy people were leaving her. Gaby came home tired and fed up of everything. She was twenty years old, she was a young women and she never been on any date or social meeting what so ever. She wanted to be like the girls her age. Put some make up on, and go party with friends. There was one more thing, his name was Bradley, he was twenty two, tall with long dark hair always wearing a pony, he was also working at Mac's. Every time they were working together she couldn't take her eyes of him. Smart, funny and kind young man. Butterflies were tickling her stomach when he was close. Finely after six weeks working he finally asked her out, she refused. Mell needed help and so did dad. Brad was charmed with her clear green eyes and innocent face. He wanted to know the girl closer. - Okay so after work, I'll help your sister with the home work, you'll do your duties and that way you will have more time for me. - He smiled. Gaby didn't now what to say, no boy before asked her out. No boy was visiting her home. But she couldn't refuse. - After work. - She answered, her cheeks blushed. Brad wanted that innocent girl for himself. She never spoke much, she never said what she was feeling or thinking, yet her eyes were speaking for her. The eyes of mature woman, that looked at him with girlish naivety. The beautiful green eyes, always when Gaby looked at him he was mesmerised. Her eyes were shining, lips always smiling. She was beautiful to him. Edited by Some_Kind_Of_Monster, Feb 1 2012, 04:42 AM.
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| Some_Kind_Of_Monster | Jan 31 2012, 04:10 PM Post #2 |
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Chapter 2 After long day at work Brad was waiting for Gaby outside next to his truck. She came up to him. - Hi. - She said shyly. - Wow. - He exclaimed looking at her hair. - I know, red. - She frowned, she didn't now much about boys, but she knew they don't like red heads. Brad never saw her without that stupid hat with Mac's logo on it. - Beautiful, and I wouldn't say its red, the sky has that colour during the summer sunsets. - He smiled. Gabriela blushed and fixed her hair. Brad opened the door for her and helped her to get inside, he took Gaby to her home. Little Mell wasn't so little any more, and she was waiting for Gaby hungry and engry. It was late and food wasn't ready. She was fourteen now, but not helping her sister even a bit, instead she demanded help, but only with her math. Mell was never happy to sit with her sister, although it was her idea and Gaby also offered her assistance. Gabriela hasn't graduated 'anything', only high school, but she was a smart young woman and loved too read. To help her sister with home work she simply read her notes and explained her everything. Mell was smart and intelligent but opinionated and sometimes difficult. Gaby opened the door. Knowing Mell will be there, waiting and complaining. - Come in. - She looked into his eyes, Brad was almost staring at her. He loved the long red hair, green eyes, and her full lips that she often gently moisturised with her tongue. He touched her back and said with a smile. - Ladies first. - What took you so long. - Mell shouted from the stairs. Dad was on the couch with an empty bottle of 'What was the Cheapest', sleeping. When Mell came down stairs and saw Brad, her face suddenly changed and she decided to be very nice to her sister. - Gaby? Who is this? - I'm Brad. - I'm Mell. - She smiled. Mell was fourteen but already she had more experience with boys than her sister. What is more she looked more like seventeen year old, and she was beautiful, tall with dark hair and skin, full breasts and slim legs. Gaby was short and ...well...she never felt pretty, she knew her younger sister is perfect and boys like her. Brad was behaving as the best young man on earth, he helped with math, with Mell big eyes staring at him, after the dinner he helped cleaning and transport dad to his bed. Gaby's heart was beating fast when Brad was leaving, she didn't want him to go. When she opened the door Mell was on the stirs watching them, but not letting them know she was there. - Thank you fro lovely evening. - Brad smiled, his eyes were shinning. Gaby's red lips were tempting him. - Thank you for the help. - She answered. Brad's hand touched her face. He leaned to kiss her, her stomach turned. It would be her first kiss. Brad moved his face close to hers, breaths were mixing, his other hand touched gently her back, and he pulled her closer. She complied with sweet blush on her face; Brad smiled seeing her reaction and gently kissed her lips. Gabriela sighted with closed mouth, the warmth of his body was burning her, she felt something she never felt before. Brad gently pulled he chin down, her lips parted, he kissed her again. Her mouth felt the sweet taste of his lips, Brad pressed his body to hers, she shivered. Gaby's hands were shacking, knees were weak, but she didn't panic, she didn't break the kiss, his touch was too gentle and soft to scare her. He pressed his lips harder to hers, soft moan left his chest. He new he has to stop, but her taste was something he wanted to feel as long as she let him. Bradley was waiting for her to break the kiss but she didn't. The both moved at the same time, smiling wide. Suddenly loud music from up stairs came to their ears. It was Mell, trying to disturbed to beautiful moments her sister had. - I'll better go. - Brad smiled. - See you tomorrow. - See you tomorrow. - She answered, biting her lower lip. He loved that, he was with few girls before and knew how sweet they can be, he knew that look on a girls face, and he wanted more of that from Gaby. Gabriela was looking by the window till Brad's car disappeared. The music was disturbing her thoughts about what just happened. It was her first kiss. The heat was still present in her abdomen. She went upstairs to see what her sister was up to this time. The words she could understand that the boy was singing were 'Am I evil? Yes I am!' She opened the door to her sister's bedroom. - Could you please, turn it down?! - Not really. - She stated with sarcasm. - This is a one big noise, you can't even call that a music! - It's Metallica and it fucking awesome! - Gaby couldn't believe what she heard. She was trying to raise her sister as best as she could, she wanted her to be the educated, smart and beautiful one. Gaby wanted her sister to be somebody in her life; she was smart, she had chance. All those thoughts went through Gaby's head in one second. She turned off the loud music. - What did you just say? - Gaby's voice was low and almost angry. Mell noticed the irritation on her sister's face. - I said this is a cool band. You could try some times; it would help you to chill. - She smiled, but the smile was more like slap in the face. Mell knew Gaby was working; taking care of her, dad, and the house, time to chill was at night when she was sleeping. She closed the door and went to her room. Her thoughts were now with Brad and his soft touch and sweet lips. She wanted more, more of him in her life and more his hands, lips and body. |
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| Some_Kind_Of_Monster | Jan 31 2012, 05:34 PM Post #3 |
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Chapter 3 Brad was working with Gaby the same hours, they had all the time they wanted. Shopping, cleaning, cooking, helping Mell with her school stuff, Bradley was perfect. After few months of bliss he wanted more of her touch. He gave some money to Mell to get rid of her, so she would go to the movie or some concert, he didn't care she was too young, her older friends will take care of her, he thought. They made love that night. Gaby was soar but Brands closeness was soothing the pain. He was gentle, sweet, and respectful. She was in love there was no question about it. Three years passed it was 1988. Gaby was with Brad a regular couple, happy with plans for the future. That very evening they came home together after work. Gabriela was now a manager at Mac's, he opened few more burger shops, and he needed somebody he could trust to. Gaby was the best for the job. She had more money, better job and loving man next to her. The only problem was Mell, and dad but he was always drunk not really looking what was happening with his daughters. Gabriela and Melissa were sisters but their relationship wasn't too good, the only thing their shared was one song from the album that Gaby didn't like very much. For some reason that only song was speaking to her, she loved the lyrics, the music and the vocals. The rest on the album was nothing to her in comparison to 'Fade to Black'. Gaby wasn't interested in the bad, their music or anything else that was about them. But when she was listening to that one song, she thought that there is somewhere someone who feels just like her. She had Brad, she felt loved, but there was something missing, she was 'missing one inside'. - Dad? - Gaby patted hers father's shoulder. - Dad, we have something to tell you. - Few hours before Bradley asked her to marry him and Gaby said yes. She wanted to tell her daddy the good news. Maybe he was an alcoholic, but she always saw the daddy from Scotland in him, smart, caring, and loving man. Although he was drinking he never hurt his girls, he was the calm drinker, no mess, no shouts and arguments, just his bottle and sorrow. - Daddy? - She tried again. But there was no answer. She touched his hand it was cold. - Daddy? - She cried. Brad came quick and flipped Bruce on his back, his face was bluish, eyes closed, and his lips seemed to smile. Gaby looked at him and she knew, she knew he was with her mom, he was with the Angels. Brad took care of everything; Gaby was different person after her dad'd death; cold and distant. Almost every night she was listening to that one song, always crying. She knew it by heart, every note, every sound of the boys voice, she knew. The only thing she didn't know was the guy's name and face. But she didn't care, Gaby knew she would never meet him. Six months passed since her father's death. Brad was still with he, but it was different, they didn't touched or kiss, she felt abandoned by her daddy. Gaby needed time to sort her heart once more, three people died, three people she loved the most were gone. She was back home earlier than usual, Brad was there already, he said he will prepare dinner for her. She opened the door, the place was quiet, but she heard some voices upstairs. She went there, it was coming from Mell's room, she knocked and opened the door. Brad was lying on top of Mell fucking her. - Gaby? - He exclaimed shocked. But Gaby was cold, and removed from reality, but then again she somehow knew that will happen. - Leave this house and never come back. - She stated calmly and closed the door behind her. Brad left the house, knowing there was nothing he could do to apologize. Soon after he left, Mell stated. - I'm leaving, somebody needs to finish what he started. - You're seventeen. You're staying home. - Oh really, in few months time I'll be eighteen and what then you will do to me. I now what I'll do I'll go with Metallica on tour. Lars said they would love to have me there. - What? No. No Metallica, no Lars. Who the hell is Lars? School first. - Lars is the guy who will fuck me in few minutes. - She chuckled. - They have party not far from here. You should go, you would use some good fuck. Mell fixed her hair and left the house. Gaby followed her. It was big house with lots of long hair guys and girls in cloths that didn't cover much. Gabriela felt out of place, it wasn't party for her. People were drinking and touching each other in front of everyone. She saw Mell entering the place and greeting with some people. Gabriela was twenty five, well dressed, much better looking than few years ago, her cut her hair after dad died, it was now only few inches lower than her shoulders. She was totally different that the girls inside. The biggest and most visible difference was make-up and night worth of sleep, all the girls looked like they needed rest, their make-up was smeared although it was only 4 pm. - Hi! I'm Kirk, you look new here. - Dark eyes looked at her. - Hi. - She answered surprised. - I'm here with Mell. - She stated, thinking this guy has no idea who was she referring to. - Oh Mell? Yeah, she went to Lars. You want something to drink? - No thank you, I don't drink. - Her voice was surprised. - So you know her? - Well, yeah. - He smiled again. - You too? - He laughed. - Yes, she's my younger sister. - Sister? Wow I had no idea... - Where is she? - I don't know, but I'm sure she is having fun.- He laughed again. Two hours in looking for her sister in the big house, she noticed some man dragging a young girl some where; the girl looked like her sister. When she looked closer she wasn't wrong. - Mell?! - She shouted. There was no answer, Mell maybe was a bitch but she would acknowledge presence of her sister, even by showing her the middle finger. - Mell?! Mell was resisting but she looked weak, Gaby wasn't a strong woman, but at that point she found some strength in herself. -Hey! Leave my sister alone. The guy turned, Mell was hanging from his shoulder, absolutely drunk or stoned or both. - Fuck off bitch. - What did you call me? The guy let go of Mell, she hit the ground. Gaby came up to him an punched him straight in his face, he fell. Her hands started to punch him hard, the fury was growing and growing, the guy was big but had no chance with angry Gabriela, she was protecting her little sister. Suddenly she felt hands on her shoulders; somebody pulled her away from the guy. She shocked the hands that were holding her and turned to see who it was. The guy had long hair and leather jacket. He was holding his hands up in surrendering gesture. - Easy tiger. - He chuckled. - It's okay he is down. - Get the fuck away from my sister. - She hissed. Gaby took her sister and tried to walk with her, but Mell was gone, not responding. -I can take you to your place? - The long hair guy offered. Gaby looked at him, he was good looking, but not her type, long hair, strange facial hair and that cloths. - No, thanks. Just call the cab, okay? - Okay, okay. - He smiled. The long-hair guy helped Gaby to place Mell in the cab. Before the cab moved he said to her. - By the way, I'm James. See you next time. Edited by Some_Kind_Of_Monster, Jan 31 2012, 11:16 PM.
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| Some_Kind_Of_Monster | Feb 1 2012, 01:15 PM Post #4 |
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Just let me know if it's shit, I'll stop write it then Chapter 4 Gaby wasn't thinking much about what the guy said. She was worried about her little sister. When they came home Gaby took Mell to the bathroom and gave he could shower. Mell wasn't responding to well, but she opened her eyes. After few minutes, she was looking much better. 'Coffee and sleep' - Gaby said to herself. The cold water was washing Mell's drunken body; Gaby went down the stairs to make some coffee. When she came back Mell was all ready in her bed. She pulled sheets to cover heir's sister wet body and sat down on the chair in the corner. Gaby watched for her the whole night, not sleeping. It was eight in the morning; Mell with heavy head came down - How you feel? - Gaby asked, disappointed with Mell's behaviour. - Like shit. - You shouldn't drink, you are too young... - Save this shit for someone who cares. - In two months time you will be eighteen, the very day I want you to move. - Gaby stated and left the kitchen. - Thank god, who would want to live with zombie like you. Gaby turned and looked Mell in the eye. - Remember when you leave, you won't get any money from me. The bills are your business to pay. - Lars will pay it for me. - She hissed into Gaby's face. - You are a whore. - Oh really? - You're fucking him for money; therefore you...are...a...whore. Tell me did Brad pay you too? Little sister realised what she did the day before. Her face dropped. Gaby left her with her thoughts, went outside to breathe some fresh air. The little picture she was always having with her was helping her overcome almost everything; she produced it from her back pocket. It was picture of Gaby with her parents, during the summer harvest, they had fruits in their hands and faces sticky with it, the sun was shinning, dad was smiling wide, and mom was kissing with her sticky mouth her daughter's cheek. - I never saw that picture before. - Mell voice interrupted Gaby. - I know. - Mom was really beautiful. - Yes she was. - You all look happy. - Yes. - Tears run down Gaby's face. Mell eyes filled with tears as well. - It changed the day I was born. - Gaby was silent. I'm sorry, Gaby. You're my only family. I'm so sorry for Brad. Gaby wrapped her arms around her sister. - It's okay, if he did that, he wasn't worth to be in our family. Girls had nice day together, for the first time they felt like family. They went for shoping to buy something nice for each other, they had big ice cream and walked like two little girls with it their ahnds, careless, enjoying the day. - What movie you want to watch? - Gaby asked. - I was hoping I could go and visit my friends. - Do they know you are under age? - Yes. - Oh really? - Yeah really? That's Meta.... Loud knock to the door disturbed possible argument. - I'll go. - Mell jumped. - Hey! Come in! Two young men entered Gaby's living room. - This is Lars. - Mell stood next to the short guy and took his hand. Gaby frowned, she didn't like him, Mell was too young for things like that. - You remember me? - The other guy asked. - Yes, you helped me yesterday. - Did he? - Mell asked surprised, clearly showing that she had no idea what was happening yesterday. - Anyway, you're here to take me to the party? - We came to see, how you're doing. - Lars stated. - I'm good and I would like you to take me somewhere. - She smiled to him, pleading; she touched his chest and slid her hand down. Gaby was surprise with his sister's behaviour. She wasn't acting the way Gaby told her to. She wasn't modest and delicate, just vulgar and dirty. Mell didn't care if her sister and the other guy were there; she kissed Lars pushing her tongue into his mouth. Lars picked up quickly. Gaby felt sick, James seeing her reaction, tried to divert her attention. - You have any plans for tonight? - Yes, fallowing my sister. - James chuckled. - Dude, you fucked. - He laughed. - Mell doesn't need babysitter. - Don't you tell me, what my sister need! You are not entitled. - Gaby hissed. James smiled. The little red head was growing in his eyes every minute. Small with his frame but big with her character. - So you will have fun, after all. - Wide smile was reviling James' white teeth. Gaby took her jacket and followed them to Jams' truck. When James wanted to help her to get in, she pushed his hand away. James tried one more time to get some attention from Gaby, and so he was trying to help her to get out. - Get your hands off. - She stated. - What's wrong with you bitch? - What did you call me? - Gaby grabbed his arm and pulled him close; James turned and looked her in the eyes. Her beautiful honest green eyes got big and angry. - My name is Gabriela, for assholes like you Miss Brown. - James tried to intimidate her with his dead stare, but it didn't work on Gaby, she just frowned on his pathetic attempt. James freed his arm from her grip. - If you think I'm going to call you Miss Brown you fucking mistaking. - He laughed. Gaby face was dead serious but not angry, she wasn't listening what the long haired, rude guy had to say. - Hi! - Familiar voice shouted from the porch. Kirk came quick to welcome the new arrivals. - Hi Kirk. - Gaby smiled. - I new I'll see you again. -Kirk shouted, Gaby smiled sarcastically to James. - I think the chick would use a drink. - James smiled back. - What the fuck you are talking about, she doesn't drink. - Kirk smiled, happy that he remembered. Gaby wasn't the prettiest of the girls, she was different looking than the girls that were waiting for those guys. James liked her red hair and bright green eyes. When they entered the place Gaby looked fresh and pure in comparison to the other girls. Her cloths were baggy, covering every inch of her body. To know how she looked underneath, boys had to have a very good imagination. Kirk was talking with Gaby for few minutes but when he realised the Gaby isn't interested in any sex activities, left her alone in the corner of the room. James was watching her carefully. She didn't talk to any of the guys, not that she was shy, it was clear she had nothing to talk with them about. Edited by Some_Kind_Of_Monster, Feb 1 2012, 03:53 PM.
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| Shayniz21 | Feb 1 2012, 04:30 PM Post #5 |
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keep going this is really good! you should definitely keep writing i want to know more! |
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| Some_Kind_Of_Monster | Feb 1 2012, 04:48 PM Post #6 |
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Thank you  I am a bit nervous about this I't different than the last one some more Chapter 5 Gaby went to see where Mell is, but she couldn't find her. James knowing what Gaby was up to, fallowed her, so his friend could have some quality time with the chick. - Maybe you should drink something; it would help you to relax. - The only thing James had in mind was to fuck her, before any of the guys will get her, like they always did. All the girls sucked their cocks and begged them for a fuck. He was tired with the chick they had there, new fresh was something he needed. - I don't drink. Are you that slow you haven't got that? - Gaby hissed. - The dirty house, girls half naked, alcohol, weed and smell of sweat was making her sick. Gaby didn't understand what they liked about it, and definitely wouldn't want to have anything to do with any of the young men, especially with so self centred asshole like James. - What the fuck is wrong with you b... - Gabriela. - She hissed. - Gabriela. - James repeated with contempt. - Do you know what respect is? I don't think you do. Presented it to me, I'll present it to you. Excuse me; she pushed James with her shoulder and passed him. Gaby opened the door behind James. To her horror, Mell was kneeling in front of Lars and sucking his cock, some other girl was taking her cloths off. Gaby entered the room, grabbed Mell by her arm and pulled her out side the house, with Mell heavy reseating. - Let me go, are you crazy?! - Mell shouted. - You're embarrassing me. - I don't care, I won't let you to be a fucking whore, now move. - This is my life! - Maybe but you still live in MY house for MY money. - The house is ours, sis. - Nope, my name is on the papers, and only mine. Now, move Mell. They went home, Gaby didn't say a word to her sister. But when they entered the house, she stated coldly. - Wash your fucking mouth and go to bed. - Don't tell me what to do! - Don't fuck with me Missy. - Gaby hissed in Mell's face with her clenched teeth. Next day Gaby was all day at work, Gaby was sure; when she comes home Mell will be waiting for her. But everything she found was a note from her sister. I went with the guys, don't wait for me. M. Gaby was furious. She went strait to the whore house, but this time she took her car, little yellow VW Beetle. It was late, the party was in its pick, people were drunk, girls half naked. Some big guy was standing at the door. Gaby approached him with her angry face. - Move. - She ordered. - This is a private party. - The guy answered. - My under aged sister is inside, should I go and call for some assistance? - Gaby folded her hands on her chest. The guy sighted and opened the door for her. - Thank you. Gaby instantly started the search for her sister. With her hair up, smart suit, and almost non make-up she stand out from the crowd. Gaby went upstairs to the room she found her sister the day before. The door was opened, some couple was fucking in side, the ugly chick was leaning against the bed, Gaby did couple steps forwarded, the guy that was fucking her was James. She felt sick. James was drunk, so was the girl. The picture was revolting to Gaby. She turned her eyes away, when she looked again James was finishing, and like the condom he used he treated the girl he just fucked. No emotions, no nothank you or kiss my ass, he left her there and walked away. With his drunken eyes looked at Gaby and smiled. - You want some too? - Dirty grin was clouding his crystal blue eyes. - Not in a million years. - Gaby stated, disgusted. She went outside for some fresh air, when the wind hit her face, and washed the dirty smell of alcohol and cigarettes off her face, she felt refreshed and ready for another battle. She came back inside, determined to find her sister. - Hey, have you seen Mell? - She stopped random guy that was passing by, assuming he'll know who she is talking about. - Mell? Oh Yeah, she went with Lars somewhere. - Shit! - Why, something's wrong? Must be you don't look like you belong here. - He laughed. - She's my sister, and I'm trying to stop her from destroying her life. - Gaby hided her face in her palms. - Let's go somewhere we can talk. Okay? - The stranger suggested. Surprised Gaby looked into stranger's eyes, blue and clear. She was alone in this world; she hasn't had many chances to talk to someone. But she felt it wasn't honest proposal. - Okay.- She answered. - Fallow me. - Gaby obediently fallowed the stranger. They went to the garden, few couples were there but they behaved okay, Gaby had no problem to relax a bit, she needed someone to talk to. The guy showed her a chair. - Have a seat. I'm Jason. - He smiled and fixed his hair. It was strange situation but after last few days what worse can happen. -Why did you asked me to come here and talk? - Gaby asked honestly. - You look like you need someone to... - No I don't. - Well... - Is it because I don't look like, any of your buddies had me? - Hmm? - Surprised with the questions Jason didn't know what to answer. Girls usually don't ask any questions maybe except one 'Do you want me to suck you?', they talk and then they suck. No involvement, but not this time. - You better go. - She stated, with sarcastic green. - And I was hoping you actually might be a nice guy. - Jason man, some chick is looking for you. - James wanted to sit next to Gaby, but she moved quickly and left James alone, sitting with the beer in his hand. Gaby found a silent place and tried to think where Mell could go with him, but she had nothing. She produced the picture of her happy times, like she was asking for help. Gaby was holding the picture thinking how her life has changed and how much she misses her parents. - What is that? - James pulled the picture out of her hands. - Give it back! - Gaby exclaimed. - Uhhh this is your family or something? Fucking perfect assholes. - James mocked. - I said give it back. - It was the only picture of the three together. Usually one of the parents was doing the photo, this was an exception, a unique little thing. Gaby got upset. Tears filled her eyes. - Can I look at it first? - She would take it away from him by force, but she didn't want to damage the thing. - Please, give it back? - Gaby asked with a weak voice. James looked at her, her face was beyond sad; she was devastated, although, he was drunk and in a mood for fun he gave her the picture back. - What the fuck, it's only a fucking picture. - He laughed. Gaby had enough, she went to her car and started the engine, she looked at the photo one more time and had pressed it to her heart. 'I miss you' she whispered. |
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| Shannyn(: | Feb 1 2012, 10:12 PM Post #7 |
Music is my religion ♥
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THIS IS AMAZING! Pleeeaaaase, carry on! I'm really enjoying this fic already!  and it's Justice James..  I know this is only going to get better |
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| Achernar | Feb 1 2012, 10:28 PM Post #8 |
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You've got me interested! 0_0 I'll keep looking for this. Niiice job! ^u^ |
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| Some_Kind_Of_Monster | Feb 2 2012, 03:27 AM Post #9 |
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Thank you ladies!!! I don't know if it's good, my confidence as a writer is rather low  But here is some more  Chapter 6 Gaby returned home, tired and emotionally exhausted. Mell was nothing she wanted her to be. All the years of trying to be a mom to her, and give her a good role mode were worthless. The only way Gaby could relax was long hot shower and the song, the song she loved so much. If she could only meet him, talk to him. The guy on the record for sure felt the same way. Gaby remembered Mell talking about the band, but she never was paying much attention on her sister's random statements. She looked at cover of the album, and threw it on the bed; she wasn't interested what was on it, only the song was the focus of her attention. Gaby played it, took her cloths off and went to take a shower. After cleansing her body and thirty minutes in the bathroom she came out and played it again, and again, till the loneliness deep inside was gone. Gaby went down the stairs; she sat on the couch and stared at the phone. Ready to answer and hoping that if Mell won't call she will appear in person. Gaby was waiting the whole night, watching some TV listening to 'Fade to Black' one more time, with his voice she fell asleep. The morning light woke her up. She looked upstairs if Mell was home, but when she opened the door to her bedroom she learned she was still gone. Not in a much of a hurry, she did her house duties, took a shower, dried her hair, and called Mac. She needed few days off, to sort things out with Mell. Gaby was working there for long time now, almost ten years, she started as a waitress, and worked her way up to be a manager. Mac agreed almost instantly, Gaby never took days off, she was working even in holydays and weekends, and every time Mac asked, no matter what the job was needed to be done. Mac gave her five days off, plus the weekend. It was her firs summer off in ten years time. Gaby wore her baggy cloths; she let her hair go freely, softly covering her forehead and neck. - I need to find her. - She said to herself, looking at the mirror, not liking what she saw. Gaby went to the whore house, to see if Mell returned there with her boyfriend. The big guy from last night was there sitting on some chair. - You again? - Me again. - You should ware something else; boys don't like cloths like that. - He chuckled. - I'm not here for the boys. - Gaby replied coldly. It was noon when she entered the house. People were sleeping in random places, holding bottles of what they drink the night before. Gaby was looking into their faces hoping she will find her sister. Suddenly somebody pulled her to the kitchen. She turned and saw James smiling. - You came back for some fun? - He smiled. - I came back for Mell. - And you still ...., shit girl. - Do you know where she is? - Even if I would know I wouldn't tell you. - She is my sister... - You would use some of the things she is probably getting right now. - He laughed. - What? - Oh 'comon, you know what I mean. - He moved closer to Gaby, she did a step back. - You girls all want the same thing. - James grabbed her and pulled her close. - Get your dirty hands off me! - She pushed him away. - You think you are better than me? Or better than those bitches there? You want the same thing, I you can get it good from me. - He did step closer, and grabbed Gaby one more time. - I said get your filthy hands off me! - She tried to free her self from his grip, but James was too strong. - Kitty wants to fight? - James grabbed Gaby throat and pushed her on the wall behind her, his body pressed to hers. Gaby was scared, her body tensed up, fist closed. James pressed his nose to her temple. - I know what you need. - He brushed his face against hers. His hand moved from her neck to her face, squeezing her mouth, James forced her to kiss him. He wanted to dominated, take what he wanted, and leave her to beg for more. But when his lips touched Gaby's the vicious assault changed in to a soft and delicate kiss. The soft touch of her lips and sweet taste of her tongue eased the storm in his chest. The hand let go of her face and gently slid down to her neck, James' finger tips started to caress her skin gently, their bodies relaxed, James deepened the kiss, slowly, waiting for permission. His left hand slid underneath Gaby's baggy sweater, when his palm touched her worm skin, his chest released soft moan into her mouth. They kissed, slowly, tongues tasting every drop; James' lips didn't want to leave hers. Gaby was lost, his gentle touched made her drift away into some unknown place, his hair were tickling her face. James' hand moved to touch their united lips, he stroke it gently and moved his palm to her jaw line, the back of his hand was smoothing her chin. They continued to kiss, both delighted to feel the taste of each other. For Gaby it was first kiss that lasted this long, she was never kissed with such intensity. James wasn't much of a kisser too, the girls he was with, were sucking the other guys dicks, sometimes before they came to him. He wouldn't kiss their filthy mouths, but Gaby was pure and fresh, her lips were full and juicy. He wanted to kiss her lips the very firs day he saw her, now he had his chance, but he didn't think he will be so lost in the kiss. James couldn't stop sucking and licking her lips, slow moves and deep moans were heating him up, he gently rubbed his groin against her abdomen, Gaby moaned softly. They broke the kiss, but the lips were still touching, James' hair was covering their faces, he licked his lips and smiled against her mouth, it was a smile of a pure joy. They opened their eyes. Gaby looked at him shocked, it was almost impossible for her to think that this dickhead could put her into such blissful state. She pushed him away and walked quickly out of the kitchen, absolutely confused. James wasn't in better condition either, the intensity and deepenss of the kiss surprised him, he grabbed a bottle of beer and took a big gulp of the cold liquid. Edited by Some_Kind_Of_Monster, Feb 2 2012, 06:21 AM.
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| CarpeDiemBaby | Feb 2 2012, 09:44 AM Post #10 |
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OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!! I'm soooooo happy reading this new fic!!!! I love James on Justice era!!!!! ...and that kiss! I imagined it on HD and 3D Perfect story!!! MORE!!!! |
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| Some_Kind_Of_Monster | Feb 2 2012, 10:53 AM Post #11 |
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wOw Thank you, I was hoping you will like it Chapter 7 Gaby went back to looking for her sister. Her head was yet still with James. His touch and taste. Gaby felt disgusted and intrigued at the same time. She was looking into faces of the strangers but couldn't focus on what she was doing there. The tickling feeling of his facial hair was still alive on her skin, she bit her lips few times to get rid off his taste and touch, but it was imprinted in her so deep, that what ever she did, the memory was coming back even stronger. James was still in the kitchen, drinking his first beer of the day. Thinking what just happened. How could he be so gentle with her, enjoy every second and let her go afterwards. The cold liquid was going down his throat, but her taste was still strong in his mouth. Rosie lips, soft skin and smell of a woman, pure and fresh were almost strange to him. Gaby lifted a head of some girl. - Gaby? What are you doing here? Gaby looked up. - I'm looking for you. Don't you think you owe me an explanation? - You can't be serious. - You left home not telling me where you going. I was worried about you. - Well, I was with Lars, okay? - No it's not okay. You going some places I have no idea about, what if something will happen to you? - I'm safe with Lars. - Mell stated. - How can you be so sure? - He has a security guy, Gaby! - She exclaimed. - What for? - Gaby asked confused. - Because it's Lars... - And... - From Metallica... - What do you mean? - Gaby didn't want to believe. - Metallica! Gaby! You're blasting one of their songs almost every night. Gaby looked at Lars, he was smiling. - So you like our music? - James was standing in the kitchen door, holding the bottle of the beer, his hair were gently resting on his shoulders, white smile was dazzling Gaby, but she still felt disgusted by the way he was acting. 'Disrespectful dick' she thought. - Only one song. - Mell corrected James. - Because she is listening to it so often I can stand the thing now. - She complained. - Well, which one is it? - James asked. Gaby looked down, shocked. One of these guys was the guy who sang her loneliness away. It couldn't be the truth. James was staring at her waiting impatiently; his eyes were searching her face for some clues. - Fade to Black. - She whispered. -Guess what Gaby, James wrote it. - Mell added to hurt her sister; she knew how Gabby felt about those guys. - What? - Yep. - He smiled. Gaby looked shocked on James face. - You wrote that? - Wrote and sing. - He added. Gaby swallowed heavily thinking about all the nights she was listening to that song, thinking about the guy. - Mell, we are going home. - I'm not going anywhere. - Yes you are, now move. - No. - I refuse to sit and watch how you're destroying your life, I spend my childhood and my teen years to make your life easier, I spend every last penny so you could have what you wanted, I whished for you to be free from my fears and worries. Since the day you were born I was taking care of you, and this is the way you repay me? - Gaby voice was braking. - And where was your mom. - James noticed sarcastically. - Six feet under, she died giving birth to Melissa. - Gaby sated, staring at James. Cold sweat cover James' body, he knew how it feels to loose mom. - Anything else? - Gaby asked, stabbing James with her stair. James felt like an idiot, he raised his hands up in surrendering gesture. - You are leaving with me now or can never again call me your sister. Mell knew her sister was serious; she gave Lars a weak kiss and started to walk. Gaby took her hand and they left home. Two months passed on Gaby working and Mell sneaking out of the house. It was the end of the summer and Mell's birthday. Gaby bough her gold necklace with a big letter M, she wanted something special for her sister. After all, she was everything she had. Gaby gave the gift to her sister in the morning before she went to work. - Oh thank you it's beautiful. - Mell jumped and hugged her sister, in seconds the necklace was adorned he long neck. - Gaby? - What is it? - She answered apprehensively. - It's my eighteen birth day? Right? - Right. - I would like to have a party. - Okay. - Here. - Where? - Home. - Oh no, no way. - Please, it would be a good way to prove to you that I am a responsible adult. Gaby was thinking for few seconds, considering all pros and cons. - But you will clean it all, and I won't give you a penny for it. - Deal.- Mell jumped excited. Gaby spend the whole day at work, when she was ready to go home, Mac asked her to join him at some meeting he had. It was late at night when Gaby was home. Party was going good, music was loud people were having fun. Gaby was just worried if the house will be in the same condition as before. She looked around to see who the people that Mell invited were. She noticed Kirk and Jason. Mell run up to her sister, thanking her that she let Mell to have her party. James was talking to some big breasted girl he planned to fuck, but when he lifted his head and looked at Gaby, the idea of pointless sex was gone. He wanted Gaby, he wanted to see her naked underneath him, with her green eyes burning with lust, her lips begging for his touch. Their eyes met, Gaby felt butterflies in her stomach, the memory of their kiss returned. She shook her head and went quickly upstairs. James escorted her with his look. Gaby entered her room, took the cloths off and went under the shower. Music was loud so were the people, but Gaby was too tired to by annoyed. She put on her pyjamas on and slid under the sheets, thinking only about sleep. James was trying to get rid off Gaby from his head. It was pissing him off, that this little; annoying red head girl was occupying his thoughts. He took the big breasted girl to one of the rooms down stairs. And ordered her to suck him, she obeyed he was somewhat disgusted with her obedience but it was the only way for him to empty his head. The girl took his trousers down; James sat on the armchair and tried to relax. The girl sucked his cock eagerly. He grabbed her hair and pushed his dick down her throat. It felt good, hard and senseless. He opened his eyes and noticed a picture on the wall, it was picture of Gaby, she looked younger and happy, her hair was messed by the wind, the sun was leaving golden shine on her skin, she was staring right into the camera, big green eyes seemed to look back at James. It was picture made by Gaby's granny, more than ten years ago. He pushed away the girl that was kneeling in front of him, he felt embarrassed, almost like it was Gaby in person looking at him. His dick was flat in seconds when he look down on the kneeling bitch. - Fuck. - He hissed. James went for another drink, he dried few bottles of beer, and drink some vodka. The world started to spin, girls were trying to get his attention, but he was in shitty mood now, no bitch could help. James went upstairs to look for some quiet place to lay down. He opened the door at the end of corridor, it was big, dark room with double bed, he closed the door and rested his bady heavily on the bed. He hugged what he thought was pillows, familiar smell filled his lunges, he felt relaxed and calm, in seconds James fell asleep. |
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| Shannyn(: | Feb 2 2012, 01:55 PM Post #12 |
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 Chapter 6 : Damnit, Hetfield!  Chapter 7 :  he likeeees herrrr :3I am loving this fic so far & i can tell it's just going to get better  You're an awesome writer! You should be proud with this! lol, just the thought of Justice James has me going all I think it's safe to say you have a dedicated reader right here
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| CarpeDiemBaby | Feb 2 2012, 09:51 PM Post #13 |
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just few words... MORE PLEASE MORE!!! I bet that is Gaby who is in the bed where James laid
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| Some_Kind_Of_Monster | Feb 3 2012, 01:56 AM Post #14 |
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Thank you very much It's difficult to write when people don't want to read. I plan some interesting stuff, well inetersting to me This time I am going to focus more on James and other members I hope you will like it
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| Some_Kind_Of_Monster | Feb 3 2012, 01:59 AM Post #15 |
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Jezz woman You are with me so long now I don't know how to thank you, responds are the motivation. Thank you so much.  |
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