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| Fight Fire With Glitter; James/Kirk slash - Set in 1985 | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: May 5, 2012, 8:04 pm (1,508 Views) | |
| jØrdan | May 5, 2012, 8:04 pm Post #1 |
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Okay, so this is the first fic I've seriously ever attempted writing. It was originally going to be a one-shot, but I decided to do it in parts and see how it goes. Anyway, it's a James/Kirk teaser. I hope you like it! James squinted his eyes, turning his neck to avoid eye contact with his drunk suitor, fighting an embarrassed smile. He couldn't reveal his blush. It's just the fucking alcohol. He blamed the atmosphere. His eyes hurt from the glitter. He swiped a quick hand over his forehead, sparkly flakes landing in his half empty beer can, which became more and more difficult to hold when a sudden strike of nerves revealed itself in the form of a sweaty hand. Kirk smiled big, exposing an endless row of crooked teeth that somehow fit adorably with his young drunk complexion. James couldn't help but stare at them. They made him look boyish... innocent almost. His lips were the perfect compliment to them, so full and slippery wet; and from his own saliva, no less. Those fucking lips... Innocent my ass. He stopped himself right there before he could think about Kirk this way any further. Even in the confines of his mind he knew he was about to cross into dangerous territory. Kirk caught James looking directly at his mouth, and suddenly felt extremely self aware. "I- I'm sorry-" James paused, thinking of what to say next. "Dude, seriously. I don't know why I did that. I'm just fucking drunk and... I think I'm just gonna call this one a night, man. See ya." Fuck! Kirk opened his mouth, but stopped cold. He didn't want James to be sorry. This was Kirk's only chance, and he knew it. He just received validation, proof that whatever has been going on between them these past few months weren't just false assumptions being conjured up by his young horny mind. He's about to leave! Say something you fucking pussy! "James, wait!" he said, rolling his eyes at himself when his plea came out much more theatrical than intended. Youuu fucking idiot... James stopped as soon as he heard his name. He took a deep breath and turned his neck to the side, back still to Kirk. There was a tremble in his voice when he spoke. "Look, man... I said I was so-" "Why?" Kirk cut him off. "Why?" James asked horrified. Kirk swallowed. "Why are you sorry?" He was so confused. Kirk's voice didn't come off as angry or disgusted like he would have expected. There was something else in his voice, and it was far from disapproval. What the fuck? He turned around to face an anticipatory gaze, framed by black curly locks that were sprinkled with Mardi Gras glitter Kirk had just thrown on them seconds before. It reminded James of the starry night outside, and how wonderful it would be to taste those lips again in fresh air. James let out a chuckle in disbelief. "I- Dude, I fucking kissed you..." Neither of them could believe how willingly he admitted to it at first. No trying to cover it up, no "I just slipped and my lips landed on your face" kind of bullshit. Kirk looked down at the floor for what seemed like an eternity. Finally snapping out of his trance, his eyes gazed back up and looked directly into James's. A sinister smile reached his lips, and he started walking toward him. James straightened, a million thoughts and possibilities racing through his mind with every inch he moved closer. Before he knew it, Kirk was right in his face, tilting his neck upward with pride. "Wha-" Before a word could escape his mouth, Kirk had started to claim it with his tongue. James's beer can crashing to the floor echoed throughout the empty kitchen, the only sound interrupting the smacking of their wet lips moving against each other. His hands slid up Kirk's torso, wrinkling his sleeveless t-shirt all the way up to his shoulders. Kirk instinctively wrapped his arms around James's waist, so sweaty and strong. Kirk let out a deep moan when he felt his hands touching him. Both their pants felt tight. I've waited so long for these hands... James bit and held down Kirk's bottom lip, and started licking it playfully, forcing a muffled high pitched squeal from Kirk. His hot breath cascading down on his throbbing lip brought him to the brink. He needed more, and by God, he was determined to get it. He let him tease his mouth a few seconds more before pulling away from James completely. James breathed heavily and stared Kirk down, his lusty eyes and disoriented face looking back at him with pure want. Kirk's chest heaved as he stood there with his bite marks on his mouth. "Yeah, and now we're even." He walked out of the kitchen, leaving James still and shocked, while his mind tried to comprehend what the fuck just happened. All he knew was that he liked it, and he wanted to feel it again. |
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| Olyamet | May 5, 2012, 8:07 pm Post #2 |
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Jäger.....
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You posted it!!!! AWESOME!!! I already told you I LOVE IT! Your writing is great! Go baby! Now... MORE!
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| Achernar | May 5, 2012, 8:17 pm Post #3 |
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I want my dragon back :c
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0_______0 girl...if this is your first fic I don't want to know how will be the next ones....[/dries...] niiice c: |
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| youthanasia | May 5, 2012, 8:21 pm Post #4 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Oh god I love it Seriously, EXCELLENT start, and I can't wait to see what's next!
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| jØrdan | May 5, 2012, 8:23 pm Post #5 |
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Thanks you guys! It really means a lot.
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| Isis | May 5, 2012, 8:35 pm Post #6 |
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TEA + CUDDLES
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This is a good start, and a good first fic. I sure as hell didn't write like this for my first one, so kudos. Looking forward to the next installment. Keep it up. |
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| Jungleland | May 5, 2012, 8:36 pm Post #7 |
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HUG PEOPLE
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That was good Always nice to see some James/Kirk.
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| jØrdan | May 5, 2012, 8:37 pm Post #8 |
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Thank you guys so much! I'm glad you like it so far.
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| Olyamet | May 5, 2012, 8:41 pm Post #9 |
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Jäger.....
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Hehehehehe... Do you believe me now? It's awesome start! I didn't say it just because you are my friend! It's GOOOOOOD!
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| jØrdan | May 5, 2012, 8:44 pm Post #10 |
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Thank yoouuuu... lol
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| MetalliSarah | May 5, 2012, 8:54 pm Post #11 |
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Ms. Brightside
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Oh my, I can't blame James. Or Kirk. ![]() Horny horn dogs at their best. ![]() And Jordan at her best, too.
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| Lilith | May 5, 2012, 9:26 pm Post #12 |
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♥ Jaimelicious ♥
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I love Kirk's attitude, James is right... he is not innocent at all! lool That's just the kind of James I like to read. ![]() Way to go, baby! No one would believe it's your first fic! ![]() More! |
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| jØrdan | May 5, 2012, 9:29 pm Post #13 |
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^Hehe thank you guys! And yeah I like him like that too.
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| Deleted User | May 5, 2012, 9:42 pm Post #14 |
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This is great writing because 1) You provide interesting details to the reader (I loved the intro about James studying Kirk's wet lips), 2) it's not at all predictable. Surprising the reader is a very important thing to do. This is a really great first fic! I hope you write a lot more ![]() WELL DONE!!! Can't wait to read more! |
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| MasterOfPuppets | May 5, 2012, 10:34 pm Post #15 |
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♉ Love that little man always on my mind ♑
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Jordan!! :horns2 Usually I don't like slash but I really loved this! Can't wait for more!
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Seriously, EXCELLENT start, and I can't wait to see what's next!
Thank yoouuuu... 


8:49 PM Jul 10