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| A Night To Remember 1998; Oneshot/JKL/OFC/Lulzy/Hot! | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: June 20, 2012, 3:52 am (803 Views) | |
| Wishful | June 20, 2012, 3:52 am Post #1 |
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Cliff and Lars Lover
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This oneshot is a result of a dream that Metallica 4 Life! had. Some of u would have seen the thread in the writers lounge. I hope u enjoy this as I had a right laugh writing it! A Night To Remember 1998 “I cannot fucking believe we lost to Lars!” Exclaimed James to Kirk. “I know dude” Groaned Kirk. James, Kirk and Lars had been playing poker, both James and Kirk had run out of funds and had no way to bet. Lars had decided that instead of putting money into the pot instead if they lost they had to do whatever Lars said, and if Lars lost he had to do whatever James and Kirk wanted him to do. Worst luck Uli won the bet. He told them their fate…… “Right boys here is your punishment for losing to me” Said Lars with a shit eating grin on his face. “You two are going to be performing on stage at the Pink Pagoda….” Lars was grinning hugely at this point. James and Kirk looked at each other horrified, James had gone rigid and Kirk had gone so white he looked on the verge of fainting. “You can’t” Whispered Kirk hoarsely. “Oh I can and I will” Cackled Lars in triumph. James couldn’t speak not one word….. Meanwhile Rachel and Mikaela were making plans to go out at the weekend but neither was sure where to go for fun. “Fuck it we’ll go wherever our feet take us” Said Rachel. “Are you sure that’s a good idea?” Asked Mikaela nervously. “Sure, why not could be fun!” “Well if your sure hunni”. That weekend. James, Kirk and Lars were at the Pink Pagoda club in the changing room. Once James had come too he’d jumped on Lars and attempted to throttle him but Kirk had pulled him off before any real harm could be done. Lars had also supplied their costumes to wear on stage, not that there had been much in the way of costumes….. Rachel and Mikaela had found their feet had beat a route to a slightly seedier part of town. They pulled up outside of the ‘Pink Pagoda’ club. A club notoriously known for its saucy revue, and their ladies wearing next to nothing. “Rachel what are you doing? We can’t go in there!” Exclaimed Mikaela in surprise. “Oh come on, it could be good for a laugh”. “You have got to be fucking kidding me! I’m not, I’m not that way inclined” Said Mikaela uncomfortably. “Oh stop being so closed minded and give it a go… Please Mikaela… Please” Rachel begged. “Oh fuck it, okay, okay I give”. Mikaela could always be wrapped around Rachel’s little finger. They shuffled up to the door to the bouncer and paid him $10 each to get in. Once inside Rachel directed Mikaela and herself right to the front row. A waitress service appeared and took drinks orders both ladies opted for a jug of sangria, so they wouldn’t have to miss a thing. A while later the lights went down and the music kicked in, suddenly the lights went up and so did the curtain the ladies hardly entired in anything at all. Mikaela could feel her face growing hot and rosy with embarrassment, Rachel meanwhile had noticed none of this she’d glimpsed movement in the wings! Their was three guys arguing, two of which were in costume, one dressed as a sexy biker with a whip and the other dressed as a Spanish Matador or at least that what it looked like from front of house. “Hey do you see those guys in costume in the wings?” Asked Rachel just to confirm that she wasn’t yet pissed up. “What? Where?”. Mikaela followed Rachel’s pointing finger and yes! There was two guys dressed up to go on stage! Just then said guys where both given a shove on to the stage. Both guys stood frozen, rooted to the spot in fear. The other guy in the wings was laughing his ass off at the two on stage, Rachel could see the guy in the wings gesticulating wildly at them to move. Suddenly the blonde with the heavenly blue eyes slowly began to move, he nudged his companion as he did so and he started to move as well. The one with the dark curly hair his eyes travelled all over in horror till he spotted the females in the front row (The rest of the room was predominantly male) He made his way more towards where they were sat. All of a sudden Kirk found his groove and started to dance, he danced the dance of a Spanish Matador. His costume consisted of a pair of black trucks a pair of black spats, and cowboy hat on his head a huge hat. He had in his hand a red cape which he started to swing around. “Wow! These guys are so hot!” Rachel murmured. “I know!”. Kirk threw himself around the stage in the hope he was doing the best job he could, he stamped his feet, wiggled his ass as seductively as he could, and at one point was crawling on his hands and knees towards the edge of the stage towards to two young ladies and winked and gave them each a come on smile. But Rachel wasn’t paying that much attention, the sexy biker had taken her eye. He was wearing leather short shorts and a leather waistcoat with biker boots and had a whip in his hand, Rachel followed James’ progress as he launched himself at the dancers pole, and swung around it as he landed he had his back to the audience so he gave his ass a wiggle! Rachel nearly took off in delight. As James turned he had the whip between his teeth like a bit and began a seductive little shimmy downwards, once down he shimmied back up and swung the whip above his head before swinging it down towards the stage with a ‘CRACK’. A huge grin spread across James’ face he was actually really enjoying himself! With that he grabbed Kirk and they started dancing together, rubbing against each other up and down. Kirk grabbed the front of the waistcoat James was wearing from behind and ripped it open and pulled it off, much to the girls delight. Kirk rubbed his hands all over James’ chest and stomach and slid them down, down towards James’ groin but stopped and waggled a finger in a ‘No, no’ a huge grin on his face too. Just then the MC cut in and had the boys come off stage. A while later all three lads made their way to the front of house again fully dressed and made a bee line for the only females in the audience. “Hi, may we join you?” Asked James . Both Rachel and Mikaela looked up, startled to find it was the two guys from the stage show and the third guy who’d been in the wings absolutely laughing his ass off at them. “Erm yeah sure, sit down” Said Rachel totally boggled. “Hi, I’m James this is Kirk and this is Lars”. “You ladies saved us tonight, do you know that?” Said Kirk happily. “Yeah thanks for being here tonight that made things a damn sight easier for us having two very sexy ladies sat in the front row watching” Said James winking at Rachel. Rachel gulped and could feel her cheeks starting to burn slightly it wasn’t embarrassment it was pleasure! Lars suddenly spoke up. “You two guys are so fucking lucky these two was here tonight! Though it really should make this bet null and void as you had it easier then I’d intended” He muttered but loud enough to be heard. “Fuck you Uli that was far from fucking easy you douche bag! Exclaimed Kirk. The waitress service arrived again and a round of beers where ordered for all. Sometime later both girls were mildly tipsy, suddenly Rachel found James’ lips almost on her ear, she could feel his hot breath on her neck. “Do you want to come back to my hotel room with me? I owe you for being here tonight!”. Rachel gulped and felt like she was dreaming, coming too she answered. “Yeah, yeah why not”. James shot her a huge sexy grin and she felt herself tremble in excitement. Suddenly James pulled Rachel to her feet and announced that they were leaving to go back to the hotel. Mikaela looked horrified again, but Kirk laid a reassuring hand on her arm and drew her back into conversation. Out back in the alley behind the club was a car with black tinted windows. The driver spotting James got out the car and pulled the door open for James and his lady guest, got himself back in and put the intercom on and asked James where he wished to go. “Back to the hotel please Ricky” asked James. The intercom light went out and James immediately clamped his mouth to Rachel’s neck and started placing kisses his right hand on her left thigh his left hand on the back of her head as he turned her face to his so he could kiss her on the mouth. This carried on all the way to the hotel. Once back at the hotel James collected the room key and started for the elevators once inside he started to fondle her breasts making Rachel gasp with pleasure. Once in the room James led her to the bed and pushed her down on it and jumped on top and straddled her. His right hand disappeared behind his back and out of no where James had the whip in his hand the club had let him keep it, he’d curled it up and put it in his back pocket. He kissed her like she’d never been kissed before, his lips searing on hers, his hands had made his way up her shapely legs and under her skirt and found a buttress of a suspender, James grinned into Rachel’s mouth. Travelling further up he found she was wearing a little thong the gusset already wet. This made James even harder. Suddenly James stopped, and grinned evilly at Rachel. “As I danced for you tonight, you can dance for me!”. Rachel looked up in shock, but then a grin spread across her face. She wriggled herself off the bed and started a seductive wiggle, her hands quickly grabbed the bottom of her top and yanked it off she wasn’t wearing a bra. She turned to face James her heavy full breasts exposed, then she slowly took her skirt off but doing it in a provocative fashion. Before long she was almost naked, James shot off the bed and grabbed her roughly and pushed her back on to the bed again and yanked her thong off. James quickly undressed and was on top of her in no time at all. He buried his boner inside of her so quick all Rachel could do was gasp loudly and arch her back, she was already soaking wet so this made entrance easy. As Rachel had arched her back James had put his arms around her and pulled up and had her bouncing on his cock while his mouth sucked on her nips. All of a sudden she tightened and released and screamed in pure pleasure, this started a chain reaction and it wasn’t long before James shot his load. Both sated they laid down together and passed out. Rachel’s last thought was… “This is a night I’ll never forget ever!”. |
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| Shannyn(: | June 20, 2012, 5:47 am Post #2 |
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Tongue-tied & twisted just an earthbound misfit, I
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At first all i could do was laugh, reading this Even with tears in my eyes.. oh Kirk & James, dancing haha! By the end i was " Kirk threw himself around the stage in the hope he was doing the best job he could, he stamped his feet, wiggled his ass as seductively as he could" ^^ This got me started laughing so much! This was awesome! Oh & @Metallica 4 life.. I want to have dreams like this woman! Tell me your secret! Well, i love it Such a great One Shot
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| Wishful | June 20, 2012, 10:32 am Post #3 |
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Awh glad u enjoyed it hunni! Thanks for such a postive response
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| Metallica 4 Life! | June 20, 2012, 8:11 pm Post #4 |
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My secret hmmm??? all I do is look at acouple photos of which ever band member I want to have a dream of....then simply keep the image in my head. If it was a sexy photo...I get a sexy dream...but if it was a funny photo it ends up funny. pretty simple
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| Shannyn(: | June 21, 2012, 7:29 am Post #5 |
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Tongue-tied & twisted just an earthbound misfit, I
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Aaaaahhhh wise information there Thank you, i shall take the tip & see if it works! *fingers crossed*
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| Shannyn(: | June 21, 2012, 7:30 am Post #6 |
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You're welcome! I loved it, you did such a great job, really! Now i shall forever think of James & kirk in those outfits
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| Shayniz21 | June 21, 2012, 7:48 pm Post #7 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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This was really good!!! |
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| Wishful | June 22, 2012, 11:30 am Post #8 |
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Thank u hunni, glad u enjoyed it!
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| Metallica 4 Life! | June 28, 2012, 2:08 am Post #9 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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God....I am still forever greatful you wrote this for me!!! I can't quit reading it....So funny/cute/ and sexeh all at the same time!!
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| Wishful | June 28, 2012, 4:52 am Post #10 |
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Really glad u love it hun!
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| -DJ- | June 28, 2012, 7:53 am Post #11 |
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That was brilliant, the thought of them dancing is hilarious and then at the end sweet job!
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| Wishful | June 28, 2012, 12:08 pm Post #12 |
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Thank you -DJ- glad u enjoyed this too
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| CarpeDiemBaby | June 28, 2012, 11:06 pm Post #13 |
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// Sunglasses indoors.
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This story was great! James and Kirk dancing I'd pay for see that!
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| Wishful | June 29, 2012, 7:35 am Post #14 |
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Thanks for reading
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Even with tears in my eyes.. oh Kirk & James, dancing haha! By the end i was
Such a great One Shot


Thanks for reading

8:42 PM Jul 10