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| Raluque | October 3, 2007, 9:48 am Post #406 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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well finally!!! but i think that claudia really wants to get rid of cess, so i think she will sign the papers, just to be able to get even more men in the sack... that kid needs to be happy and cliff and emily deserve it too, so the papers *must* get signed. great... as usual...
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| Verity | October 3, 2007, 10:00 am Post #407 |
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The Story Girl
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Your replies are sooo nice. It's amazing you have all stuck with me for 107 chapters and I love having new readers pop up too. Feel free to comment on the parts you've read. I can always go back and look to know where you are. And I got coffee this morning so the world is good. This chapter is more banter, nothing special but it sets up the next chapter for Cliff to get all pissy again. Chapter 108- Cecily Takes a Stand The next morning was a beautiful sunny morning in San Francisco. The sky was a vibrant blue, and there wasn’t a cloud in the sky. Claudia sat at the kitchen table filing her pristine and perfect fingernails. “It’s beautiful outside and instead of hitting the waves with James, I have to be stuck inside spending money that I don’t have, on a kid that I’m no longer going to have, Claudia thought as she filed. “Unless I can get Cliffy into bed with me. Then I for sure could win him over. It would be perfect. He’d fall in love with me. He’d invite me to live with him here in this wonderful villa, I could still see Cecily, and he’d be around to take care of her for me. The only thing standing in my way is that little English slut.” Just then, Cliff’s car pulled in the driveway. “Where did Cliff go this morning?” Claudia asked. “He gets up and takes Cecily to school every morning,” replied Aunt Josephine. “Can’t she just take the school bus?” Claudia asked. “No daughter of mine is going to ride on some cock-sucking, dirty, old school bus,” said Cliff as he came through the door. “I know kids who used to piss in the seats of those things, and I’m not going to subject Cecily to it. Plus, I like to see her in the mornings before she goes to school for the day.” “You’re such a Sweetheart Cliffy,” Claudia gushed. “Would you like me to make you breakfast?” “I don’t eat breakfast,” retorted Cliff as he selected a Pabst Blue Ribbon out of the fridge. “If you gave a damn about Cecily you would have gotten your ass up out of bed and had taken her to school yourself.” “But Cliffy,” said Claudia in a sapped out voice. “I flew half way around the world yesterday. I was tired and needed my beauty sleep.” “You weren’t too tired to go at it at James until five in the morning in the hot tub,” Cliff snapped. Claudia blushed. “How’d you know we were in there until five?” she asked. “I could fucking hear you shrieking,” Cliff said. “You never shut up. You sounded like a cat getting gutted. It’s a wonder that the neighbors didn’t complain.” “That’s because James is just so good,” Claudia sighed. “But I bet he’s not as good as you are!” “You’re right. He’s not,” said Cliff as he chugged his beer. “Oh really,” said Claudia. She got up from her chair and cornered Cliff into the refrigerator. “Prove it,” she whispered into his ear as she pressed herself up against him. Claudia did know how to get a man to feel good. Even Cliff had chills running up and down his spine and the back of his neck. “Claudia, you don’t give a fuck about me,” Cliff said. “You fucking hate me. You’ve always wanted nothing to do with me.” “That’s because I didn’t realize how sexy you were Clifford,” she breathed huskily into his ear. Clifford. That did it. Cliff had been thinking that maybe he could get a very quick fuck out of Claudia right there in the kitchen. Then he could see if she lived up to all of the hype. Hell, maybe she’d even sign his parental papers afterwards and then she’d be out of his life, but at the mention of Clifford, his mood stopped. He pushed Claudia away from him. “Go fuck yourself for a change, you gnarly whore!” he snarled as he took his beer and trooped out of the kitchen. Claudia had never been turned down by a man before. Especially when she had already put the moves on him. She was not going to let herself be turned down by some stoner in a bad heavy metal band (Claudia doesn’t have very good taste in music). *** That afternoon when she got home from school Cecily was in for quite the surprise. She expected Cliff and Emily to be around waiting to take her shopping, but instead her mother was there. Her mother was the last person that she wanted to see. “Hello Cecily,” Claudia said brightly. “How’s my beautiful little daughter?” “Hello Claudia,” Cecily replied distantly. “Cecily,” Claudia said. “Don’t call me by my first name. You call Cliff by his first name, not me. I’m your mother.” “You’re a crappy mother and you’re dead to me!” Cecily declared. Claudia fell silent. Now Cliff had really pissed her off. He must have gone sometime last night and totally turned her little daughter against her. She’d get even. She’d do whatever it would take to show Cliff who was in charge of Cecily. “I cancelled my sailing trip just to take you shopping Cecily,” said Claudia. “I’d rather go shopping with Cliff and Miss Emily,” Cecily replied, without even glancing at her mother. “I’ll buy you some new school clothes,” Claudia offered. “I like the clothes that Emily chooses for me better,” said Cecily. Claudia was outraged. It was bad enough to have Cliff cutting into her daughter’s life, but Cliff was different because Cecily did not have a father. She did have a mother, and Claudia did not like being replaced by some floozy that Cliff was seeing at the moment. “I’m sorry that I don’t have as much money to buy you pretty things like Cliff and Emily do,” Claudia quipped bitterly. “Maybe you should start charging all of the dudes that you screw,” Cecily shot. “You’d be a billionaire then.” Since going to San Francisco her sweet, shy, daughter had gotten quite the mouth on her. Without even thinking Claudia smacked Cecily across the face. For some reason, when Cecily had been smacked by Cliff it had bothered her. But being smacked by Claudia didn’t even bother her in the least. She realized that she honestly no longer gave a fuck just what her mother thought about her. She didn’t care that her mother was angry. She deserved to be angry. Fuck her. Cecily just turned away, so that her mother couldn’t see the red mark on her face. “I’m sorry Cecily!” Claudia exclaimed. She reached out to take Cecily into her arms. She had never hit her daughter before. Cecily pushed her mother away. “Just sign the papers and go back to Denmark Mum,” said Cecily. “If you love me you’ll get out of my life.” Claudia stared at her daughter. Cliff had totally brainwashed her into hating her own mother and for that she would hate him forever. She noticed that Cecily was wearing a small, gold, heart-shaped locket with the initials C.B. on it. She reached for the locket to get a better look at it. “Where in God’s name did you get this?” she asked. “My grandmother gave it to me,” said Cecily. “That trashy, loud-mouthed, nosey lady who was over here last night?” Claudia asked. “She doesn’t even know what your initials are.” “They’ll be C.B. soon,” said Cecily. “I was hoping that you would keep my last name Cecily,” Claudia said sternly. “I’m letting you go live with Cliff. I’m giving you your wish. I just ask that you keep my last name so that you don’t forget where you came from.” “I don’t really want to remember you,” Cecily replied. “I’m Cecily Burton now.” “What happened to my sweet little daughter?” Claudia moaned. “Since last night you’ve become a total bitch Cecily! Now it would mean the world to me if you’d please keep your last name.” “Why?” snapped Cecily. “So I can be the weirdo at school that has a different last name than the rest of her family does?” “You can live with Cliff but you’re not wearing that ridiculous necklace,” snarled Claudia. “I won’t have it!” Claudia ripped off the necklace breaking the chain completely in half. “No!” Cecily yelped in horror. She clutched her now naked neck. Claudia dumped the broken chain and locket down on the table. She watched as Cecily clutched the chain in her hand and started crying over it, as if it were a dead puppy. “Oh Cecily stop,” Claudia commanded. “It’s just a necklace.” “It was the sweetest gift that anyone has ever given to me,” Cecily cried. “It made me feel loved, as if I were the part of a real family. A real, normal, family. I was going to keep that locket forever, and then pass it on to my own daughter someday.” Claudia realized that perhaps she did go a little too far. “I’m sorry Cecily,” she said. “It’s just a chain. We can get it fixed.” “You broke it in half!” Cecily wailed. She started sobbing uncontrollably. Claudia couldn’t believe the fuss over a stupid necklace. “What about if I take you to get something really special done?” Claudia asked. “Like what?” asked Cecily. “It’s a surprise,” said Claudia as she took her daughter’s hand. “I know that you’ll love it.” But, she thought to herself. Most importantly, Cliff sure won’t. And for once, Claudia was right… |
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| Lucifer's Angel | October 3, 2007, 10:03 am Post #408 |
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I can't believe that bitch Breaking her daughter's locket Cliff is right, she can go fuck herself
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| Raluque | October 3, 2007, 10:16 am Post #409 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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i loooooooooove cecily's foul mouth.
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| Shayi | October 3, 2007, 10:26 am Post #410 |
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Bring me that horizon
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Oh dear god. That Claudia.... man, there are no words for that bitch! Still - this chapter was great for two reasons - 1. It was an excellent set-up chapter for whatever Claudia's going to do next and Cliff's reactions to it. Hell, the dude is already pissed off, so whatever happens is only going to make it worse. (And I have an inkling but I don't want to say it!). 2. Because it is some excellent back and forth dialogue that explores the dynamic between Claudia and Cecily. It's good to see how Claudia's devious, scheming mind works, and at the same time, Cecily coming to a realisation about her relationship with her mother. So yeah, fabulous development chapter! |
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| Raedoll | October 3, 2007, 1:01 pm Post #411 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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I have no idea where you're taing this. I want to know, because Claudia IS a gnarly whore and Cecily deserves way better. AGH. You Haaaaave to write more, it's going to drive me bonkers until I can read what Claudia's crooked fucked up mind is going to do. She's a bitch for breaking Cecily's necklace, and Cecily good for you for standing up to your ex mum! And good for you Cliff because you called Claudia a gnarly whore! HAH. And plus, Remember dolly, if you banged Claudia you'd fuck things up with Emily. You don't want to fuck things up with Emily, it would tear Cecily to pieces. Emily too, and you'd ruin it all! |
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| Battery | October 3, 2007, 2:39 pm Post #412 |
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Though I'm really backward in this story I don't worry because I know I'm going to catch it up very soon, I'm to hooked to stop reading this I'm still in August (I'm a lameass! ) in the part where Cecily is trying to get Cliff and Emily together. That's so sweet. Seeing Cecily And James finally cooperating, and James being able to cooperate with a female without thinking about sex it's a good thing (but I love your description of him, he's so goofy and sweet and funny , I'm laughing at him all the time). And Lars! So far he's getting more and more evil and mean I wonder what will happen with him next. Is he going to go in the good or bad direction?Cecily is a miracle: crazy (in a positive way, her depths of despair crack me up), sweet, loving, with great sense of humor, intelligent, metalhead at five, I want to have a daughter like this in the future! And Aunt Josephine -that's a hell of a woman! With her pot smoking, absinth drinking and hippie style -I love her! I even liked Philippa- somewhow she seemed mean to me at the beginning but since she treated Cecily so well trying to help her, she's not that bad Cliff is perfect - tough and harsh on the outside, soft and sweet on the inside and seeing him getting more mature rocks.Oh and Claudia -she's mean and she sucks but she's hilarious for me too(when she's approaching a man I can give my head for it she's gonna end up in bed with him ), irritating and somehow erm... poor? I'm starting to somehow feel sorry for her. This story is great, all those little pictures and scenes (like chase after Cliff across are the country, Kirk's and Emily's picnic party, Mrs. Hammet changing initials on the valentine, Lars in apron baking cakes ) are making this story so lively. And there's something else that totally cracks me up: Did someone give this child weed? though I know You all went through it long time ago and it probably seems to you quite 'not on the spot' I wanted to share my opinions with You sorry for messing up
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| Verity | October 3, 2007, 7:04 pm Post #413 |
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The Story Girl
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Battery- You're not a lameass in the least. This is one long-ass story and I'm very pleased that you're willing to read through the entire thing. I loved your review, all opinions are welcome. You rock. Shayi- I wonder if your inkling is right. The surprise is nothing that dramatic since everyone in this story is already pissy anyway. I hope not to disappoint though. Rae- Claudia is a very gnarly whore. I'm glad that I decided to make Cliff behave himself. We wouldn't Claudia to ruin anything. Eeek!Raluque- I like Cecily's foul little mouth too. When I was her age I picked up naughty words from my mother. She called me her little Truck Driver and never minded as long as I didn't say them at school, around my playmates, or around other adults. Lucifer's Angel- I agree. Claudia needs to go fuck herself. And with that said... Chapter 109- Cliff Doesn't Like Claudia's Surprise (I'm out of good chapter names) Cecily wasn’t particularly happy when she returned from her shopping expedition with her mother. Yes, she did get to have something that she had always wanted to have done, but she still had to put up with a lot of bullshit as well. Claudia and Cecily had been silent during the whole car ride into town. At one point Claudia did say “Are you still mad at me hon? You know I had to totally rearrange my day just to take you shopping.” And Cecily just ignored her and gazed out the window. After all, she was just a bother to her mother. The tiny ounce of good feeling that Cecily did have towards her mother after she gave her the surprise, was quickly erased when Claudia saw some guy that she liked at the mall, and passed Cecily off as her niece. “Did you have fun today Cecily?” her mother asked once they had returned to the villa. “Oh yes Aunt Claudia,” Cecily replied as she walked inside. She caught sight of Emily who was sitting in the living room writing a letter. “Hey Miss Emily!” Cecily chirped much to Claudia’s disgust. “My Mum took me out for a surprise. Notice anything different about me?” Emily took a good look at Cecily. She quickly noticed what this mysterious surprise was. Cecily was now wearing a small pearl stud earring in each ear. Claudia had taken her to get her ears pierced. “You have earrings Cecily!” she exclaimed. “Now I know what to buy you for Christmas.” “Aren’t they pretty?” Cecily asked. “They are,” Emily nodded. “In fact, I think that I was around your age when I got mine pierced.” “Really?” asked Cecily. “I hope so, because then I can be just like you. I just hope that my Dad likes them.” “Why wouldn’t he?” Emily replied. “I asked him once if I could get my ears pierced,” said Cecily. “He told me that I could when I turn ninety or some other ridiculous age.” Frankly, Emily did feel that Cliff could be a little too stern with Cecily sometimes. Big deal. They were just earrings. It wasn’t like Claudia had taken her out to get breast implants. But if Cliff had said no to earrings she could see how this was going to cause even more bullshit between him and Claudia. It might also even create a wedge between him and Cecily. “Do you think if I don’t tell him he won’t notice?” Cecily asked. “He probably won’t,” Emily replied. “But then again, you don’t have big breasts for him to look at so he might.” Metallica was once again working on doing some recording down in Aunt Josephine’s totally fucking incredible basement, or at least they were sort of working. Lars was lying on the couch wearing nothing except a pair of short warm-up shorts and a headband. He was making his way through a bag of pretzels, and was mundanely flipping through one of Aunt Josephine’s National Geographics. Kirk was perched on top of the pool table reading a fashion magazine. James had been working on lyrics, but he had ran out of pencil lead, so Cliff had ran upstairs to fetch him some more pencils. “That’s so not right,” Kirk whined. “What’s not right?” asked James. “Your bowels plugged up again?” “No,” Kirk retorted. “I just read that orange is the new pink this year. Isn’t that wrong?” Just then, Cecily and Emily burst into the basement. “So how many boys did your Mum bang while you were out shopping?” Lars asked. “Twenty,” Cecily said coolly. It no longer bothered her when people picked on her mom for being a slut, because the woman was. She twirled around in front of everyone. “Notice anything different about me?” James eyed Cecily up and down as if she were a shank of meat hanging in the freezer of a Wisconsin meat factory. “No tits yet,” he observed. “No ass either.” Cecily rolled her eyes. “You’ll have to look past just tits and ass,” she said. “That’s impossible for James to do,” shot Lars. Kirk was studying Cecily carefully. His eyes narrowed. “Oh my God!” he shrieked. “You got your ears pierced! Did it hurt?” “Did what hurt?” Cliff asked as he strutted into the room holding a handful of pencils. He went over and gave Emily a kiss. “Cecily got her ears pierced,” Kirk announced. “Don’t you love her little pearls Cliff?” Cliff frowned as he glared at Cecily’s ears. “No,” he replied flatly. “I don’t.” “But Daddy,” Cecily said sweetly. “Don’t you think that I look pretty?” “No. You look absolutely motherfucking ridiculous Cecily!” Cliff retorted. “I thought that I told you that you can’t get your ears pierced until your thirty.” Cecily just stared down at her feet. “Is this Claudia’s doing?” Cliff asked. “I’m sure this was her idea.” “She wanted to get me one last thing,” said Cecily. “So she got my ears pierced. I’ve always wanted pierced ears.” “But I told you no ear piercing!” Cliff shot. “You knew that I said no, yet you still went out and had it done. You disobeyed me Cecily!” “A lot of girls have pierced ears,” Cecily protested. “Whores do,” shot Cliff. “Miss Emily is a whore?” Cecily asked. “What about Mandie? She has pierced ears.” “You march upstairs this instant and take them out!” Cliff snapped. “But Dad!” Cecily cried. “Don’t make me take them out. They’ll close up.” “That’s the idea,” Cliff snapped. “And never pull this kind of shit with me again!” “I don’t see what the problem is,” Cecily argued. “You have a tattoo.” “Not when I was a fucking five-year-old I didn’t,” Cliff answered. “Yeah but you were still pissing the bed,” said Cecily. “You even said so yourself.” “Damn, I still piss the bed,” muttered James. “I’m a mature five-year-old,” Cecily went on. “I don’t see why it’s okay for me to roll you joints, yet I can’t have my ears pierced.” “Because I can’t get stoned off of your ears Cecily,” said Cliff. “I think Cecily should keep her earrings,” said Kirk. “They’re pretty.” “Shut the fuck up you prick toad!” Cliff snapped. He turned to Cecily. “This whole ear piercing nonsense is just some sick concoction plan of your mother’s to make trouble, and I will not have it! Your five-years-old Cecily! You don’t need your fucking ears pierced!” Cecily let out a hopeless sigh. It was hard enough having a shitty half-assed mother. The least that Cecily could get out of her was the pierced ears, and now sadly she would have to give them up. “Please let me keep them Daddy,” she pleaded one last time. “They make me feel so pretty.” “Go upstairs, and have Aunt Josephine help you take them out!” Cliff demanded. “I’m very disappointed in you Cecily. It would be one thing if I had never told you, but I did tell you no ear piercing, no perms, and any other older adult girl bullshit until you grow some tits!” “And some girls never grow any titties,” added Lars. “If Cecily doesn’t, she’ll never be able to have pierced ears.” “Of trust me she will,” said James. “She’s got the genes for it.” “Shut up!” Cliff roared at them. Tears began to trickle down Cecily’s cheeks as she nodded. “Yes sir,” she mumbled. She sadly began to traipse up the basement stairs. “God damn that fucking woman!” Cliff exclaimed. “She did that just to piss me off!” “She probably did,” Emily said speaking up. “But she also did it to try and create a wedge between you and Cecily, and she accomplished that. Now Claudia can be the good parent who lets her have pierced ears, and you can be the evil one.” “Fuck that shit,” said Cliff. “Cecily shouldn’t have pierced ears.” “I was four when I had my ears pierced,” said Emily. “People have been piercing ears for ages. There’s nothing wrong with it. Lots of little girls Cecily’s age get it done.” “So you approve of this bullshit?” Cliff asked. “I don’t approve of Claudia taking Cecily out and doing it without asking you first, especially since she’s signing her rights over to you,” Emily replied. “But I don’t see any harm in Cecily having pierced ears. I think that you’re way too harsh with her sometimes.” “You don’t know fucking shit about bringing up children!” Cliff snarled. “And who made you the expert?” Emily demanded. “I believe that we’ve both started taking care of Cecily around the same time. You even smoke weed around her.” “This is only the start,” said Cliff. “Next she’ll want tattoos and nipple rings!” “Nipple rings are hot,” said Lars. “She’s into princesses and anything purple,” said Emily. “I hardly think that she’ll want tattoos anytime soon. Plus you have them yourself. If anyone should want Cecily to get all tattooed and pierced up it’s you.” “It’s alright on me,” said Cliff. “But I certainly don’t want it on my daughter, not my sweet, little girl.” “It’s for the best Cliff,” said Emily. “You might think that I don’t know anything about parenting, but I do know what it’s like to be a little girl, and I know that by the time she’s in middle school she’ll be happy that she’s not the only girl who has yet to pierce her ears. So calm down, or go fuck yourself. All you’ve done is make Cecily angry with you, and that can only help Claudia.” Emily turned around to head up the stairs. “Emily!” Cliff yelled after her, but she ignored him. She had had enough of Cliff, Claudia, and the whole fucked up mess. “You know,” said Lars as he held his bag of pretzels up over his mouth in order to get out all of the crumbs. “That Emily chick is pretty smart for a girl.” “You agree with the twaddle that she just said?” Cliff asked. “You were kind of a dick to Cecily Cliff,” said James. “You don’t want to shelter Cess too much, or else she’ll grow up to be one of those prudish-on-the-outside Bible chicks that go absolutely freakish in the sack, like that one chick we all banged up in Montana.” Cliff put his head down on the pool table and gave a shriek of frustration. Since coming to San Francisco, it seemed as if Claudia was trying to compete with him in some popularity contest to win over Cecily, and he did not like it. He just wanted her to sign the papers and then leave forever. And now, not only did he have Cecily pissed at him, but he had also managed to piss off Emily, and he didn’t want to lose her either… |
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| Raedoll | October 3, 2007, 7:22 pm Post #414 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Poor Cecily...I had my ears pierced that young, but mine kept getting torn out. Maybe Cliff will loosen up just a smidge and let her keep the earrings, I thought that Claudia was going to do something way more outrageous than that. Emily makes a good point, and Cliff is just being a hardass because things aren't going his way at the moment. :3 Poor dears though...Cliff needs to take a chill pill. |
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| Lucifer's Angel | October 3, 2007, 8:08 pm Post #415 |
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Yeah, Cliff needs to chill. I thought Claudia was going to do something really outrageous, like kidnap her, or take her back to Denmark Now he's got both women mad at him Cliff, you need to chill, or smoke a joint, whichever works best
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| Raluque | October 4, 2007, 2:06 am Post #416 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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“He probably won’t,” Emily replied. “But then again, you don’t have big breasts for him to look at so he might.” “No,” Kirk retorted. “I just read that orange is the new pink this year. Isn’t that wrong?” my bf is sleeping and i have to laugh quietly.. you know how hard that is?!?!?!???!!! you're causing me serious problems here ![]() loove this chapter. and i agree with emily. i was 1 when my ears got pierced. i pierced them a few more times after, when i got older.. but i don't think i would have done it if i hadn't had the first ones to begin with. and some parents do it even sooner, because earrings are one of the presents that a godmother has to give for a girl's baptism, at least where i live. it's sort of a tradition. i'm sorry cliff didn't see through claudia's actions... but i know they (cliff, emily and cess) are going to work everything out. their chemistry is too good and so is their intuition/instinct about each other. cess knows about her mother, so no danger there. claudia will have to sign those papers and get lost. she won't get cess on her side ever again, at least in my opinion, so she's useless... write more?
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| Shayi | October 4, 2007, 6:24 am Post #417 |
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*G* Yeah my inkling was right. Although for some reason I imagined her with little gold studs. Don't know why!
Excellently done. I love the way that Cess is now standing up to Lars more without getting upset. And I've loved the way that you've handled her coming to terms with her mother being a complete skank who doesn't give a rats ass about anything bar herself and where the next fuck is coming from. (which isn't tricky to find with James around!!). I know that the story is drama and humour and so many people would get stuck on the humour aspect of things, but you really take the time to develop these incredible 3D characters. And I love that fact. As to the rest - Emily is great. Cliff, well I can see that he's trying to do what he thinks is best in a situation of which he has no experience. He just needs to know when to mellow out a bit and just let things ride. |
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| Simone | October 4, 2007, 9:21 am Post #418 |
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Wow!!!!! 2 new updates!!! This is great!!! I am a Verity fan!!!!! Btw,Verity,what band do you play in? Please tell!!!new super-trooper update for tomorrow too,I hope
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| Verity | October 4, 2007, 10:45 am Post #419 |
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The Story Girl
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Here's a little something not much. I have to rot in the car for 6 hours today because I have to be in Texas by Friday night. The kick-ass thing is we can stop and crash at my place in Louisiana so I'll get to sleep in my very own bed for the first time in over a month. Rae and Lucifer's Angel- I got the vibe you wanted some outrageous behavior from Claudia so I made her a wee bit more outrageous in this chapter. Shayi- It was either have Claudia cut Cecily's hair or pierce her ears, and I didn't want to do anything to Cess's glorious mop of hair. Raluque- I was like 4 when I got my ears pierced so I was pretty young too. My mom just took me in, she wanted me to have them. I think I cried though. Simone- I'll PM you my band's web link. Shayi knows us. Anyway, back to the important stuff... Chapter 110- Claudia Makes her Move That night Cliff stopped outside Cecily’s bedroom door. He was going to go in to tuck her in, and say goodnight but he opted not to. They weren’t speaking to each other. When she went upstairs she didn’t even bother to announce that she was even going to bed. She wouldn’t even look at him. Through dinner she refused to speak to him. She also wasn’t speaking to Claudia. Emily wasn’t speaking to him either, and Lars and James had gotten into a violent fight over a game of Battle Ship that went drastically wrong. They ended up slugging each other, with James punching a colossal gash right in Lars’s skull, so Aunt Josephine had to run them down to the Emergency Room that night. This left Cliff, Emily, Cecily, and Claudia in the house completely alone. Cliff passed on tucking in Cecily, and went to his own room. As he opened the door his heart sank. He was hoping to find Emily waiting in there for him. He was hoping that she had forgiven him for accusing her of knowing nothing about parenting, and would be waiting in bed for him, but instead Emily had gone to a different room down the hall. Cliff shut his bedroom door and sighed. It had been a long-ass day, and still no signed papers from Claudia. A lot of bullshit from her, but no signature. He located a Cecily rolled joint on his dresser and picked it. She always rolled the perfect joints. They were even fucking symmetrical. That must come from all of the drawing and shit that she liked to do. As Cliff lit the joint a thought came to him. She’s right. I’m totally cool with her rolling joints for me, but I won’t let her get her fucking ears pierced. What the fuck is wrong with me? Aunt Josephine still hadn’t taken the earrings out of Cecily’s ears yet. She was going to do it, but Lars and James’s little debacle had distracted her. Cliff inhaled, letting the fragrance of the weed dance in a whimsical cloud up to his head. I guess I’ll let her keep the earrings, he thought. Maybe Emily will like me then. I should go down the hall and talk to Emily, but I don’t know… Fuck it. I’ll talk to her in the morning. Maybe I’ll buy her and Cecily both earrings, and then they’ll know that I’m cool with everything. Cliff ground out the joint with satisfaction. Buying a pair of earrings for Cecily and Emily was a fantastic peace offering. He always got the best ideas while stoned. Just then, his door quietly opened a crack. For a brief moment he thought it was Emily. He whirled around, only to find Claudia, dressed in nothing except a half button white blouse, black satin bra, and a matching pair of panties (because in Verity Metallica fiction world everyone has perfectly matching sets of satin bras and panties to parade around in front of the boys in). “Lose your pants Claudia?” Cliff asked as he opened up his bedtime bottle of beer. “Actually I did,” replied Claudia. “But I’d much rather walk around like this anyway.” She seductively traced the length of her leg with the edge of her fingertips, and clucked her tongue. “James’s room is down the hall,” Cliff said as he backed away from her. He had a bad feeling about this. He was stoned, but even a stoned Cliff knows that Claudia parading around in a man’s bedroom half naked had to be a bad idea. “But James isn’t here,” Claudia whined. “I’m all alone.” “Your cooter won’t wither away and die if you don’t use it for one night,” said Cliff as he downed his beer, belched, and then set the empty bottle on the night table. “Who says that I won’t use it tonight?” Claudia asked suggestively. She made her way over to Cliff. “Claudia, just sign my papers for Cecily,” Cliff mumbled. He held the papers out to her. “Oh I will Cliffy,” replied Claudia. “Just give me time. Cecily is my everything. It will be very difficult for me to sign her away.” “Just think Claudia,” Cliff retorted. “Once you get rid of Cecily you can fuck all the boys that you want to, without ever having to worry about her getting in the way.” “There’s only one boy that I want to fuck right now,” said Claudia. “I’m sure James wouldn’t mind if you went down and screwed him in the waiting room of the ER,” said Cliff. Claudia laughed. “It’s not James,” she giggled. “It’s someone far dreamier.” “I keep hearing that no one is dreamier than the Het,” Cliff replied. “You are Clifford,” Claudia hissed. She pushed Cliff down onto the bed and climbed on top of him. “Get off me Claudia, you slithering ball of fuck!” Cliff yelped as he tried to kick her off of him. Claudia began to gently gnaw on the top of Cliff’s ear. Cliff stopped kicking at once. It felt just too damn good. Claudia had hit his hot spot. “Just think Cliffy,” she whispered. “You, me, and our little Cecily. All living together here in San Francisco. She’d have her real Mum, and she’d have you. Cecily would be so happy.” “Cecily fucking hates you,” Cliff managed to groan. “Claudia, get off me now!” “I could make you very happy Clifford,” Claudia moaned as she began to work her way South. “Not by calling me Clifford you can’t,” Cliff quipped. “And you fucking got Cecily’s ears pierced. I wasn’t down with that.” “I’m down with you though,” returned Claudia. She began to unzip his pants. “Let me love you Cliff. You won’t be disappointed, and we can both raise Cecily together.” “I don’t want to raise Cecily with you,” Cliff snapped. “I want to raise her with Emily. Now please Claudia. Get the fuck out of my room.” Claudia glared at Cliff with angry, green, eyes. Cliff should be thankful that a woman of her caliber would even consider jumping into the sack with him. She was not going to let him turn her down, especially not because of some other chick. She slid his pants down just enough so that she could get right in to where she wanted to. Cliff crumbled at once. Apparently, the hype about Claudia was true. Damn. The fucking woman had missed her calling. She should be the main attraction at some fancy ass whorehouse somewhere, not a pastry chef. Claudia undid her half button blouse with one hand, and with a flourish, cast it aside. “Can you undo my bra Cliff?” she asked. “James can undo it with one hand.” “If I let you fuck me will you sign those papers tonight?” Cliff asked. Claudia frowned for a moment. The point of sleeping with Cliff was to get him to fall in love with her, and want choose her to raise Cecily with. But then again, she was just getting started. She could guarantee that once she banged him he would be begging her to stay with him forever. “I’ll do whatever you want,” she replied as she thrust her tits in his face. Clumsily, Cliff fumbled with the clasp to Claudia’s black, satin, bra. After about ten minutes of fumbling around, he did eventually get it off. His hands were shaking. James is already smoother in the sack, thought Claudia. Cliff swallowed as Claudia’s breasts dangled in front of them. He had never been all that attracted to Claudia before. He thought that she was one of those bitchy looking girls. You know the kind that I mean, with the ‘bitchy looking” face. But naked, she was the epitome of a sex goddess. Her tits were even nicer than Philippa’s in Cliff’s humble opinion. “Jesus,” was all he could mutter as he fell speechless as Claudia went to work. “I love you Clifford,” Claudia whispered between moans. Cliff was now even too speechless to even correct her on his name. The woman was hardcore. He hadn’t fucked this hard since Jersey 84. At that moment the door to Cliff’s room opened. Cliff’s heart tumbled all the way down into his liver. Fuck. It was probably Emily, and she had probably seen Claudia. Cliff would lose her forever. He gulped and craned his head so that he could see who it was. It wasn’t Emily, but Cliff was not relieved. It was Cecily. She was standing there in her nightgown with that stupid teddy bear of his, with her mouth hanging open in complete shock. Claudia didn’t even notice that they weren’t alone. Mostly, because she was used to fucking in public places. “Jesus Cecily!” Cliff exclaimed. Claudia looked up from her screwing, and turned around to look towards the door. “Don’t you know how to knock Cecily!” she demanded angrily. “I’m not used to that kind of stuff going on in Cliff’s room,” she mumbled. "I was just coming in to see if he could ever forgive me for getting my ears pierced." The little girl had turned completely red. “Cecily baby,” said Cliff. “This is not what you think.” “Don’t lie to me!” Cecily yelled. “I may be only five-years-old, but I’ve seen James and Miss Philippa fuck in the hot tub enough times to know what it looks like! How could you do this to Miss Emily? She loves you!” “Cecily please listen to me!” Cliff croaked, but it was no use. Cecily ignored him. She shut the door and started running down the hall, where she ran smack right into Miss Emily… |
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| Shayi | October 4, 2007, 11:39 am Post #420 |
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Nah you couldn't let Cess lose the lovely hair “Get off me Claudia, you slithering ball of fuck!” = best insult ever! That made me chuckle! I cannot believe that Cliff gave in to Claudia. Not only is she a bitch, but god only knows what diseases she's carrying. Hell - who knows where she's been! And nobody has more perfect tits than Phillipa. Just proves that men (especially stoned and sex starved ones) think more with their dicks than their brains. Although I feel bad for Cess walking in on that scenario - I'm glad that Cliff didn't get goin' the whole hog with Claudia. And as for what's going to happen next with Emily, well I dread to think! Lastly - another thing that made me laugh (as they always do) your author's aside about the matching bra and panties! Well - lets be fair, what sex-crazed nymphos would go to Aunt Josephine's without matching undies? Fantastic update
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Breaking her daughter's locket
Cliff is right, she can go fuck herself
I'm still in August (I'm a lameass!
) in the part where Cecily is trying to get Cliff and Emily together. That's so sweet. Seeing Cecily And James finally cooperating, and James being able to cooperate with a female without thinking about sex it's a good thing (but I love your description of him, he's so goofy and sweet and funny
, I'm laughing at him all the time). And Lars! So far he's getting more and more evil and mean
I wonder what will happen with him next. Is he going to go in the good or bad direction?
and seeing him getting more mature rocks.
my bf is sleeping and i have to laugh quietly.. you know how hard that is?!?!?!???!!! you're causing me serious problems here 

8:42 PM Jul 10