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| Father of the Year; Kirk is going to get even with Lars. Het. | |
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| Lucifer's Angel | October 14, 2007, 3:28 pm Post #481 |
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Heavy Metal Seanchai
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Great job on the story, Verity It was great from beginning to end, and I liked how it ended on a happy note, I wouldn't want to read about Emily and Cecily if Cliff died Hah, Cliff doesn't waste time, does he?
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| Battery | October 15, 2007, 6:28 am Post #482 |
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OMG! The end?! :eyerub Snirf... But it was an awesome ending Verity! In the garden, with “Yahtzee!” sounds in the garden, so sweet. The last chapters were awesome. Mildred and James made me almost fell off my chair And Cecily and Cliff, he's so damn great father!, They are kickass together, so crazy, brutal and rock'n'roll and sweet at the same time I love imaging Cliff and teenage Cecily. I wish I could see that!Thank You so much for this story and for the happy ending And I love Kirk! Cliff should apologize him for being so harsh to him, but oh well, we can imagine that only That was wonderful fanfic, truly wonderful :horns2
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| Raluque | October 15, 2007, 6:47 am Post #483 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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OMG!! where do i start??!!?? sorry it's over, but then again, really really happy that it ended the way it did! anything else wouldn't have been right, after all the fighting and the pain/sadness. great, well rounded characters, really lively, the kind that make you think, it couldn't have happened otherwise in real life. they had a humane quality to them, something you rarely find in a fictional character, especially in a fanfic, considering that the persons in it really exist. you made us laugh, you made us laugh some more, and when it had to be serious, it was, making us really feel sorry for those involved. THANK YOU FOR GIVING US GOOD READING!!!
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| Verity | October 15, 2007, 10:23 am Post #484 |
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The Story Girl
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Thank you for the kind comments. Even though writing is purely a relaxation thing for me, and is just for fun it's a luxury to have people actually check in everyday to read it. It really means a lot. Writing is one of my favorite pastimes obviously. So I'll happily work on my new fic. And hopefully I can keep everyone still laughing. |
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| Shayi | October 16, 2007, 3:47 am Post #485 |
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Bring me that horizon
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Whew! Just got caught up right to the end. And it was fabulous it really was - everything from the drama with the passport, the funny cookie baking, the attempts by Mrs Hammett to get Kirk and Emily together (and well done little Kirk Lee) and well... everything was amazing! (And I love the fact that Cecily is so determined to one day go out with Kirk, that running joke made me laugh. As did Cliff's most excellent way of helping out with her maths homework!). I'm so glad that everything worked out for the best in the end - James will get to bang Miss Stacy, Lars is still an ass, Kirk is adorable and Cliff, Emily and Cecily are happy. A wonderful ending to a wonderful story. And now... I'm off to read the next one
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| Simone | October 16, 2007, 11:19 am Post #486 |
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Mistress of Puppets
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WOW!!!!!!! ABSOMOTHERFUCKINGLUTELY AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! I'm so damn happy that they got together!! And maybe...a sequel? The Wedding!!!! I would've loved to see the wedding! This is the best of the bestest fan fic I've read in my entire fucking life! :horns2 Verity,you rocked,still do,and will rock on for this great fan fic and for your talent! *loooooooots of applauses* |
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| MissMetallica;; | October 21, 2007, 1:13 am Post #487 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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wow. i get back from holidays to find this story finished! wow!! let me just say that you truely are a very very talented writer. the ending suited so well and im glad it all worked out. i love happy endings.well done kirk for getting emily to forgive cliff and to take him back after what happened with claudia. kirky is the little hero ![]() like simone said, i'd love to read a sequal. that would be awesome! fantastic writing. fanstastic ending. fantastic story!! |
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| Mina | February 12, 2008, 2:33 pm Post #488 |
Morgenstern
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Oh my fucking GOD! I read through this fiction in three days, developed an enourmous hatred for Lars, only to be beaten by the hatred for Claudia (which is unable to discribe..I seriously wanted to kill her) and utter love for Cecily. Fact is: This fiction is so goddamn AWESOME, really, I barely could stop reading it! *can't find any further words* I really really love it!
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| Verity | February 12, 2008, 5:29 pm Post #489 |
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The Story Girl
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Mina- Well thank you for reading. It's long so kudos for keeping with it. Because Simone wanted one, there is a sequel. But seriously, thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. It means a lot.
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| maisy blue | February 13, 2008, 12:51 pm Post #490 |
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You should post these somewhere. Maybe make a LiveJournal with all your stories- one story per entry. I would love to read it again like a book. Loved it!
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| Verity | February 14, 2008, 12:07 am Post #491 |
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The Story Girl
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That would be one very very very very long-ass entry.
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| Metalicious | March 5, 2008, 11:34 pm Post #492 |
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Well, damn. I started reading "Daughter of the Year" and after deciding I wanted to know what the fuck was going on (I saw that note), came to this thread so I'd be all informed and whatnot. I got through the first page. Killed myself laughing. Actually slid part way off the chair at one point from giggling so much. You write 1980s James so well. I love how you've captured all the guys, and that you don't take them too seriously. Love. It. And now I have to freaking go to bed. Because if I don't, I'm going to be up all night reading, and I have a feeling that'll only get me about a third of the way through. I've always been a huge fan of present-day Met, but this is just so damn fun to read, and I'm really enjoying BabyMet. They're all so cute and innocent. And foul-mouthed and dirty. It's addictive! *grumbles* fricken stupid work, having to fricken get up early tomorrow *grumble grumble* Can't wait til I can read more! I WILL eventually get all caught up. Man there are a lot of awesome fics on this board... |
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| Verity | March 6, 2008, 12:31 am Post #493 |
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The Story Girl
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Hey! Thank you for reading this. I'm glad that I could give you an evening of laughs. Feel free to comment whenever you'd like. If you leave the page number I can always find the place that you're referring to. It is long. Sorry bout that. It was orginally only supposed to be 12 chapters believe it or not.
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| Metalicious | March 6, 2008, 8:21 pm Post #494 |
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Okay, so...I finished page 2. I'm still giggling out loud.
Heee. I love all the guys in this story but I think Kirk might be my favourite.
Bwaaaaaaaaahahahaha. I love the idea of Cliff's folks being so laid back and wildly inappropriate, and Cliff carrying on this tradition.
This totally took me by surprise, and I'm pretty sure I snorted when I read the psychobabble part. So Lars. So fitting. So delightful to think of being like this even back in the 80s.
Now, this part I just quoted because it's damn true. I'm gonna be 30 this year and I STILL want a pony. My boss actually bought me one for Christmas. But that's another story.
At the risk of repeating myself....bwaaaaaaaaaahahahahaha!! This, aside from being hysterical, strikes me as something he would totally say.
Sad but true. I'm loving this! The shy, quietly hilarious Kirk, cocky asshat Lars, rebellious and adorable Cliff and the relationship he's building with Cecily, and of course Classic Hetfield. Pure brilliance. :horns2 |
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| Verity | March 6, 2008, 10:21 pm Post #495 |
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The Story Girl
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Wow. Your boss bought you a pony???? That rocks! I'm glad that you are still giggling.
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It was great from beginning to end, and I liked how it ended on a happy note, I wouldn't want to read about Emily and Cecily if Cliff died
Hah, Cliff doesn't waste time, does he?



And Cecily and Cliff, he's so damn great father!, They are kickass together, so crazy, brutal and rock'n'roll and sweet at the same time
I love imaging Cliff and teenage Cecily. I wish I could see that!
And I love Kirk! Cliff should apologize him for being so harsh to him, but oh well, we can imagine that only
And maybe...a sequel?
The Wedding!!!! I would've loved to see the wedding!
It was orginally only supposed to be 12 chapters believe it or not.

8:42 PM Jul 10