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Father of the Year; Kirk is going to get even with Lars. Het.
Topic Started: July 3, 2007, 9:40 pm (14,611 Views)
Lucifer's Angel
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Great job on the story, Verity :wavey It was great from beginning to end, and I liked how it ended on a happy note, I wouldn't want to read about Emily and Cecily if Cliff died :( Hah, Cliff doesn't waste time, does he? :rolleyes:
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OMG! The end?! :eyerub Snirf...
But it was an awesome ending Verity! In the garden, with “Yahtzee!” sounds in the garden, so sweet.
The last chapters were awesome. Mildred and James made me almost fell off my chair :lol: And Cecily and Cliff, he's so damn great father!, They are kickass together, so crazy, brutal and rock'n'roll and sweet at the same time :biggrin I love imaging Cliff and teenage Cecily. I wish I could see that!
Thank You so much for this story and for the happy ending :biggrin :heart: And I love Kirk! Cliff should apologize him for being so harsh to him, but oh well, we can imagine that only :wink
That was wonderful fanfic, truly wonderful :heart: :heart: :horns2
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OMG!! where do i start??!!?? sorry it's over, but then again, really really happy that it ended the way it did! anything else wouldn't have been right, after all the fighting and the pain/sadness.

great, well rounded characters, really lively, the kind that make you think, it couldn't have happened otherwise in real life. they had a humane quality to them, something you rarely find in a fictional character, especially in a fanfic, considering that the persons in it really exist.

you made us laugh, you made us laugh some more, and when it had to be serious, it was, making us really feel sorry for those involved.

THANK YOU FOR GIVING US GOOD READING!!! :bow :bow :bow
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Verity
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Thank you for the kind comments. Even though writing is purely a relaxation thing for me, and is just for fun it's a luxury to have people actually check in everyday to read it.
It really means a lot. Writing is one of my favorite pastimes obviously. :dance

So I'll happily work on my new fic. And hopefully I can keep everyone still laughing.
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Whew! Just got caught up right to the end. And it was fabulous it really was - everything from the drama with the passport, the funny cookie baking, the attempts by Mrs Hammett to get Kirk and Emily together (and well done little Kirk Lee) and well... everything was amazing!

(And I love the fact that Cecily is so determined to one day go out with Kirk, that running joke made me laugh. As did Cliff's most excellent way of helping out with her maths homework!).

I'm so glad that everything worked out for the best in the end - James will get to bang Miss Stacy, Lars is still an ass, Kirk is adorable and Cliff, Emily and Cecily are happy. A wonderful ending to a wonderful story.

And now... I'm off to read the next one :)
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Simone
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WOW!!!!!!! ABSOMOTHERFUCKINGLUTELY AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!

I'm so damn happy that they got together!! :P And maybe...a sequel? :D The Wedding!!!! I would've loved to see the wedding! :heart:

This is the best of the bestest fan fic I've read in my entire fucking life! :horns: :heart: :horns2

Verity,you rocked,still do,and will rock on for this great fan fic and for your talent! :nanner:

*loooooooots of applauses*
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wow. i get back from holidays to find this story finished! wow!!

let me just say that you truely are a very very talented writer. the ending suited so well and im glad it all worked out. :) i love happy endings.

well done kirk for getting emily to forgive cliff and to take him back after what happened with claudia. kirky is the little hero :)

like simone said, i'd love to read a sequal. that would be awesome!

fantastic writing. fanstastic ending. fantastic story!!
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Mina
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Oh my fucking GOD!

I read through this fiction in three days, developed an enourmous hatred for Lars, only to be beaten by the hatred for Claudia (which is unable to discribe..I seriously wanted to kill her) and utter love for Cecily.

Fact is: This fiction is so goddamn AWESOME, really, I barely could stop reading it!


*can't find any further words*

I really really love it! :heart: :heart: :heart:
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Verity
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Mina- Well thank you for reading. It's long so kudos for keeping with it.
Because Simone wanted one, there is a sequel. :wink

But seriously, thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. It means a lot. :dance
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You should post these somewhere. Maybe make a LiveJournal with all your stories- one story per entry. I would love to read it again like a book.

Loved it! :heart: :heart: :heart: :tu:
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maisy blue
Feb 13 2008, 11:51 AM
You should post these somewhere. Maybe make a LiveJournal with all your stories- one story per entry. I would love to read it again like a book.

Loved it! :heart: :heart: :heart: :tu:

That would be one very very very very long-ass entry. :)
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Well, damn.

I started reading "Daughter of the Year" and after deciding I wanted to know what the fuck was going on (I saw that note), came to this thread so I'd be all informed and whatnot.

I got through the first page.

Killed myself laughing.

Actually slid part way off the chair at one point from giggling so much. You write 1980s James so well. I love how you've captured all the guys, and that you don't take them too seriously.

Love. It.

And now I have to freaking go to bed. Because if I don't, I'm going to be up all night reading, and I have a feeling that'll only get me about a third of the way through.

I've always been a huge fan of present-day Met, but this is just so damn fun to read, and I'm really enjoying BabyMet. They're all so cute and innocent. And foul-mouthed and dirty. It's addictive!

*grumbles* fricken stupid work, having to fricken get up early tomorrow *grumble grumble*

Can't wait til I can read more! I WILL eventually get all caught up. Man there are a lot of awesome fics on this board...

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Hey! Thank you for reading this. I'm glad that I could give you an evening of laughs.

Feel free to comment whenever you'd like. If you leave the page number I can always find the place that you're referring to. It is long. Sorry bout that. :blush: It was orginally only supposed to be 12 chapters believe it or not.
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Okay, so...I finished page 2. I'm still giggling out loud.

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“And you’ve gotten so handsome too!” Mrs. Rasmussen went on. “Have the ladies come a calling yet?”

“I guess so,” replied Kirk, once again blushing. He wasn’t used to being fussed over by sober people.


Heee. I love all the guys in this story but I think Kirk might be my favourite.


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“We’re in fucking Denmark,” said Cliff. “Kids drink over here all of the time, but of course Claudia doesn’t allow Cecily to. It’s a wonder that she let’s that kid take a shit. When I was Cecily’s age, my parents let me drink a vodka and 7-up every night before bed.”

“That’s just not right,” Kirk replied, shaking his head.

“It used to knock me out and put me to sleep,” said Cliff. “I was hoping it would knock Cecily out too, but she’s got a strong tolerance, especially for such a little mother fucker.”


Bwaaaaaaaaahahahaha. I love the idea of Cliff's folks being so laid back and wildly inappropriate, and Cliff carrying on this tradition.

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“You’re hurting me!” Cecily cried. “Please don’t be mad at me. Mommy said I could go play in the lobby if I finished my chores, and I did.”

“Enough foolish psychobabble,” snapped Lars.


This totally took me by surprise, and I'm pretty sure I snorted when I read the psychobabble part. So Lars. So fitting. So delightful to think of being like this even back in the 80s. :lol:

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“I know dude,” James said, as he sat down and gave Lars a pat on the back. “I’m glad it’s not me. You’ll do fine. You don’t need to go out every night to the bars. I’m sure you’d much rather give little Cecily her bath, and tuck her in at night. You like princess movies right? And you’ll have to buy her a pony. Every little girl always wants a pony at some point.”


Now, this part I just quoted because it's damn true. I'm gonna be 30 this year and I STILL want a pony. My boss actually bought me one for Christmas. But that's another story.

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“He took it!” James announced.

“He took the bait?” Kirk asked.

“No, he took the "A" train,” James shot.


At the risk of repeating myself....bwaaaaaaaaaahahahahaha!! This, aside from being hysterical, strikes me as something he would totally say.

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“I wish that Mr. Cliff was my dad,” she said. “Why can’t you be my Dad?”

“Because,” replied Cliff, as he set Cecily carefully down on the sofa. “I’m one of the few guys in Denmark who hasn’t porked your mother.”


Sad but true. :biggrin

I'm loving this! The shy, quietly hilarious Kirk, cocky asshat Lars, rebellious and adorable Cliff and the relationship he's building with Cecily, and of course Classic Hetfield. Pure brilliance. :horns2


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Wow. Your boss bought you a pony????
That rocks! :)

I'm glad that you are still giggling. :dance
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