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On the Road Again; Het, me, a writer?
Topic Started: October 23, 2007, 5:44 am (4,070 Views)
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Okay, yesterday I started writing a fanfic.. it's a bug challenge cause i'm not a writer, and i'm writing in for me a strange language..
I'll post the first chapter, and if you like it, I will continue the story, if it's crap, please say so :)

Disclaimer: Everything, and everything is completely fictional
note: strange language is Dutch, or a Dutch dialect.

okay here it goes

Chapter 1

June 1996

“Ill have another one” I said to the bartender
Here I was, in a dirty old bar in Amsterdam. Stacy, a friend I’m staying at, will move this week to her boyfriends place in Italy. Than I’ll have nowhere to go, no house, no job. Luckily I’ve saved some money, that should be enough for the next two months.
When the bartender hands me my drink a group of people walks into the bar.
I’m not looking for any company, so I’m not paying any attention.
Suddenly I hear a voice behind me:

“What is a girl like you doing in a dirty bar like this?”

“Oh no, damn tourists” I think, “Hoepel alsjeblieft op” (please get lost)

“I’m sorry what did you say”

I turn myself to the voice behind me, in front of me stands a man with a big white had, dark curls underneath it, a black shirt, and the best pair of black leather pants I have ever seen.
“Fuck, that’s that guy from Metallica” I think, knowing that I got tickets for their gig tomorrow.
“Erm, Hi, sorry.. I thought that you where one of those bloody tourists” I stumble.

“Hahaha, Nope, sorry I’m no tourist. I’m here with my band, were on tour”

“ I know, I have tickets for the gig tomorrow”

“Cool, I’m Kirk, and you are”

“My name is Angie”

“Nice to meet ya Angie”

He offered me a drink, and carefully started a conversation, because he was one of the most gorgeous man I had ever seen, this time I would make an exception and have a chat with him.

“So are you from here?” he asked

“No, I’m from the south, I used to live in Maastricht, but when I graduated My moved into my room, so he can start his study. Because I had nowhere else to go, I moved in with a friend for a few weeks.

We chatted for a while and step by step he was stealing my heart.
“You fool” I thought “you just can’t fall for a rock star, they are the worst kind, they will have plenty of girls, and they will hurt you anyway.

“It’s getting late, so I’m going back home and catch some sleep”

“Oh, what a shame, you are nice company” He answered. “By any chance, do you fancy a backstage tour tomorrow?”

“That sounds awesome” I giggled.

“Okay then” He said when I wrote something on a piece of paper: “go to the backstage area tomorrow after the gig, and than ask for Steve, If you give him this, he will bring you to me”

“Thank you, than I’ll see you tomorrow”

He gave me a hug, and I went back home.
“No no no no no, why did you do it Angie, ah well on the other side, you’ll have nothing to loose” My heart was beating, and I had this weird happy feeling inside of me, and I knew, I wanted him really bad.
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Great start :biggrin keep it up! :heart: I'd really like to know what happen next :)

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Shayi
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Very cool :) Keep it up yeah?
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Please write a little more. :dance That was a very good start. :wink
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Really great start!! Can't wait to see where it goes from here!! :D
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Thank you girls :)
as promised an update:
Chapter 2

The next morning I woke up, and the thought of last night made me smile. When I walked into the kitchen and ran into Stacy.
“Damn girl, what’s up with that smile on your face?’’

“You will never believe who I met last night”

“Well than it’s no use guessing so tell me?”

“Kirk Hammett from Metallica” I said with a big smile on my face

“Girl, how did you do that?, you are not banging rock stars now are ya?”

I started to blush

“Ohhh now, Tell me you haven’t”

“No Stass, nothing happened, but he is going to give me a backstage tour tonight”

“You lucky woman, maybe you’ll and up just fine when I’m in Italy”

I wanted to look perfect for tonight, so I went shopping for some clothes, and found the perfect outfit. For a Metallica gig, you need a Metallica shirt, So I found a perfect girlie with the BA snake on it. And at the Waterlooplein I found the perfect pants of Cliff-trousers as I like to call them.

I went really early because I was determined to stand in the front row, in front of kirk of course. From the moment the show started, I caught myself staring at Kirk. He looked great, Like an 12 year old kid with a playboy I stood there staring.
When the show was finished I walked to the backstage entrance.
To security guys are standing in front of the door
“Hey meissie, je dacht toch niet dat we je d’r langs lieten he”( sweetheart, you really didn’t think we’ll let you pass)

“Ik ben op zoek naar Steve”(I’m looking for Steve)

“Oh die had ons al gewaarschuwd, een momentje”( oh yeah, he told us about you, wait a sec)

A few seconds later, a little guy with an Iron Maiden shirt comes to the door:
“You must be Angie, Kirk told me about you come on in”
I followed him into the backstage area
“Wait here” he says, “Kirk will be here in a minute”.

I decide to take a look at the pictures on the wall, when I here a voice
“There you are, what did you think of the gig”

Kirk came walking down the hallway

“It was a great show, I had a great time”

“I saw you standing in the front row”

A giant wave of embarrassment came to me, “He didn’t see me stare, did he?”

“Come on, I’ll give you a tour”

“Where are you going to stay when your friend is in Italy”

“I don’t know, she leaves in a few days, I think I’ll go to Paris or London, find a house and get a job, as a graphic designer I can do a lot of freelance work. But I will not stay here in the Netherlands”

“Why not”

“Because it’s to cold, and I want to see more of the world”

“You should become a rock star, in the next three weeks I’m seeing ten different countries”

“If I’m talented that would be a great option, but I’m not that fortunate”

“Would you like to go somewhere else, get a drink?”

“That’s a great idea, let’s get out of here”

We walk into the bar and order some drinks

“Hmm, I have the feeling that this is going to be a long and wild evening, and I don’t want to waste a minute of it, cause tomorrow he’ll be in Kopenhagen”
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:nanner: You ended up in a VERY interesting moment :cool Angie's really lucky one.
I'm waiting for more :biggrin :heart:
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Yeah, two chapters in and I think I'm already jealous of Angie!! Great chapter!!
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haha thnx, Myself is also a bit jealous of angie :P
but here's the next chapter, sorry it's a bit short

Chapter 3

Kirk and I are having a great time, and having lots of drinks.
We decide to sit on the couch where it’s a bit more quiet”
Were sitting on the couch, and Kirk wraps my arm around me”

“You know, It really bugs me that I meet a fabulous girl, and develop a major crush on her, I have to leave and probably never see her again”

“I know the feeling, I fancy this great guitar player in a metal band, and he has to leave cause he’s on tour. Live is just not fair”

We both started laughing and looked at each other. Kirk’s holding me tighter and I lean towards his face. He looks at me and gives me a kiss. It’s a small kiss, it lasts only two seconds. After that we smiled at each other and find ourselves passionately kissing on the couch.

“Shall we go to my hotel he asked”

I smiled “that sounds like a wonderful idea”

It was only a five minute walk to the Grand Krasnapolski. As we walked into his room, we immediately land on the bed, kissing and undressing each other. Cause of the warm wetter, we are both sweaty and sticky, but I didn’t mind. He is holding my body close to his, and starts kissing me everywhere. I started to moan softly. He looks at and I smile at him.
Carefully he enters me, really gentle.

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Go angie!!!! :dance :dance

They don't waste any time??

Write some more for us soon. :dance :)
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:nanner: nice... nice :biggrin But what will happen next?
Write more, please :heart:
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sorry another short chapter, I will post another one this afternoon

Chapter 4

Kirk’s POV

I wake up with a slight buzzing head, I roll over and next to me lies the most beautiful girl in the world.
“Why me, damn why do I have to leave to bloody Denmark this evening”
“Why can’t she come with me on tour, she doesn’t have anywhere to go”
“Shit no, I’ll have to get up the meeting is starting in 10 minutes”

“Angie, Angie” I try to wake her

“Yeah hun, what’s the matter”

“I have to go to a meeting with the guys, make yourself comfortable, take a shower, and when I get back we’ll got out for breakfast”

“Okay that’s great, see you” And she gives me a big kiss on my cheek and falls right back to sleep.



“Damn Kirk you’re late” James grunted

“Is that Angie girl lying in your bed” Lars asked

I start to blush

“Kirk’s got a girlfriend, Kirk’s got a girlfriend”

“Shut up Lars, she can’t be, we’re leaving tonight”

“I’ve never seen you this in love before, normally when you bang a girl you couldn’t care less, if you where leaving the next day, you really like her don’t you”

“Well, yes kinda” I mumble

“Why don’t you take her with you on tour?”

“How do you mean, take her with me. We can’t just take anyone with us.”

“Kirky Kirky Kirky, When was the last time you really liked someone, and she liked you too, Indeed 6 years ago”

“yeah I guess you’re right”

“Now for donuts sake, take that girl with you on tour, and if it doesn’t work out, we will buy her a plane ticket back to Amsterdam.”

“Damn lars you’re the best thank you”

I give Lars a quick hug, and run back to my hotel room and tell Angie the great news.
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Yahoo! so Angie is going on tour with Kirk? There's going to be fun! :nanner:
And Lars' 'for donut's sake' was hahaha great :lol:
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I just started reading this, and it's very good. Aww, Kirk has a girlfriend :blush: Lars is being a sweetie for once. I'd like to read more :)
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thnx girls, as I promised another (short) chapter...
But, 6th is longer i promise :P

Chapter 5

Angie’s POV

With a light buzzing head, I’m trying to get dressed. To shower was great, but now I’m starving.
I hear someone coming into the room.

“Angie, I’m back, where are you?’’ It was Kirk.

“I’m in here” I yelled, trying not fall over my socks.

“Hurry up, so we can go get some breakfast, I have great news”

“Okay, wait a sec” I said, and getting really curious what the news would be.

We went to a lovely little lunchroom, and both ordered a bacon and cheese sandwich.

“So tell me what’s the big new you wanted to tell me”

“Well this morning I had a meeting with the boys, and I told them about you, and the fact that it’s fucked up that I’m leaving tomorrow”

“yeah and” I said hopefully almost dying out of curiosity
“So Lars suggested you would come with us on tour, and since you speak more languages than us I figured you could work as a translator,
So Angie, would you like to go on tour with us”

I’m trying not to faint, and a million thoughts go trough my head right now:
“Woaah, I can go on a Metallica tour, I have a job, but I have to leave tonight, and what about my brother, ooh I have to pack”

“So what do you think” He said

I’m trying to stay calm and get my thought sorted out, “it would be a dream come true, but it’s a bit quick, and there are a bunch of people I’ve never met. Wait a sec, would that mean I’m Kirk’s girlfriend”

“Angie, are you okay, I’ve never seen anyone that pale before”

“Now, I’m just a bit overwhelmed, and trying to get my thoughts straight.”

“And, do you know what your decision will be”
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