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Which Eternal Lie; Time travel fic
Topic Started: October 28, 2007, 4:54 pm (15,768 Views)
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Yaay :nanner: Mary's back in Kirk's arms :biggrin It's great that the laird and Iver didn't turn up to be total assholes. And it's a good thing Mary thinks fast :D Something I have a problem with :lol:
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Chapter 50

After supper, Mary led Kirk upstairs to her chambers. His ears were still ringing from the celebration downstairs. Damn, these Scots are loud. I bet the wedding's gonna be even louder, he chuckled.

She opened the door and led him inside, lighting several candles. The room was ablaze with light, the blue walls shimmering in the flames.

"Looks like they treated you well here. I was so worried, Mary. I thought you were in a dungeon, or married to some ogre. Thank God you're safe", he said, embracing her.

"I was worried for you too, Kirk. When Daniel and Jens took me, I thought they were going to kill me and Elsbeth. How is she?", she asked.

"She's fine. She came back to the village after being found in a heath. She mentioned something about an Irish guy and a foreigner, which is how James alerted the laird. Annaly blurted out everything, and Daniel confessed. He offered to help us and the laird promised him membership in the clan and a wife", he said.

"Oddly, Daniel and Jens are honorable men in their own way. Daniel needs coin for Annaly, and Jens wanted to wed Jennet. Too bad they must resort to this", she mused aloud.

"I know, Mary. Let's stop with the sadness, think about more pleasant things", he said, kissing her lips.

Mary moaned softly at the contact, the gentle pressure parting her lips. She wrapped her arms around his neck, as they continued to kiss, falling down on the bed.

Kirk broke the kiss, smiling at the dazed look on her face. "Remember when I said I was going to teach you everything? Can we proceed, or do we have to wait until the wedding night?", he asked.

"The laird would want proof of my virtue", she replied.

"Bummer", he said. An idea suddenly came to him, as he grinned.

"Mary, we can proceed, but not go all the way. You're really gonna love this", he said, removing his shirt.

Mary felt her face grow warmn, her eyes wide. "This is going to be fun, just you wait", he said, taking her into his arms, kissing her lips.

While they kissed, Kirk unbuttoned the top of her dress and cupped her breast. She mewled, her nipple instantly hardening under his touch.

He broke the kiss, unbuttoning the dress, exposing her breast. Mary couldn't help the flush on her cheeks, as he gazed hungrily at her breasts.

"Mary, you are so beautiful", he murmured, taking a nipple into his mouth.

Mary gasped at the sensation, as she felt a tingling sensation in the pit of her stomach. Kirk chuckled against her flesh, moving to her other breast, the cool air hitting her damp nipple.

He lifted his head from her breast, removing the rest of the dress. Mary lay back on the bed, the candlelight glowing over her nude body.

Kirk's eyes roamed her body, his gaze both hungry and reverant. "Mary, you are so incredibly beautiful, it's gonna take a lot of willpower not fuck you right now", he murmured, removing his kilt and joining her on the bed.

Mary gazed curiously at his nude body, her cheeks pink. "You never seen a naked guy before? Don't worry, there's a first time for everything", he chuckled, nuzzling her neck.

His lips moved lower, fastening onto a breast, tracing tiny kisses on her flesh. She moaned softly as he kissed her breasts, his hand on her thigh, gently stroking her flesh.

Kirk sucked on her nipples, as he gently parted her legs. She gasped in surprise when he touched her intimately, stroking her most private spot.

"Mary, you naughty girl", he chuckled, inserting a finger into her body.

She closed her eyes, gasping at the sensation. Kirk's lips were on her nipples, his fingers in between her legs, the feeling gradually building inside her. Can it get better than this? she mused.

He chuckled, his lips moving from her breasts, down her belly, just above her hips. Mary gasped in shock after she felt his lips on her, replacing his fingers.

"Ooh, Kirk", she moaned, gently grasping his black curls. He chuckled against her, his tongue probing inside her body.

Mary was lost in sensation. His dark head was nestled in between her legs, his tongue worshipping her intimately. A coil of heat grew tighter within her, as she felt close to her peak.

"Oh Kirk, oh yes, ohhh!", she moaned, as she came for the first time. He slowly emerged from between her legs, a triumphant grin on his face.

"Mary, you taste wonderful", he murmured, kissing her lips.

"Kirk, that was unbelievable", she panted.

"See, I told you so. We can't go any further until the wedding night, but we can continue like this, this'll be a lot of fun", he whispered in her ear.
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I can't wait to read about the wedding. I'm stoked that Kirk and Mary are back together. I wonder if we will hear anymore from Daniel and Annaly.

Kirk's comment about willpower was sure funny. :lol: :lol:

Can't wait for more. :)
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The Ingenious Kirky :biggrin Yeah... It's a good thing they're back together :)
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*G* Caught up after the weekend now! Awesome - I'm so glad to see Mary and Kirk back together again - they are good together. And Kirk is surely teaching her some uh, interesting things there!

And bless Iver - nice lad that he is - at least he doesn't have to get married (yet) and he can spend all his time enjoying his painting and whatnot!
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Chapter 51

The group left for Mackenzie lands the next day. Kirk was ecstatic, as Mary embraced him. "I am excited as you are, Kirk. I hope I shall be a good wife for you", she said.

"Mary, you will make a great wife, because you're my wife. My Mom's really cool, so I know how a Mom and wife is supposed to act", he said.

Kir felt a sudden twinge of guilt when he mentioned his mother. I hope Mom's doing all right, he thought, frowning.

"Hurry up, Hamster. We don't have all day", grumbled Lars.

"You just want to get back to Violet, you little Danish troll", he retorted.

"Aye, I want to get back to Annaly", said Danile. Kirk noticed the sad, faraway look in his eyes. He should be happy, he's going to see his daughter again, and be made part of the clan. I wonder what's bothering him?, he mused.


Later that evening, they were camped in a hedge near a meadow. A small fire crackled merrily, as they ate supper.

Daniel sat staring into the fire, his expression troulble. The flames illuminated his face, the light shining on his red hair.

Kirk was concerned. Daniel had barely spoken the whole day, his expression brooding and fierce.

"Daniel, are you all right? Is something bothering you?", he asked gently.

Daniel looked up, the green orbs startling in the darkness. "Bad memories, Master Hammett", was all he said.

He looked around quicky and got up. "Master Ulrich, keep an eye on the Lady Drummond", he commanded, as he led Kirk away.

When they were several yards away, Daniel stopped, motioning for him to sit down. He took out his pipe and lit it, before facing him.

"Master Hammett, today is the anniversary of my wife's death", he murmured.

"I'm sorry to hear that", he replied sympathetically.

"Master Hammett, let me tell you why I am a clanless man, and came to Scotland.

I was born in County Galway, Ireland, in Connemara. My parents owned lands and had coin. Life was good until my mother died. Father needed a mother for my brother and I, so he married a woman from Galway City.

She was the daughter of a rich merchant, and brought along a substantial dowry. She was a cold, proud woman, but left me alone, favoring my older brother, the heir to our land. I was expected to marry a nice girl from a good family, and mind my business.

My wife was named Maura, she was the daughter of the local wise woman, a peasant. I did not like the women my stepmother foisted on me, they were silly and empty-headed, and I fell in love with her. Of course, my stepmother did not approve, but she tolerated it.

Her mother was skilled with herbs, and some say, witchcraft. We were happy, and then Annaly was born. Unfortunately, the village got a new priest. The old one had been tolerant of my mother in law, but the new one hated her. He felt that all healing, and all herbal lore was evil, and he accused her of being a witch, of aborting unwanted children and making charms.

His sermons preached hate, and inflamed the congregation, and they turned against her. Then one night...", he whispered, taking another puff off his pipe.

"One night, the priest had inflamed the parishoners to a fever pitch. Maura was visiting her mother, when they attacked. They slaughtered the women, mutilating the bodies and burning down the house. They then dragged the bodies and brought them to my father's house, demanding that my father turn over me and Annaly. My father refused, and the servants hid me and Annaly in wagon under hay, as they snuck us out of the house.

We fled to Galway City, and they gave us coin to flee. We fled on a ship headed to Skye, where I left Annaly with the Mathesons to find coin. I have been wandering the Highlands and Islands since. I do odd jobs for the clans for coin. I cannot go back, Master Hammett. If I could, I will kill that priest with my bare hands, he is no man of God", he vowed.

Kirk was horrified by the entire tale. Just, damn. That is evil. No wonder he's so angry, so brooding. And that priest is truly evil, he shuddered.

"Daniel, I don't know what to say. I never knew people could act like that. You and Annaly are safe, the laird Mackenzie is a good man, his people are not going to be swayed by an evil priest. Friends?", he asked, extending his hand.

Daniel cracked a smile, clasping his hand. "Friends", he repeated.

"Now, let's get back to the camp before the others send out a search party", said Kirk, as they went back.
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Wow. That certainly does explain a lot about Daniel - it was good to hear his backstory because it really helps you to get in touch with the character and understand him so much better. Excellent :)
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Kick ass back story!
It reminded me of Am I Evil or something. :)
I love Kirk and Daniel as friends. Daniel doesn't seem that bad.

This is really really good! Can't wait for ze next update. :dance
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Chapter 52

A week later, they arrived on Mackenzie lands. The villagers were lined up along the street, watching the procession. First it was Lars, then Mary and Kirk, and finally Daniel.

They reached the keep, where they were greeted by the laird himself. "Bathe and refresh yourselves, gentlemen. Mary, I am so sorry I refused Kirk's suit. I shall announce your bethrotal publicly", he said, embracing her.

"Thank you, your Lordship", she murmured.

"Where is Annaly?", asked Daniel, a worried look on his face.

"She is with Violet, or at Amy Beaton's house. She is in good hands, Master Connolly", said the laird, putting a hand on his shoulders.


Daniel changed his clothes and exited the keep. "Where is Amy Beaton's house?", he asked a young boy.

"That is me sister. Follow me", he said.

The boy led him to a cottage on the main street. The scent of freshly baked bread wafted from the open windows, happy childrens voices like the song of birds.

Daniel entered the house, his heart pounding. He sighed in relief when he saw Annaly seated at a table with a bunch of other children, talking happily. She was clean and neat, wearing a pretty pink and white dress. Her red curls gleamed, her green eyes merry.

She looked up and ran over to him. "Papa!", she cried, embracing her.

Daniel hugged her tightly, a tear falling from his eye. "Annaly, are you all right?", he asked worriedly.

"Annaly is a good girl, Master Connolly", said a female voice.

Daniel looked up, his eyes wide. A pretty young woman with merry brown eyes looked in his direction. Curly brown hair danced about her face, lips turned up in a smile. She wore a simple green dress, her feet bare.

"Are ye Miss Amy Beaton? Thank you for taking care of Annaly", he said.

"Aye, 'tis nothing. Would you like something to eat or drink, Master Connolly?", she asked.

"Aye, and call me Daniel", he replied, smiling at her.

Amy felt her heart skip a beat. Oh my, Annaly's father is so handsome, she thought, trying to control her thoughts.

"Papa, Miss Amy is so kind. She makes yummy cakes, and she's so pretty. I think you might like her, Papa", she babbled.

He chuckled, his gaze on Amy. "Yes poppet, I think I shall like her", he replied, stroking her hair.
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I was wondering if Daniel was going to have a wonderful chick to hook up with. He really do hope he gets with Amy. :dance :dance
Annaly is a sweetheart.

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*G* Aha! Well Daniel deserves some happiness after everything that's happened to him, so I really do hope that things work out for him to get together with Amy - and to add to the usefulness, Annaly already likes her. Major plus point!
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Wow.... Daniel's story was so sad :( This evil priest was a sick psycho :angry poor Daniel... I agree with Shayi, he deserves to be happy.
This story is awesome!!! :heart:
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Here you go girls, I got bad news, though. My little brother contracted chicken pox, I just got a call from the school, and Mom has to pick him up, he's highly contagious :( Thanks for the positive feedback on Daniel's story. I didn't want it to sound like I was bashing the church, I am a pagan, and many of us get accused of hating Christianity, I hope it didn't come off like that :angry

Chapter 53

Meanwhile, Kirk and Lars had finished bathing and got dressed in their best kilts and plaids. "The laird is ready to see you now", said the steward.

They followed him downstairs to the laird's chamber. He got up from his chair, smiling at them.

"Bring out Master Hetfield and Master Burton and their women", he commanded.

James and Cliff, along with Jeanie and Morag emerged from a separate room. "Gentlemen, in honor of your service to the clan, ye shall be made full members of Clan Mackenzie. Master Hammett, ye and Lady Mary Drummond have my consent to wed. I hope ye have not been hasty in regards to her virtue", he said, looking at Kirk.

He blushed furiously. "No, your Lordship. We can wait until the wedding", he said, his cheeks still red.

"I understand, laddie. It is hard to wait, but be patient, the chase is better than the catch", he chuckled, a gleam in his eyes.

"When is the wedding?", asked Mary.

"Ye and Master Hammett are eager to wed, aye? Since there is no dowry to work out, it shall be soon. I would say within two weeks", he replied.

"Thank you for your generosity", said Kirk happily.

"And tell Master Connolly he is also to be made a full member of the clan. I do not blame him for wanting to see his daughter", he said.


"Was it exciting, Lars? What is Skye like?", asked Violet.

They lay in bed after their latest round of lovemaking. Lars held her close, stroking her hair. "Skye is a beautiful island, lots of mountains. You can see the mountains across the water, they're purple. Jens' house is but a cottage, but it's in a valley. Rugged as hell, the place is nice. It reminds me of Norway", he mused aloud.

"You have been to Norway? Did you go all the way to the top? Is it really cold?", she asked in a rush.

"So many questions, Violet. No, I've never been that far north. I went to Oslo, Bergen, and Trondheim once. Skye looks like that, all mountains and water", he replied.

"I want to see Skye as well, and Norway. It must be beautiful", she murmured.

An idea suddenly came to her. "Lars, get dressed and follow me, I have something to show you", she said, handing him his clothes.
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*G* Well I'm glad that Daniel will be made part of the clan - good for him! And for Annaly too. Kirk's blushing certainly amused me - hah!

Oh and don't worry about coming off as church bashing - ya don't :P Not that I'm much of an example, I'm not christian either!

It's going to be interesting to find out what Lars is about to be shown - I'm looking forward to the next chapter to find out!

(And best wishes to your little brother - hope he gets better soon!)
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That sucks about your brother. I had chicken pox once and it wasn't that bad really. I got free reign over the TV. :dance

I wonder what Lars has up his sleeve for Violet. I love those 2 together.

And no need to worry about church bashing. You've read my story. :blush: And this comes from someone who is Christian, or at least Christian when I want to be. :wink I guess more than anything I'm just spiritual... well sort of.
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