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| Which Eternal Lie; Time travel fic | |
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| Verity | December 29, 2007, 10:58 pm Post #271 |
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Ah ha!!! So Jens is kin to David Ellefson. It makes since. Ellefson sounds like it could be a Nordic name. I wonder if Daniel is kin to Mustaine. Lachlan seems nice. You do a great job with thinking up good names for your characters. Can't wait for the next installment. |
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| Lucifer's Angel | December 30, 2007, 10:14 am Post #272 |
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Ashley, the surprise is in the next chapter Chapter 78 The entire group arrived at Lachlan's house several minutes later. His homestead was nestled at the foot of a mountain, surrounded by fields and a small pasture. Beyond the property were thick pine forests, much more dense than anything they'd seen before. The forest parted before them, revealing the farm. A large, three-story wooden house occupied the center, smoke curling from the chimney. The fields were green with newly planted crops, the fruit trees in the orchard blooming with flowers. Cows, pigs, and goats were penned up behind a fence, the chickens pecking on the seeds on the ground. "You have a good farm here, Master Mackenzie. It reminds me of my father's", said Daniel thoughtfully. "Aye, Master Connolly. Even though I make a living from the sea, I prefer the land. I am master here, and Inga is waiting for us", said Lachlan. Just then, one of the servant girls rushed towards them. A young girl in her teens ran towards them, obviously frightened. "Her der er et tyv. Hva skal jeg gjore?", she asked, her eyes wide with fear. "I shall see to it, Great. Take the guests to the house and I will see to it", said Lachlan, dismounting his horse and tossing the reins to his groom. Greta's eyes widened when she saw them. She made quick curtsy, a flush on her cheeks. "Vaer sa snill og folg ether neg", she said. They all followed Greta into the house. "Mistress, the travelers are here", she said. A middle-aged woman emerged from the parlor. She was still slim and youthful, soft blond waves framing a pretty, pleasant face. Her blue eyes shone kindly at them, as she faced Greta. "You are the guests Lachlan mentioned. Welcome to our home", she said, speaking with a heavy Norwegian accent. "Det var hyggelig a note Den,", replied Lars in Norwegian. "Oh, but I do speak English. Greta shall show you to your rooms", she said, saying something to Greta in Norwegian. |
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| Verity | December 30, 2007, 12:28 pm Post #273 |
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I can't wait for the surprise. I like surprises. I think it's nice how Lars tried to speak to them in Norwegian. Go Lars!! I hope everything goes okay with this mysterious madman dude that's tied up in the barn. I wonder if Lars will have to feed the chickens. Good chapter and I'm anxious to see what this surprise is. |
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| Lucifer's Angel | December 30, 2007, 12:46 pm Post #274 |
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Ashley, here's the surprise, hope you like Chapter 79 Meanwhile, Lachlan followed the groom to the barn. "What is all the fuss about a madman? The only insane asylum is in Oslo", he said, puzzled. "This queer-looking man emerged from the forest. He wore odd clothes and did not speak Norwegian, only English. But I cannot understand his English. He is not English or Scottish, and he is definetly not Norwegian", said the groom, shaking his head. The groom led him to the barn. In the very back, lying on a bale of hay, was a man with his hands and feet hog-tied. He was tall and slender, long red hair falling to his shoulders. He wore blue trousers and a black shirt with a pentagram and a goat's head. The man heard them approach and glared at them, his hazel eyes glowing with anger. "Let me go, fuckers. What the fuck do you want?", he spat. "First, I am the master of this property, and you shall address me as such. Second, you have a very dirty mouth, and I have been around sailors", he admonished. "Well, hello Master Asswipe. Let me go, or I'll kick your ass", he growled. "What are you doing on my property? Are you escaped from the asylum? You are not Norwegian, nor are you Scots or English", said Lachlan. "What the fuck? I'm in Norway? How the fuck did I get over here? I know I didn't take any acid", he grumbled. "Yes, you are in Norway, sir. And where are you from? I seriously hope you are not an outlaw, then I shall have to report you to the authorities", said Lachlan. "All right, Master. The name's Dave Mustaine, now will you let me go?", he retorted. "Well then, Master Mustaine. The laws of hospitality demand I not kill you. Follow me to the house, one wrong move and I shall kill you without regrets. Why I am letting a madman stay, I do not know", he muttered. The groom untied Dave and grabbed his arm, leading him outside. "Hey, that's my picking arm", he muttered. They arrived at the house several minutes later. Inga gave him a puzzled look, while Great hid behind a door. "Relax, baby. You got nice tits", he drawled. "That is the madman in the barn? Take him to Bergen and let the authorities deal with him", admonished Inga. Just then, Lars and Violet came downstairs. Hmm, that guy looks familiar, he thought. Dave felt a pair of eyes on him, as he slowly turned around. "What the fuck? Mustaine, is that you?", asked Lars. "Ulrich, what the fuck are you doing here?", asked Dave, equally shocked. "Oh dear. I suppose this is going to be a long story. Sit down, gentlemen", chuckled Violet. |
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| Shayi | December 30, 2007, 3:22 pm Post #275 |
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Snatching time to play a bit of catch up here - this story is so exciting and action packed. I'm just in the midst of when everyone is fleeing to various places. I have to say it really impresses me how well you keep up all the threads of this and make it follow so well. I'm looking forward to being able to catch up totally - hopefully soon! |
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| Battery | December 30, 2007, 5:12 pm Post #276 |
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It's great they arrived to Bergen safe And WOW!!! oh wow Dave Mustaine himself!!! haha, I loved his meeting with Lars And if he got there, then maybe there's a way to go back to the future somehow... Is it?! I can't wait to see!!! Awesome!
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| lolo | December 30, 2007, 5:55 pm Post #277 |
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hahah omg great how did he end up there ![]() that was amazing I am glad that they are all safe in Bergen mmm I wonder what's up with Mustaine |
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| Verity | December 30, 2007, 10:08 pm Post #278 |
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I loved the surprise. Wow Dave. And I loved the description of his shirt. It sounded like a Goatwhore shirt. :horns2 I hope they don't put him in a kilt because then I would Awesomeness and I soooo can't wait for more. I do wonder how Dave got there. and I also wonder what Daniel will say. |
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| Lucifer's Angel | December 31, 2007, 10:57 am Post #279 |
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Happy New Year's Eve, everyone Chapter 80 The rest of the group heard the commotion and rushed downstairs. "Damn, now you got sent back in time too, Mustaine? Hey Daniel, this is Mustaine", said James. Daniel came into the room, stopping dead in his tracks. "Master Mustaine, you look like my kin. They were correct", he murmured. Dave's eyes widened in surprise when he saw Daniel. The resemblance between the two men was astonishing. They were both tall and slender with the same flaming red hair and greenish eyes. Their clothes did nothing to hide the amazing resemblance between the two. "Dude, you look like my twin and what's with the clothes? Hell, why are you all wearing kilts? You're not Scottish", said Dave, still in shock. "Dave, this is Daniel Connolly. Daniel, this is Dave Mustaine of Megadeth", said Kirk. The two men shook hands, eyeing each other warily. Damn, I don't have relatives in Norway. But Mom's original name was Connolly. Is he a long-lost relative?, he wondered. "Dave, we're in the year 1745. We are on Mackenzie property, ten miles inland from Bergen. And no, you're not on acid", said Cliff. Dave sat back in his chair, a shocked look on his face. "Just, damn. Unbelievable. That crazy hippie chick must've put something in my drink", he muttered. "No Mustaine, you are really back in 1745. We've been here for the last three years", said Kirk. Dave breathed heavily, trying to process all this information. "I hooked up with some hippie chick last night, we went back to her place, I passed out and I wound up here. Now what?", he muttered, shaking his head. The women came downstairs, along with the children. Annaly's eyes widened in shock at the resemblance between Dave and her father. "Are you Papa's kin?", she asked. "I don't know, kid. You Dad and I look like so much alike, I think we might be twins", he chuckled. "Aye, ye and Daniel must be kin. And what is that on your shirt? Is that the Misfits?", asked Morag. "No, it's Venom, baby", he drawled. Cliff put an arm around Morag protectively. "She's my wife, Mustaine", he warned. "What? Burton, you got hitched? At least you chose a hot redhead", he cracked. "Dave, we all got wives and kids. Don't even think about it", said James, giving him a look. He noticed the women were standing next to their men, along with several kids. Even Daniel had a wife and kids. Damn, this all too freaky. What the hell did she put in my drink?, he wondered. "Very interesting story, Master Mustaine. You shall stay here, against my better judgement. But you have best behave yourself, or I shall alert the authorities", said Lachlan. "All right, sir", he sighed. |
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| Verity | December 31, 2007, 12:53 pm Post #280 |
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That's soooo funny that a hippie chick put something in poor Dave's drink. I loved Dave's reaction. I wonder if he too will stay in 1745 or go back to the present. Maybe he can find them the way back. This was certainly an unexpected plot twist, but I like it, not just because it's Dave but because it was unexpected and gave the story a whole new life.
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| Lucifer's Angel | January 1, 2008, 1:43 pm Post #281 |
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Chapter 81 Dave sat down on his cot, his mind reeling from the day's events. I can't believe this. I hook up with some hippie chick, and next think I know, I end up in 1745, in Norway. And Metallica's here, and that Daniel guy looks like my twin. This is so fucked, he thought. He lay back on the cot, sighing. After dinner, Greta had led him to a spare room in the attic. It was tiny, with a cot, a dresser, and a chamber pot. A tiny window in the corner overlooked the flower garden, the sky outside blue-black with bright stars. It certainly feels like I'm in the 18th century. I had to piss in a pot, and there's nothing electric in the house. Oh well, the Metallica guys seem to be well-adjusted. Hell, they got with hot chicks and have kids with them, he thought. Just then, he heard a knock on the door. "Who the hell are you?", he grumbled. "It is me, Annaly. Can I come in, Master Mustaine?", she asked. Dave cursed under his breath, walking to the door. "What do you want, kid?", he muttered. "Papa and Amy and Rory are sleeping, and so is everyone else. Tell me a story", she demanded. "Kid, go to sleep. It's past midnight", he growled. "Tell me a story. Are you from the future, like Papa's friends?", she asked. "What? They told you they were from the future?", he asked, puzzled. "Yes. Are you from the future, Master Mustaine?", she asked, sitting on the cot. "Yeah, kid. I hooked up with some hippie chick, and I wound up here" he chuckled. "Why do you look like Papa?", she asked. "I think your Dad is my ancestor, my Mom's name was Connolly. You don't wanna hear my stories, they're not appropriate for kids", he chuckled. "Master Burton tells Penny stories about Black Sabbath and the Cthulo monster. I like those. Do you know any scary stories?", she asked eagerly. "So Burton tells his kids about Sabbath and Cthulo? Figures. Yeah, I know several. You sure you wanna here 'em? Your Dad might kick my ass", he chuckled. "No, I want to hear scary stories, Master Mustaine", she said. He smiled at her, a gleam in his eyes. He then proceeded to tell her the story of Jason Voorhees and the unfortunate children of Camp Crystal Lake. "Those poor children. And did they kill Master Voorhees?", she asked. "Kind of, he keeps coming back for more. You liked? Most girls hate stuff like that. You're a pretty cool chick, Annaly", he chuckled. "Aye. Good night, Master Mustaine. And thank you for the stories", she said, kissing his cheek and leaving the room. |
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| Verity | January 1, 2008, 2:07 pm Post #282 |
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Dave is soooo funny and sweet with Annaly. I love his sense of humor in this. If Annaly gets too attached to Dave and he goes back to the future what will happen to her??? Thats why I like this story. There's so many ways that you could take take it, and it always keeps me guessing.
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| lolo | January 1, 2008, 3:20 pm Post #283 |
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oooooh that was SOOO sweet, I liked that very much he's been real kind to Analy Nice update
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| Shayi | January 2, 2008, 6:42 am Post #284 |
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Phew up to date now Man I love it - Mustaine and Ellefson - fabulous! I love the fact that they're in Norway - and that Lars had a bash at Norwegian as well - good chap And the way that Mustaine is really related to Danial on his mother's side - it explains a few things about their similarities! The part that's really struck me is the way that you have Mustaine trying to figure things out - kinda bemused about where he is, but making a good attempt to make sense of it! This is so cool - I can't wait for more! |
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| Battery | January 2, 2008, 9:15 am Post #285 |
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Haha, I loved when Dave told Annaly story about Jason and 'unfortunate children of Camp Crystal Lake', awesome :horns2 And Cliff and James being protective towards their wives at Dave even noticing them was funny Awesome!! :horns2
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Dave Mustaine himself!!! haha, I loved his meeting with Lars
And if he got there, then maybe there's a way to go back to the future somehow... Is it?! I can't wait to see!!!

how did he end up there

8:38 PM Jul 10