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| Which Eternal Lie; Time travel fic | |
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| Verity | January 8, 2008, 11:17 am Post #316 |
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Lucky Bridget. I liked the part where she asked Dave what a groupie is, and his response was hilarious.
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| Shayi | January 8, 2008, 11:54 am Post #317 |
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Awesome I'm glad that it was Bridget! And that bit about Dave not hiking since he was the scouts - sent an image of Dave in a scout's uniform straight into my mind which made me laugh like a fool Excellent chapter |
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| Battery | January 9, 2008, 5:13 am Post #318 |
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The description of place where Dave took Bridget was awesome And I agree with Ashley, the part with groupies was funny as hell
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| Lucifer's Angel | January 10, 2008, 6:27 pm Post #319 |
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Heavy Metal Seanchai
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I'm feeling a bit better today, so here's a quick update, hopefully I can write more tomorrow Chapter 92 "Mustaine, are you out of your fucking mind? You really wanna get your ass kicked", grumbled Lars. Dave tossed the grain to the chickens, as they quickly gobbled it up. "No, I am perfectly fine, Ulrich. It was Bridget's idea, she propositioned me. What was I supposed to do? Like I would turn down a hot chick like her", he retorted. "Just be careful. Hopefully the other workers don't understand English. I don't want to get our families thrown out. Remember, we gotta stay here until next May", he reminded him. "Why don't you go fuck your wife?", grumbled Dave. "Not now, I smell like chickens. Maybe later", he replied. Lars' expression grew serious. "You gotta see Violet. She knows some stuff that Bridget can take, so she doesn't get pregnant. If she gets knocked up, you're in really big trouble", he said. Violet looked up from her work, raising an eyebrow when she saw them. "May I help you, Dave?", she asked politely. Dave explained everything. "Do you want me to give Bridget a potion so she does not conceive? Lars, close the door, I do not want anyone to hear this", she said. Lars closed the door. "I assisted Annie with the childbirths. If a woman had too many children in quick succession, we gave her a potion. Birthing too many babies is bad for the mother. It prevents conception if taken daily. The priests rail against such things, but they have never given birth", she chucked sardonically. "What is it? We won't tell anyone", promised Lars. "You have better not. We can all get in trouble. Men think is their duty to sire as many sons as possible", she replied with a hint of bitterness. "It is not poisonous, I can make some and give it to Bridget. Annie would tell the women it was to calm the womb, if they knew, they would have refused to take it, saying it was immoral. Bridget seems like an intelligent young woman. But tell no one, the word could get back to Master Mackenzie", she said. "Thanks, Violet. That's not evil at all. Having a kid every year can't be good for you. You must've seen some shit", said Dave. "Fuck yeah. Medicine here sucks. Just don't get sick, if you do, go to Violet", said Lars. "Good advice, Ulrich", he chuckled. |
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| Verity | January 10, 2008, 9:32 pm Post #320 |
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"Why don't you go fuck your wife?", grumbled Dave. "Not now, I smell like chickens. Maybe later", he replied That part was funny. I really hope that Dave doesn't get himself into trouble. For some reason I have a feeling that Violet's potion isn't going to work. But then again I could be wrong. Glad you are feeling better.
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| Shayi | January 11, 2008, 4:30 am Post #321 |
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"Not now, I smell like chickens. Maybe later", he replied. ^^ Oh man that line was hilarious! And understandable - I can't see any woman being interested in a bloke stinking like chickens! I do hope for Dave's sake that this potion works - and that Bridget is cool with it as well. Like they said, she seems like an intelligent woman, but I guess you never know I'm glad that you're feeling better, I hope you carry on that way
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| Battery | January 11, 2008, 5:23 am Post #322 |
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It's great you're feeling better! And I agree with Ashley and Shayi: "Why don't you go fuck your wife?", grumbled Dave. "Not now, I smell like chickens. Maybe later", he replied." That was damn funny. And I hope everything will go well for Dave and Bridget, but we'll see |
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| lolo | January 11, 2008, 6:56 am Post #323 |
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ooooh that was sweet, but he has got to be careful it's a good thing he asked violet for advise an the potion ![]() I feel sorry for Bridget, why can't she marry the man she loves |
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| Lucifer's Angel | January 11, 2008, 10:21 am Post #324 |
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I'm feeling a wee bit better today, not good enough to go to work, though Here's another update, hopefully I got the words right Chapter 93 James and Cliff were in the woods, tracking game. They were getting ever deeper into the forest, following the tracks of a rabbit. "James, what if we get lost? I don't wanna get stuck here", said Cliff, trying to sound calm. "Relax, dude. We'll find our way outta here. That little fucker went that way", muttered James, as they followed the tracks. The forest parted, revealing a clearing, the trees overhead forming a canopy. In the middle of the clearing, was a tiny cottage, smoke billowing from the chimney. It was made of painted white wood, with a roof made of tightly packed straw. A small vegetable garden was set aside the house, wildflowers bordering the garden. "Who lives here? And whywould anyone want to live in the woods?", asked James, puzzled. "Maybe it's some hermit, or a witch. Either way, I don't wanna bother 'em", said Cliff. Just then, the door opened and a woman stepped out. From the distance, they couldn't tell if she was young or old. She wore a loose white robe, her long dark hair unbound to her knees. She sensed their presence looking about. The woman saw them, her eyes widening. She approaced them without fear, her gray eyes curious. James frowned. She looks just like Violet, but older with gray eyes. Are they related?, he mused. "Hyvaa paivaa, herra. Kuinka voitte?", she asked. "Huh? What hell crazy language is that?", asked James, confused. "She's speaking Finnish, dumbass. Uh, we don't speak Finnish, ma'am. You speak English?", asked Cliff. "Mina ole puhua Englanti", she replied. "I don't think she speaks English. Do you understand English?", asked Cliff. "Mina ymmartaa Englanti. Nimeni on Tarja", she replied. "She can understand English, and her name is Tarja", he translated. "Kylla mies. Kuka sina olette?", she asked. "I'm James Hetfield, and this is Cliff Burton. We work for Lachlan Mackenzie", he said. Tarja nodded, beckoning them to follow her. They followed her into her house, as she set a kettle on the stove. Cliff looked about curiously. The cottage was sparsely furnished, with only a wooden table and three chairs, a shelf of books and jars. On the table was a crystal ball, like the one Kilwich had. So she's a fortune teller, too?, he wondered. Tarja set down a cup of tea in front of them each. "Tanne sina nenna. Juoda sinun tee", she said, sitting down at the table. |
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| Shayi | January 11, 2008, 11:37 am Post #325 |
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Awesome I'm looking forward to see what comes of this - she sounds absolutely fascinating, and I love the idea of the cottage in the woods, it's almost fairytale, and I think that's fantastic. Good thing Cliff knows what she's on about though - and what I'd like to know is whether she is related to Violet... this is getting more and more intriguing! |
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| Verity | January 11, 2008, 12:02 pm Post #326 |
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That was very interesting with this new Finnish lady. I can't wait to see what her story is and what fortunes she can tell. Fortune tellers are most interesting. Cliff being nervous in the forest was funny. I can't wait for more and I'm glad that you feel better. Since you're feeling better you can enjoy the time off work too.
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| Battery | January 12, 2008, 7:00 am Post #327 |
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Uuuh, I wonder if that Tarja (great name!) lady will have some bigger influence on their lives... I can't wait to see! And I love the description of a place where she lives, though I was always a bit scared of ladies living deep in the woods But she sounds really intriguing...Great chapter! Take care! Great you're feeling better
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| Lucifer's Angel | January 12, 2008, 12:21 pm Post #328 |
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Chapter 94 Dave lay awake on his cot, his eyes wide. The only sounds were of the wind outside, the wooden floors creaking. He got up from his cot, throwing on his denim jacket and carefully exiting the house. Dave walked to the hidden meadow, his heart pounding in anticipation. Bridget was waiting for him, a shy smile on her lips. She wore a simple white shift, the green shawl around her shoulders. "You glad to see me, baby? Can't wait for your next lesson?", he drawled, amusement in his voice. She giggled, blue eyes shining with mirth. "Aye, Dave. I took the potion Mistress Ulrich gave me", she said. "Good", he murmured, putting a hand on her waist, leaning down and kissing her lips. Bridget moaned at the contact, her lips parting under his. He deepened the kiss, his tongue exploring her mouth. Dave broke the kiss, a seductive gleam in his eyes. Bridget took a deep breath, her heart racing with anticipation. "Relax baby. We got plenty of time", he whispered, nuzzling her throat. Bridget tilted her head to give him more access. He chuckled against her throat, his hands cupping her breasts. The cloth-covered nipples hardened instantly, as she moaned softly. "You like that, eh? This gets better", he murmured, removing her shift, revealing her nude body. Bridget flushed deep red, as Dave gazed at her nude body. "You're gorgeous, Bridget", he murmured, gently kissing her lips. Dave removed his shirt and took her into his arms, deepening the kiss. Bridget kissed him back, her tongue parting his lips. Dave chuckled in surprise, as he broke the kiss. He just winked at her, nuzzling her throat. His lips moved lower down her body, fastening onto a breast. Bridget moaned softly, her fingers tangled in his long red hair. Dave chuckled against her flesh, licking and sucking on her nipples. "Oh Dave, yes", she gasped, as he moved to her other breast. Bridget's heart beat frantically, the touch of his lips on her flesh making her wild. A strange, throbbing sensation grew between her legs, as he continued to lick at her nipples. Bridget gasped loudly when she felt his fingers on her, entering her body. Dave could only chuckled, moving his finger in and out of her willing body. "Baby, you love this", he murmured, inserting another finger. Bridget gasped, trying to ride the finger. "Patience, baby. Fuck, you're wet", he whispered, moving them faster into her body. "Oh Dave, oh", she moaned, feeling a heat in her belly, squirming under him. "Yeah baby, you're almost there. Come for me", he said, gently pinching her bud. Bridget experienced a blinding flash of light, as she came for the first time. Dave held her as she came down, her breathing heavy and her heart still racing. "You like that, baby? Trust me, that's nothing. Wait till the next lesson", he chuckled, gently kissing her. "Really?", she murmured dreamily. "You bet", he whispered, gently brushing her dark hair away from her face. |
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| Verity | January 12, 2008, 1:45 pm Post #329 |
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Wow. Good chapter. I must say that this part: "Bridget experienced a blinding flash of light, as she came for the first time. Dave held her as she came down, her breathing heavy and her heart still racing." A blinding flash of light? Holy shit. How come that shit never ever happens to me? Dave (sigh) Keep up the awesome kick ass work and can't wait for more!
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| elena | January 12, 2008, 4:44 pm Post #330 |
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This fiction rullz.I really enjoy o read it.
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Here's another update, hopefully I got the words right

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