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Which Eternal Lie; Time travel fic
Topic Started: October 28, 2007, 4:54 pm (15,758 Views)
Lucifer's Angel
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Chapter 95

"So you two went into the woods and found an old chick who looked like Violet?", asked Lars.

"Yeah, she looked like she could be Violet's Mom, but with gray eyes. She could understand English, but spoke to us in Finnish", said James, puzzled.

"Violet, what do you know about your Mom?", asked Lars.

"Papa said that Mama was from a foreign land, that she had trouble with English, and could not speak Gaelic", she replied.

"What was her name?", he asked.

"He said her name was Tarja", she replied.

"The old chick's name was Tarja", said James.

"Really? Anything else you know about her? What did you dad tell you?", he asked.

"He told me that afte my birth, she left Mackenzie lands. She told Papa she was going back to her country, that she could not take me with her. She gave him the pendant, saying to give it to me when I left Mackenzie lands", she replied.

"So you think this Tarja chick is your mother? And is she a witch? Do you think she has something to do with us and Dave being here?", asked Lars.

"Maybe. But why exactly were we brought back here? Jeanie says it's part of God's will, but I doubt it", said James.

"Hey Dave, what did that hippie chick look like?", asked Cliff.

"She had dark hair, almost black, and she was dressed like Pocahantas. She had nice tits", he chuckled.

"Great description, dipshit. So she's not the hippie chick. What did you do to piss her off? You come first?", cracked Lars.

Dave turned a deep shade of red, almost the same color as his hair. "Uh, actually, yes. Hey, my dick was about to explode", he retorted.

"Dave, what a gentleman. Next time, stop thinking with your dick. At least you wound up here, if we hadn't found you, you'd be dead by now", chuckled James.

"Yeah, thanks. I hope I don't owe you big time", he said grudgingly.

"Maybe, maybe not. Just thank your lucky stars we got to you before the peasants did. Don't blame you for being pissed, though. How long were you in the barn?", asked Lars.

"Ulrich, I was hog-tied in the barn for over an hour. That hurts like hell, and I had a hangover and I had to piss real bad. That sucks, dude", he retorted.

"Fuck, that sucks. I mean, people here are generally dumb as fuck. You're no devil, Mustaine, even though you act like one", joked Cliff.

"Yeah, that's what the ladies say", he joked.

Lars became serious. "Dave, be very careful when you're with Bridget. If Lachlan sess you two together, he's going to be angry at all of us. And if he finds out we're involved, we're gonna get thrown out. Think of everyone, Mustaine", he warned.
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That was very interesting. Wow. I love how you keep the plot twists and turning coming with this. I wonder if that Tarja chick is Violet's mother, and if Violet will want to go find her. I also wonder if the hippie chick is some sort of relative.
There is sooooo much good shit happening on in this story and I can't wait for more. :dance
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Great love scene there :tu:
I wonder if Tarja is really Violet's mother.... And I hope Dave and Bridget won't have any troubles from Lachlan and won't be parted.... :(
I'm curious what will happen next :horns2
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Dave turned a deep shade of red, almost the same color as his hair. "Uh, actually, yes. Hey, my dick was about to explode", he retorted.

Hehehe oh that line made me laugh so much - most excellent!

So Tarja is Violet's mother hmm? That explains a few things - and I'm looking forward to seeing whether Violet decides to visit her or what have you...

This story develops in so many interesting ways, I can't wait for what goes on next!
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Chapter 96

Dave waited in the meadow for Bridget, deep in thought. Lars is right, the little Danish fucker. We gotta be really careful, it's not just me who'll get hurt, he mused.

He heard soft footsteps approaching and slowly turned around. Dave sighed with relief when he saw Bridget, a smile, forming on his lips.

"Sorry I am late, Dave. I heard too many noises inside the house", she said apologetically.

"Hey, don't sweat it, baby. You're just trying to be careful", he whispered, taking her into his arms.

Bridget felt a chill go down her spine. "Relax, baby", he murmured, gently kissing her lips.

The kiss was gentle at first, but he gradually deepened it, his tongue parting her lips. Bridget moaned softly, wrapping her arms around his neck. He groaned in approval, deepening the kiss.

Dave broke the kiss, winking at her. "That is just a warmup, baby. Trust me, it gets better", he chuckled.

"If it is anything like the last lesson, I shall look forward to it", she giggled.

"Naughty girl, what will your father say?", he teased, a gleam in his eyes.

"He would say I was being a naughty girl indeed", she replied saucily.

"And you know what happens to naughty girls?", he asked.

"No, what?", she asked innocently.

"Don't worry, you're gonna love this punishment", he said, capturing her lips in a brutal kiss.

Bridget was caught off-guard, as his lips devoured hers. His tongue parted her lips, their moans filling the air.

Dave's lips left hers, gently nibbling down her throat. They moved lower, as he untied the ribbons of her shift, revealing the tops of her breasts.

"You're gorgeous, baby", he murmured, planting tiny kisses on her breasts. His lips fastened onto a nipple, as she moaned softly in pleasure.

Dave chuckled against her flesh, his lips still on her breast. Bridget grasped his hair, keeping his face to her breasts. "You love this, baby. You got great tits", he murmured, giving her nipple one final lick.

Bridget took off her shift, as Dave undressed. Her eyes widened when she saw him, a dark flush on her cheeks. "You've never seen a guy naked before, baby? I know I'm not that ugly", he joked.

"Aye, not even Sean. Have you seen many women naked before, Dave?", she asked innocently.

He almost choked on the question, his hazel eyes gleaming with mischief. "Of course, Bridget. But not as beautiful as you", he said gallantly.

Dave took her into his arms, kissing her gently, before laying her down on the grass. He climbed on top of her, before moving down her body.

Bridget moaned softly as he sucked on her nipple, and then the other. He parted her legs, slipping a finger into her depths.

"Oh Dave", she murmured, squirming under him.

"Baby, you ain't seen nothing yet", he whispered, his lips leaving her breast, kissing down her body.

Bridget's eyes widened in shock when she felt his lips on her. He chuckled against her flesh, his lips and tongue exploring her intimately.

She squirmed under him, the coil of heat in her belly builiding within. Dave continued his exploration, his lips and tongue driving her mad with desire.

His tongue found her bud, and licked it several times, as she gripped his hair, her moans becoming louder. "Oh Dave, oh yes, Ohh!", she gasped, coming against his lips.

Dave emerged from between her legs, a triumphant grin on his face. "That was wonderful", she gasped.

"Just you wait, Bridget", he murmured huskily, kissing her again.

While they kissed, he parted her legs, slowly entering her body. "Relax, baby. I'll try not to hurt you", he whispered, thrusting into her body.

Bridget winced at the pain, tears stinging her eyes. Dave lay still, gently kissing her lips. She kissed him back tentatively, as he began to move within her body.

The moonlight shone on their bodies, as they moved together on the grass. Dave continued to thrust into her body, as she clutched his shoulders, gasping his name.

"Yeah, baby", he grunted, moving faster and deeper into her body. Bridget felt close to her peak, as he moved within her.

"Oh Dave, oh yes", she panted.

"Come for me, Bridget", he groaned, close to his own peak.

Bridget felt her vision go black, as everything shattered. "Oh Dave, yes!", she yelled. Dave groaned her name, thrusting one last time into her body.

"That was wonderful, Dave, better than last time", she giggled.

"Bad girl, yeah it was better. I got some too", he chuckled, kissing her cheek.

They lay in each other's arms for a few minutes, savoring the afterglow. "Baby, we gotta get back to the house", he said regretfully.

"I know", she sighed.

"Let's get back before anyone notices we're gone", he said.
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Damn. What a way to wake up in the morning. A sex scene with Dave. :drool :drool I just might have to go shower again. :lol: :lol:
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*G* Yummy scene there :) What a perk up for my afternoon! Although I couldn't help chuckling when she asked him if he'd seen many chicks naked! heh!

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Wow, what a chapter! Awesome :blush:
"If it is anything like the last lesson, I shall look forward to it", she giggled." hehe, can't blame her :lol:
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Chapter 97

"Are you sure this is a good idea, Cliff? What if this Tarja chick zaps us", asked Kirk, a hint of fear in his voice.

"Don't be scared, Hamster. She's not that big. If she hurts you, I'll kick her ass", he growled.

"Who's going to take care of Mary and Keith?", fretted Kirk.

"Kirk, nothing is going to happen to you. Now come on, I don't want to go into the forest if it gets too dark", said Cliff.

They walked into the woods. It was just past noon, the sun shining through the canopy of trees. The sun's light penetrated the dense pine forest, a golden light illuminating their way. It was quiet and still this morning, only the bird's singing audible.

This is almost like a fairy-tale forest. I feel like we're Hansel and Gretel, and the old witch lives in a gingerbread house, thought Kirk.

"Dude, don't get scared. Tarja seemed pretty cool, and she might have some answers", said Cliff, putting a hand on his shoulder.

They arrived at Tarja's cottage nearly an hour later. She was outside tending to the garden, when she sensed them coming. Her eyes widened in surprise, a smile forming on her lips.

"Tervetuloa, Herra Burton. Kuka sinun ystava?", she asked.

"Uh, hi Tarja. This is Kirk Hammett. You look like our friend Lars' wife. We want to ask you some questions", said Cliff.

Tarja said nothing, but led them inside her cottage. Kirk looked around curiously. It was neat and tidy, reminding him of his own mother's house. On top of a table stood a crystal ball on a brass stand, almost like the one Kilwich had in his chamber.

She poured them each a cup of tea, as they sat down at the table. Tarja looked into her cup, a thoughtful expression on her face.

She got up, gently tapping the ball. Tarja murmured something in an ancient language, as the ball clouded over, then gradually became clearer.

Cliff felt the hairs on the back of his neck stand on end. Wow, she's psychic too? What's going on?, he wondered.

The mists parted, revealing a grotesque sight...

A tour bus was overturned in a ditch. The band was standing outside in their underwear, screaming and crying. A pair of legs stuck out from under the bus, like the Wicked Witch pinned under the house.

"You fuckers, get the bus off Cliff. Cliff, you're gonna be fine", babbled James.

Just then, the winch lifting the bus snapped, the bus crashing down on the body with a sickening crunch. "Cliff, no! You bastards, you killed him", sobbed Kirk.


Cliff and Kirk were shaking in fear. What the hell was that? Cliff's dead, the bus landed on him? That's fucked, thought Kirk, tears in his eyes.

Cliff took a deep breath, trying to steady himself. Fuck, I was supposed to be dead? And that is one shitty way to die, he mused, his heart pounding in fear.

The mists parted againe, to reveal another scene...

Kirk sat on the edge of a bed in a hotel room. His hair was longer, and he was clad in shorts and a tank top. In front of him was a mirror with several lines of cocaine.

Kirk rolled up a dollar bill, and began to hastily snort the lines. Tears fell from his eyes, choked sobs escaping his throat.

"Cliff, Cliff, why? Fuck that driver, it could've been me", he muttered, snorting the last line of cocaine. He took out a baggie and chopped up several more lines, and snorted them all, sobbing in anguish.


Kirk felt physically ill after watching the scene. That's me? I'm so fucked up, I'm a fucking cokehead. I'm never doing that shit, I don't want to end up like that, he vowed.

Tarja faced them, her eyes steely. "Se nika onko nyohemmin. Juoda sinun toinen", she murmured.
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That was really sad, but still awesome chapter...
But did Tarja show them what could happen if they would still live in the future? Too bad they couldn't avoid it in real life :( :(
R.I.P. Cliff :(
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That was another nicely done chapter. It's a good thing that Kirk and Cliff decided to hang out in the past. But didn't Dave say that it's 1988? Perhaps they missed it all, and could still go back to the present. I was thinking that you might do something like this.

This is such a good read, and there's many ways and directions that you could write this. :horns: Rock on! And I can't wait for more. :horns:
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Beautifully done chapter - poignant and nicely written. There are so many different ways that this one could go and I can't wait to see which one you do choose!

This is almost like a fairy-tale forest. I feel like we're Hansel and Gretel, and the old witch lives in a gingerbread house, thought Kirk.
^^ I thought this line was absolutely excellent - so very in character then, and it also planted the image of the forest very firmly in my mind.

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Chapter 98

Dave looked at his reflection, the mirror. I'm gonna look my best for the party tonight. I'm not gonna let Simon intimidate me, he vowed, adjusting his tie.

"Hurry up, Mustaine. You take more time than a chick to get ready", retorted James.

Dave flipped him off. "I wanna look good for Bridger. That Simon dude might be rich, but he's an asshole", he shot back.

"Dave, stop that. You had your little fling, but now it's time to be serious. Her dad wants her to marry Simon, he's an heir to a shipping fortune, and she's an heiress as well", said Lars.

"Shut the fuck up, Ulrich. What if Violet's dad wouldn't let you date her? How would you feel?", he asked, anguish in his voice.

Kirk observed the scene, a bland expression on his face. However, he could feel the pain in Dave's voice. I don't think this is some fling. I think he's actually in love. Unbelievable, Dave Mustaine is actually in love. When the laird wouldn't let me court Mary, I felt the same way, he thought.

"Dave, I need to speak with you", he said.

Dave looked surprised, his hazel eyes wide. "What is it, Hamster?", he asked curiously.

Kirk said nothing, but led him to an empty room and closed the door. "Dave, Lars is being a jerk about this. Be honest, do you love Bridget?", he asked calmly.

Dave let out the breath he'd been holding. "Hammett, how did you know? Yeah, I love Bridget, I'm in love with her. Fuck, usually it's just lust on my part, and it was like that in the beginning. But I think I love her now. At first, I just wanted to fuck her, but she's not just a hot chick. She's beautiful, and smart, and sweet. She doesn't like Simon at all, he's an asshole. Their marriage is a business thing, it's gonna make her very unhappy, Kirk", he sobbed.

Kirk held him, as he cried onto his shoulder. "Dave, I can totally understand. If what you said is true, their marriage is going to be a disaster. But we gotta be careful. Simon doesn't sound like he's gonna give up easily, like Iver. I think Simon may have real feelngs for her too. We gotta be careful", said Kirk.

Dave smiled at him gratefully. "Thanks, Kirk. You didn't have to do that. I mean, you did take my job, and I've been nothing but a prick to you. I hope I don't sound like a pussy", he muttered.

"Dave, don't say that. I went through the same thing with Mary. I don't wanna sound corny, but faint heart never won fair lady", he chuckled.

"Great advice, Hammett. Let's get ready for the party, before the others think we've turned gay", he joked.
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Faint heart never won fair lady - awesome point there Kirk. Nicely put :) Very Robin Hood (my favourite childhood film!)

Good to see that Mustaine really does have feelings that don't just come from his dick! This is hotting up once again - I'm looking forward to seeing what happens when he tried to court Bridget under Simon's nose!
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Kirk rocks. :) I really do hope that Dave can snatch Bridget away before she has to marry that weasely Simon dude. I guess we shouldn't be too mean to Simon. He doesn't seem that bad. Can't he go flounce off with another lady from the clan? :lol: :)

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