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Which Eternal Lie; Time travel fic
Topic Started: October 28, 2007, 4:54 pm (15,756 Views)
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"If we ever do get back, I'm never touching that stuff again, he vowed." :tu: looks like shock therapy worked...
I feel really sorry for Dave, it's so sweet he's so honest with Bridget and she cares about him so much :D I hope those two will remain together... But we'll see...
Awesome chapter :heart:
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Oh my god, I really LOVE your fiction!

Have been lurking around here for about two months and I'm absolutely addicted to your fic.
It's so well written, I'm really impressed :)

I could never write that good *smiles*

I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter :dance

Keep it up! :D
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Chapter 104

Bridget moaned softly, wrapping her arms around his neck. His lips pressed harder against hers, his tongue parting her lips.

Dave broke the kiss, chuckling at the dazed expression on her face. "You like that, Bridget? Just you wait", he murmured, helping her to her feet.

Wordlessly, he removed the crown of roses in her hair, carefully setting it on the ground. The brown waves cascaded over her shoulders, framing her lovely face.

"Baby, you look like a bride on her wedding night, you're anticipating a good fuck", he chuckled, kissing her again. His tongue parted her lips, as she moaned softly, his fingers in her dark hair.

His lips left hers, nuzzling her throat, as she shivered in anticipation. Dave just chuckled, his hands moving to the laces of her dress. He untied the laces in the front, as the dress pooled at her feet.

"Damn, you're wearing a corset too? Girls sure wore a lot of clothes back then", he chuckled, taking in the sight before him.

The corset molded her figure perfectly, accentuating her slim, tiny waist and full breasts. The cream-colored silk was a shade darker than her skin, the tops of her breasts poking out from the top.

"On second thought, I like it. It's almost as good as seeing you naked", he murmured, a gleam in his eyes.

Bridget reached for the laces, but he stopped her. "I'll do it", he whispered, reaching behind her and slowly untying the laces.

She took a deep breath, as he finished untying the laces. Bridget grinned saucily at him, unbuttoning his shirt and running her hands over his chest, as she shrugged out of the corset.

"Baby, keep going", he murmured, as she removed his shirt. Dave kissed her again, as she continued to run her hands over his chest.

"Bridget, you are a temptress, I just wanna fuck you, but I gotta have self-control", he chuckled sardonically.

Bridget said nothing, snuggling against his chest. Dave growled at the contact, kissing her almost roughly, his tongue plunging into her mouth.

They continued to kiss, as he removed his kilt, tossing it aside. His lips left hers, fastening onto a breast, her fingers tangled in his hair.

"Oh yes, Dave", she moaned.

He chuckled against her flesh, moving to her other breast. Bridget clutched his hair, feeling the throbbing sensation between her legs.

"I know you're wet for me, baby. But we got time", he whispered, his hand on her thigh.

Bridget parted her legs, moaning when she felt his fingers on her. His mouth was still on her breasts, as he began to stroke her. She arched against him, trying to get him into her body.

"Eager aren't you, Bridget? Be patient, baby", he chuckled, inserting another finger into her body.

Dave gave her nipple one final lick, tracing kisses down her abdomen. Bridget tensed in anticipation, when she felt his hair on her thighs.

She moaned loudly whens he felt his breath on her, his tongue inside her. "Oh Dave", she gasped, her fingers tangled in his long red hair.
He chuckled against her, his tongue exploring her intimatetly.

Bridget felt a tightening in her belly, her heart racing in anticipation. "Oh Dave, oh yes, ohh!", she gasped, as she came against his lips.

Dave emerged from between her legs, a sly grin on his face. "Now, it'll get better", he said, kissing her lips, parting her thighs.

Bridget moaned against his lips, as he entered her. He looked into her eyes, as he began to thrust into her body.

They moved together on the grass, the moonlight shining on their bodies. Dave continued to thrust into her writhing body. Bridget moaned in pleasure, squirming under him. She gripped his hair, pulling her face to his, capturing his lips in a kiss.

"Dave, oh yes", she gasped softly.

"Yeah, come for me, Bridget", he moaned, close to his own peak.

"Oh Dave, oh yes!", she moaned, coming hard.

He thrust one last time into her body, releasing into her warmth. They lay together for several moments, sweaty and exhausted.

"Dave, je t' amie", she whispered.

"Je t' amie", he replied, gently kissing her lips.
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Dave and Bridget should sneak away together. The thought of Dave undoing a corset- Good Lord!!! :drool :drool That's almost too much for me to handle.

This part was funny:

"On second thought, I like it. It's almost as good as seeing you naked", he murmured, a gleam in his eyes.

Boys. :rolleyes:
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Chapter 105

"You look so lovely, mistress. Simon will be pleased to see you", said Greta, combing Bridget's hair.

Bridget smiled wanly at her maid, gazing at her reflection in the mirror. Today was her wedding day, and she was absolutely miserable.

She wore a white lacy gown with pearls sewn onto the skirt and pale silver ribbons. A white silk sash was tied about her waist, white silk slippers on her feet. Her dark brown hair had been brushed until it gleamed, the rich chocolate color a contrast to the white lace. It fell in loose waves to her waist, making her look innocent and virginal.

I wish it was Dave I wed toayd, I do not like Simon one bit. But I must, I do not want to shame Mama and Papa, she thought, tears stinging her eyes.

"You are a beautiful bride, Bridget", said Inga, hugging her daughter.

"Thank you, Mama", she whispered.

"Ah, you are eager to marry Simon, ja? I understand, he is such a handsome, charming young man", she sighed.

Mama, I do not like Simon. I have got a bad feeling about him. I want Dave, she thought miserably.

Greta placed the veil over face, crowned with white lillies perched on her head. She looked the picture of the perfect bride, but inside, she was miserable. Oh Dave, she thought, feeling a knot of anxiety in her belly.


Dave stared into his glass of vodka, eyeing the clear liquid. "Lachlan's gonna be pissed if you're wasted", chided Lars.

Dave faced him, his hazel eyes anguished. "Listen, Ulrich. The woman I love is getting married to some asshole with money. She doesn't like Simon at all, she's only going through this for her parents' sake. If we told them, her dad's gonna disown her, and he'll probably kill me. Okay?", he snarled, tears forming in his eyes.

Kirk put an arm around him. "Dave, that's horrible. But you gotta pull yourself together. There's nothing we can do, I'm really sorry", he murmured.

"Dave, ye cannot take Bridget away from her intended. I know you love each other deeply, but 'tis fate. Her father is very wealthy, marriages in their station are for status, not love. When Maura died, I was so angry, but I had to get over it, for Annaly's sake. If you need to talk, we shall do so later, but Lars is right, you cannot show up at the wedding drunk", said Daniel gently.


An hour later, the group, their families, the Mackenzie and Bergstrom families and the rest of the villagers were all gathered in the church. The Reverand, Leif's brother Karl, scanned their papers, making sure they were in order.

Dave took his seat next to Daniel and his family. Annaly smiled reassuringly at him, squeezing his hand. He smiled back at her, trying to control his racing nerves.

Reverand Holmgren looked up, his hazel eyes gazing at the congregation. The doors to the church opened, as Simon took his place in front of the altar.

He was dressed in a tailored black suit, a black silk jacket over his white shirt. His blond waves were cropped short, framing his pretty, yet oddly cold face. His green eyes were triumphant, his lips turned up in a sneer.

Fuck you, asshole. You'd better not hurt her, thought Dave, breathing heavily.

Bridget was escorted down the aisle by her father. Dave's breath caught in his throat. She's so beautiful, he thought, a pang in his heart.

She wore a white lacy dress embroidered with pearls and silver lace, white satin slippers on her feet. Her dark hair fell in gleaming waves to her waist, a crown of white lillies perched on the dark mass. A white lace veil covered her face, as she walked towards Simon, her eyes staring straight ahead.

Reverand Holmgren smiled at the couple, before starting the ceremony. "Dearly beloved, we are gathered here today to join in Holy Matrimony Bridget Mackenzie and Simon Bergstrom. If anyone has an objection to this wedding, please speak up, or forever hold your peace", he said.

Dave had the sudden urge to shout, to stop them, but he didn't. He looked at the group and their families, and decided against it, for their sakes. He blinked back tears, as Annaly held onto his hand.

"Simon Bergstrom, do you take Bridget Mackenzie to be your lawfully wedded wife, in sickness and in health, for richer or for poorer, till death do you part?", he asked.

"I do", he replied confidently.

"Do you, Bridget Mackenzie, take Simon Bergstrom to be your lawfully wedded husband, in sickness and in health, for richer or for poorer, till death do you part?", he repeated.

Bridget's heart pounded in fear. She took a deep breath, trying to calm herself.

"I do", she whispered.

"By the powers vested in me, I now pronounce you man and wife. You may now kiss the bride", said Reverend Holmgren.

Simon beamed proudly, lifting the veil from her face. He kissed her lips possesively, a wolfish grin in his eyes.

"You're mine, Bridget", he murmured triumphantly.
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Oh noooo :( I BET that Simon's gonna turn into a complete asshole :( Poor Bridget, poor Dave :(
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NOOOOO!!! Damn :angry it's done. I can't believe it. I thought that Kirk and Dave were going to bust in there at the last second and crash the wedding. The Wedding Crashers. :wink :wink

I love the thought of Dave getting help from Daniel. That part was most nicely done. :)
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"You're mine, Bridget", he murmured triumphantly." oooh, that was so awful, poor Bridget, poor Dave :( :( That Simon sounds very cocky... :ugh:
Awesome chapters, I wonder what will happen now :heart: :horns2
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Since it's dead in the office, here's another update :)

Chapter 106

Dave sat down on the bed, a bottle of whiskey in his lap. Everyone else ws in the yard for the rectption. He'd taken a bottle from the cellar, and was slowly draining it.

"I'm a fucking coward. I should've said something in church. That aashole's going to make her miserable, all because her dad wants a rich -in-law", he grumbled.

Dave took a large swallow from the bottle, the alcohol burning his throat. He shuddered as it reached his stomach, wincing at the sensation.

There was a commotion as a group of people trooped up the stairs. Drunken men's voices boomed from the hallway, making bawdy jokes in Norwegian.

Dave felt the knot in his stomach grow tighter, as he took another swig from the bottle. Shit', he's gonna consummate the marriage. The idea of Simon having sex with his Bridget made him ill to the point of nausea.

That bastard, he's gonna fuck her until she's pregnant. She's a woman, not a sow, he thought a tear falling down his cheek.


"Miss Bridget, I must prepare you for the wedding night", said Violet.

"Sure, I shall be waiting for my bride", said Simon, a possesive gleam in his eyes.

Violet forced a smile, leading the girl to her chambers. She quickly closed the door, locking it.

"Miss Bridget, I have something for your wedding night. I do not like Simon either, there is something unwholesome about him. If we were to find out about you and Dave, he would be very angry, I have encountered his type before", said Violet.

She took a deep breath, reaching into her pocket. Violet took out a bloody sponge, a tiny red ball.

"I have prepared brides for their wedding nights. In some cases, the husband and the father in law demand virgin brides. If the girl is not a virgin, I give her this. You insert it into your woman's passage and act coyly. When he penetrates you, scream and the blood will show as though you were a virgin. How very hypocritical", she said bitterly.

"Violet, I feel ill at the idea. I do not want Simon, I want Dave. But I shall do my duty, my family will be shamed otherwise", said Bridget, sounding resigned.

"Bridget, I do not want you unhappy. But I must think of my family as well. Dave loves you deeply, never doubt it. He did not speak up in church, he did not want to see us get in trouble. He is not a coward, he is a good man", she murmured.

Bridget gave Violet a hug. "I shall always have the memories, they will sustain me. Dia Dhuit, Mistress Ulrich", she whispered.


Dave continued to drink whiskey, wincing at the sounds coming from the room. Appareanty the wedding night had commenced, and he could hear the creak of the bed several doors down.

He heard Simon grunting like a farm animal, but nothing from Bridget. I bet she's lying there like a blow up doll, just wanting to get this over with. Don't blam her, she hates his guts.

He took another large gulp, the knot in his stomach turning into a dull ache. Bridget I'm sorry. But I couldn't let the others pay for us. I'm sorry, je t' amie, Bridget, he vowed, tears filling his eyes.

He heard Simon grunt, and Bridget cry softly, like a wounded dove. Violet's sponge must've worked, he thought sardonically.

Tomorrow, they leave for Finland. I'll probably never see her again, why'd I have to get involved?, he wondered.

Simon groaned one last time, but he heard nothing from Bridget. I bet she hated every minute of it. Asshole, if I could, I'd kill the son of a bitch with my bare hands, he vowed.

Daniel opened the door, frowning at the almost empty bottle in his lap. "Dave, you are only tormenting yourself this way. And too much drink is bad for you", he chided gently.

"Daniel, I could hear them. You know how that feels, hearing the woman I love being fucked by that asshole? It fucking hurts", he growled, tears streaming down his cheeks.

Daniel took the bottle for him. "Dave, drinking solves nothing. After Maura died, I just wanted to drown my sorrows, but I have Annaly to take care of. You must pull yourself together, they leave on the morrow for Turku, you may never her again. You love her, and gave her memories she shall always cherish. I thought I would never love again, but then I met Amy. Pull yourself together", he said, putting a hand on his shoulder.
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My god..poor Dave..I hope it'll get alright, everything :(
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Wow. That was a very moving and dramatic chapter. Poor Dave. I really feel for the guy, but I hope that he doesn't get in trouble with his drinking. EEK!
I hope he can stop them before poor, poor, Bridget goes to Finland.


Supurb stuff!! :dance
Now I can go teach and scream at my students and be happy because I had an update to read. :dance
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Indeed dramatic chapter... Dave and Bridget are surely tragic couple :(
Good thing Dave has Daniel to comfort him a bit...
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Good lord no! I can't believe that this wedding looks like it's going ahead. Poor Dave, it must be terrible for him - although it's good that he's got Daniel there at the moment, keeping him somewhat in line.

I really, really hope that they can find a way around this.
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Chapter 107
Several Weeks Later

Dave sat in a chair in the garden, watching the children with Daniel. It was a warm early August day, the sun shining brilliantly against the azure sky.

He had taken Daniel's advice, trying to pull himself together. He hadn't had a drink in weeks, since that night, instead doing odd jobs around the estate.

Most of his duties involved helping Daniel with the children. To his surprise, he found he liked being around the kids, especially Annaly and Penny. They were always asking for scary stories, and he obliged.

Dave had grown closer to Daniel and Amy over the last weeks. Daniel was almost like a father figure, even though they were the same age. I think he's more mature than me, he's been through a lot of shit, he makes me look like a pussy, he thought.

"Dave, do you know any more scary stories?", asked Annaly, an eager grin on her face.

Dave chuckled, a mischievious gleam in his eyes. "Sure do, ladies. You want to hear the one about Freddy Krueger? He comes in your dreams, so you better be good girls", he said in a sinister voice.

He then proceeded to tell them all about Nightmare on Elm Street. Annaly's and Penny's eyes widened in terror, their faces shocked, two pairs of green eyes filled with fright.

"Master Krueger is very evil. I do not want these nightmares, I am going to drink a lot of tea, so I do not sleep", vowed Annaly.

"Me too. I no like Master Krueger", shuddered Penny.

"Do not worry, children. Master Krueger is not real. My mother used to tell me scary stories as well, I was scared, until I realized they were not real. Dave is just funning you", chuckled Daniel.

"Dave, you know any Black Sabbath stories?", asked Penny.

"I wasn't really a Sabbath fan as a kid, I liked Kiss better. They were four dudes who wore makeup, breathing fire and spitting blood. They scared the crap out of a lot of people, Jesus freaks, all those people. I saw them as a kid, that was the coolest shit ever", he chuckled.

"That is not as scary as the Black Sabbath monster", commented Annaly.

"So what is the Black Sabbath monster?", he joked.

Annaly giggled, her green eyes dancing with amusement. She then told him about the four blokes from Birmingham, England who started heavy metal.

"Not bad. Burton's not a bad storyteller", he mused aloud.

"Yes, and he do the Cthulo story. You wanna hear?", asked Penny.

"Maybe some other time, Penny", he murmured sadly, stroking her hair.
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Poor Dave. :( :( Sniff sniff.

I loved the part with Annaly and Penny. I always wanted scary stories when I was little too. I liked it when Penny kept calling Freddy "Master
Kreuger." That was pretty sweet!!

But poor Dave though. He seems lonely. I need to be transported back. Then I could have him for myself. :lol: Just kidding. I hope that he can meet up with Bridget again and maybe work something out. Maybe Simon will choke on a chicken leg or something.


Keep up the Fantastic work!!!!
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