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Which Eternal Lie; Time travel fic
Topic Started: October 28, 2007, 4:54 pm (15,749 Views)
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Great descriptions, as usual :biggrin And thanks for pictures!
Uncle Jacob sounds very nice, good thing they meet good people on their way to Turku :)
And I liked the maid's name, Lena, my friend calls me that since I'm Magdalena :P yay :nanner: :lol:
Great chapter, as always I can't wait for more of this :heart:
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Chapter 135

After they'd finished tea, Lena led them upstairs to the third floor. "This is where the guestrooms are. Herr and Fru Rabinowitz always seem to have plenty of guests. If you need anything, just let us know", she said, making a curtsy and going downstairs.

"The same as last time. And Saul, you have your own room here?", asked Sean.

"Ja, I have my own room because I visit frequently. I hope the rooms are to your liking", he said, walking towards his room.

"Looks like we're sharing a room again, Junior. I hope you don't snore like Ulrich", he joked, as Lars flipped him off.

Dave opened the door, nodding in approval. It was a large, spacious room, illuminated by the large window which overlooked the lake. It was furnished with twin bed separated by a nighstand. The walls were a creamy white, the same color as the soft carpet. The furniture was all dark pine, the faint aroma hanging in the air. On the walls were several framed prints showing scenes of the lake, the delicate watercolors adding a touch of elegance.

"Ja, this is very nice, Dave", said Leif, sitting down on the bed.

"Yeah, Junior. This is almost as good as a hotel", he chuckled, sitting down on his own bed. "Man, I think this is a real feather bed too. I could get used to this", he said, lying down on the bed.

"You know, Dave? This is the farthest I have ever traveled. You and Lars and Saul have seen so much, and I have only been to Bergen twice. I want to travel like you", he sighed.

"Like you said back in Copenhagen, maybe you ought to join the army or go to sea. You can't keep 'em on the farm once they've seen Paree", he joked.

"What is that?", asked Leif, puzzled.

"Paris, Junior. Once you gone places, you don't wanna go back to the farm", he explained.

"Have you seen Paris, Dave? Are the French girls pretty and wild? My brother says the French are decadent", he said.

"Yeah, Paris is cool. French chicks are all right, a bit snobby though. Adn they're not that wild. Then again, since your brother is a Reverand, I doubt he gets much action", he joked.

"You mean, like with women? Mama says he needs to marry, he is almost thirty and that is old. He likes being by himself, and is not really interested in marrying", Leif said thoughtfully.

"Cool, so he's a confirmed bachelor? Saul's family's cool, he reminds me a lot of Scott Ian, a friend of ours. Heck, they even look alike", he chuckled.

"Really? I like the family, they are kind. I thought his family would live in a tent and ride camels, though", he said, puzzled.

"Junior, people don't live like that in Sweden. In the Middle East, yeah. Where'd you get that idea?", he asked.

"My brother has a bible with pictures. It shows Moses in a tent, and Aaron on a camel. Herr Rabinowitz looks like Moses in the picture", he said thoughtfully.

"Interesting. Let's go downstairs to see if dinner's ready", said Dave.
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A snoring Lars... Awww, what a vision :lol: I can understand Leif wanting to travel, I love to travel, I'd surely travel a lot more if I could. :)
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That's so fucking awesome that Saul looks like Scott Ian. Actually, it made my day. :)

Their room right on the lake sounded simply heavenly. I'd love to stay there. :dance

Dave was soooo funny talking about the girls in Paris. It gave me a good morning giggle.

Must have MORE!!!! :horns: Fantastic.
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Wow, I finally caught up with this. It was so good I skipped watching TV to finish reading!

You are such a good writer. You did the period details so well, and you managed to blend modern day characters and their personalities with the period it took place in.

Soooo good! :tu: :tu: :tu: :tu: :tu:
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Thanks for catching up, Maisy :)

Chapter 136

"I cannot wait to see Miriam, she is coming to visit", said Saul, h is dark eyes dancing with excitement.

They had just finished dinner, as the servants cleared the table. "Is that your fiance?", asked Lars.

"Ja, someone told her I was in Stockholm, and she is coming to visit", he said, a dreamy smile on his lips.

"Cool, is she coming by herself or does she have someone with her?", asked Lars curiously.

"She is always accompanied by her maid, Jenny. Miriam is a proper young lady, and she cannot leave the house by herself", he said.

"Remember, you cannot be too forward, Saul. That maid of hers watches over her like a dragon, and you cannot marry her if she is compromised", warned Jacob.

"I know, uncle. I only have one more year to go", he sighed.

"How long have you been courting her?", asked Leif.

"We have been courting for three years. By next year, I shall have enough coin to offer her father a substantial dowry", he replied.

"My sisters were only courted for a month before they married. That is a very long time", said Leif, a puzzled expression on his face.

"Herr Holmgren, Miriam is the daughter of a wealthy merchant and Saul needs to offer her father a lot of coin. Do not take this badly, but perhaps your family is not wealthy, and your sisters' husbands did not have to offer your father much coin", replied Jacob.

"Ja, that makes sense. My sisters' husbands all have some land or practice a trade. I do not have enough coin to court a woman", he said sadly.

"Leif, after we return home, I will off you employment so you will be able to obtain coin", said Sean, putting a hand on his shoulder.

"Thank you, Herr Mackenzie", he murmured gratefully.

Saul peeked out the window, his eyes wide in delight. "They are here. Am I presentable?", he asked worriedly.

"You look fine, Herra Rosenberg. But do comb your hair", replied Tarja.

He smiled gratefully, taking a comb out of his pocket and running it through his hair.

Saul took a deep breath, opening the door. A young woman squealed with delight, embracing him tightly, as her companion scowled.

"You are too forward, Miss Miriam", she chided.

Miriam giggled, a becoming flush on her cheeks. She was petite and lovely, with dark honey-blond curls framing a sweet, pretty face. Her green eyes glowed with happiness, brilliant gold highlights standing out amongst the green. She was dressed simply in a pale blue dress, blue satin slippers on her feet.

"Jenny, I have not seen Saul in so long. And Saul, who are your companions?", she asked.

"Miriam, these are my traveling companions Sean Mackenzie, Lars Ulrich, Leif Holmgren, Dave Mustaine and Tarja Vesala. And this is my bethrothed, Miriam Bernstein", he said, introducing everyone.

"Very glad to make your acquaintance, Froken Bernstein", said Sean graciously.

"Let us go to the parlor, the cook has set out tea and pastries", said Saul.
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Hey! Dave Mustaine is going to have tea again!!! Right on!!! What a wonderful way for me to start a Monday morning with that in mind. :)

Miriam sounds wonderful. You did fantastic with her description. Kudos to you!!
I do worry about that maid who watches her like a dragon.
And Saul seems very sweet. :)
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I liked when they compared this maid to dragon, that was funny :lol: And Saul asking if he's presentable was unbelievably sweet, he cares, that counts :P :D :horns2 And I loved Miriam's description, she sounds lovely :D
Great chapter :heart: :horns2
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Chapter 137

"Man, am I stuffed", groaned Dave, flopping down on the bed.

"Ja, those cookies were so good", giggled Leif, stiffling a belch.

"Ha, very funny Junior. Were you staring at the maid's ass, you little bastard?", he cracked.

Leif flushed guiltily. "Ja, Dave. Heidi promised me a surprise if I came to visit her in the kitchen tonight. Is she going to have cookies?", he asked innocently.

Dave burst into laughter, tears streaming down his eyes. "Junior, are you kidding me? She wants to fuck you, dumbass. After you hooked up with Astrid, I thought you'd figure it out by now", he joked, wiping the tears from his eyes.

"Really? I had fun with Astrid. I wonder if this is going to be fun as well", he mused aloud.

"Yeah, but don't forget to make her come too. Chicks like that. You're a little chick-magnet, just like Ellefson", he chuckled.

"Is that good?", he asked.

"Yeah, it means girls like you. Junior, he doesn't realize that girls think he's hot, which turns them on more. You're just like that, Junior. You're gonna leave behind a lot of broken hearts", he joked.

"What about you, Dave? Have you many women?", he asked.

His expression grew serious. "Yeah, Junior. Being in a band, you see more ass than a toilet seat. But ever since Bridget, I've been a one woman man. I don't ever wanna be with another woman. If that bastard hurt her, I will kill him", he vowed.

Leif was frightened by the intensity in his voice. "But you may be arrested", he said.

"I've been arrested before, it sucks, but I can deal. Did your brother tell you Simon's gay?", he asked abruptly.

"He said that Herr Bergstrom is a sodomite. Is that the same thing?", he asked.

"Yeah. I had a bad feeling about him from the beginning. I'm gonna bring her back to LA, I'm never letting her go", he said, determination in his voice.
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I hope that they find Bridget soon. Leif is a chick magnet. :lol: :lol:

Dave and Leif's interaction with each other in hilarious and very well done. The dialogue between them flows very smoothly.

I LOVED this part

"Yeah, Junior. Being in a band, you see more ass than a toilet seat.

:lol: :lol: :lol: That was most brilliant!! :lol:
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Hahaha, Leif is funny :lol:
And I'm worried about Dave, I think he'd actually be able to kill Simon, but what's going to happen then? :blink: I hope Bridget is ok....
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Chapter 138

Leif lay in bed, his eyes wide open. "Junior, I know you're still up. If you want to see Heidi that badly, go already. I'm trying to sleep", he grumbled.

"Ja, sorry Dave", he murmured, throwing back the covers. Leif quietly left the room, closing the door behind him.

He could hear the creak of the floorboards under his feet, as he slowly tiptoed downstairs. His heart pounded in anticipation, making his way into the kitchen.

Heidi was waiting for him, a saucy grin on her face. She was a blond, buxom girl with large blue eyes, clad in a thin white shift.

She giggled, walking over to him. His mouth went dry, his heart pounding. Wordlessly, she leaned over and captured his lips with hers, his eyes wide at the contact.

Heidi broke the kiss, blue eyes dancing with mischief. "You do not have much experience, Ja? I will teach you, I think you will like it", she giggled, taking his hand and leading him to the pantry.

She lit a candle, locking the door behind them. The light revealed the shelves of jarred and canned foods, barrels of dried fruits and strings of sausages hanging from the ceiling. Heidi led him to a pallet of straw covered by a blanket, a pillow on top.

She winked, kissing his lips before unbuttoning his shirt. "Just relax, you will really like th is", she murmured, removing her shift.

His eyes widened at the sight of her naked body. The candlelight glowed on her, turning her hair to molten gold.

"Have you been with a woman before, Leif?", she asked, nibbling on his ear.

"Ja, once. There was a serving wench in Norrskrona, I liked it", he mumbled, blushing.

She chuckled, gently biting his neck. "You are going to like this much better", she said, unfastening his breeches.

Leif took a deep breath, as she tugged on his breaches, leading him to the straw pallet.

"Lay down and enjoy", she whispered softly, as she parted his lips with her tongue.

He kissed her back, his fingers in her blond hair. Heidi broke the kiss, gently nibbling on his throat, moving down his body.

Leif gasped in shock when she began to suck on him, taking him into her mouth. "Ja, that is good", he gasped, as she chuckled.

Heidi continued to suck on him, as he thrust into her mouth, moaning loudly. She licked and sucked on him, as he tangled his fingers in her hair, gasping her name.

"Oh Heidi, ja, oh yes", he moaned, thrusting one last time into her mouth.

She cleaned him up, her eyes glazed with passion. "It is your turn, Leif. Show me what you know", she whispered.

Leif took her into his arms and kissed her. His hands cupped a breast, as the nipple instantly hardened under his touch.

"Ja, very good", she murmured encouringly.

His lips moved lower, fastening onto a nipple, licking and sucking on the hardened nub. "Ja Leif, I like this", she murmured, stroking his blond curls.

Leif moved to her other breat, his hand caressing it's twin. Heidi moaned in pleasure, squirming under him. "Ja, very good. I am wet for you, Leif", she gasped, parting her legs.

He slid his hands between her legs, finding her wet and ready for him. Leif got on top of her, kissing her lips and thrusting into her body.

Heidi moaned against his lips, as he began to thrust into her body. "Ja Leif, keep going", she panted, clutching onto his shoulders.

"Ja Heidi", he grunted, loving the warmth and tightness around him.

He continued to thrust into her body, as she moaned in pleasure. Heidi wrapped her legs around his waist, urging him on.

"Oh Leif, ja, so good. Oh Leif, yes!", she gasped, as she came hard. He closed his eyes and thrust one last time into her body, releasing into her warmth.

They lay together on the straw, sweaty and exhausted. "You were very good, Leif. I have to show you more", she giggled.

"Really? I cannot wait", he said eagerly.
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Ha ha!! Leif got laid again. :P He's learning a lot I must say. Lars and Dave have been quite the influence on him. I wonder if he had more fun with Heidi than with the serving wench? :P
I'd say that Leif is getting more than Dave and Lars at the moment. :lol:
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Not to sound tacky, but Leif must be *something else* if he can get going twice in such a short period :P :eyerub
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Haha! Leif is indeed learning fast :wink Nice :lol: He'll turn into real heartbreaker :P
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