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Which Eternal Lie; Time travel fic
Topic Started: October 28, 2007, 4:54 pm (15,747 Views)
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Dave got scolded for being a bit crude. :lol: :lol: It sure did give me a giggle though.
You can tell that he really misses Bridget.

The Governor's house sounded quite nice and I loved another picture. It's almost like this is illustrated. :)
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It was nice of governer to offer them staying at his place :) And next day Simon will get arrested... I only hope Bridget is ok...
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Chapter 145

Johannes' hands shook as he put the bottle to his lips. The fiery liquid burned his throat, settling into his cold stomach. He shuddered, wincing at the taste.

I love and hate t hem. I like his caresses, but fell unclean. Maybe I can blot it all out, he thought, swallowing another gulp of vodka.

"Johannes, that is not good", Bridget chided gently.

"I want to feel nothing, Bridget. I want my mama, but she will be ashamed", he cried.

Bridget held him, stroking his dark hair. "Johannes, you are not at fault. Simon is evil, he only likes to hurt others. Someday he will get his just rewards", she murmured.

"Is Herra Mustaine going to save us?", he sniffled.

"Yes, remember what Herra Kullervo said? Thankfully, Simon and Vagn are in Lieto. We are free of them for now", she said.

"How is the baby doing?", he asked.

She smiled, putting a hand on her slightly rounded belly. "It is moving a bit. I hate Simon, but I cannot hate the baby. It is innocent", she whispered.

"Do not let the master hear that", said Maria, speaking haltingly in English.

"Do not say anything, Maria", she warned.

Maria flushed guiltily. "Yes, mistress. I do not like the master either", she muttered.


"Tomorrow, hopefully we can kick Simon's ass", muttered Dave.

"Ja, I understand. I hope he has not hurt the Lady Bridget", replied Leif.

"Yeah, but we can't barge in there, we gotta be calm about it. No telling what he's gonna do. I don't like that bastard at all", said Lars.

"Lars is right. There is something unwholesome about them. I do not want Bridget or anyone else to get hurt", said Sean.
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It was nice to see Bridget!!

And poor, poor, Johannes.

This was a badass opening line though

Johannes' hands shook as he put the bottle to his lips. The fiery liquid burned his throat, settling into his cold stomach. He shuddered, wincing at the taste.

Awesome!!! :dance

I loved how Dave said that they were going to come in and kick Simon's ass, and then right after that Leif is more mellow and way more 18th century. I love how you have handled the contrast between the modern day and past day chacracters, and have kept them that way throughout.

More soon!!!
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So Bridget and Johannes got to know each other better and they're awaiting Dave... I can't wait to see the two meet again :D
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Chapter 146

The following morning, the group set out for Rantajarvi. Along with them was the head constable of Turku, Mika Karpinnen. He was an enormous man, over six feet tall and almost as wide, with a shaved head concealed under his cap. He was an intimidating presence, perched on his black stallion.

"I hope Herra Bergstrom surrenders easily, I do not want to hurt anyone. People like that, people are afraid of them", he said.

"Have you experience with these cases before?", asked Sean.

"Yes. There was a wealthy merchant several years ago who lured peasant girls to his house and promised them work. It turned out he was a procurer, and made the girls work as whores. When we arrested him, he had twenty girls with him. They were quite young, some of them had the pox. He was sent to the dungeons and hung", replied Mika, his voice dripping with disgust.

"Damn. I hope he got ass-fucked by Bubba", muttered Dave.

"I do not know what that means exactly, but it does not sound good. We must approach carefully", said Mika, as they set off.


They arrived in the village three hours later. It was located about twenty miles inland, on the shores of a small lake, hence the name. A cluster of houses surrounded the village church, easily the largest building in the area.

Most of the people were working in the fields, when they approached. They looked up apprehensively, fright on their faces.

Mika dismounted from his horse. "I do not intend to harm you. Please give the directions to Mustasydan", he said.

A young man stepped forward. He was of average height and slightly overweight, brown hair framing his round face. His blue eyes looked him straight in the eye.

"I will lead you to Mustasydan. My friend works there and I think that Herra Bergstrom mistreats him. And he has a wife, she is with child, so do not harm her. I am Pekka Toivenen", he said solemnly.

"Lead the way, Herra Toivenen", said Mika.

Dave's eyes widened in shock. He had learned a bit of Finnish from Tarja, and was able to understand some of his words. What, Bridget is pregnat? That fucker got her pregnant? He was ashamed to admit he felt sick at the idea.

It's not her fault, but the kid... I hope she has a miscarriage, it's Simon's kid, he thought.
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I think the lovers are going to reunite soon eh? :wink I hope so. Poor, poor, Dave.

I liked this

"Damn. I hope he got ass-fucked by Bubba", muttered Dave

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And that wealthy merchant dude with the whores sounded just terrible.



I sooooooooooooooooooooooo can't wait for more of this.
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Oooh, the big moment is close.....
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Chapter 147

Pekka led the group towards Mustasydan. It appeared before them, right in the middle of the clearing in the woods. The enormous black and white house contrasted with the simple wooden houses of the villagers.

Mika dismounted and walked over to the house, knocking on the door. Mrs. Jarvinen answered it, her eyes wide with shock at the sight of the giant.

"Who are you?", she asked, terrified.

"Madam, I have a warrant for the arrest of Herra Bergstrom and Herra Jansen", he said.

"They are not here, they are in Lieto", she said, trying to close the door.

Mika stopped her, wedging his body between the door. "Madam, we will wait until your master comes home", he said.

Bridget heard the commotion and rushed downstairs, followed by Johannes and Maria. "What is the meaning of this?", she demanded.

Dave heard her speak, jumping off his horse. His eyes widened when he saw Bridget. She wore a blue robe over a green dress, her dark hair falling loosely to her waist, her feet bare. To him, she was the most beautiful sight in the world.

Dave rushed over, grabbing her and taking her into his arms. Bridget didn't have time to think, before he swept her up in his arms. "Dave, is that you?", she murmured, still in shock.

"Yes, Bridget. It's me, I hope that bastard didn't hurt you", he whispered fiercely. He buried his face in her hair, tears streaming down his cheeks.

Bridget stroked his hair, tears falling from her own eyes. She lifted his face and gently kissed his lips.

"Baby, we gotta get you home. And I hope that bastard rots in hell", he growled.

"Herra Mustaine, Herra Kullervo was right", whispered Johannes.

"Johannes, what is the matter? You look terrible", said Pekka, concerned for his friend.

Johannes was thinner, his skin very pale with dark circles under his eyes. His green eyes, once so lively, were now faded and dull, like a layer of moss on the surface of a lake.

"Herra Bergstrom is evil. He is a sodomite, and he turned me into one", he sobbed, crying onto his friend's shoulder.

"Goodness. You cannot arrest Johannes, it is not his fault", said Tarja.

"I know, Herra Bergstrom and Herra Jansen will go to the dungeons for this. Rouva Bergstrom, Johannes, come to the village with me. It is not safe here", said Mika.


"Johannes! Son, what happened?", asked Olga, embracing her son.

Pekka and Johannes were at the Valo's house. Olga was horrifed at her son's condition, as were Tatiana and Mikko.

"Herra Bergstrom is a sodomite, and he turned me into one. I am dirty, you must be so ashamed", he sobbed, turning away.

"Johannes, they will rot in hell for what they did", said Olga fiercely.

"I know, Mama", he whispered.


"Bridget, if you want I will kick his ass", growled Dave.

She faced him, her blue eyes glowing with fire. "Let me take a swing at him as well. He is a sodomite, and he turned Johannes into one. He corrupted him, he is truly evil", she replied angrily.

"The baby, what do you want to do with it?", he asked abruptly.

"Dave, the potion Mistress Ulrich gave me? I took it most of the time, except for that last night. I knew I was pregnant before we arrived in Finland. I think it is your child", she said.

His face lit up, hazel eyes glowing with delight. "What? It could be my kid? Great, unbelievable", he murmured.

"I know, I hope the baby is as good and handsome and brave as you", she replied.
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You wrote the reunion of Dave and Bridget well. :) :) It was very sweet and touching. And the image of Dave jumping off a horse. Oh dear. :drool :drool :drool Wow.
I looked for that interview but I could find it. :(

I hope Dave goes and kicks Simon's ass!!
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It's a long time since I left a message.
It was very good, I'm really happy that they made it to Turku, and they saved bridget :)
I hope everything will be alrtight
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^_^ .......
Their reunion was really moving :) Now, with Dave on her side Bridget is safe :D As well as poor Johannes.
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Chapter 149

Bridget led him upstairs to an empty room, locking the door behind her. Wordlessly, she leaned over and kissed his lips, her body pressed against his.

"Baby, are you sure? What about the baby?", he asked, his voice thick with lust.

She smiled up at him, a gleam in her eyes. "Fru Valo says it is all right, Dave. I want you to make love to me, wipe away the memory of Simon", she murmured, untying the laces of her dress.

Dave's mouth went dry, as she undressed herself. Bridget stood before him totally naked, as she looked into his eyes.

"Baby, you're beautiful", he murmured gently, kissing her lips. He placed a hand on her slightly rounded belly protectively.

He deepened the kiss, his tongue parting her lips. Bridget wrapped her arms around his neck, as the kiss deepened, their moans filling the air.

Dave broke the kiss, as he reached for the buttons of his shirt. Bridget smiled saucily at him, removing his hands and removing his clothes herself.

He led her over to the bed, taking her into his arms. Dave gently places kisses on her forehead, nose, cheeks, and finally her lips. She sighed against his lips when he cupped a breast, his thumb gently rubbing her nipple.

"Oh Dave", she moaned softly, as he toyed with her other breast, his lips on her throat.

"Just relax, baby", he murmured, his lips fastening onto a breast. Bridget mewled in delight, as his lips suckled on her breast, the sensation shooting straight to her core.

Dave moved to her other breast, his hand parting her legs. Bridget sighed with pleasure, his fingers exploring her intimately.

"Damn, you're wet already", he chuckled against her flesh.

He continued to caress her, his lips alternating between her breasts. Bridget was lost in sensation, all feeling centered on her breasts and between her legs. Her hips moved under him, her fingers tangled in his red hair.

Dave just winked at her, giving her breast one final kiss. He removed his fingers from her depths, as she moaned in disappointment.

Wordlessly, they switched positions, so she was on top and he was on the bottom. "This is a better position for the baby", he murmured, as he grasped her hips and thrust into her body.

Bridget gasped at the sensation, as he held her hips and moved inside her. "Baby, just move up and down. Ride me", he commanded, as she followed his orders.

"Oh Dave", she whispered, loving the sensation. He chuckled, cupping her breasts, as she continued to ride him.

Dave looked up, smiling at the sight of Bridget riding him. Her skin was flushed, her blue eyes sparkling. Her dark hair fell aroud her shoulders in wanton disarray, as she moved on his body.

"Baby, I'm close. Keep going", he groaned, feeling her tighten around him.

"Oh Dave, oh yes, ohh!", she moaned as she came. He gasped, thrusting one last time into her body.

Dave took her into his arms, holding her close. He gently kissed her cheek, a contented smile on his face. "Bridget, I'm never gonna let you go. I love you and our baby", he whispered.
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That was surely a waaarm welcome :biggrin
But they had to miss each other as hell. poor Bridget, she wanted him to wipe away a memory of Simon... But from now on, no Simon :)
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Those 2 certainly didn't waste any time. :horns: :dance Go Bridget!!!!!!!!

But I'm worried that something awful might go wrong. I hope that Simon is gone for good and that Dave and Bridget can finally be happy together. :dance


Good writing, as always!! :dance :dance :dance
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