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Which Eternal Lie; Time travel fic
Topic Started: October 28, 2007, 4:54 pm (15,746 Views)
Lucifer's Angel
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Chapter 150

Simon and Vagn arrived at Mustasydan the next day. A young boy about ten years old sat in front of Vagn, his hands tied behind his back. Straight blond hair framed a thin face, his eyes almost frighteningly vacant.

"Ah, we are home. Be a good boy, Lauri", he chuckled. The boy said nothing, staring straight ahead.

Mrs. Jarvinen greeted them, her expression bland. Mika caught her eye, nodding slightly. He and the village posse were waiting inside the house, ready to arrest them.

"Paivaa, Mrs. Jarvinen. Where is my lovely wife?", he drawled.

"She is indisposed, Herra Bergstrom. And who is this young man?", she asked. I hope he has not abused the boy, she thought, keeping the smile on her face.

"This is Lauri, he is going to be a servant", he replied smoothly.

Mrs. Jarvinen nodded slightly, giving the signal. Suddenly, Mika and the constables surrounded them, closing off the avenues of escape.

"What is the meaning of this? I am master here at Mustasydan", he sneered.

"Herra Bergstrom, Herra Jansen, you are under arrest for sodomy, procuring, and violating minors. Come with me, or else we will use force", he said.

Simon laughed, an ugly harsh sound. "I am master here, you are but a peasant. I can easily have you killed, my father is wealthy and has ties to the Danish king. You Finns are but stupid peasants. Vagn, take care of them", he said dismissively.

Vagn charged forward. Out of nowhere, an arrow sailed through the air, landing at his feet. "Herra Bergstrom, that was a warning. Please come with me", said Mika.

Suddenly, Vagn pulled out a knive and held it to Lauri's throat. The boy's eyes widened in fear, his lower lip trembling. "Go, before he slits the boy's throat", he growled.

"Let them go, men. I cannot let him kill the boy", he said reluctantly. The posse backed away, as Simon led them inside the house.


"What do we do, Simon?", asked Vagn.

Simon poured them each a goblet of wine. "We have ample supplies, we can withstand a siege if necessary. That traitor Johannes and my wife have run off. Oh well, we still have the brat, the younger the better", he chuckled.

Lauri sat in the corner, his expression bland. His pale blue eyes blinked occasionally, but he did not move. "Look alive, boy. I like my boys with some life in them", said Simon, grabbing his arm. Lauri said nothing, but gazed dispassionately at them, his shoulders slumped in defeat.
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Simon needs to be shot. Oh no!!! That poor, poor little boy!

I can't believe Simon managed to get away and he's still running around. Dave needs to show up and kick his ass. I'd love to read that. :)
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Oh my God, poor Lauri :ugh: :ugh: :( I agree with Ashley, Simon should be shot.... Or hung.. Or inpaled :angry
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Chapter 151

"Now, what do we do?", grumbled Dave.

"I know, he has the boy hostage and I do not wish to see him hurt. But they could very well be abusing him", said Mika.

"Simon is going to abuse the boy. He and Vagn like young boys, that is where the missing village boys go. When he is finished with them, he kicks them out", said Mrs. Jarvinen, feeling ashamed of herself.

"Why did you not report it?", asked Mika.

"He threatened to kill my family in Lintusinun", she sobbed.

"Rouva Jarvinen, it is not your fault. Simon and Vagn are evil, they care nothing except for their pleasure", said Briget, comforting the older woman.

Leif heard them, his face pale. By the gods, that is so evil. Poor Bridget, he thought, shaking his head.

"Man, if you guys don't kill them, I will. He is fucking evil", growled Dave, his hazel eyes flashing with anger.

"I know, Dave. And I would like to take a swing at him as well, we all do. But we need to get him to surrender, and for him not to hurt the boy. I do not want to be responsible for the boy being hurt", said Sean.

Just then, Johannes got up. He stood tall and proud, his green eyes glowing with passion. His fists clenched at his sides, his head held high.

"I will offer myself as a sacrifice. I will go in exchange for the boy, he is innocent, as I am not. I will not let them hurt the boy", he vowed.

"Johannes, are you sure? Simon may just hurt the boy to spite us", said Saul.

"I am sure, Herra Rosenberg. I have brought shame to my family, and this is my atonement. I do not want the boy to suffer what I have", he said solemnly.

"Johannes, you have not brought shame upon your family. You were forced against your will, you had no choice. If you still want to sacrifice yourself, I will not stand in your way", said Mika.

"That is kind of you, Herra Karpinnen, but I will still go", said Johannes, a determined look on his face.
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Johannes was very noble in this. Wow. I hope that he can realize that he didn't shame his family, and get the respect that he deserves. I feel horrible for that poor little boy too.

I can't wait to read more of this soon! Especially if Dave kicks Simons ass. :rockdevil:
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Wow. Johannes is indeed noble... I hope they'll save Lauri... And that they'll find a way to pay Simon back...
I can't wait for more! :heart: :horns2
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Chapter 152

Johannes walked towards Mustasydan. Mika and the others had followed at a distance, not wanting to attract attention.

I will offer myself, the boy is innocent, as I am not. This is my atonement, he thought.

He approached the house, each step heavier than the last. In the early morning light, Mustasydan loomed before him like a black and white monster, ready to pounce on its prey.

Johannes took a deep breath and knocked on the door...


Simon and Vagn were in their basement chamber. The boy Lauri stared at them, his expression blank, but his blue eyes glowed with pure hatred.

He is but a stupid boy. It is a always a pleasure to be the first, Simon chuckled maliciously.

"It is your turn with the brat. If he complains, there are always more children, the Finns have too many children anyways", he shrugged.

Vagn nodded, taking the boy by the hand. Lauri said nothing, his eyes flashing with anger and shame.

Just then, they heard someone knock at the door. Simon went upstairs and opened the door.

"So Herra Valo, you have finally come back? Why did you leave after all I have done for you?", he asked smoothly, the barest hint of anger on the surface.

Johannes stood tall, his face proud. "Give me the boy, Herra Bergstrom. He is an innocent, I am not. I will trade myself for the boy", he said.

Simon laughed in his face. "Do you really think the boy is innocent as you think? I have had his sweet flesh and so has Vagn. It was wonderful I do say so myself", he said, a gleam in his eyes.

Johannes felt sick. Poor boy, Herra Bergstrom is indeed evil, he shuddered, tears falling down his cheeks.

Just then, the villagers emerged from the woods. They surrounded the house, holding pitchforks and glaring at him.

Kullervo came forward, clad in his white robes. "Herra Bergstrom, we know you have taken children from the village and the surrounding villages. You are truly an evil man, and may the gods punish you", he intoned.

Sean and Bridget emerged from the crowd. He put an arm around his sister protectively, her head held high.

"Simon, I am ashamed I was ever married to you. You are no longer my husband, and child is not yours. It is Dave's child I carry, it does not have your evil", she said triumphantly.

"You bitch. I can sue your father for making me a cuckold", he growled.

Dave put a hand on her shoulder, glaring down at him. "You lay a hand on her, I will kill you. Your dad disowned you, you can go fuck yourself", he snarled.

Just then, there was a commotion, and a shot rang out...
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Wow. Holy shit! I hope Dave is okay. That was a most thrilling way to end a chapter.


I liked it when Dave told Simon to fuck himself. That part was awesome!! :)

I hope that Bridget's baby really is Dave's because Simon is so fucking evil. I hope Simon is the one who got shot.


More soon! :dance
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Chapter 153

There was panic in the crowd, several of the children screamed in fright. When the smoke cleared, Simon lay on the ground, gasping harshly. A bloody red stain spread on his shirt, the blood oozing from the wound.

"Who did this?", he asked, his breath shallow.

Pekka emerged from the crowd, holding a smoking pistol. His expression was grim, as he walked towards the fallen man.

"You hurt my friend, you fiend. Time to send you to hell", he growled, putting his finger on the trigger.

Dave held Bridget close, his hand over her eyes. He winced, as a second shot rang out.

Simon lay sprawled out on the dirt, half his face perfect, the other half a bloody mess. Several of the women retched, and the children screamed at the sight.

Mika said nothing, nudging the body with his boot. "I will have to contact the gravediggers, have him buried somewhere, but not in the graveyard, he is too foul for that", he shrugged.

Bridget looked down at her erstwhile husband. A sense of elation came over her, her heart feeling lighter than it had in months.

"He's dead, he'll never hurt you again. I wish I had a camera so I could take a picture", said Dave.

Mika and Pekka went into the house to arrest Vagn. Pekka had his pistol cocked and ready, in case he tried to ambush them.

They went downstairs into the secret chamber, their hearts trembling in anticipation. Mika threw open the door, shocked and appalled at the sight.

Vagn lay in a pool of his own blood. His eyes stared ahead vacantly, as dead as the eyes of the dear on the walls. The boy Lauri held a bloody knife, a blank expression on his face. However, his blue eyes were cold with triumph, which almost made them shiver in fear.

Lauri unsteadily got to his feet, walking over to the corpse. He peered down in the still face, raising the knife. Suddenly, he methodically began to hack at the body, rivulets of blood streaming from the corpse.

When he was finished, he stared at them, the knife dropping from his grip. Lauri ran into his arms, crying hysterically.

"Sssh, boy. They are both well and truly dead. They will never hurt you again", said Mika, stroking the boy's hair.

Lauri lifted his tear-streaked face, his lower lip trembling. Mika smiled gently at the boy, leading him outside.

A woman rushed over to him, scooping him up in her arms. "Mama", he whimpered, fresh tears in his eyes.

"The boy killed Herra Jansen. Under most circumstances, this would be a murder charge, but the nature of his crimes is so foul no charges will be brought. Herra Bergstrom and Herra Jansen both deserved their fates", said Mika, as the people walked back to the village.
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Whoa. So the boy killed Jansen. I didn't see that coming. You wrote the Lauri's reaction just perfectly. The right amount of shock and shame because he actually killed someone. Even though he was an asshole, I could see a young boy like Lauri totally being upset. It makes him human and I like that.


I know it wasn't sensitive, but I liked Dave's comment about taking a picture. Simon was a chode and I'm not the least bit sorry he's gone and done forever.
Go Dave!!!! :horns:


Brilliant once again! :)
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What a chapters!!! :horns2
I'm sooooo glad Simon and Vagn are dead. They fully deserved their fate. I feel so sorry for Lauri, not only was he hurt by those monsters but he had killed a human, I hope he won't get disturbed or something :( :ugh: . At least he's with his mum now.
And I liked Dave's remark about taking picture, in all this drama it made me giggle :P
Awesome!!! :heart:
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WOOO
That were some exiting chapters.
I'm glad they are dead, whta they did was horrible.
I'm happy the boys aere safe, and they can never hurt them again!
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Chapter 154
March, 1746

"Bridget, you don't have to do that", Dave chided gently.

She put down the sewing she was working on, a gleam in her blue eyes. "Thank you for your concern, but I am not a doll. Sewing will not harm the baby", she said, putting a hand on her enormously pregnant belly.

Dave blushed. "Sorry, I don't have much experience with pregnant chicks. I don't want you to do too much work. You need save your strength for the baby", he said.

"Dave, Bridget is right. Men, they think they know everything about babies, yet they cannot bear them", chuckled Violet, a hand on her slightly rounded belly.

"Damn, I'm surrounded by pregnant chicks. Ulrich is having another kid, and so is Kirk. And Sean and Sonja only been married for two months, and she's pregnant too. Maybe all the hormones are rubbing off on me", he cracked.

"Yeah Mustaine, I know. But we got less than two months to go. Hopefully we can go back", he said, a hint of reluctance in his voice.

"I understand. It might be difficult for you to adjust to your own time, but it will be harder for us", said Violet thoughtfully.

"Yeah, and I wonder if anyone notices we're gone, or if they missed us", said Lars.

"They oughtta, but I hope the FBI doesn't get involved. Then they'll stick us in Area 51 or Hangar 18 with all the aliens", joked Dave.

"Cool, I wanna see if the aliens are real", said Cliff, entering the room.

"What is Area 51 and Hangar 18?", asked Bridget, puzzled.

"Area 51 is government property in the desert, that's where the government keeps aliens and shit. Hangar 18 is where they keep the Roswell aliens and their spaceship. Some aliens landed in Roswell, New Mexico in 1947, and the government keeps 'em hidden there so people don't freak out", explained Cliff.

"Very interesting, Herr Burton. And how are you, Bridget?", asked Lachlan, smiling at his daughter.

She beamed, her cheeks flushed pink. "I am fine, Papa. I cannot wait for the baby to be born", she giggled.

"Good. Dave, you promise you will take good care of my daughter and my grandchild?", he asked, looking him straight in the eye.

Dave met his gaze without flinching. "I will, sir. I love your daughter, and I will never hurt her", he said solemnly.

Bridget smiled at her father and lover. Just then, she felt a twinge of pain in her belly. She took a deep breath, trying to steady herself. The pain came again, rending her breathless.

"Bridget, you okay?", asked Dave, concerned.

She nodded, only for another pain to strike. Clear fluid flowed down her legs, as the pain bent her double.

"Shit! She's having the baby!", he yelled.
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I loved all the talk about Area 51 and Hanger 18. It made me most happy.
I soooooooo want to go to New Mexico sometime. Plus I have a friend in Alberquerque.


Anywho, good chapter. I hope that everything okays alright with Bridget. :dance
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Yaay, they are all together again!

"They oughtta, but I hope the FBI doesn't get involved. Then they'll stick us in Area 51 or Hangar 18 with all the aliens", joked Dave." haha, I liked that :lol:

And nice cliffhanger (hah, I was about to write hangover :lol: :lol: ) there. I hope Bridget and her baby will be fine!
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