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Which Eternal Lie; Time travel fic
Topic Started: October 28, 2007, 4:54 pm (15,777 Views)
Lucifer's Angel
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Chapter 12

"What a day, huh?", cracked James, taking a gulp of beer.

The group were in Cliff and Kirk's room, drinking and just chilling out at the end of the day.

"Yeah, I thought we'd be breaking rocks and shit, but our job isn't bad at all", said Cliff.

"And their music's pretty good. I mean, it's not loud, but it's nice", said Kirk.

"Mine's boring as fuck, but I got a hot chick keeping me company", boasted Lars.

"Dude, she's the healer's daughter. If he caught you, he'll turn you into a frog or something", retorted Cliff, drinking a shot of whiskey.

"Well, I can look, can't I? Besides, all girls fall for the Ulrich charm", he bragged.

"Arrogant little fucker", said James, rolling his eyes.

"Guys, do you have any idea how we're gonna get back?", asked Kirk.

"No idea. I mean, we don't know the exact location of the circle, and if we did, we'd have to steal horses to get there. They hang horse thieves here", shuddered Lars.

"Yeah, and what are we gonna tell them? That we fell out of the sky? They'll think we're witches and shit", said James.

Cliff looked thoughtful. "I'm not that worried, actually. I got an idea, that the time we left behind isn't moving. I mean, when we left in 1985, it didn't move from there. So Brian isn't gonna miss us, and the fans won't either. If we ever get back to the 20th century, we can step right back into our own lives like nothing ever happened", he mused aloud.

"Cliff, you might be right. We'll just have to make the best out of our situation. If there's a chance we can go back, we'll go back, but if not, like Mom says, turn lemons into lemonade", said Kirk.

"Yeah, not to mention the chicks here are hot", cracked James.

"I know. Violet has got to be one of the most gorgeous chicks ever", said Lars dreamily.

"And Cliff's already hooked up with one", teased James, as Cliff blushed.

"Ooh Cliff, who's the lucky lady?", giggled Lars.

"Shut the fuck up. Her name is Morag, and she's Liam's cousin. She's a hot redhead with nice tits. Hell, she came onto me first, not that I'm complaining", he chuckled.

"Anyways, we gotta get some sleep. We got more work tomorrow", said Kirk.

"All right, good night guys", said James, as he and Lars left the room.
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Verity
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I wonder if Cliff is right about 1985 standing still. That would be awful if they could never get back. But then again, they have wonderful chicks with nice tits, so perhaps they could be happy living back in time forever. :nanner: I wonder what they're going to decide.
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Hmm - I like Cliff's theory that they will just be able to slot back into their old lives. The trouble is, if they have beautiful women there- will they want to live out their lives back in time? And if they die, then what happens? I'm really enjoying this and looking forward to seeing what will happen next!
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I had a lot to catch up, but it was all great :D
I loved it.

"Can i Fuck you senseless" That made me laugh sooo hard :D
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Chapter 13

"Now, Master Ulrich, we still have to finish doing the inventory. There are still a lot of jars we didn't check", said Violet.

"Hmm, okay", he replied, staring at her ass. She's got a nice ass, the view in the back's as good as the view in the front, he chuckled.

Violet walked over to him with a large, wide book. It was heavy, made of leather and with pages of made of parchment instead of paper.

"If the herb smells fresh, write the name of the herb in this column, and today's date in the next column", she said.

"What's today's date?", he asked, puzzled.

Violet's eyes widened in shock, her brows rising almost to her hairline. "Are you funning me? You do not know the date?", she asked, her voice rising in shock.

Lars blushed, his cheeks bright pink. "Well, when you're lost in the middle of Scotland, you forget what day it is", he retorted, his eyes gleaming.

"Oh, I remember. I am sorry, it's just that everyone should know the date. Well, it is August 9, the year of our Lord, 1742", she replied.

Lars almost dropped the jar he'd been holding. What the hell, it was 1742? It finally sank in that they had truly traveled back in time, that this was not the result of some bad acid.

"Master Ulrich, you look a bit pale. Do you want some tea?", she asked, concerned.

"Yeah, that sounds good. Thanks, Violet", he said gratefully.

She raised an eyebrow at the use of her name, then smiled at him. "It is no problem, Lars. I do not want my fellow assistant to faint in here with all the jars. After we finish, I need to gather mushrooms from the meadow. If you want, you can join me. Fresh air will do you some good", she said, handing him a mug of tea.

Lars sank down onto the chair, his knees still shaking. He tightened his grip on the mug, inhaling the vapors from the tea. He cautiously took a sip, feeling the warmth flow through his body.

"Yeah, I'll go. I don't know much about plants and crap. That's something Mom would know", he replied, sipping his tea.

"Aye, most men are clueless, and when I give them herbs, they complain that it is too bitter or too sweet, and they try to beg off from taking their medication. Children act better than that", she chuckled.

Lars felt a bolt of jealousy go through him when she mentioned treating other men. She's a healer, dumbass, it's her duty. But I hope they weren't staring at her tits, he scowled.

"Lars, are you all right?", she asked.

He blushed deep red. "Sorry, Violet. I guess it was the steam from the tea", he replied shyly.

"When you are finished, follow me and I'll teach you", she said, opening the ledger.

Baby, I'd teach you a thing or two, he chuckled to himself.


When they were both finished, Violet handed him a basket and led him outside the keep. At first, Lars was self-conscious about carrying a basket, but felt relieved when no one noticed them.

She led them outside the walls of the keep to an open field. It was a pleasant summer's day, the sky overhead the brilliant blue of a robin's egg, clouds floating lazily across the surface.

Lars kept his eyes on her, admiring her figure. She wore the same purple dress, but with a bright green shall across her shoulders. On her feet were sturdy brown boots, worn but clean. Her long black hair fell in two long braids to her waist, swinging with every step.

She can wear a potato sack and still look good. Fuck the potato sack, I wanna see her naked with just her hair covering her tits, he mused, eyes gleaming with merriment.

"Lars, first we must gather the mushrooms", she said, getting to her hands and knees, searching in the grass.

He followed her lead, searching for anything that resembled a mushroom. Lars found some round white things he assumed were mushrooms, tossing them into a basket. I wonder if any of them are magic mushrooms, he chuckled.

"Lars, these are poisonous. And these mushrooms make people go insane", she admonished.

"The poison ones, get rid of 'em. But I wanna keep the other ones. It's cool to trip on shrooms", he chuckled.

Violet's eyes widened in shock. "Lars, are you mad? One boy ate these, and he claimed to see spirits and demons. Da and I had to purge him so the poison left his body. Luckily we did so before the others knew, he would have been condemned as a witch", she replied, her expression grim.

Lars immediately felt guilty. "Sorry, Violet. I didn't know. Where I'm from, people take mushrooms to see visions and shit. Cliff and I did before, it was pretty cool. But I didn't realize people here don't do that", he said, his cheeks pink.

"Lars, I understand. You are Outlanders, you are not used to our ways. Let us continue our work", she said, picking up the basket.
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That chapter rocked. I liled Lars and his thoughts about mushrooms and Violet naked with her hair covering her titties. :lol: :lol:

You do very well with Violet's description.

Lars carrying a basket also made me smile.
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That was great, luckily violet can't read minds :lol:
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I had to do a little catch up and I must say this story rocks!
I love the name 'Violet' so great. And I agree with others, the line
'Yeah, can I fuck you senseless?, he wondered, shaking his head.' was brilliant :lol:
I liked guys' meeting after hard day :) And I suppose Jeanie is the shy one when Morag... isn't ? :D
And I would pay to see Lars with basket, gathering mushrooms on the meadow :biggrin
Awesome!
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I absolutely adore the way that you write Lars in this - he is so funny. You can see on the one hand him trying to fix his interest with Violet - then on the other hand his hilarious thoughts that he's having.

Fantastic :)
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Chapter 14

Violet sighed, setting down the basket. "Let us rest for a bit, have something to eat", she said, opening a bag.

Lars sat down next to her, watching as she set out a cloth and took out a small loaf of bread, cheese, and two apples, along with a small jug of cider. She took out a small knife and cut them each a slice of bread and cheese.

They ate silently, enjoying the cool breeze, resting after the morning's work. Lars barely tasted his food, instead observing her out of the corner of his eye. He tried to stifle a grin when he saw her eating daintily, not spilling any crumbs. His mouth went dry when she licked her lips, her tongue running over her full bottom lip.

"Lars, are you Scottish? Your name doesn't sound Scottish?", she asked, taking a sip of cider.

"I'm not Scottish, I was born in Copenhagen, Denmark", he replied.

"Aye, like the prince in Master Shakespeare's play?", she asked, intrigued.

"Yeah, like Hamlet. Except my Dad's not the king. My dad is Torben Ulrich, he's a famous tennis player", he boasted.

"So your father is an important man in your country? Then why are you in Scotland?", she asked, puzzled.

Lars thought fast. "Uh, my family moved to the colonies when I was a child, where I met the others. We had played some shows in Scotland, but we got lost", he replied, silently thanking Cliff for telling them they were from the colonies.

Her eyes widened, her expression wistful. "You have done a lot of traveling, Lars. I have never left Mackenzie lands, not even to go to Inverness. You are so lucky", she whispered.

"Wow, you mean you've never left this place for anything? That sucks", he replied, frowning.

"What is it like in the colonies?", she asked.

"Uh, my family now lives in California, in the west. It's really nice, the weather is warm all year round, and there's palm and orange trees", he replied, not wanting to totally freak her out.

"I saw a palm tree once in a book. It was queer, the leaves are so big and the bark is so scaly. It must be wonderful to eat fresh oranges, I only had a dried orange on Christmas", she said wistfully.

Lars gave her a hug. Damn, I'm complaining that the Midwest is boring and that we travel too much, and she's never been outside her clan's territory. I wanna show her California and Denmark and Japan, all of it, he vowed.

"Lars, in the colonies, are there different areas, or does it look like here?", she asked.

"Well, in some parts, it's cold and there's snow and some are really hot. It's huge, you're gonna love it", he said, green eyes dancing with delight.

"Lars, I never told anyone else this, but I want to travel. I have known there is more to this world than the Mackenzie lands, but the others would think I was queer if I said so. Here, people are born, live and die on the same land as their ancestors did. I do not want that. I want to travel like you, Lars", she said, her violet eyes glowing with determination.

Lars held her close, amazed at her passion. I want to show her everything. I wanna show her the states and Europe and Asia and everywhere, he vowed, surprised at the direction of his thoughts.

Violet turned to face him, her expression grim. "Lars, if you must leave, take me with you", she pleaded.

Lars looked into her eyes, startled by the intensity in them. She gripped his hand tightly, hard enough to cause a bruise. "I will, Violet, I promise", he said fiercely.

Suddenly, he leaned over and captured her lips in a bruising kiss. She gasped at the sensation, the pressure of his lips on hers forcing her mouth open. His tongue sought out hers, as the kiss deepened, their moans echoing in the breeze.

They broke apart, breathless. "Lars, what was that?", she panted, her eyes wide.

"Sorry if that was a bit sudden. That, Violet, is called a kiss", he chuckled, winking at her.

"Aye, that is not a kiss my father gives me", she giggled.

"No, that is a kiss a man gives to a woman", he said, taking her into his arms. Lars gently kissed her lips, not wanting to frighten her. She moaned softly, her lips parting under his.

While they kissed, his hands moved inside her dress, gently cupping her breast, his thumb rubbing the nipple. She gasped, a bolt of desire shooting straight to her core.

"Oh yes, Lars", she moaned, as he continued to play with her breast. Reluctantly, he removed his hand from her flesh, buttoning up her dress.

"I dont' want anyone to see us. I don't want to get you in trouble", he sighed.

"I understand. Are you going to court me, Lars?", she asked.

"Is that what you call dating? I guess I'm courting you. Your dad won't mind?", he asked.

"Father won't mind. He wants me to marry eventually", she replied.

"So, when do you want to meet?", he asked.

"After supper, come to my father's office. I shall meet you there", she said, kissing his cheek.

"Let's get back to the castle", said Lars, picking up the basket.
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:lol: Lars is courtingI find that very very very amusing.
This story just keeps getting better. I loved how you brought in aspects of Lars's modern life in California.


This [art made me laugh

Yeah, like Hamlet. Except my Dad's not the king. My dad is Torben Ulrich, he's a famous tennis player", he boasted.

:lol: :lol:
I wonder how the courting will go, and if Lars will bring Violet back to modern times with him so that she can travel.
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Courting eh? Goodness me - that made me laugh 'it's a kiss a man gives a woman'. I could just imagine him being really self-important as he said that... It'll certainly be interesting though if he decides to take her to see his lands... it might be worth mentioning at some point that he's actually from the future... but we'll see!

*G* And I like your Shakespeare mention, although it did bring back horrible memories of having to study the dude at school!
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Really nice chapter :) Larsy was so great in this. I wonder if he'll seriously take her with him when they'll be leaving. That would be great :biggrin
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poor violet, she never traveled, i feel sorry for her :(
hopefully lars can show her the world
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Hey, I just wanted to tell you that I think this is really good. I didn't forget about it!
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