| Welcome to zetaboards. We hope you enjoy your visit. You're currently viewing our forum as a guest. This means you are limited to certain areas of the board and there are some features you can't use. If you join our community, you'll be able to access member-only sections, and use many member-only features such as customizing your profile, sending personal messages, and voting in polls. Registration is simple, fast, and completely free. Join our community! If you're already a member please log in to your account to access all of our features: |
| Which Eternal Lie; Time travel fic | |
|---|---|
| Tweet Topic Started: October 28, 2007, 4:54 pm (15,774 Views) | |
| Battery | November 17, 2007, 3:25 pm Post #91 |
|
Some Kind Of Monster
![]() ![]() ![]()
|
Wow... What now?Please please update! Awesome chapter!!!
|
![]() |
|
| lolo | November 17, 2007, 8:53 pm Post #92 |
![]()
ex - thur - minate
![]() ![]() ![]()
|
james to wed jeanie, wow... that's a big step especially if you're in another era. I wonder what will happen with them, they're making some big promises
|
![]() |
|
| Lucifer's Angel | November 18, 2007, 3:09 pm Post #93 |
![]()
Heavy Metal Seanchai
![]() ![]() ![]()
|
Chapter 24 "James, I still can't believe it. Mr. James Hetfield, ladies' man extraordinaire, is getting married", teased Lars. "I know. I can't believe it myself. But I like Jeanie, and it was her Mom's wish. I'm sure we'll get along in time. This just feels so weird", he sighed, buttoning up his shirt. "Yeah, I mean, look on the bright side. Jeanie's hot, at least it wasn't an ugly chick", he cracked. "Ulrich, you got a sick sense of humor, dude. Jeanie's cool, and James likes her. Go hang with your girlfriend and stop bothering the groom", said Kirk. "All right. It's just that it seems so unreal. I never thought James is the marrying type, but hell, what do I know?", he shrugged. "Jeanie, you look so beautiful. James will be thrilled to see you", said Violet. Jeanie gave her a small smile, gazing at her reflection in the mirror. I cannot believe we are getting married. I hope James is not upset, it is so sudden,, she thought, frowning. "Do not be upset, Jeanie. James is a good lad, even though he is an Outlander. He shall take care of ye and Liam, and Cliff is courting Morag, so he can take care of her", said her mother. "Mama, I am so nervous. What if James doesna show up? What if he is angry? It is so sudden", she cried. "Jeanie, have ye seen how he looks at ye? He fancies ye. And he will be a good provider, him being one of the hunters. And he shall be a father to Liam. I want to see ye safe, the healer says I dinna have much time", she croaked, coughing loudly. Liam watched the scene with mixed emotions. On the one hand, he was exited to have James as a father. On the other hand, he hoped he wouldn't be mad about the hasty wedding. I have got to speak with him, he thought, leaving the room. "Hey Liam, how you doing, little dude?", joked James. "Master Hetfield, Jeanie is worried about the marriage. She thinks ye shall get mad at her, for this is a hasty wedding. Ye must promise me, ye will not hurt her ever", he said, blue eyes glowing with determination. James was taken aback by his declaration. "Liam, I like your sister. In fact, I think she's beautiful, and a sweet girl. I am not gonna hurt her. My own father was an asshole, and the last thing I want to hurt her. You have my word", he replied, extending his hand. Liam took his hand, shaking it vigorously. "I am holding ye to yer promise, James. She is me sister, and if ye hurt her in any way, I shall kill ye", he said fiercely. "Wow, I understand, Liam", he replied. "Liam, don't worry. I'll get on his ass, I won't hurt Morag either, she's been hurt enough", said Cliff. "Aye, I ken, Cliff. Morag is still me kin, and I protect all me kin", he said. "Are ye ready yet? Us women are already finished", admonished Morag. Cliff put an arm around her, kissing her cheek. "Almost done, baby. Is your aunt gonna be okay?", he asked, concerned. "Aye, she says she will rest after the ceremony", she replied. "Okay, we're done, let's go", said James. |
![]() |
|
| Battery | November 18, 2007, 3:30 pm Post #94 |
|
Some Kind Of Monster
![]() ![]() ![]()
|
Oh wow... So James will marry Jeanie... I liked how caring Liam was towards his sister
|
![]() |
|
| Verity | November 18, 2007, 8:37 pm Post #95 |
|
The Story Girl
![]() ![]() ![]()
|
I just loved how James said the word "asshole" right in front of the kid. That was funny. Lars is a hoot too, teasing the groom. I just wonder if they will ever go back to 1985? It doesn't look like it. What if Jeanie finds out that he's from another time? I can't wait to find out what's going to happen. This is awesome. |
![]() |
|
| Shayi | November 19, 2007, 6:10 am Post #96 |
|
Bring me that horizon
![]() ![]() ![]()
|
How many promises will these men keep that they have made? I hope that they do not let their chicks from the past down.... I do love the way that Liam champions his sister - and the way that James interacts with Liam. Not to mention Lars and his teasing! Excellently written! |
![]() |
|
| Lucifer's Angel | November 19, 2007, 11:10 am Post #97 |
![]()
Heavy Metal Seanchai
![]() ![]() ![]()
|
Chapter 25 James stood before the altar in the church, conscious of all the eyes on him. It seemed as though the entire village were there to witness the wedding, he mused. The priest stood before him, adorned in his best robes. "I ken ye are nervous, laddie. Do not worry, yer bride will show", he said reassuringly. Out of the corner of his eye, he saw his bandmates and their women seated in the front row, along with Liam and Mrs. McKenna. Liam smiled at him, giving him the thumbs up. Just then, the piper played a soft, lilting melody. James stood still, but he could feel Jeanie walking down the aisle, escorted by Conor. His breath caught in his throat, surprised at her loveliness. She wore a delicate lacy gown in pale lavender, her gleaming chestnut hair falling to her waist. On top of her head was a garland of white lillies, their heady fragrance filling the air. She smiled shyly at him, a flush on her cheeks. "Dearly beloved, we are gathered here to join in Holy Matrimony James Hetfield and Jeanie McKenna. If anybody here has an objection to this marriage, please speak now or forever hold your peace", intoned the priest. When no one spoke up, he continued. "Do you, James Hetfield, take Jeanie McKenna to be your lawfully wedded wife, in sickness and in health, for richer or for poorer, till death do ye part?", he asked. "I do", he replied. "Jeanie McKenna, do ye take James Hetfield to be your lawfully wedded husband, in sickness and in health, for richer or for poorer, till death do ye part?", he repeated. Jeanie took a deep breath, her heart racing. "I do", she said simply. "By the power vested in me by the Holy Mother Church, I shall now pronounce you man and wife. Ye shall now kiss the bride", said the priest. James took her into his arms, blue eyes twinkling with mischief. He leaned down and kissed her lips, as she moaned softly. He broke the kiss, winking at her. "Later, darlin'", he chuckled. The church emptied as the people descended on the keep. "Since you are my retainer and are married to a Mackenzie woman, ye shall have the reception at the castle", Conor had explained. Mrs. McKenna embraced her daughter. "Aye, ye are such a beautiful bride, Jeanie. James, I expect ye to take care of me daughter", she admonished. "I will, ma'am", he replied solemnly. The main hall of the castle was set up with enormous tables and benches, with a large open space for dancing. The tables were set with plates and cups, the musicians setting up on a dais at the far end. Kirk went with the musicians. "You got the song down? I know they're gonna love it", he said, dark eyes twinkling. "I know, Kirk. It is an odd tradition, but a pleasant one. What did you say the name of the troupe was?", asked Mary. "The band's name is Led Zeppelin. They were really popular when I was a kid", he replied. And the song is for us as well, he thought, smiling at the idea. |
![]() |
|
| Shayi | November 19, 2007, 11:51 am Post #98 |
|
Bring me that horizon
![]() ![]() ![]()
|
That was beautiful Really nicely written and so evocative - it brought all the images to my mind and made me really see what was going on. Wonderful! *G* I did chuckle at the end that they're going to be playing a song by the 'troupe' Led Zeppelin! |
![]() |
|
| Verity | November 19, 2007, 1:40 pm Post #99 |
|
The Story Girl
![]() ![]() ![]()
|
What a beautiful wedding! You did a great job describing it. The part with Led Zeppelin was absolutely brilliant. Their stuff sounds good on acoustic instruments. |
![]() |
|
| lolo | November 19, 2007, 3:35 pm Post #100 |
![]()
ex - thur - minate
![]() ![]() ![]()
|
That was a beautiful wedding I love the Led Zeppelin part ![]() the name of the troupe ![]() |
![]() |
|
| Lucifer's Angel | November 20, 2007, 11:06 am Post #101 |
![]()
Heavy Metal Seanchai
![]() ![]() ![]()
|
Chapter 26 Kirk was still smiling when he stood in the center of the dais. He cleared his throat, as everyone turned to face him. "I'd like to congratulate James and Jeanie on their wedding. May you guys have a long, happy, prosperous life together. Anyway, you guys, it's time for your first dance, so don't be shy", he said, as the musicians played Thank You by Led Zeppelin. James's eyes widened in surprise, a grin forming on his face. Cheeky bastard, he got them to play a Zeppelin tune. I wonder how'd they feel if they knew who wrote it, he chuckled, leading Jeanie onto the dance floor. He took her into his arms, as they slow-danced to the song. Jeanie was a bit shy at first, but then she relaxed against him, feeling safe in his hars. She looked up, as he smiled at her. "Just relax, darlin'", he whispered, a hint of desire in his voice. The song ended, as the band played a lively jib. The rest of the guests got to their feet and began to dance. Lars found Violet talking to her father, and walked over to her. "Do you want to dance, Lars?", she asked. He grinned at her. "Of course", he replied, green eyes twinkling with mirth. Kilwich smiled at them, as he walked over to Mrs. McKenna. "Are ye all right, Mistress? Do ye need to rest?", he asked, concerned. She smiled wanly at him. "I am tired. I need someone to escort me back to me cottage", she sighed. He started to go after Violet, but she stopped him. "No, let her enjoy herself with her young man. Let somone else go", she whispered. "Excuse me, please escort Mistress McKenna back to her house", he told one of the servant girls. "Aye, I shall", she replied, leading her out the door. Cliff and Morag had escaped the main room of the keep, trying to find some privacy. "I hope there's an empty room here. I don't wanna get busted", he muttered. "I ken. 'Tis very embarassing", she giggled. They finally found an empty room on the top floor, locking the door behind them. Cliff took her into his arms, kissing her fiercely. She moaned against his lips, as they quickly stumbled over to the bed. They broke apart only long enough to undress each other, before kissing again. Their lovemaking was quick and urgent, without preliminaries. He was almost rough with her, but Morag didn't appear to mind; in fact, she enjoyed it, judging from her moans of passion. "Fuck, I'm gonna cum", he muttered, feeling her tighten around him. He thrust one last time into her body, as she cried out against his lips. They held onto each other, breathless and sweaty. He withdrew from her body, and retrieved their clothes. "Baby, sorry we can't linger, but I don't want anyone to barge in here. Don't worry, later I'm gonna fuck you all night long, I promise", he said, grinning at her. "I shall look forward to that, Cliff", she giggled, as they got dressed. "Lars, have you seen Cliff and Morag?", asked Violet. He poured them each a cup of punch and handed one to her. "I saw them going upstairs. He's gonna get lucky", he chortled, draining his cup. "I beg your pardon?", she asked, puzzled. He raised an eyebrow. "Getting lucky, you know, getting some? Getting laid? Consummation?", he asked, finally seeing that she understood. Her cheeks turned bright pink. She had an image of her and Lars in a passionate embrace, their bodies nakes, in the throes of ecstasy. "I see. Yes, I hope he does get lucky", she murmured. Lars smiled knowingly at her. "Yes, that's what I said. Don't worry, you'll love it. It's going to be better than in the meadow", he whispered, nibbling on her ear. Violet trembled, feeling the heat pool in her belly. He held her close, her back against his chest. Lars kept his hands on her waist, his lips on her throat. "Tonight, after the party, I'll show you", he murmured, feeling the chill go down her body. |
![]() |
|
| Shayi | November 20, 2007, 11:31 am Post #102 |
|
Bring me that horizon
![]() ![]() ![]()
|
*G* Good good - all the boys gettin' their rocks off... good for them! It made me chuckle when you had James' aside thought about the others being cheeky so and so's - it's so darn true. Great update! |
![]() |
|
| Verity | November 20, 2007, 2:14 pm Post #103 |
|
The Story Girl
![]() ![]() ![]()
|
Lars is soooo damn funny this. I love "getting lucky" Poor Violet, has to learn all these modern slang terms.And Cliff and Morag are going at it like two jack rabbits. Someone is having fun! awesomeness. |
![]() |
|
| Lucifer's Angel | November 20, 2007, 9:47 pm Post #104 |
![]()
Heavy Metal Seanchai
![]() ![]() ![]()
|
I'm feeling generous, so here's another chapter for you guys Chapter 24 Dinna be nervous, Jeanie. I am sure ye will like it", giggled Morag. Jeanie smiled nervously at her cousin, her heart pounding in her chest. What if it hurts, or I do not please him? she fretted. "Jeanie, all brides are nervous on their wedding night. It is a natural thing, and James is a good man", said Violet. "Aye, and wear this. No man can resist", said Morag, handing her a box. Jeanie took the box and opened it. Inside was a white, lacy slip adorned with ribbons and tiny glass beads tthat shimmered. "'Tis fancy, and so reavealing. Are ye shure I am to wear this?", she asked, her eyes wide. "Yes, of course. Do not worry, ye shall not be wearing it for long", giggled Morag, a mischievious gleam in her eyes. Violet smiled gently at her, grabbing a brush and running it through Jeanie's hair. She closed her eyes and sighed. I hope it all works out well, she thought. Meanwhile, James was blindfolded and being led to the room. "Ye cannot wait to see yer bride, James? Jeanie is a lovely girl, if I was twenty years younger with no wife", chuckled Alasdair. "Don't talk like that or I'll kick your ass", he growled, but his lips twitched upwards into a smile. "Aye, I know", chuckled Alasdair. "Yeah, James. you can't wait to fuck her senseless. It's been a while since you got laid", joked Lars. "Neither have you, you Danish fucker. Go grab Violet and fuck her brains out", he retorted. "Yeah, you heard him, Lars", seconded Cliff. "You too. Go find Morag and fuck her senseless", cracked James. "Already did, James. And there's more where that came from", he chuckled suggestively. "All right, we are here in the room. Ladies, we are here", said Alasdair. Violet answered the door and led them inside. Lars untied the blindfold from around his face, as they all discreetly left the room. James blinked several times, eyes adjusting to the light. His lips turned upwards when he saw his bride. Jeanie lay in bed, wearing a white lacy nightgown with tiny glass beads. The bodice was low cut, revealing her full breasts, the hem only coming to midthigh. Her long chestnut hair had been brushed until it gleamed, shining with red and gold highlights amongst the brown. "Jeanie, you look good enough to eat, darlin'", he murmured, a hint of desire in his voice. She let out the breath she'd been holding and smiled weakly at him. James looks so handsome, she thought, a flush on her cheeks. His long blond hair fell past the collar of his shirt, blue eyes glowing with lust. James walked over to the bed, taking her in his arms. He leaned over, gently kissing her lips....
|
![]() |
|
| Verity | November 20, 2007, 11:12 pm Post #105 |
|
The Story Girl
![]() ![]() ![]()
|
I like it on days when you feel generous!! Jeanie seems sweet. I like how Morag and Violet were there to help her. And again Lars is so funny. I love the balance of the sweet romance, and then somone like Lars coming in and saying "go fuck her senseless." It's perfection!! |
![]() |
|
| 1 user reading this topic (1 Guest and 0 Anonymous) | |
| Go to Next Page | |
| « Previous Topic · Het / Gen · Next Topic » |





![]](http://z1.ifrm.com/static/1/pip_r.png)
Wow... What now?





Really nicely written and so evocative - it brought all the images to my mind and made me really see what was going on. Wonderful!

8:38 PM Jul 10