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Never Walk Alone; Sequel to Black Friday Rule
Topic Started: May 13, 2008, 10:14 am (47,738 Views)
Lucifer's Angel
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That's all right, Maisy. Thanks for catching up :wavey

Chapter 97

Natalya lay in bed, wide awake. Shane was asleep next to her, snoring softly. The window was open as the sea breeze came in from the ocean, a pleasant briny scent filling the air.

This is some sort of joke, tak? I am sleeping in the same bed as my best friend, yet I want to jump him. What would Papa say?, she wondered.

Natalya rolled over and shut her eyes, trying to sleep. She mentally counted sheep, clenching her teeth in frustration when sleep would not come.

Shane mumbled something in his sleep, his eyes slowly fluttering open. Natalya blushed when his eyes focused on her. "What's the matter, lalka?", he murmured sleepily.

Her cheeks turned a deeper shade of pink. "I am sorry, Shane, but I could not sleep", she whispered.

"Hey, that's all right. I reckon this makes you uncomfortable. If you want, I'll sleep on the floor", he said gallantly.

"Oh no, I am fine, Shane", she whispered.

He smiled at her. In the moonlight, Shane realized how pretty she was, with her long blond hair surrounding her face. Even the plain cotton nightgown couldn't hide her slim, yet curvy figure.

Damn it, she's my friend and a virgin to boot. Don't go there, he reminded himself.

Shane's eyes widened in surprise as she leaned over and gently kissed his lips. The touch was gentle, the barest caress of her lips on his. He returned the kiss, her tongue gently probing between his lips. His tongue met hers as their kiss deepened, her arms going around his neck.

Natalya broke the kiss, her cheeks turning dull red. "Oh, I am sorry, Shane", she whispered.

"Don't say that, baby doll. I like it too. Man, I think there's something going on here. If anything happens, I won't hurt you. You'll be in good hands. Now let's get some sleep", he said, gently kissing her lips.

"Shane, I do not wish to sound foolish, but is sex nice?", she blurted out.

Shane burst into laughter. "Oh man, sex is better than nice. Didn't your parents tell you anything?", he asked.

She blushed. "Nie. Mama died when I was a little girl, and Papa never told me anything. I had to find out from books", she whispered.

"If you're suggesting we become fuck buddies, forget it. I don't like that, it's all or nothing. Natalya, will you be my girlfriend?", he asked.

"Tak, Shane. But can we still smoke pot and play Resident Evil?", she asked.

"Of course. I don't want a prissy girlfriend, I want a fun girlfriend. Good night, baby doll", he chuckled.
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That chapter was sweet. :) I'm glad that Shane didn't take Natalya as a fuck buddy right then and there. Natalya seems beyond that.
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Shane I'm proud of ya Avery and Cliff did a good job with ya!
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Chapter 98

Shane woke up the next morning, the brilliant sun coming in through the windows. The sun shone on the blue waters of the sea, reflecting the light like a mirror.

He had to smile when he saw Natalya fast asleep in his arms. She had a slight smile on her lips, her cheeks flushed pink. Her blond hair surrounded her; in the white cotton nightgown, she looked like an angel.

Man, did I imagine the whole thing last night? So Natalya is my girlfriend now? Cool, he chuckled to himself.

Natalya slowly opened her eyes, smiling at him. "Dzien dobry, Shane. You do not regret what you said last night?", she asked, a hint of worry in her voice.

"Relax, baby doll. Us Burtons always keep our word. And I could do worse for a girlfriend, I could have an ugly chick with two teeth", he cracked, as she playfully slapped him.

"Tak, you are such a bad boy, Shane. Let us get some breakfast and go to the beach", she said.


After breakfast, Shane and Natalya walked towards the beach. It was a warm summer's day with a slight breeze coming in from the sea, the pungent briny scent of the ocean hanging in the air.

The beaches themselves were flat and sandy beyond the sand dunes, thin ribbons of golden sand meeting up with the blue-green sea. The dunes were about ten feet tall and covered with scraggly grass and purplish heather, the fragile plants clinging to the sand.

They were virtually the only other people on the beach except for some fishermen cleaning their nets. The sea was at low tide, the high tide mark showing as the darker sand near the shore. Seagulls swooped down to catch stray fish from the fishermen, their loud shrieks a contrast to the whoosh of the waves.

"It's not California, but this is gorgeous. I wish I knew how to paint, I'd like to draw this", said Shane thoughtfully.

"Tak, it is lovely. But the water must be so cold", she replied, wrapping her arms around her body.

"Don't do that, baby doll. You got me to keep you warm", he teased.

"You are very naughty boy", she giggled.

They walked on for a bit when they came to a most unusual sight. A church lay buried in the sand up to the belfry, the rest of it beneath the dunes. Its black roof and white walls were incongruous against the tawny sand, as though a giant had decided to bury it for their amusement.

"Man, what the hell? That must've been one helluva sandstorm", he said.

"And why did they not dig it out? I hope there is nobody in there", she shuddered.

"Yeah, weird", he replied.
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I loved the description of the beach with the fishermen and their nets and the seagulls. I could just smell the water and hear the sound of the waves, and the seagulls squawking. I LOVED it. It's what I needed this morning.
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That buried church sounds dead creepy!!!
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I am SO glad Shane and Natalya finally made a bigger step in their relationship. It was very sweet of him not to jump her bones OR just want to screw around with her- few guys his age really want any sort of emotional commitment.

I can't wait to hear more about that buried church. That sounds incredibly cool. I love creepy stuff like that.
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"The beaches themselves were flat and sandy beyond the sand dunes, thin ribbons of golden sand meeting up with the blue-green sea. The dunes were about ten feet tall and covered with scraggly grass and purplish heather, the fragile plants clinging to the sand." that was so beautiful!! :heart:

So Natalya and Shane are a couple now! :nanner: I really like how Shane isn't rushing anything :tu: . And I agree, that buried church does sound creepy :o Cool :biggrin
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i love what you've written so far, Vanessa. Your description of Catronia makes me feel like a toad though. i HATE being big-boned, and unfortunatly diet and exercise really wont help me get smaller than a size 13
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Thanks Falyssa for catching up, ownage :horns2 . Catriona is my vision of I'd like to be, in real life, I am short, have brown hair and wear glasses, plus I'm very shy and I don't think I'd have the guts to go onstage and sing like her or be in a relationship with two guys :blush: Here's another chapter :)

Chapter 99

The following morning, they were standing at the deck of the ferry taking them to Oslo. It was docked in the harbor, a massive gleaming white boat bobbing in the water.

"I hope you ate the ginger, Shane", said Natalya.

"Of course, baby doll. I don't wanna get seasick, especially if we're going to do a lot of travel on boats. Wait until you see the fjords, there's a cruise that shows you all the big ones. And I wanna take the ferry to Trondheim, it's at night, but the coast is gorgeous at night", he said dreamily.

"Shane, I did not know you were a poet. Have you seen that before?", she asked curiously.

"No, but I saw it in a book. It was so beautiful, the moon and the stars shining on the water, and you can barely make out the shore", he replied, a slight smile on his lips.

Natalya was impressed by his words. He has such a way with words, like a poet. I do want to see that for myself, it all sounds so beautiful, she mused.

The passengers all boarded the ferry, the whistle tooting loudly in the still air. It raised anchor and was towed out of the harbor by a tugboat, the small red boat towing the white ship out to sea.

It was a pleasant summer day, a slight breeze coming in from the sea. The red and white Danish flag on the mast flapped merrily in the breeze, the vivid colors a contrast to the blue of the water and sky.

"This is about eight hours?", she asked.

"Yeah, lucky we got a cabin. Like I said, we have an unlimited budget and I intend to show you a good time, baby doll. Speaking of which", he chuckled, leading them into their cabin.

It was located just below deck, insulated from the roar of the engine and the patter of feet above. It was cozy and homey, a hardwood floor adorned with throw rugs in warm earth tones. A tiny dresser had a lamp on top, two drawers below. A small walk in closet had just enough room for their suitcases, a bathroom barely larger than the closet next to it.

Natalya took off her shoes, lying down on the bed. Shane smiled at her, joining her on the bed. She looked so innocent and pretty in her jeans and pink t-shirt, her hair in a long braid down her back.

I probably have a month or more with this girl. I don't wanna rush her, though, it'll only scare her, he mused.

She snuggled close to him, her head resting on his shoulder. He wrapped his arms around her waist, his face buried in her soft hair. She smiled up at him, gently kissing his lips.

"Bad girl. We're on a ship with a bunch of other people. I won't rush you, we got a lot of time", he said, kissing her again.

Natalya moaned in delight as his lips increased the pressure. She returned the kiss and his tongue probed inside her mouth, toying with hers. She mewled in delight when he unbuttoned her blouse to expose her breasts.

"Relax, baby doll", he whispered. He cupped her breasts, his fingers gently rubbing her nipples. The pink tips hardened at his touch, her breath in shallow gasps. Shane smiled wolfishly at her, lowering his face to her breast and taking the nipple into his mouth.

"Ooh Shane", she mewled, grasping onto his hair. He chuckled against her flesh as he continued to lick and suck on her nipples. Her soft moans and cries of delight filled his ears, as he continued to feat on her aroused flesh.

Shane lifted his face from her breasts and smiled at her. Her cheeks were flushed and her breathing heavy, her blue eyes wide.

"Jak to milo", she panted.

"It's better than nice, baby doll. Just you wait", he chuckled.
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Oooo Naughty Naughty!!!
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I felt a little sorry for Shane when he was thinking that he might only have a month or two more with Natalya. Poor guy. Hopefully, he'll have more time than that. :wink

jeans and pink t-shirt

Hey! That's what I have on today.

This chapter rocked!!! I would LOVE to go on a cruise.
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Too bad their time together is limited :( , I hope they will get some more of it too! I like the fact Natalya is becoming more brave with Shane :)
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And this is Oslo: Oslo

Chapter 100

The ferry arrived in Oslo eight hours later, right on schedule. The city arose from the sea in its fjord dotted with tiny green islands. The towers of the buildings were hemmed in by towering green mountains, the sun shining on the blue waters, the rays of the sun like light from a polished diamond casting it's light on emeralds and sapphires.

"I know, Oslo is gorgeous. What a place to put a city, right? Well, we made reservations before we left, we're staying at the Continental, Metallica always stay there when playing Oslo", he explained.

Natalya nodded; she was too busy looking at the city. The scenic area just accentuated the clean, soaring lines of the city, handsome brick buildings in the center along with the skyscrapers. The harbor was crowded with other ferries and pleasure boats, as they bobbed on the water, the sun shining brilliantly on the blue waters.

Shane grabbed their bags as they disembarked. "Stay close to me, baby doll", he warned, as he hailed a taxi.

"Hvor gjore dem onsker ga?", asked the driver, a middle-aged man in a flat cap.

"The Continental Hotel, sir", he replied.

"Oh, you are American? I have relatives in North Dakota", he said, speaking with a slight Norwegian accent.

"Yeah, from San Francisco, but my girlfriend is from Poland. I'm Shane Burton", he said, extending his hand.

The driver shook his hand. "I am Bjorn Olsen. Is this your first trip to Oslo?", he asked, as he drove away.

"No, I've been here before", he replied.

"How long do you intend to stay?", he asked.

"A couple of days. Oslo is so beautiful, I want to see the Viking Ship Museum and Vigeland park and some other museums, maybe the Royal Palace if we have time. After that, we are headed north", said Natalya.

"Well, here we are. I hope you enjoy your stay here. That will be fifty kronor", said Bjorn, as Shane paid him.

The Continental was an elegant red brick building with white wooden trim and black shutters over the windows. The lawn outside was a brilliant shade of green, pots of red geraniums at the entrance.

Inside, it was decorated in a simple, yet elegant Georgian style. The lobby had a dark pine floor with carpets in a rich, deep dark pink like salmon, the walls a lighter shade of pink with tiny painted violets. In the middle of the lobby was small green bronze fountain with a dolphin squirting water from it's mouth, pink leather couches clustered around it. Soft classical music wafted from the speakers, a pleasant compliment to the gurgling of the fountain.

The desk clerk looked up, smiling in welcome. He was a young man in a maroon blazer and black slacks, his blond hair cut short and his blue eyes alert.

"God Dag", he said.

"Good afternoon. Reservation under Burton", he said.

The clerk nodded and typed something into the computer. "Ah, here it is. Enjoy your stay, Mr. Burton and Miss Stankowski", he said, handing them their keys.

"You are gonna love this place, baby doll", he enthused, leading them upstairs to their room. The elevator stopped at the sixth floor as he led her down the hall. It was done in the same pine floor and pink walls as the lobby, the doors also of pine with brass plaques on their fronts.

Shane opened the door and led her inside. Natalya's eyes widened in delight, a smile forming on her lips. The hotel room was pink, but the lush deep pink of salmon or pink pearls, an earthy, sensual color. The carpet was thick and soft under her feet, the wallpaper adorned with tiny white roses, the white barely noticeable. It was dominated by an enormous four-poster bed with a white lacy canopy, soft pink pillows and a lacy quilt on top.

"I know, I had an idea you'd like it, baby", he drawled.

"If all the rooms are pink, I cannot believe your uncles would like it", she teased.

"Only the rooms on the sixth floor are pink. The rest of the floors are in different colors", he explained.

Natalya barely heard him, examining the bathroom. Heat rose to her cheeks when she saw the pink marble Jacuzzi and the enormous vanity.

"If you want, I can join you in there" he chuckled, as her cheeks turned redder.
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That hotel sounded pretty badass. It was very nice and very totally kick ass of Lars to pay for it. I want an Uncle Lars :lol:

Pink hotel rooms rock!!!!!! :horns:
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