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| Taimi | July 28, 2008, 11:08 pm Post #406 |
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Hey, Vanessa, you've got me glued to my sceen, metallichicks.com is my homepage, i check here before i check my email |
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| Wishful | July 29, 2008, 4:56 am Post #407 |
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Wow they sure are lucky having Uncle Lars paying for everything, I'd love to be able to have all that luxury and class!!! |
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| Lucifer's Angel | July 29, 2008, 9:15 am Post #408 |
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Thanks, ladies These chapters represent my dream vacation. I've had this obsession with Scandinavia ever since I was a kid, listening to my mother's ABBA records. I have a lot of books, maps and phrasebooks relating to Scandinavia, a lot of the information comes from either the phrasebooks or my copy of Rough Guide to Scandinavia. I have phrasebooks in Norwegian, Danish, and Finnish, so yes, those are proper phrases, and those are real hotels and real sights. Chapter 101 Natalya blushed guiltily, her cheeks turning deep pink. "Hah, gotcha there, you naughty girl. Don't worry, I can be a perfect gentleman", he said, bowing down and kissing her hand. "Well, ah, that sounds good. But what is a Jacuzzi like?", she asked. "Oh, they're awesome. It's like a big bubble bath, you're gonna love it. Let me get it ready for you", he said, going into the bathroom. Natalya sat down on the bed and kicked off her shoes. Her heart pounded in anticipation and not a bit of lust, imagining being in the tub with Shane. Oh my, you are acting silly. Shane is a gentleman, he will not force you, she reminded herself. "It's ready, you can come in", said Shane. Natalya took a deep breath and walked on shaking legs towards the bathroom. Shane was sitting in the tub, the bubbles up to the middle of his chest. His auburn hair was tied back from his face, a welcoming smile on his lips. "Please turn around, Shane, so I can undress", she whispered. "Of course, baby doll", he chuckled, turning his head and closing his eyes. Natalya quickly took off her clothes and hesitantly made her way towards the Jacuzzi. Shane heard the water slosh in the tub as she entered it. With his eyes still closed, he gently took her arm and led her towards the platform in the back, sitting her on his lap. "Relax, baby doll", he murmured. Natalya was tense at first, but the warm bubbly water took hold, as she relaxed in his embrace. She snuggled against him, her head resting against his chest. Shane put a hand on her hip to hold her steady, hearing her sharp intake of breath. "Don't worry, relax", he murmured, grabbing a sponge and gently washing her body. Natalya shivered at his soft caresses, running the sponge almost tenderly over her body. She heard an audible plop as the sponge sank to the water, as he held her tighter in his lap. She felt one hand on her hip and another slowly move upward to cup a breast, the nipple instantly hardening. "Shane!", she squealed. "Relax, baby doll. You're gonna love it", he chuckled, both of his hands on her breasts. Natalya's heart beat under his touch, a warm ache growing in her belly. She relaxed and sank back down on his lap, sighing as he toyed with her breasts. The hard pink nubs peaked out of the bubbly water as he continued to toy with her breasts. Her eyes widened when she felt one of his hands move lower down her body, the other still on her breast. Natalya squealed in surprise whens he felt him part her legs, a finger teasing her most intimate flesh. "I know, you're gonna love it", he whispered in her ear. His finger slowly moved inside her, as she whimpered. Shane gently bit her neck as he inserted another finger. Natalya sank back against him, moaning in delight as he played with her aroused flesh. She closed her eyes as a pleasant burning sensation grew in her belly, moving her hips against his as she tried to find that elusive peak. "You're close", he whispered, finding that sensitive bundle of nerves and softly pinching it. Natalya closed her eyes as the sensation overcame her, panting heavily and muttering in Polish. Shane held her until her breathing returned to normal. He had to smile at her flushed cheeks and sparkling blue eyes, her full pink lips turned up in a smile. "You really liked that, baby doll?", he chuckled, carrying her out of the tub. He handed her a towel before wrapping one around his body. "Tak, Shane", she giggled. "Bad girl. We'll relax for a bit then get something to eat, we're going to have fun later", he chuckled slyly. |
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| Verity | July 29, 2008, 10:21 am Post #409 |
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Jacuzzi tubs rock! Really they do. I have one, but I have never used it. I hate cleaning those large bath tubs, and I like showers more instead. They are quicker. But someday I will use my jacuzzi tub. I like Shane and Natalya together. I think I will call them Shanetalya. awesomeness! |
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| Wishful | July 30, 2008, 5:36 am Post #410 |
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*PHEW* HOT! Damn I'd love a jacuzzi tub, you'd never get me and Gav out of it
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| Lucifer's Angel | July 30, 2008, 9:04 am Post #411 |
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Chapter 102 They dried off and got dressed to go out for dinner. Shane quickly got dressed, putting on a pair of jeans and a clean Misfits t-shirt, combing his hair until it gleamed. I don't look too bad, he chuckled to himself. The knob of the door opened and Natalya stepped out. Shane's eyes lit up when he saw her, his gaze raking over her body. She wore a sky-blue slip dress held up by spaghetti straps, her blond air loose except for two thin braids on each side. her face had only the barest makeup, some clear gloss on her lips and a bit of eyeshadow, which made her eyes more blue. "You look beautiful, lalka", he murmured, bringing her hand to his lips. Natalya giggled nervously, a pink blush on her cheeks. "Dziekuje, Shane", she whispered. "No, thank you for being my girlfriend, lalka", he said gallantly, offering her his arm. They made their way downstairs to the hotel restaurant. Many of the people raised an eyebrow at their appearance, a long-haired metalhead with a beautiful, elegant blond. "Table for two", Shane told the maitre'd. He was a middle-aged man in a black suit, wispy gray hair combed over his bald spot. "Please follow me," he said, leading them inside. The restaurant was small yet elegant, the decor all in pale blues and greens, the colors of the ocean. The carpet was soft under their feet, the color of the sky on a spring day, while the walls were a slightly warmer shade of blue with the faintest hint of lavender. Crystal chandeliers hung overhead, the delicate glass reflecting the light of the candles mounted on the tables. The maitre'd led them to a table all the way in the back, handing them their menus before discreetly leaving. Shane held out the chair for her, as she raised an eyebrow. "Hey, Mom told me to be a gentleman. I am a Burton, but I'm not a total bum", he cracked. "Przepraszam, Shane. But it is different now that I am your girlfriend", she replied shyly. "Don't sweat it, baby doll. Just ask Kitty, I'm not a pig. You're my girl, and I always treat my girls good", he boasted. "Am I just another of your girls then?", she asked slyly. "Of course not, you're my special girl, lalka. If I ever hurt you, you got a right to kick my ass and then have your dad kick my ass", he said solemnly, but his blue eyes twinkled with mischief. "I do not want Papa kicking your ass, so you have better be a good boy", she teased. "Of course, but that doesn't mean I can't be a bad boy as well", he chuckled. The waiter took their orders and left them alone. "What do you want to see tomorrow?", asked Natalya. Shane took a sip of his beer. "I wanna show you the Viking Ship Museum, that is so rad. And you gotta see Vigelund Park, the sculptures there are phenomenal, they look so real. From here, we go onto Bergen, and Trondheim, those cities are great too. After that, we head north to see the Midnight Sun., that is awesome", he enthused. Natalya was touched by his enthusiasm. His blue eyes sparkled with delight, his lips turned up in a smile and his cheeks pink. I want to see all that he described, the Midnight Sun sounds especially fascinating, she mused. "You're gonna love it, baby doll. I can't wait to show you", he said, a dreamy smile on his lips. |
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| Verity | July 30, 2008, 10:18 am Post #412 |
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Dressing up at fancy restaurants is fun. It's nice to see Shane behaving himself. It's very true. I have noticed that long haired, metal-like, dudes can have quite the sweet and romantic streak in them, more so than a lot of other guys that I've known. That chapter was sweet.
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| Lucifer's Angel | July 31, 2008, 9:09 am Post #413 |
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Chapter 103 Shane paid for their food and led her back upstairs. Natalya's heart pounded in anticipation, a tingling sensation in the pit of her stomach. "Relax, lalka", he murmured, tucking a strand of hair behind her ear and leading her inside their room. Natalya sat down on the bed and kicked off her shoes, a shy smile on her lips. Shane sat down next to her, putting an arm around her waist. He buried his face in her hair, putting an arm around her waist. He buried his face in her hair, inhaling the fresh rose scent of her. "Relax, lalka. You'll like it" he murmured, gently kissing her lips. The kiss was gentle at first, the barest caress of his lips on hers. Shane gradually deepened the kiss, her tongue hesitantly parting his lips. He growled with approval, his tongue fencing with hers. They fell onto the bed as their lips met in hungry kisses, their tongues mating in a passionate dance. Natalya shivered as his hands roamed over her body, feeling her around the silk. She felt an ache between her legs, a coil of heat slowly building in her body. Shane broke the kiss, the lust in his blue eyes making her shiver. He quickly removed his own shirt and slipped the dress off her body. "I don't wanna spoil that pretty dress, baby doll", he chuckled, removing the dress from her body. Underneath the blue silk she wore a thin, gauzy white slip, the gossamer material barely covering her body. "I like that, it's almost as good as seeing you naked", he drawled, as she blushed prettily. Shane kissed her again as he unzipped his jeans. Her eyes widened in surprise when she saw that he wore only boxers. "I know, I'm not ugly, Natalya. Just relax and enjoy", he murmured, removing the slip from her body. She lay nude before him on the bed, trembling under his intense gaze. "You're beautiful", he murmured, his eyes raking over her body. Natalya smiled shyly at him, as he lay next to her and gently stroked her thigh. Shane kissed her as his hand moved upward to cup a breast, the nipple hardening under his touch. Natalya stifled a moan as he kissed her nipple before sucking it into his mouth. She moaned softly as his lips and tongue caressed the hardened nub, the coil of heat growing in her belly. "Ooh Shane", she mewled. He said nothing but buried his face in her breasts, gorging on her sweet flesh. Natalya grasped onto his hair as he continued to lick and suck on her breasts, his rough tongue gently rubbing against her taut nipples. Shane raised his face from her breasts, a devilish gleam in his eyes. "Close your eyes and enjoy, baby doll", he murmured. She nodded mutely, her heart pounding in anticipation. He kissed her lips before moving down her throat, licking and sucking on her sweet flesh. Natalya could feel him part her legs, moaning softly when he touched her aroused flesh. "Bad girl, lalka", he chuckled, toying with her aroused flesh. Natalya felt him part her legs wider as he settled in between them. She felt him place a pillow under her to elevate her body, his fingers gently exploring her. She gasped loudly as his fingers were replaced by his tongue, flicking and lapping at her. "Moj Bog!", she cried out. Shane chuckled against her, continuing to lick and suck on her aroused flesh. Natalya squirmed under him, her heart fluttery with delight and the flame in her belly glowing brighter. Every flick of his tongue made her whimper in delight as he held her thighs open and ate at her greedily. Natalya could feel the coil of heat in her belly grow ever tighter, all sensation centered between her legs. She clutched onto his hair as she felt herself close to her peak, the feel of his lips and tongue like sparks of electricity against her flesh. "Oh Shane, oh yes, kurwa, ohh!", she moaned, as her vision splintered into a million tiny lights. Shane continued to lick at her, feeling the aftershocks tremble through her body. He finally emerged from between her legs, smiling at the sight before him. Natalya was sprawled on the bed, her hair tangled around her face and her blue eyes sparkling with delight. Her body was languid and flushed pink, her breathing slowly returning to normal. "Ono bylo wspanialy", she panted. "I know", he chuckled. "What about you, Shane?", she asked innocently. "I'll be fine, baby doll. I knew you'd like it, and I can wait", he chuckled, embracing her. |
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| Verity | July 31, 2008, 10:42 am Post #414 |
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Natalya is getting quite the education. I laughed so hard when she was so surprised that he only wore boxers. What the hell does she want him to wear under his jeans? A parka? Shane seems very sweet in this, I'm just worried over what Natalya's old man is going to say about things. |
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| maisy blue | July 31, 2008, 6:19 pm Post #415 |
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Sorry again about not being able to comment- it's been a crazy week. I have to say, this vacation is absolutely dreamy. From the beautiful (romantic) ferry ride, to the gorgeous hotel room (I LOVE the way you described the pink as "sensual"...) to the Jacuzzi to the romantic dinner and now dessert.... It's a perfect experience for both of them Natalya is SUCH a lucky girl. I hope she knows. You are such a great writer. You bring everything to life so elegantly. I feel like I'm traveling along with Shane and Natalya. You definitely know your stuff! Are all the rooms on the sixth floor of the hotel really pink?! |
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| Wishful | August 1, 2008, 5:35 am Post #416 |
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Crikey that was so hot! I swear you could write a great porn movie script!!! |
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| Lucifer's Angel | August 1, 2008, 9:22 am Post #417 |
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Thanks Maisy for catching up. I'm not sure if the floor is really pink, but I thought it was a good image. And thank you, Claire . As for this chapter, many restaurants in Scandinavia don't open until noon, so most hotels have a breakfast buffet thrown in with the price of the room so travelers can have a big breakfast before heading out. It's recommended that tourists fill up on them so they can skip out on lunch, as food prices can be rather high over there. You can tell I wrote this hungry:wink Chapter 104 Shane woke up the next morning, his eyes slowly fluttering open as the morning light came in through the window. He stretched and rolled over, smiling when he saw Natalya fast asleep. She was snuggled against him, a slight smile on her lips and her skin flushed pink. She looks so sweet, I don't want to wake her up, he mused. He carefully swept aside the blanket, a hand toying with her breast. The nipple hardened instantly under his touch, as she moved closer against him. Shane nuzzled her throat, his hands still toying with her breasts. Her eyes fluttered open, a hazy gleam of lust already in them. "Oh yes, Shane", she murmured, biting back a moan as he kissed a nipple. He let go of her breasts and winked at her. "That was your wake-up call, lalka. After breakfast, we are going to explore the city", he chuckled, smiling at the thwarted lust on her face. "I am going to get you, Shane Burton", she vowed. "I'm looking forward to that, lalka", he purred, a gleam in his blue eyes. After they took a shower, Shane and Natalya got dressed and went downstairs for breakfast. He wore jeans and a Motorhead shirt, while she wore jeans and a purple blouse, her hair in two long braids. A breakfast buffet had been set up in the lounge downstairs. Long tables held every sort of breakfast food imaginable: eggs prepared every way; ham, bacon and sausage; cereals; oatmeal; toast; butter; various jams and jellies; and even pickled herrings. Another table had coffee, tea, milk, buttermilk, orange, apple and grapefruit juices and sodas. They grabbed some coffee and heaped their plates with food, finding a table in the corner. "Almost all hotels here have a buffet, it's included with the price of the room. Sometimes you pay for it, but it's cheap and better than McDonald's. Eat up, so we don't have to get lunch later", said Shane. "Where do you want to go?", she asked, taking a bite of her poached egg. "The Viking Ship Museum, and if we have time, Vigelund Park. I don't want to do everything at once, we'll be exhausted. We got plenty of time", he said, discreetly pinching a piece of bacon from her plate. "Tak, you are so greedy, Shane. Go get your own bacon", she chided. "Yeah, but it's yours. It tastes better when it comes from a girl's plate", he teased. "Very funny, Shane. Do you say the same thing about your sister?", she chuckled. "No, she doesn't count", he joked, as they went back to get seconds. The continued eating and talking, Shane talking about the various sights in Oslo. Natalya listened to him while eating, hanging on each word. The way he described things intrigued her, his blue eyes glowing with excitement. I cannot wait to see the rest of Norway, it sounds so beautiful, she thought. "Wow, that's your third plate", he said approvingly, helping himself to his own plate. "Tak, you did say we need to fill up. And I am not fat", she retorted, munching on a piece of buttered toast. "I like that, lalka. Girls who got a good appetite, they got an appetite for something else", he chuckled slyly. "Very funny. Let us finish breakfast", she said. |
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| Verity | August 1, 2008, 10:36 am Post #418 |
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Well if I ever go to Scandinavia the restaurants not opening until noon won't be a problem, because it will probably be just about noon by the time that I get my sorry ass out of bed and out to greet the world. That breakfast sounded awesome though. Much better than my shitty breakfast of an untoasted frozen waffle. I'm more of a light breakfast type of person, but that breakfast did sound pretty badass except for the pickled herring. My father-in-law loves pickled herring. He's always eating that shit. He gave me some once and I couldn't even politely choke it down. My father-in-law eats the the most random shit though. Like pickled bologna. He loves to snack on it and it's sooooo nasty, IMO. Shanetalya are really sweet together. I hope that they have fun on their travels. This story rules!!
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| maisy blue | August 1, 2008, 11:16 am Post #419 |
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ARGHH! That would wake ME up! And I'd be so frustrated that Shane didn't finish what he started!! That breakfast sounded incredible. I rarely eat breakfast but I LOVE breakfast food. I wish more restaurants served it round the clock. Like Ashley, we get going late around here. Even my daughter sleeps super late (she's just getting up NOW!!) Pancakes....I envy Natalya- if I ate three plates of food, I'd gain 15 pounds instantly. |
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| Wishful | August 2, 2008, 7:22 am Post #420 |
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Wish I had the money to travel the world cos I'd seriously love too!! Everything you describe in this, is making me hungry for the sights themselves---Oh well maybe In the next lifetime!!!
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These chapters represent my dream vacation. I've had this obsession with Scandinavia ever since I was a kid, listening to my mother's ABBA records. I have a lot of books, maps and phrasebooks relating to Scandinavia, a lot of the information comes from either the phrasebooks or my copy of Rough Guide to Scandinavia. I have phrasebooks in Norwegian, Danish, and Finnish, so yes, those are proper phrases, and those are real hotels and real sights.
Really they do. I have one, but I have never used it. I hate cleaning those large bath tubs, and I like showers more instead. They are quicker. But someday I will use my jacuzzi tub.
. As for this chapter, many restaurants in Scandinavia don't open until noon, so most hotels have a breakfast buffet thrown in with the price of the room so travelers can have a big breakfast before heading out. It's recommended that tourists fill up on them so they can skip out on lunch, as food prices can be rather high over there. You can tell I wrote this hungry:wink

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