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| Lucifer's Angel | August 12, 2008, 9:26 am Post #466 |
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Thanks Maggie for catching up My cousin and his wife named her after Ava Gardner, the actress, they're big fans of her movies. Chapter 117 After soaking in the Jacuzzi, Shane and Natalya got dressed. To their dismay, it had begun to rain, fat drops of water plopping down onto the glass windows. "Crap. At least the hotel has a restaurant and room service, it looks like we might be here for a while", he shrugged. Natalya found the remote and turned on the TV. She idly flipped through the channels, searching for something to watch. Most of the channels were in Norwegian, several American shows dubbed into Norwegian. They had to laugh when they came across American Idol dubbed into Norwegian. "Moj Bog, that man sings like a donkey", she giggled. A nerdy guy tried to sing Billie Jean by Michael Jackson, but he sang like a donkey with a throat problem, the atonal screeching absolutely horrible to listen to. They laughed when Simon berated the guy in Norwegian, the poor guy turning deep red. "Why do these idiots even bother going on that show? I don't sing great either, but I don't make an ass of myself", he said. "Some people just want to be famous so badly. I would be ashamed of myself if i sang that bad", said Natalya, making a face. "Let's see the rest of the hotel", said Shane, turning off the TV. They took an elevator to the ground floor and had a look around. There was a small restaurant, a newsstand, a beauty parlor and an indoor swimming pool. Most of the guests were taking advantage of the amenities, because of the rain. "Let's go swimming, we'll work up and appetite", he suggested. They went back upstairs to change. Shane wore black swimming trunks, his hair tied back and his chest bare. Natalya wore a simple black bikini, her hair in a bun, but it revealed her slim body with its full breasts, toned belly and long legs. Shane put an arm around her waist, his eyes roaming her body. "I am jealous that other guys are going to see you, lalka. Just kidding, but you are so beautiful", he murmured, leading her to the pool. The pool was half-full, some people swimming laps and kids splashing in the shallow end. It was located in a room made of sea-green tile, the ceiling overhead depicting an underwater scene, painted fish swimming happily. Shane grabbed two towels and found two empty beach chairs, putting down the towels. "Let's take a swim", he said, diving into the deep end. He resurfaced, his head bobbing out of the water and a big smile on his face. "Come on, the water's fine", he said. Natalya dived in after him, her blond head emerging from the water. She shook her head, blue eyes twinkling with amusement. "Let us see who can do the most laps", she challenged. "You're on", he said, shaking her hand. They swam over to the far end, and began to swim. The kids moved aside when they approached, the people watching them curiously. Shane looked up and saw she was half a length ahead of him, her graceful legs propelling her forward. Wow, she's good, he thought, trying to catch up. Shane clung to the edge of the pool, trying to catch his breath. Natalya swam over to him, her blue eyes sparkling with triumph. She had swum twenty laps to his seventeen, and she didn't appear to be tired. "Are you tired, Shane?", she teased. He smiled weakly at her. "Yeah, baby doll. I'm not in great shape like you. Damn, I didn't know you could swim like that", he panted. "I used to go swimming a lot when I was a girl, I learned to swim when I was five. When I was thirteen, I swam across a lake without stopping", she said proudly. "I gotta practice more. I'm going to get you, lalka", he chuckled. "I will look forward to that", she giggled. |
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| Verity | August 12, 2008, 10:21 am Post #467 |
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That pool sounded very badass. I like to swim but I suck at it. I kind of dog paddle around. I'm glad that despite the rain Shanetalya still managed to have a very good time. Rock on!!
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| Wishful | August 12, 2008, 2:34 pm Post #468 |
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That hotel sounds badass hmmm I love swimming but I'm too unfit to do laps too!!! |
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| maisy blue | August 12, 2008, 5:23 pm Post #469 |
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LOVED this part, of course!! I love swimming. LOVE. Of course, in sucky real life, when people try and swim laps in a public pool, kids NEVER get out of the way. They usually try even harder to get IN the way. That pool sounded amazing. Clean and fun. |
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| Battery | August 13, 2008, 8:38 am Post #470 |
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Wow, Natalya is in a very good shape indeed ! Swimming sounds lovely, it's was so hot here (now the storm is coming ). I laughed when they were watching dubbed Idol , I really hate dubbing, it always sounds stupid to me
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| Lucifer's Angel | August 13, 2008, 9:21 am Post #471 |
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Well, this is the first day of Mom's vacation, and she has to replace the muffler on the car. Fun, eh? *rolls eyes* Chapter 118 "What are you going to do?", asked Natalya, her blue eyes wide. Shane smiled at her, grasping her hands and tying them to the bedposts with a belt. "Just be a good girl, wait and see", he drawled. Natalya lay on the bed, tied down and naked except for her panties. Her heart pounded in anticipation and trepidation, wondering what he was going to do. "Don't worry, I won't hurt you, baby doll. "Just relax and enjoy, you are really going to like this", he murmured, kissing her lips. Shane ran his fingers through her soft blond hair as he kissed her, his tongue parting her lips. She opened her lips to receive his tongue, moaning as it toyed with hers. Their tongues met in a frenzied dance, the delicate touch of his hands in her hair making her shiver. His lips left hers and planted tiny kisses on her face, each kiss like the caress of butterfly wings. She trembled slightly as his lips traveled down her throat to lick and suck on the sensitive skin, raising goosebumps on her flesh. Her eyes widened in delight when his lips fastened onto a nipple, his lips and tongue caressing the hard bud. "Ooh Shane", she murmured. Shane buried his face in her breasts, feasting on the soft, sweet flesh of her breasts, feasting on the soft sweet flesh. Natalya squirmed under him, soft moans and gasps coming from her lips. "It gets better, lalka", he murmured, moving to her other breast. The cool air hit her damp nipple, causing her to gasp in surprise. He continued licking and sucking on her hard nipples, feeling her squirm under him. He lifted his face from her breasts, the lust in his blue eyes making her shiver. Shane gently stroked her thigh and slid her panties down her legs. Natalya parted her legs eagerly, sighing in pleasure as he stroked her moist flesh. "You're wet already, lalka", he chuckled in triumph. Natalya moaned softly as his hand stroked her, his finger probing inside her body. Shane winked at her, kissing her lips before parting her legs wider, burying his face between her thighs. Natalya cooed in delight, sighing when she saw his auburn hair spread out on her thighs. His fingers gently toyed with her, his lips and tongue exploring her intimately. She shuddered at every flick and caress of his tongue, tiny sparks of electricity flying up at his touch. Soft moans and gasps escaped her lips, as she whimpered in Polish. She bucked against his mouth, the coil of heat in her belly growing ever tighter. Her eyes closed against the rapture, the coil bursting within her. She muttered curses in Polish, as he continued to lick at her, the aftershocks trembling her body. Shane emerged from between her legs, his lips turned up in a grin that made him look like a hungry wolf. Natalya la on the bed like a rag doll, her hair loose and wanton and her skin flushed pink from her orgasm. Her blue eyes were wide and dazed from shock, her lips parted and her tongue hanging out slightly. "Co to jest?", she gasped. "That was only the beginning, lalka", he chuckled. Shane untied her from the bedposts, gently rubbing the marks on her wrists. "The marks will fade, don't worry. I knew you'd like it", he cracked. "Where did you learn that?", she asked, giving him a look. Shane blushed. "I saw it in a porno, the girl really seemed to like it. I don't watch much porno, though, only a little", he added hastily. Natalya smiled saucily at him and snuggled onto his lap. She played with his hair and nuzzled his throat, planting tiny kisses there. "I see, Shane. But I do not want you watching these pornos, you have me", she chided. "Have you ever seen a porno before, lalka?", he asked. Natalya turned bright red at his question. "Absolutely not! Papa is a good Catholic, he never watched one either, what sort of girl do you think I am? I have heard bad things about those movies", she admonished. "All right, lalka. Maybe I can change your mind later, it's your turn to play", he chuckled. |
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| Verity | August 13, 2008, 11:41 am Post #472 |
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Natalya was funny at the end. Though I have to sort of agree with her. Sometimes pornos can be funny, but usually I'm always like WTF? That doesn't turn me on. Anywho, that chapter was hot and steamy. Harlequin needs to hire you to write novels for them. If they did, their books would be much better.
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| Wishful | August 13, 2008, 12:50 pm Post #473 |
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Nowt wrong with a decent porno! did I just say that? hahahahaha
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| maisy blue | August 13, 2008, 5:10 pm Post #474 |
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I have yet to see a decent porno- they are always made for the guys and not the girls! They make me squirm and giggle, to be honest. I know I keep saying it, but Natalya is going to be *really* disappointed when she realizes how incredible Shane is compared to other men. I hope the two of them can continue their romance beyond their trip. I agree with Ashley- you should be writing novels. I'd love a steamy novel with characters that weren't super cheesy! You write a perfect mix, Vanessa- all your characters are really down to earth and relatable. No unnecessary personal dramatic "woe is me!!" bullshit. |
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| Lucifer's Angel | August 14, 2008, 9:34 am Post #475 |
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Aww, thanks girls I don't think there's a market for fan fics quite like this, oh well, it's fun for us all And I don't like pornos either, I once watched one of Erik's pornos to see what he sees in them. It was some chick and an ugly dude, they were just getting it on with no preliminaries, it was boring and pointless as hell. Maybe it's a guy thing to watch this, I don't know any girls who get off on porno, we prefer romance novels. Maybe it's biological, I don't know Chapter 119 Natalya stirred in her sleep, the sun's rays streaming in through the windows. She slowly opened her eyes, blinking several times at the dim light. She had to smile when she saw Shane's arms around her waist, holding her close. He looks so cute, she giggled. He was still fast asleep, a slight smile on his lips and his auburn hair tangled around his face. Natalya gently stroked his hair, as he unconsciously put a hand on her thigh. This is turning out to be one heck of a trip. We have seen so many places, I am in love with my best friend and I have lost my virginity to him. I think I love him, she thought, her eyes widening at the realization. Shane opened his eyes, smiling when he saw she was awake. "Good morning, lalka", he murmured. "Dzien dobry, Shane. What do you want to do today?", she asked. "It looks good outside, we'll walk around and see if there's any good museums. Tomorrow, we take the train to Bodo, it leaves at five in the morning, though. Don't worry, we can sleep on the train, we'll arrive in the afternoon and check in. From there, we take a ferry to the Lofoten Islands, they look gorgeous, like the Alps on the water. By tomorrow, we'll be able to see the Midnight Sun", he replied. "Oh, I cannot wait. We will be above the Arctic Circle?", she asked. "Yeah. This is so rad, I don't think anyone in Metallica has ever been that far North. We should reach Nordkapp by the end of the week, you can send a postcard from there saying you were at the top of Europe", he chuckled. "I want to send a postcard to Papa, I'm sure he will like it", she giggled. "Yeah, I don't want your daddy after me with the shotgun. Let's get some breakfast and check out the city", he said. After filling up at the breakfast buffet downstairs, Shane and Natalya set out to explore the city. It was a lovely summer's day, the sky blue with only a few wispy clouds dotting the surface. Several blocks from the hotel near the cathedral was the Museum of Decorative Arts. Shane paid the admission of 40 kronor and led them inside. The museum's collection was quite varied, ranging from objects found in a medieval household to those found in a Victorian one. The medieval furniture was all done in an unusual style, part Louis XV and part Viking motif: chairs and sofas made of pale damask and dark wood, the arms and feet decorated with dragon's head and clawed feet. Natalya gazed at the display of porcelain dishes in a glass case. They were made of the finest, translucent porcelain, almost see-through, decorated with a delicate rim of silver paint around the edges, depicting pine forests, bears and wildflowers. "Nice china there. Mom can't have that in the house, we'd break it", joked Shane. The next room showed enormous tapestries depicting Norwegian folktales and legends. The tapestries were huge, about ten feet by ten feet, woven in brilliantly colored threads, the detail almost life-like. One of them portrayed a troll counting his gold, a man in leather breeches and a white shirt sneaking up behind him. The details were perfect, from the green of the forest and the troll's skin to the brown leather breeches and white shirt of the man. "I can sew, but nothing that big", said Natalya, carefully examining the tapestry. "What do you sew?", he asked, intrigued. "I can sew buttons, of course, and I have sewn shirts. I can do the embroidery for them as well. I once sewed a tablecloth for my Babka, it was very pale pink with roses, white and red", she replied. "Cool. Like that blouse you got for Kitty's birthday?", he asked. "Shane, I sewed it and I did the embroidery. Stores don't sell that sort of clothes", she chided. For Catriona's birthday, she had received a handmade blouse embroidered with tiny red roses and marigolds on the sleeves and collar. The flowers were tiny and delicate, made of only a few threads but they stood out against the white cotton. "Awesome. Uh, can you make me a shirt like that?", he asked shyly. "Tak, but I don't think you would want flowers", she teased. "Nah, but it would be cool if there were Misfits skulls instead, that would kick ass", he enthused. "I will see, Shane", she replied. |
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| Verity | August 14, 2008, 10:30 am Post #476 |
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That's cool that Natalya can sew. I sure can't. I really don't have the patience too. I think that she definitely needs to make Shane a blouse with little skulls on it. The idea of Shane wearing a blouse is just too funny.
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| maisy blue | August 14, 2008, 11:08 am Post #477 |
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I definitely prefer romance novels. They are much more tailored to women's prferences. Watching some blonde with fake boobs pretend to moan while some guy gets himself off always makes me laugh. I guess the porno directors know who their target audience is- and it ain't women, that's for sure!! I bet there IS a huge market for this- metal romances. Just switch around the names a bit and BOOM, you're done. Seriously- you should think about it. That museum sounded excellent. As you can tell, I'm obsessed with museums. I REALLY miss going to the Met in NYC. I dream of it. So your fictions are always really perfect for me- lots of museums and lots of steamy stuff, too! ![]() |
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| Lucifer's Angel | August 14, 2008, 11:24 am Post #478 |
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I've been writing a lot the last few days, so here's another chapter:) Chapter 120 "You say we can sleep on the train, Shane?", asked Natalya. "Yeah, I mean, we do have to get up at three in the morning to catch the train. Just try to sleep on the train", he murmured, running his fingers through her soft blond hair. They were snuggling on the bed, preparing to sleep. The train to Bodo left at five in the morning, so they had to get up very early. Shane held her close and stroked her hair as she snuggled into his embrace. He could feel every breath, every shiver, every beat of her heart. I love this girls, I'm never going to let her go. The realization hit him like a ton of bricks, momentarily stunning him. Is this how Dad felt about Mom?, he wondered. "Shane, are you all right?", she asked, concern in her blue eyes. Shane looked into her eyes, the intense look on his face almost frightening. "I love you, Natalya Stankowski", he murmured. Natalya leaned over and gently kissed his lips. "Kocham ty, Shane", she replied. Shane kissed her again. The kiss was gentle, the briefest of touches against her lips. He planted another kiss on her lips; this one was stronger, the pressure of his lips parting hers. She moaned softly and wrapped her arms around his neck, as his tongue found hers, toying with it. Their lips exchanged fevered kisses, as he removed the slip from her body. Natalya lay nude on the bed, her long blond hair strewn across the pillows. Shane's eyes raked over her body hungrily, making her blush. "Don't do that, lalka. You are so damn beautiful", he growled. He kissed her again as his hands toyed with her breasts, the nipples hardening at his touch. His lips left hers and planted kisses over her face, moving lower to capture a nipple. Natalya mewled in delight as his lips sucked on her breast. The nipple rose under his tongue, the hard pink nub taut in his mouth. She ran her fingers through his hair as he moved to other breast, the cool air hitting her damp nipple. The familiar coil of heat built up in her belly, every touch of his lips and tongue shooting sparks of electricity through her. With great difficulty, Natalya lifted his face from her breasts. She giggled at the confused look on his face and kissed him. "It is your turn, Shane", she murmured. She gently pushed him back onto the bed, running her hands over his chest. Natalya kissed him and nuzzled her throat, moving lower down his body. She removed his underwear and stroked him, before taking him into her mouth. Shane gasped at the sensation, his fingers tangled in her blond hair as she began to lick and suck on him. "Oh yeah", he moaned, watching as she ran her tongue over the tip and kissed it, her head bobbing up and down as she worked on him. He thrust into her mouth and grasped onto her head, feeling himself swell within her mouth. "I'm coming, baby doll", he growled. Natalya continued sucking on him, moaning in delight as he thrust one last time into her mouth, releasing his seed. He cursed under his breath as she cleaned him, her soft moans music to his ears. Natalya released him from her mouth, licking his lips. Shane took her into his arms and kissed her forehead. "Wow, awesome", he chuckled. "I know, I like it a lot. Shane, is that strange?", she asked. "No, that's good. According to Uncle Lars, a lot of girls don't like giving blow jobs or having guys cum in their mouths, they think it's gross. And no, you are not a slut, baby doll. Different strokes for different folks", he cracked. His eyes widened in surprise as she stroked him. "It is my turn, Shane", she chided. "Of course, baby doll", he chuckled. Shane kissed and parted her legs, hearing her sigh against his lips as he stroked her. Natalya's eyes widened as he entered her body, relishing the warmth of her. He broke the kiss as he lay still inside her, his eyes gazing into hers. She wrapped her arms around his neck and kissed him as he began to move into her body. They moved together as one, their lips exchanging passionate kisses. Shane thrust into her body as she moved under him, her hips thrusting against his. Their lovemaking was slow and easy, their bodies rocking against each other. Natalya clutched onto his shoulders, feeling his tongue thrust into her mouth to imitate the movements of his body. The flame in her belly grew brighter, the muscles in her belly tightening as she approached her peak. Shane thrust harder and faster into her body when he felt her squeeze onto his shoulders. Natalya's eyes shut tight against the pleasure, as she moaned in Polish, her vision shattering into a million pieces. He growled in relief, thrusting one last time into her body and releasing into her warmth. They huddled in each other's arms as their heartbeats and breathing went back to normal. Shane buried his face in her hair and inhaled her scent, as she purred in delight. "I love you, baby doll", he murmured. "I love you too, Shane", she whispered. |
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| maisy blue | August 14, 2008, 2:15 pm Post #479 |
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Love this story! I'm so glad to hear that Shane wants to have a relationship with Natalya after the trip is over.
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| Verity | August 14, 2008, 5:02 pm Post #480 |
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That was hot. Long live Shanetalya!!!! I'm also glad that they want to stick together, I just hope that Natalya's old man is down with it. |
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My cousin and his wife named her after Ava Gardner, the actress, they're big fans of her movies.




Swimming sounds lovely, it's was so hot here (now the storm is coming
). I laughed when they were watching dubbed Idol
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did I just say that? hahahahaha

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