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| Lucifer's Angel | September 6, 2008, 9:12 am Post #571 |
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Cool Ashley that you know about Jack Teagarden, ownage :horns2 The forecaster says that we're going to get a lot of rain from Hanna, and that we might get power outages. I don't know about that, we've gotten a lot of rain from hurricanes before and nothing happened. Let's see, if I don't get online tomorrow, that's why. Anyway, here's another chapter. Chapter 150 Dave sat down in one of the hard plastic chairs in the arrival area at San Diego International airport. He tried to get comfortable but his long legs felt cramped in the low chair. I hope she's coming soon, I don't know if I should kill my nephew or what,, he thought sardonically. He'd been angry at Andrew since he'd received the email from Catriona. His rage had almost blinded him, his vision turning red with anger. He had calmed down and went to Priceline, finding the earliest flight to San Diego and sending her the link. I can't wait to see her again, and the kids are coming next week. And we'll go away together, just the two of us. Neither of us has any band business,, he thought. Megadeth had also wrapped up their album, Surrender the Universe, it was already mixed and the band had a month off before their tour. "Flight #811 from San Francisco has just landed, passengers will be getting off shortly", said the voice over the loudspeaker. Half an hour later, the doors of the gate opened, as his heart pounded in anticipation. His heart skipped a beat, a goofy smile forming on his lips when he saw her. Catriona looked stunning in a red and green kilt and an Iron Maiden Trooper shirt, her auburn hair in loose braid down her back. Her hazel eyes lit up when she saw him, rushing into her arms. Dave embraced her tightly, feeling the warmth of her body against him. He kissed her passionately on the lips, breaking the kiss and winking at her. "I'm glad to see you again, Kitty. Later, I don't want to give everyone a show", he teased, taking her hand and leading her to the baggage carousel. He carried her bags and led her to the parking lot, opening the trunk and putting away her bags. Dave opened the door for her hand climbed into the driver's seat, turning on the engine and driving out of the parking lot. "Kitty, I don't know if I should kill Andrew or not", he said, taking the exit to the interstate. "I don't blame you, I didn't tell my family. My uncles and Shane just might kill him, literally. I don't want my family in jail", she replied sardonically. "Don't blame 'em. If some dude did that to my daughter, I'd kill them. Electra's my little girl, no guy better hurt her", he growled. "It's a dad thing. It's the third time I caught him with some chick, that's the last straw. Don't worry, I can kick his ass", she boasted. "I don't doubt it, Kitty. But be careful, Andrew can crank up the charm to get what he wants, I've known that since he was a kid. And I hope that since he doesn't cause trouble with the band. Justis and Electra are coming over next week, I can't wait for you to meet them. And I was planning on going to Scottsdale to visit Junior, we're going together", he said, as they arrived at the house. "Cool, Scottsdale is so beautiful. Is Mr. David going to mind?", she giggled. "Ha, very funny, Miss Kitty. No, he'll understand. Him and Julie got two kids, Roman and Athena. He's settled down a lot, he used to be as wild as me back in the day. And maybe I'll introduce you to Alice, you like that?", he chuckled. "Awesome, but I wanna rest first", she said. "Of course, Miss Kitty", he said gallantly. |
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| Verity | September 6, 2008, 12:47 pm Post #572 |
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The interview between Dave and Kitty was sweet. Just like out of a good old movie. I can't wait to see David pop up, and read about Kitty's time in San Diego. I also am very interested to read about how Dave's kids are going to act towards a much younger girlfriend....this story has such a rich plot and there's so much that you could do with it. It totally all rocks out.I think you're far enough north that Hanna won't bother you much. You'll just get some shitty rain is all. I hope you don't get power outages, they suck. Though I shouldn't complain because I'm in a nice hotel room right now. Right now, we're worried about hurricane Ike and my town isn't even close to being recovered from the last one. Poor Maisy got hit by Faye. I think we all need to get a hotel room somewhere like in the middle of the country and hangout on our computers and write until hurricane season is over.
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| Lucifer's Angel | September 7, 2008, 9:18 am Post #573 |
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That's a great idea, Ashley. But I don't have a laptop, I have a desktop We just got a lot of rain, no power outages. I think that the forecasters wanted to wind people up so they'd buy stuff At least the stores made money.Chapter 151 Catriona's eyes fluttered open, the room coming into focus. She was lying in the middle of Dave's enormous bed, wearing only a slip. Her clothes were neatly folded on a chair, as she turned over and saw him lying next to her. She sank back against the pillows, a smile forming on her lips. It's great to be back, she sighed happily. Dave was sleeping next to her, his red hair spread out on the pillow, the blanket draped over the lower part of his body and his chest bare. Catriona snuggled against him, feeling the warmth of his body against hers. Dave opened his eyes and smiled lazily at her, his hazel eyes warm and tawny. "Good afternoon, Miss Kitty. Sleep well?", he asked. "Yes, Dave", she said, embracing him. Dave held her closer, removing the slip from her body. Her breasts spilled free, as he cupped the soft flesh. He touched her reverently like she was a precious object, filling his hands with the soft globes of her breasts. Catriona mewled softly as his lips fastened onto a breast, his lips brushing against the nipple. The pink bud hardened instantly at his feathery touch, his lips fastening onto her nipple and suckling it into his mouth. She let out a moan and tangled her fingers in his hair as he buried his face in her breasts. His mouth feasted on her breasts, her moans ringing in his ears. Dave gave each nipple one final kiss and lifted his face from her breasts. He chuckled at the lustful gleam in her eyes and kissed her passionately, his tongue plunging in between her lips. Catriona moaned against his lips and wrapped her arms around his neck, her tongue fencing with his. Her hands moved lower down his back, feeling the corded muscles under the skin. He growled under his breath when he felt her hands on his skin, savoring the warmth of her body under his. He broke the kiss and stroked her thigh, as she parted her legs eagerly. "It's been so damn long", he growled, thrusting into her body. Catriona moaned at the contact and clutched onto his shoulders, wrapping her legs around his waist. "That's it, Kitty", he gasped, kissing her lips and thrusting into her body. Their lips exchanged hungry kisses as they moved together on the bed. Dave thrust into her warm willing body, feeling her fingers clutch onto him. Her moans and gasps were music to his ears as she chanted his name like a prayer. Dave moved harder and faster into her writhing body, his heart hammering frantically and his movements fierce. Catriona grasped onto him and yelled his name as she came, her vision splintering into a million pieces. Dave closed his eyes and cursed under his breath, thrusting one last time and releasing into her warmth, as she shuddered around him. They lay tangled onto the bed, breathless and sweaty. Dave took her into his arms as she snuggled against him, her face buried in his chest. "Wow, that was something", he gasped. "I know, I hope I didn't wear you out, Dave", she giggled. "Bad girl, I'm not that old. Let's take a shower, I don't have anything in the fridge and I need to do shopping", he said, his cheeks turning pink. "Hey, that's all right. We gotta get stuff for the kids, do you have a cook, though?", she asked. "No, I just make spaghetti or whatever. I do have a cleaning lady come by three times a week, I'm lousy with this stuff. We leave for Scottsdale tomorrow, the food won't go bad, don't worry", he said. "Why don't we do some shopping for dinner tonight, we'll do the rest of the shopping when we get back", she suggested. "Good idea, Kitty. You are as smart as you are beautiful", he said gallantly, kissing her hand. "You are such a charmer, Dave", she teased, as they went to the bathroom. |
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| Battery | September 7, 2008, 11:16 am Post #574 |
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Kitty and Dave are so sweet together . And this trip to David and his family sounds great Take care, I hope this Hanna hurricane won't harm you in any way!
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| Verity | September 7, 2008, 11:53 am Post #575 |
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I want to borrow Dave's cleaning lady. My house is so trashed inside and out it's disgusting.Anywho- I'm thrilled to see Davtriona in hot swinging action again. It sucks that I'm going to have to wait to find out what happens next because I'm going home today. Just when Davetriona gets back together....oh well hopefully I can catch up soon. I'm glad that Hanna left you alone.
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| maisy blue | September 7, 2008, 9:35 pm Post #576 |
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I'd LOVE a cleaning lady three times a week. Three cats + baby + messy husband = need a cleaning person. I LOVED this chapter. It was so well written- I'm blown away! Vanessa, you REALLY should be writing romance novels. I seriously mean it. Your stories are awesome!! They just flow and are incredibly interesting. I love it!! I'm so happy Kitty and Dave are together again. I want to find out what the heck happened with Andrew, though. What made him change so suddenly?
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| Taimi | September 7, 2008, 9:53 pm Post #577 |
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I hope andrew devlops something nasty, such an ashole for cheating on Kitty Davetronia, all the way!!!!!! |
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| Lucifer's Angel | September 8, 2008, 9:19 am Post #578 |
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Thanks everyone, you made my morning. Chapter 152 After taking a shower, Dave and Catriona drove to the supermarket. It was a Safeway at the edge of the community, a sprawling concrete building on the edge of a desert and surrounded by smaller stores. "Don't worry, no one is going to bother us. If someone does ask for an autograph, I give it to them, it's rude not to", he said, parking the car. "Anything in particular you want?", she asked, grabbing a shopping cart. "How about those pirogi things you made last time? Those were so good", he said dreamily. "Okay, and I can make the golabki to go with them. Let's go", she said, as they entered the store. "Oh, you mean those stuffed cabbage things. Those were good too, Kitty. Maybe you ought to open a restaurant", he teased. "Thanks, Dave. I learned how to cook Polish food from Mom, she also taught me how to make jelly. It's not as hard as you think, but I gotta get the stuff from a specialty store, supermarkets don't sell liquid pectin, which thickens the jelly and I need organic flowers, otherwise there's pesticides in the food", she said. "I never knew that before, Kitty. You learn something new everyday", he joked. Dave observed her as she carefully examined the cabbage, before tossing two heads into the cart. "I was checking to see if there were any brown leaves, it can cause the food to taste bad", she explained. "Sorry about that, Kitty. I don't know crap about cabbage, hell, I haven't ever bought a cabbage. You can be my guide to the wonderful world of Polish cuisine", he joked, as she laughed. "You make me sound like Julia Child, Dave. You can help in the kitchen if you'd like", she said. "Sweet, I hope I don't burn down the kitchen", he cracked. "Well Dave, it looks like you're on the rebound", said an all-too-familiar voice. Dave turned around and came face to face with his ex-wife, Pam, and her boyfriend Bernie. Catriona felt a shiver go down her spine, feeling ill at ease. Pam was a beautiful blond with vivid blue eyes and a figure a model would envy. She wore tight jeans and a designer purple silk blouse, her hair showing no gray at all and her face unlined, not looking anywhere near her forty four years. Bernie had been her lawyer during the divorce proceedings, and he resembled a rat, with his dark beady eyes, prominent pointy nose and smirk on his lips. In fact, he was a dead ringer for Howard Stern, Anna Nicole Smith's lawyer. "Hello Pam, Bernie. What is it?", he asked, trying to sound civil. "Nothing, your girlfriend is a bit young, isn't she? I hope you're not planning on having her around when the kids visit, it sets a bad example you know", said Pam, a smirk on her face. Dave gritted his teeth. "Pam, Bernie, this is my girlfriend, Catriona Burton. Kitty, this is Pam and Bernie", he said a neutral voice. "Very glad to meet you", said Catriona politely. She immediately felt uncomfortable around them, especially Bernie. He looks like a rat, she thought distastefully. She tried not to shudder at the way his little beady dyes stared at her hungrily like a piece of meat, his gaze blatant. Dave smiled coolly at them, a smile that did not reach his eyes. "And who's watching the kids?", he asked. "Justis is old enough to watch Electra, he's not a baby", she retorted. "Well, it was nice running into you, Pam, Bernie", he said as they walked away. |
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| Verity | September 8, 2008, 10:09 am Post #579 |
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I liked it when you described Bernie as looking like a "rat." Awesome description!! I laughed when you said that he looked like "Anna Nicole Smith's lawyer" Poor Kitty. I knew at some point she was going to have a hard time with the age difference, even though I'm a Davetriona shipper. I had a friend who was with a guy 21 years older than she was (even though he looked way younger) and they had a terrible time with families and other people thinking it was weird or wrong. I had a feeling that Pam might point out the age difference. I liked the bit about Kitty opening up a restaurant. I always thought that Avery should have done that. I can't wait to read more!!! This is heating up!
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| Taimi | September 8, 2008, 3:07 pm Post #580 |
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my opinion of pam-YA SKANKY BITCH.... there now i feel better |
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| Lucifer's Angel | September 8, 2008, 6:48 pm Post #581 |
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Ashley, love your new sigs And these are the foods Kitty cooks:Golabki Pierogi Chapter 153 Catriona stuffed the golabki, her mind in turmoil. The meeting with Dave's ex and her boyfriend still lingered distastefully in her mind. His ex-wife is a bitch and her boyfriend is a rat. I don't like either of them, she thought, scowling. Dave had paid for the food and drove straight home, not saying a word. She could see the pain in his eyes, remembering the appalled look on his face when Pam said the kids were by themselves. I know Justis is sixteen, but Electra is only ten, something could happen to them. I think she leaves the kids home alone a lot, she mused. Dave entered the kitchen and sat down at the table. He had gone straight to his study and locked the door when they got home, leaving her to prepare dinner. "Kitty, I'm sorry. But I hate that asshole she calls a boyfriend, he was her lawyer during the divorce proceedings", he said, looking up at her. "Damn. That Bernie dude looks like a rat and he's ugly as hell. And he looks just like Anna Nicole Smith's lawyer. Does she leave the kids home alone a lot?", she asked, finishing the cabbage rolls. "Yeah, she and Bernie go clubbing a lot. Last year, they just dumped the kids here while they went to the Bahamas for two weeks. It would've been great, but I was about to go on our North American tour. They were on tour for two weeks with us, but then Pam called and demanded the kids back. Since it was summer, they didn't have to go back and they wanted to stay with us. But Pam said that if I didn't return the kids, she'd get Bernie to file for extra custody, I wouldn't be able to see them once we got off the tour, and she actually asked me to pay more alimony, not child support, alimony. The child support goes into a trust fund for the kids, only Justis can access it, and Electra can access it when she's sixteen. Pam keeps pestering me to pay her the child support, but I want the money to go to my kids. Besides, she doesn't work, all she does is shop. She is the mother of my children, but she is insufferable", he said, burying his face in his hands. Catriona wrapped her arms around his neck, planting a kiss on the top of his head. "All I can say is, damn. She sounds psycho and her boyfriend is a chode. I do hope that Justis and Electra are doing well, though. At least you'll be able to see them again next week. How long are they here for?", she asked. "After a lot of back and forth, they finally agreed to let me see them for a week, I can't wait, Justis is a terrific guitar player, he plays almost as good as I do. And Electra's a really good actress, she played a fairy in her camp's production of Peter Pan. Her idol is Hannah Montana, she can play the songs on the piano and she sings really good", he said, a wistful smile on his lips. "They sound like great kids, Dave. Are they going to have a problem with me being here?", she asked. "They're gonna love you, Kitty. Justis wants to know if I have a girlfriend, he says I'm getting too old to get chicks. You're a great girl, how can they possibly not like you?", he asked rhetorically. "I hope you're right, Dave. Now we got to cook the golabki and fry the pirogies. You have to fry them in butter, otherwise they get greasy", she said, getting the platter of pirogies out of the fridge. Catriona melted some butter in a large skillet and placed them in the pan, the butter sizzling and the pleasant aroma filling the air. "I'm going to get fat, Kitty", he chuckled. Catriona laughed and squeezed the lean muscle under his shirt. "Dave, you're not fat at all, you've got a strong body. You're in better shape than many young guys I know", she teased. "Thanks a lot, Miss Kitty. I'll show you later", he replied, a sly gleam in his hazel eyes. "I can't wait, Dave", she giggled, frying the pirogies. |
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| Verity | September 8, 2008, 8:58 pm Post #582 |
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I LOVED the banter between Dave and Kitty. It was very well written and was a fun read. I hope that the kids do like Kitty, but I could see them being surprised over how much younger she is. She could be their older sister. I am just dying to read about Kitty meeting the kids because I'm sure that with you writing it, it will kick some ass. This story keeps getting better and better love all the twists and turns. It always keeps me guessing and I like that.
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| maisy blue | September 8, 2008, 9:11 pm Post #583 |
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Ugh- Pam sounds like serious bad news. It's always a really bad idea to get involved with anyone who has a "sticky" ex, no matter how much you love the person. Ugh. No matter how much Dave and Kitty play by the rules, Pam's gonna find some way to manipulate things. I looked up Pam's photo and she looks like a Playboy Bunny. Sort of serves Dave right for marrying for looks rather than brains, if that's what he did do... I hate guys who think with their dicks, no matter how well intentioned they are! Electra Mustaine is the host of some Animal Planet show, did you know that? I do animal rescue and get a ton of magazines and newsletters and publications about animals and wildlife and she's been in a bunch of them, she seems like a sweet girl. Loved the grocery shopping and cooking in these chapters. I love domestic stuff in stories, I don't know why... |
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| Lucifer's Angel | September 9, 2008, 9:17 am Post #584 |
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Maisy, I was exaggerating Pam's character in this story. From what I've heard, in real life, her and Dave even though they're divorced, they're still friends and she's a horse trainer, Dave once joked that his wife is so good at martial arts she can kick his ass, and he's a third-degree black belt in Tae Kwan Do . And what's the name of the show Electra's on? I don't watch Animal Planet Chapter 154 "Man, that was incredible. My compliments to the chef", said Dave gallantly, leaning back in his chair. "Thanks, Dave. You ought to thank Mom, she's the one who taught me", she chuckled, loading the dishes into the dishwasher. "So how was your brother's trip?", he asked. "After six months, you finally ask me. Just kidding. Him and Natalya had a great time, Uncle Lars escorted them to Copenhagen and then they were on their own. I think Mom could be psychic, they left as friends and came back as a couple. I always had an idea that there was some sexual tension there, I mean, Shane's a good-looking guy and she's so pretty, and they are inseparable. I was right", she laughed. "Awesome. So they went all the way to Nordkapp? I've seen pictures, it looks like a big old rock. I guess it's one of those places people go to and say they've been there. I don't want to go there anyway, I'm too used to the heat", he cracked. "I gotcha. Natalya took some awesome pictures, though. I got 'em on my Photobucket account", she said, getting out her laptop. Catriona opened the laptop and logged into her Photobucket account. On the page were pictures of Natalya and Shane on their Scandinavian trip. Dave looked at them with interest, clicking on several to enlarge them. "Cool pics. And what's your grandpa like?", he asked. "He's coming to the states with his wife next week, I'm going up there to meet him. According to Shane, he's not a bad dude. It was my grandma who was a bitch, she deliberately got pregnant to get him to marry her and threatened to abort the baby if he didn't. She basically made his life hell, and she resented the hell out of my mother. He was glad to get rid of her, his new wife sounds so much nicer", she replied. "Sweden's a beautiful country, Kitty. And Swedish fans are crazy, they love metal over there. And Swedish chicks are hot, just kidding there, Kitty. I got you, I don't need other girls. But we're going to have to tell your family, we can't keep this a secret forever", he said. "When I break up with Andrew, we can go up together and tell them. Just be prepared for Shane and my uncles", she chuckled, checking her email. Catriona frowned when she saw the message from Andrew: medvedandrew@gmail.com: Kiska, where are you? Your mother says you are on holiday in San Diego with a friend. Please contact me, Andrew. Luthien97@yahoo.com: Andrew, fuck you. I caught you getting a blow job from some groupie in your dressing room. That's the third time I caught you fucking some groupie. It's over, our relationship is strictly professional from now on. Don't contact me unless it's band business. Catriona. "I cannot believe Andrew prefers some cheap groupie over you, Kitty. If I see him, I'm going to kick his ass", growled Dave. "I don't blame you, but I don't need you to go to jail", she said. "I know, let me make it up to you, Kitty", he said, taking her hand and leading her upstairs. |
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| Verity | September 9, 2008, 10:46 am Post #585 |
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Andrew is a creep. Dave needs to go kick his ass. I wonder how Avery is going to react when her dad and his new wife comes to the U.S.A. It's going to be very interesting. I think Pam is gorgeous!!! I have heard and probably none of it is true because rumors do travel on the internet, that in 2006 Dave filed for divorce and then he changed his mind and then he filed again this past spring, but the this time around the divorce is friendly and they still remain good friends. I hope they can patch things up, but even if they remain good friends that's still a good thing. Maybe they will both be happier that way with less fighting, but still have a close relationship.
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Just like out of a good old movie. I can't wait to see David pop up, and read about Kitty's time in San Diego. I also am very interested to read about how Dave's kids are going to act towards a much younger girlfriend....this story has such a rich plot and there's so much that you could do with it. It totally all rocks out.
We just got a lot of rain, no power outages. I think that the forecasters wanted to wind people up so they'd buy stuff
At least the stores made money.
. And this trip to David and his family sounds great
Just when Davetriona gets back together....oh well hopefully I can catch up soon. I'm glad that Hanna left you alone.
I laughed when you said that he looked like "Anna Nicole Smith's lawyer"
. And what's the name of the show Electra's on? I don't watch Animal Planet

8:38 PM Jul 10