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Never Walk Alone; Sequel to Black Friday Rule
Topic Started: May 13, 2008, 10:14 am (47,761 Views)
maisy blue
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Hehehe I know that Kitty and Dave's nephew are supposed to be a match, but I also dig May-December romances.

This was a great chapter.
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If Kitty has a thing for Dave, she has good taste. :)

Though I could see her thinking that she has a thing for him, but it's more a father figure type thing.


Awesome stuff!!!!!! I'd write something more profound but I've only had 2 hours of sleep in the past day and am sooooooo tired.
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Haha, I loved the whole 'Uncle Dave-kids' thing :biggrin :horns2 It's so cool they're having a band party at his house, sounds like a lot of fun :D
Awesomeness :heart:
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Chapter 13

The next morning after everyone finished eating breakfast, the band went downstairs to the basement. Dave stood off to the side, watching as they set up. He felt a tingling sensation go down his spine, waiting anxiously to hear them perform. I hope it's as good as their previous stuff, then again, I got a good feeling about all this, he mused.

Catriona stood behind the microphone, Andrew standing next to her as he tuned his guitar. Dave's eyes widened when he saw them standing next to each other. Dave's eyes widened when he saw them, standing side by side. They were a very striking couple, both of them over six feet tall and slim, her auburn hair a contrast to his black hair. There's definetly something going on between those two. A Mustaine and Burton together, Cliff must be having a laugh up in heaven, he thought.

Andrew played a few notes on his guitar, nodding at the others. Kurt played a delicate piano melody, Andrew harmonizing with him. She mentally counted off the beats in her head, as she began to sing Luthien's Question

My love, where are you?
I am in the darkened wood
The trees darker than
The darkest night
Where are you?

I come across the abode
Of the evil one
I can sense your presence
Please hear me

I can hear you calling me
Beren, my love
I can hear you calling me
Beren, my love

Your presence is near me
I feel your suffering
Oh how I wish
I could take your pain away


The song segued into Beren's Response, Andrew singing in his powerful tenor:

My nightingale, I hear you
The evil one has me
I cannot escape
I feel you near

Sung by Catriona

Beren my love
I will be there
I shall make
Your pain flee

Andrew

Nightingale, you are here

Catriona

Beren my love
Let us be gone
From this evil place

Together

We must escape the evil one
Our love is fated
Nothing shall tear us asunder

Andrew

Nightingale, we are safe

Catriona

Beren, you are safe now
The evil one will not
Torment us any longer


Dave watched the performance, his expression bland. However, he felt giddy inside, his heart pounding in excitement. The lyrics matched the powerful music, a perfect compliment to each other. Too bad they can't go on this leg of Gigantour, but maybe they can go on the UK tour. I gotta call my manager, he thought.
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Woo nice one Dave, Cliff you can be so proud of your Kitty!
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I can certainly believe Kitty and Andrew are a striking couple :) And oh how I wish I could hear them singing :D
Awesome chapter :horns2
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I wish I could *hear* this fic, as well. It's be really awesome if they went on tour, I'd love to read a touring fic!
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Most awesome job with the lyrics Vanessa!!! :horns:
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Chapter 14

"Catriona, get whatever you want. You gotta look the role of the lead singer", said Dave.

"All right, Mr. Mustaine. But I do have a credit card", she replied.

"It's all right. And please call me Dave. We're not formal here", he said, as they entered the store.

Dave had taken Catriona to the mall to shop for clothes. It had been his idea to take her, seeing as she had nothing else other than jeans and t-shirts. It was a store for tall women, specializing in evening gowns and suits for formal occasions.

A very tall woman came over to them. She was at least six foot five, wearing a tailored powder-blue pantsuit, her dark hair pulled back into a chignon. "How may I help you?", she asked.

"Yes, she's the lead singer of my nephew's band, and she needs something appropriate to wear", said Dave, winking at her.

"Ooh, how cool. Please follow me", said the saleslady.

Catriona followed her, her cheeks pink. "I know, being a tall girl isn't easy. What kind of you band are you?", she asked.

"We're a metal band, Gothic, like Nightiwish or Within Temptation", she replied.

"Oh, you mean like Evanescence? That's cool, I figured as much. We also do custom stuff, we have a seamstress here", said the saleslady", leading her to the back.

A tall, Gothic-looking girl with dyed black and purple hair was reading the latest issue of Metal Hammer and chewing gum. She wore a black corset over a black leather miniskirt, fishnet stockings on her legs, purple Doc Martens on her feet. The light overhead glinted on her eyebrow and lip piercings, the silver a contrast to the deep purple of her lips.

She set down the magazine and got up, extending a pale, thin hand. "Oi, I'm Marybeth, the seamstress", she said, speaking with a British accent.

"I'm Catriona Burton", she replied.

"Oi, are you Scottish? How may I help you?", she asked, snapping her gum.

"My mother is Scottish and Polish, my father was American. I need stage clothes, I'm the lead singer of a band", she replied.

Marybeth circled her, her eyes narrowed. Catriona felt nervous, feeling like the prey of a hawk.

"Oi, don't worry, I don't swing that way. Well, at least most of the time. Hmm, you got a good figure, not too skinny or fat. And your hair is gorgeous, I love the color. You ought to wear a lot of black and dark purple if you don't already. And a corset would look smashing on you, your tits are quite big and since you're thin, the boys' eyes are going to pop out of their heads", she chuckled.

"Uh, thanks. But I don't want guys to think I'm a slut. Is that such a good idea?", she asked.

"Of course. If you're going to sing, you got to look the part, doll. Let me get your measurements and get to work", said Marybeth, getting her tape measure.

"Wow, you're 40-26-38. A natural 40-inch bust is unheard of. You must have a lot of boyfriends", she giggled.

"Unfortunately, no. My uncles are very protective and I have a brother. Besides, my Mom is Catholic", she mumbled, blushing.

"Oh, that sucks. Let's get started, shall we?", said Marybeth.
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Kitty is lucky getting an all expensive paid shopping trip. Wish someone would buy stage clothes for me, so I don't have to wear the same stupid two shirts all the time.

I bet that Kitty will pick up all kinds of loot on her shopping expedition. :dance :)
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Fuck i wish someone could be that generous to me!!! LOL Vanessa again this rocked!
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Amazons!! Sorry, I'm 5'4", so anything over 5'8" is hugely tall to me. I guess if you're tall 40-30-38 is ideal. I get some of my clothes from Japan and they are all SO TINY- most of the dresses and skirts don't fit anyone with a waist over 25" if not smaller! It drives me crazy cause I'm not able to wear them.

I can't wait to hear about what Kitty gets made for her!!
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Happy Saturday morning, ladies :)

Chapter 15

Catriona stood in front of the mirror, her eyes wide. She wore one of the corset tops that Marybeth had made for her, the black silk fitting her body perfectly.

I cannot believe I am going to wear this on stage. What will Mom and Shane say?, she wondered.

The corset made her waist smaller, her full breasts almost spilling over, the pale flesh a contrast to the black silk. Below the corset, the black leather skirt fell to mid-thigh, clinging to the curve of her hips, her long legs bare.

Her auburn hair hung loose and wild around her shoulders, her hazel eyes wide. The bright red lipstick made her mouth look fuller, the dark eyeshadow going well with her pale skin.

At least the other outfits are not as revealing. I wonder what Andrew would think?, she mused.

A flush crept up her cheeks at the idea. Stop that, this has to stay professional, she thought frantically.

"Catriona, dinner is ready", said Andrew, entering the room.

He stopped in his tracks when he saw her reflection in the mirror. His green eyes widened in delight, his gaze boldly raking over her. The black corset fitted her perfectly, her breasts aching for a lover's caress. Her hair fell loose around her body, her lips full and pouty.

"Catriona, you look stunning", he murmured, closing the door and walking towards her.

Her first instinct was to run away, but her feet wouldn't move. She took a deep breath, willing herself to calm down as he stood behind her.

Wordlessly, Andrew swept the hair away from her neck, his breath on the sensitive skin of her throat. "Relax, kiska", he murmured, planting the softest of kisses on her throat.

Catriona whimpered, leaning against his body. Andrew smiled knowingly, slowly lowering the bodice of her corset to expose her breasts. He cupped a breast, the nipple instantly hardening under his touch.

She took a deep breath, closing her eyes against the sensation. "Open your eyes, kiska. You are so beautiful", he whispered, gently biting her throat.

Her eyes flew open, watching as he toyed with her breasts. Catriona's breathing was shallow and erratic, her pulse pounding loudly in her ears.

His hand left her breast, going under her skirt and stroking her thigh. Catriona whimpered, his touch like a brand. She closed her eyes, biting back a moan as he stroked between her legs.

"Naughty girl, you really like this", he chuckled, pushing her panties aside as a finger entered her depths.

She clutched onto his arm, her knees suddenly weak. "You're all wet, Cat. Bad girl", he said, a hint of triumph in his voice.

Catriona felt a tingling sensation in the pit of her stomach, the touch of his fingers electric. She whimpered, her thighs closing around his hand. Her eyes widened at the sight in the mirror: her breasts bare, his hands between her thighs. "Ohh Andrew", she moaned softly.

Andrew smiled wolfishly at her, withdrawing his fingers from her body. She whimpered with need, her knees almost buckling under her. "Not yet, patience my dear", he said, capturing her lips in a quick but fierce kiss.
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Woooooo that was fucking hot!!!! yikes
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Sweet. Kitty cat get's some action too.

I think her mom will be cool with her new outfit though. She has a lot of guts to wear it. I have a corset top, but have never worn it in public- too much of a chicken.


And happy Saturday morning to you as well (though I'm working all day today but it's going to be pretty awesome so it's all good) and Memorial Day weekend!!
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