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| maisy blue | September 9, 2008, 12:01 pm Post #586 |
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I'm glad to hear Pam's a decent person. Fran Hetfield gets a bad rap in a lot of stories, too. It's easy to make them the enemy when we adore their husbands ;) Electra is on This Show...- if you click on the "Itty Bitty Friends" segment to the right of the video panel on the webpage there's a video of her. She's being interviewed in her bedroom and it's crazy how much she looks like Dave! She's the spitting image of him! Very cute. I laughed at Andrew's email to Kitty. Boys are so fucking stupid. "I fucked a billion other girls, but why are you mad?" DUH!
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| Lucifer's Angel | September 9, 2008, 2:58 pm Post #587 |
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Electra is a little cutie, thanks for the link, Maisy Chapter 155 Catriona's heart pounded in anticipation as he led her to his room. The sheets were still rumpled from the afternoon, bringing a slight flush to her cheeks. "Don't do that, Kitty. There's no one here except us", he said, taking her into his arms and kissing her lips. She moaned softly at the contact as he led her over to the bed. Dave broke the kiss, the intensity in his hazel eyes turning them deep brown. Wordlessly, they undressed each other while exchanging hungry kisses, their skin revealed inch by inch. He laid her carefully on the bed, gazing at her nude body like she was a work of art. His eyes raked over her hungrily and tenderly, taking in every curve and hollow of her beautiful body. "I love you, Kitty. You're so damn beautiful", he growled, taking her lips in a searing kiss. The pressure of his lips parted hers as his tongue found hers, toying with it as their moans filled the air. Dave's lips left hers and planted tiny fragile kisses over her face, her eyelids, her cheeks, her nose and finally the briefest of kisses on her lips. She trembled at his gentle assault, the touch of his lips only adding more fuel to the fire. Dave kissed down her throat, feeling her shiver as his lips moved lower. "Let me love you, Kitty", he murmured, burying his face in her breasts. Catriona ran her fingers through his red hair, moaning in delight as his lips fastened onto a nipple. Dave kissed the hard pink bud and sucked it into his mouth, feeling her hands caressing his hair. She sighed when she saw his face buried in her cleavage, his lips, teeth and tongue caressing the pink tips. His lips moved to her other breast, smiling against her flesh when her fingers tightened in his hair. Dave gave each nipple one final kiss and moved lower, planting kisses on her taut belly. Catriona parted her legs eagerly as her heart beat in anticipation, moaning softly when he stroked her moist, intimate flesh. "I've wanted to do this for the longest time, Kitty", he growled, burying his face between her legs. Catriona gasped loudly at the sensation, seeing his red head between her thighs. She sighed in pleasure when she felt his lips trace her most intimate spot, the tiny frisson of excitement making her tremble. Her fingers tangled ever so gently in his hair, feeling his tongue probe inside her warmth. The coil of heat grew steadily in her belly under his skillful tongue, her moans of pleasure becoming more pronounced. Her eyes flew open when she felt him flick at that sensitive bundle of nerves, the heat in her belly growing hotter with every flick of his tongue. "Oh Dave, oh yes, oh yes, ohhh!", she moaned, closing her eyes and bucking against his mouth. Dave licked at her several more times as she aftershocks coursed through her body. He emerged from between her legs, the sheer lust on his face making him appear like a hungry wolf. Catriona lay sprawled limply on the bed like a rag doll, her skin flushed pink and her breathing ragged from her recent climax. "Wow", she panted. Dave took her into his arms and kissed her. "Ready for Round 2, Kitty?", he teased. "Of course", she challenged, a gleam in her eyes. Dave kissed her again and parted her legs, thrusting into her body. Catriona moaned against his lips and wrapped her arms around his neck as he moved into her body. Their lips exchanged hungry kisses as they moved together on the bed, their moans and gasps filling the air. He kept on thrusting into her writhing body, her moans and gasps music to his ears. He broke the kiss and looked down into her eyes, keeping still for a moment. The love and intensity in his eyes was almost frightening, his hazel eyes almost black with passion. "I love you, Kitty. You're mine", he growled, moving harder and faster into her body. "I love you too, Dave", she moaned, her vision going black as she convulsed around him, his seed entering her body. They held on tightly to each other, sweaty and breathless. The air around them crackled with electricity, the scent of their lovemaking surrounding them. "I meant it, Kitty. I love you, you are mine", he said fiercely. "And you are mine, Dave", she whispered, kissing his lips. |
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| Lucifer's Angel | September 9, 2008, 5:54 pm Post #588 |
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I have so much stuff written, here's another chapter Chapter 156 The morning sun streamed in through the windows, as Catriona squirmed in her sleep. Her eyes fluttered open, a slow smile forming on her lips when she saw Dave fast asleep. It's only seven, she thought, turning over and closing her eyes. Dave's hand reached out and stroked her thigh, murmuring something in his sleep. Catriona chuckled to herself as an idea suddenly came to her. She leaned over and brushed her lips across his cheek, as he stirred. Her hands moved lower and removed the blanket from his hips, revealing his erection. She tried to stifle a giggle as she gently stroked him, before kissing the head and taking him into her mouth. Dave murmured something in his sleep, a pleasant, hazy sensation growing in his belly. He opened his eyes and smiled when he saw her suck on him, her eyes half-closed and soft moans of pleasure deep in her throat. "Yeah, that's it", he groaned, his hands reaching out to grab her hair and guide her mouth. Catriona moaned in pleasure as he thrust into her mouth, his harsh pants ringing in her ears. He felt himself swell in her mouth as he continued to thrust into her mouth. "I'm almost there, Kitty", he grunted, growling her name as he released into her mouth. She eagerly licked up his seed, moaning in delight as she cleaned him. "Wow, what a wake-up call. We ought to get up anyway, it's quite a drive to Scottsdale. The cleaning lady has a key, don't worry, they won't steal anything. Let's take a shower, Miss Kitty", he chuckled, leading her to the bathroom. An hour later, they were at an IHOP on the interstate having breakfast. The greeter had raised an eyebrow at their appearance, but sat them in a booth at the back. "Did the guy recognize you?", she asked, opening the menu. "I don't know, maybe he did. But it was nice of him to sit us in the back, I don't want other guys to look at my girl", he teased. "Very funny, Dave", she retorted, an amused gleam in her hazel eyes. "I'm just messing with you, Kitty. I'm not going to make you quit the band, I don't like it when girls stay home all day, I like when women work or have hobbies. Pam immediately quit working after we married, all she did was stay home, and when the kids went to school, she still didn't work. I'm not a sexist man, Kitty, I want a woman to have a life", he said. "Shane tells me the same thing. He broke up with his last girlfriend because she was like a doll, in a bad way. She didn't have any interests other than sex and shopping, and she actually wanted him to quit working for Metallica and get a 'real job'. Of course, he dumped her sorry ass", she chuckled. "What does your brother do?", he asked, intrigued. "He's one of Uncle Kirk's guitar techs, he's going on their European tour next month, along with Mom and Natalya. She's a great girl, and she's definitely not boring. I knew it was love when I came across them watching old Godzilla movie and passing around a bong, they were laughing like nincompoops. She's hot, likes metal, drinks, and smokes pot, of course she's Shane's dream woman", she giggled. "He's definitely a Burton", he chuckled, as the waitress with their food. |
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| Taimi | September 9, 2008, 6:45 pm Post #589 |
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that sex scene was...sooo...hot....
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| Verity | September 9, 2008, 7:35 pm Post #590 |
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Gotta love Dave in this. He's so sweet. This is awesome that you have given us so many updates today. I feel like it's Christmas. You amaze me how much you write and you always churn out good, high quality, badass, stuff. I feel like a slacker now. Rock on!
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| Lucifer's Angel | September 10, 2008, 10:13 am Post #591 |
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Thanks Ashley. This story practically writes itself, and I don't think it's going to be over any time soon, I'm having a lot of fun writing this Chapter 157 Dave and Catriona arrived in Scottsdale that afternoon. Their trip had taken them from suburban San Diego to the deserts across southern California and western Arizona. For Dave, it was familiar territory, having lived in Southern California and Arizona most of his life. For Catriona, however, it was all so new. Vast stretches of sand and rocks stretched out as far as the eye could see, punctuated by the occasional cactus or weird rock formation. There had been hardly any drivers on the road except for a few cars and RVs, and some 18-wheelers. They had passed tiny little towns consisting of a few weathered houses and rusted trailers. It was a relief when they reached Scottsdale after so many hours of desert. The city was a gleaming jewel set in the desert, beautiful Spanish-style and modern houses surrounded by carefully tended gardens of cacti, poinsettias and prickly pears. "I know, it's gorgeous here. I used live here until I had the arm trouble, it's great to be back", he sighed. "Dave, I don't mean to pry, but are you and David still mad at each other?", she asked. "I was pissed when he sued me, but blood is thicker than water. I should've given him more royalties, it was my fault. But we've patched things up, I visit when I'm in the area. I told him I was bringing my girlfriend, they can't wait to meet you, we're staying in the guestroom", he replied, pulling into the driveway of a Spanish-style house. It was a beautiful house made of dazzling white stucco with a red-tile roof. The yard had numerous cacti in all shapes and sizes, bright red poinsettia blossoms and prickly pear adding color to the brown sand. The door opened and David Ellefson came out. He was dressed casually in denim shorts and a white t-shirt, his dark blond hair cut short. Behind him was a little boy about seven or eight years old, wearing gray shorts and a Pokemon shirt, his wavy blond hair just like his father's. "Hiya Dave", he said cheerfully. "Hey, Junior. Hey there, little guy. Where's your Mom and sister?", he asked, bending down to the boy's level. "They're in the kitchen making lemonade", replied the boy. "Junior, Roman, this is my girlfriend, Catriona Burton. Kitty, this is David Ellefson and his son Roman. Julie and Athena are in the kitchen making lemonade", said Dave. Catriona giggled, a mischievous gleam in her eyes. "Hi, Mr. David. You have fun with Miss Julie?", she teased. David burst into laughter. "Oh, I remember you, Miss Kitty. My, you've grown up. I didn't recognize you there for a minute. Come inside, it's hot out here", he said. The air conditioning inside the house was a relief after the heat outside. The interior was all white and cream marble, the walls painted buff color and adorned with colorful Southwestern motifs. In the living room was a cream leather couch in front of a low glass coffee table, a book showing reproductions of Georgia O'Keefe's paintings open on the table. An empty brick fireplace stood on the opposite side of the couch, above it was a plasma TV mounted on the walls. The mantle above the fireplace held several Hummel and Precious Moments figurines, along with some family photos. David's wife Julie and their daughter Athena were in the kitchen making lemonade, a pile of brownies cooling on a platter. Julie was a petite, attractive woman with dark brown hair cut short in a bob, wearing denim shorts and a pale pink blouse. Athena had her mother's dark hair but her father's hazel eyes, clad in a pink jumper with a white shirt underneath. "Hi ladies, our guests are here", said David, gently kissing his wife. "Oh, it's good to see you again, Dave. And is this your girlfriend?", she asked. "Julie, Athena, this is my girlfriend Catriona Burton. Kitty, this is David's wife Julie and their daughter Athena", said Dave. "Oh, I remember when you were a little girl, Miss Burton. Me and David have been together since", she said. "Awesome. You have a lovely house, ma'am", she replied graciously. "Thank you, and call me Julie, I'm not old enough to be called ma'am", said Julie, taking the lemonade and brownies and leading them to the parlor. |
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| Verity | September 10, 2008, 10:58 am Post #592 |
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You described the desert perfectly, right down to ever last detail. I remember that endless drive. I also really liked David's house. It sounded nice and cool even though it's in the desert. Julie seems really nice. |
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| maisy blue | September 10, 2008, 5:48 pm Post #593 |
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Cool, three updates!! My cable and internet was down ALL FREAKIN' DAY and night yesterday. I thought my husband was going to explode. I have to agree with Ashley, this paragraph describes the desert SO well. It perfectly describes the drive from Phoenix to Tucson.
Some people love the desert, but it's not my thing. I was so happy when we got home from the trip and saw all the GREEN TREES. I am definitely NOT a desert girl! Great chapters- I'm so happy Dave and Kitty are together again. I think they really go together well. I think Dave's so happy that they are monogamous now. |
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| Lucifer's Angel | September 11, 2008, 9:19 am Post #594 |
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Chapter 158 "Let's rest for a bit before dinner, Kitty", said Dave, as they entered the guestroom. It was decorated simply yet attractively, a warm tawny brown carpet on the floor and cream-colored walls. The furniture was all dark, gleaming cherry wood with just a touch of red to the pale cream and brown. In the center of the room was a canopy bed also made of cherry wood, a sky blue silk canopy going nicely with the bluish-gray satin comforter trimmed in white lace. "This is gorgeous, and the view is awesome", she said, gazing out the window. Beyond the houses the desert was clearly visible, all tawny sand and brown and golden rock below a dazzling blue sky. "I know, it's a gorgeous view", said Dave, leading them over to the bed. Catriona burrowed into the pillows, sighing at the softness surrounding her body. He pulled her into his embrace, running his fingers through her hair. The light from the window brought out the redness of her hair, even bringing out the delicate golden highlights like gossamer threads in the auburn mass. "You have the most beautiful hair, Kitty", he murmured, sweeping her hair aside and planting a kiss on her throat. "Dave! What about everyone else?", she gasped, biting back a moan when he gently bit her throat, his tongue licking the tiny wound. "Be quiet, Kitty. You don't want the kids to hear", he whispered in her ear. Catriona bit her lips as he removed her shirt and bra, taking her breasts in his hands. Dave's hands kneaded the soft, supple flesh as her nipples hardened instantly. His hair tickled her bare shoulder, as he leaned over to capture a nipple in his mouth. She clutched onto his hair, breathing heavily as his face was buried in her breasts, his lips and tongue caressing the hard pink tips. Dave lifted his face from her breasts, the sheer hunger in his eyes making her shiver. Wordlessly, he unzipped her shorts and removed them, leaving her in just her panties. "Dave, what about you?", she whispered. "Later, this is just an appetizer", he chuckled, sliding the white lace panties down her legs. Catriona lay on the bed, the intensity of his gaze burning her flesh. Dave kissed her gently and parted her legs, feeling the muscles of her thighs under his fingers. Catriona bit back a moan when he gently stroked her, a sly grin on his lips. "You naughty girl", he chuckled, his finger carefully probing into her depths. Her flesh quivered at the gently caress, closing her eyes and trying not to cry out. He raised his head slightly and gave her a smile of pure hunger, before burying his face between her thighs. Catriona bit her lips to keep quiet, as he held her thighs open and began to eat her. Dave's tongue traced a pattern on her most intimate flesh, his lips and tongue exploring her. She clutched onto his hair and writhed on the bed, her only objective to find more pleasure at his touch. Her eyes flew open in shock when he flicked that inflamed nub of flesh, muted whimpers escaping her lips. A blinding flash appeared before her as she came under his skillful mouth. Dave emerged from between her legs, the sheer lust in his eyes almost overpowering. Catriona lay sprawled on the bed, her skin flushed and eyes almost black from her orgasm. "What about you?", she panted. He gently kissed her lips. "Later, Kitty. I think dinner's ready", he teased, handing her the clothes. |
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| Verity | September 11, 2008, 10:37 am Post #595 |
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Dave's appetizer line was funny. I thought the comment about her hair was sweet. Wish I had nice hair.I also laughed when he scolded her for being loud and the kids overhearing Naughty Kitty. I just hope that Andrew doesn't wreck everything for them. Rock out!! :horns2 |
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| maisy blue | September 11, 2008, 2:38 pm Post #596 |
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*drool* Dave is one generous guy! |
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| Lucifer's Angel | September 11, 2008, 2:55 pm Post #597 |
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I'm in a good mood Chapter 159 "I hope you gals have a great time", said David, embracing his wife. "I know, the kids really love Water Mania", said Julie. "Are you sure you wanna hang with a bunch of kids, Miss Kitty?", teased Dave. "I'll be fine, Dave. I don't play golf, I'll only be in the way. You guys have a good time", said Catriona, kissing his cheek. Julie, Catriona and the children got in her white Toyota, the car slipping out of the driveway. "I hope you won't mind the kids, Catriona. But the kids just love Water Mania and it's so hot", she said. "I don't mind at all, Julie. And please call me Kitty, I've babysat my cousins, I'm used to being around kids", she replied graciously. "Mommy, can we hear Fall Out Boy?", asked Athena. "Sure, honey", she replied, inserting a CD into the player. "I'm not really a fan, but I've heard worse", said Catriona. "Do you want to hear something else?", asked Julie. "No, no, I'm fine. Cali and Marcella like Hannah Montana, it's not bad for kids music. There a lot worse stuff out there. What's the park like?", she asked. "It's a lot of fun and the kids love it. I like your shirt", said Julie. Catriona wore denim shorts and t-shirt that showed a beer mug with the Polish double-headed eagle and it was captioned Polish Drinking Team. "Thanks, my brother got it when he went to Venice Beach, he also got one for his girlfriend Natalya, I'm Polish on my mother's side, Natalya is from Poland itself", she explained. "Cool. You do know Dave is sober?", asked Julie. "Of course. I never was a big drinker, but I don't drink now. He likes the shirt and cracked up when I wore it", she said. "I see. Sorry about that, but I'm worried some girl is going to take advantage of him. But I've seen how he looks at you, he is a man in love. How did you meet?", she asked. "Dave is Andrew's uncle, he's the lead guitarist in our band. We met and became friends, but we got so much closer on Gigantour, that's when we became a couple", she replied. "Oh how nice. Anyway, here we are", said Julie, as they approached the car. An enormous pink and green sign stood outside the park, flanked by fake palm trees. The parking lot was full on this hot day, families with kids and teenagers getting out of their cars. "Two adults and two kids", said Julie. "That'll be eighty dollars", said the kid behind the counter. Julie paid and got the tickets, as they entered the park. A canopy of fake palm trees shielded them from the sun as a path covered in painted pink rocks led into the park. It parted to reveal the park itself, the voices of happy children filling the air. There were some water slides and rides, but the centerpiece was the gigantic wave pool. It was huge, bigger than an Olympic-sized pool, the waves undulating gently to splash the kids. "You kids stay in the shallow end, especially you Athena, because you can't swim", chided Julie. Both women took off their shorts and t-shirts to reveal their bathing suits. Julie wore a modest dark blue one piece, while Catriona wore a pink and black striped bikini that flattered her figure, with her full breasts, toned stomach and long legs, her auburn hair in a loose braid down her back. Some guys noticed and leered at her, as she flipped them off. "Kitty, are you sure you ought to wear a bikini like that? There's a lot of guys here", said Julie. "Julie, it's my right to wear a bikini, this is a waterpark after all. Besides, those guys ought to keep their eyes to themselves. I got Dave, I wouldn't want losers like them anyway", she said, putting the sunscreen on her body. |
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| Verity | September 11, 2008, 5:03 pm Post #598 |
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Guys are such pigs ogling a chick at a family orietned water park. Kitty was a lot nicer about the kid's music than I would have been, except Hannah Montana is okay to watch because of Billy Ray. I can't believe I just told you that.
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| Taimi | September 11, 2008, 10:19 pm Post #599 |
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I had a guy almost run off the road once, when i was outside in my red bikini, my sister-in-law was jealous and she's shaped like kitty!! |
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| maisy blue | September 11, 2008, 11:18 pm Post #600 |
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If I wore a bikini, someone would pay me to put on a shirt. I'll stick to my racing Speedo
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