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Never Walk Alone; Sequel to Black Friday Rule
Topic Started: May 13, 2008, 10:14 am (47,720 Views)
maisy blue
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Justis is a GOOD kid. Someone raised him right. Glad Kitty and he get along- maybe she can be the mom that Pam wasn't.
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Justis seems like a very sweet and caring kid with a good head on his shoulders. :) I really hope that Kitty and Electra can bond even more and more. :horns2
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Chapter 178

"Are you done yet, Miss Kitty?", asked Dave.

"In a bit, Dave. You know how us ladies are", she chided, speaking from behind the bathroom door.

Dave chuckled knowingly and sat down on the bed to wait. I'm just messing with her, it'll be worth the wait, he chuckled to himself.

The door opened and Catriona stepped out. His eyes lit up when he saw her, his gaze roaming her body. She was lovely in a long sapphire evening gown held up with thin spaghetti straps. Around her neck was the sapphire and diamond necklace, the blue stones glittering under the light. Her auburn hair was piled high atop her head, a few loose curls framing her face.

Dave got up from the bed and smiled at her, putting her hand to his lips. "You look so beautiful, Kitty", he murmured as she blushed prettily.

"Thank you, Dave. And you look very good yourself", she said, straightening his tie. Dave was dressed elegantly in black slacks and a matching jacket over a white shirt, his red hair falling past his shoulders.

"Thank you, Kitty. Shall we go now?", he said gallantly, offering her his arm.

"Of course, Dave", she said.

Justis and Electra were watching TV in the living room. He barely noticed them, but her eyes lit up when she saw them. "Wow, you look so pretty, Kitty", she said in awe.

"Thanks Electra", she replied.

"You kids, be on your best behavior, all right? See you later, kids", he said, grabbing the keys.

"Where do you want to go, Dave? I'm afraid I don't know too much about San Diego", she said, as he helped her into the car.

"I know this great Italian place in La Jolla, it's right on the water. I thought you'd like it", he replied.

"That sounds great, Dave. Shane told me that him and Natalya went to a seafood restaurant right on the water in Bodo, Norway. That's above the Arctic Circle, the Midnight Sun was out. That must have been awesome", she sighed.

"Wow, I've been to Norway, but I've never been that far north. The furthest north I've been was when we played a show in Oulu, Finland, we're very popular there. Very nice place, an old town surrounded by these thick forests and there's lots of lakes. And the farthest south I've been is New Zealand, that's another cool place", he said.

"That's where the Lord of the Rings movies were filmed, it looks like a beautiful country", she replied.

"Really? Cool. My favorite place to play is Buenos Aires, the fans there are nuts. You haven't lived until you've played in Argentina, Kitty. The fans down there are so passionate and so vocal, it's a whole nother experience. They don't sit still, Kitty, they're singing along to every word and the pit is churning. It's awesome", he said.

"Tarja Turunen's husband is from Argentina, and so is Aunt Fran. It sounds really cool, her dad is a rancher in Patagonia, she likes guns and hunting as much as he does, he's teaching Cali and Marcella how to hunt. Castor already shoots really good", she said.

"Can you shoot guns, Kitty?", he asked, intrigued.

"Of course, Uncle James taught me to shoot as a kid, I own a .22 caliber pistol and a 20-gauge shotgun back home. I couldn't take my pistol on the plane, though, I don't wanna go to jail", she giggled.

"Remind me never to piss you off, Kitty. How hard is it to get a permit?", he asked.

"Depends. For me, because I'm a woman, it was fairly easy, they thought I was going to use it for defense. Whereas, since you're a guy, it could take more time. You'll have to provide a bunch of information and show that you have no real criminal record. And you'll have to state why you want a gun. Yeah, it's a pain in the ass", she chuckled sardonically.

"Well, here we are, Kitty. Follow me, mademoiselle", he murmured, helping her out of the car.

The restaurant was a small white cottage perched on the edge of a cliff near the sea. The sun had begun to set, turning the sky a vivid pinkish-orange, the sea below a deep bluish-purple. The tangy aroma of the sea wafted over them, as he led them inside.

"Buon giornio, Signore Mustaine", said the maitre'd, speaking with an Italian accent.

"Grazie. Table for two, please", he said politely.

The maitre'd nodded and led them inside. The main room was done all in cream and off-white, the large windows letting in the sunset, white-candled candelabra adding extra illumination.

"Your waiter will be with you shortly", said the maitre'd, leaving them alone.

Dave held out the chair for her, before sitting down himself. "I'm not sure I'm looking forward to meeting your mother and brother, Kitty", he said, a sardonic smile on his lips.

"I know, Dave. Mom's going to be surprised, but you're going to have to win her over. Surely you can turn on the Mustaine charm. I don't think Mom is going to fall for that, though. And Shane might take it into his head to beat you up, it's a brother thing. I'm really worried about my uncles, especially James. Just be on your best behavior", she said.

"Gotcha, Kitty. I am finally going to meet your family, at my age. This is going to be fun", he cracked.
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That chapter fully rocked Vanessa!! :)

First up, that restaurant sounded amazing. Wow. I would LOVE to eat there. You described it all so so so perfectly. :dance

And I agree- if I were Dave I'd be very shy to meet Kitty's family and see what ole James is going to have to say. I mean he's way older for one thing, not to mention she's an old friend's daughter. I can't imagine dating one of my dad's old buddies from his ski bum days. But then of course, my dad's friends aren't nearly as heavenly dashing as Dave Mustaine. :)
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I've followed both the prequel and this fiction and I must say I like both of them pretty much :) I also like the fact that you're including so many different languages, that's really awesome :)

However, I have a tiny critique.
It'd be "buon giorno" without the "i" (but I assume you just accidentally misspelled it), but as it's already evening, it would be "buona sera".

And that was it :)
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I had no idea Fran was into hunting as much as James- no wonder they hit it off so well!

Once again, I love how Kitty and Dave interact. I don't think that Dave might have much of a problem with Kitty's family once he shows them how much he has matured and once they hear about how Andrew f'ed Kitty over and Dave basically came to the rescue and has been nothing but a perfect gentleman to her.
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good job Vanesa, this is amazing
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Chapter 179

They arrived home several hours later. The security guard waved them through, as Dave parked the car outside the house. The sky was now a deep bluish black punctuated with innumerable tiny stars and a bright yellow moon, a slight breeze in the air.

Dave unlocked the door and turned on the light. He could hear the murmur of a TV coming from the parlor, as they went to investigate. "Hey Dad, Kitty. You guys have fun?", asked Justis, as him and Electra played Guitar Hero.

"Yes, we did. You kids don't stay up too late, I wanna take you to Sea World tomorrow", he said.

"All right, I love dolphins", said Electra happily.

"I know you do, pumpkin. What are you guys playing on Guitar Hero?", he asked, as they sat down on the couch.

"I'm in Facemelter mode", said Justis proudly, as he played Beast and the Harlot by Avenged Sevenfold. He played it perfectly, not missing a note.

"That's great, son. Not a bad song either, you heard of them, Kitty?", he asked.

"Yeah, A7X are great, they sound like G'nR but more goth. Shane's a big fan, the City of Evil album rules", she said, giving the metal salute.

"Wow, you like A7X? Ownage", said Justis.

"Yeah, they're great. My brother's a big fan, we saw them at the Winterland. I think they're the big American metal band, new band that is", she added hastily.

"I'm going to get you for that, Kitty. Just kidding. They sound pretty good, me and Slash were pretty tight back in the day, I still see him around. Anyway, you been to Sea World, Kitty?", he asked.

"Yeah, Uncle Kirk took me there once. It was pretty cool, we got to feed the dolphins", she giggled.

"I don't want the dolphins to bite off my hand", he chuckled.

Dave and Catriona sat back on the couch to observe the kids play. He put an arm around her shoulder as she snuggled against him, the heat of her body surrounding him.

It's great that she and the kids get along so well, she'd make a great mom, he mused.

Dave was impressed at how well she got along with the kids, and that they liked her. She's very warm and nurturing, the kids needed that after Pam, he mused.

Dave closed his eyes and scowled when he remembered that night with Pam. He'd been appalled at how negligent she was towards Electra, ignoring her as much as possible. His anger had almost boiled over when he saw that his daughter had been wearing the same dirty diaper all day. He'd come home from recording to find Justis with a frightened look on his face and Electra whimpering because she was dirty and uncomfortable. He'd changed her diaper and confronted Pam, who screamed that she didn't want any more children, that she hadn't wanted Electra. It took all his willpower not to throttle his own wife then and there.

Getting the divorce was the smartest thing I've ever done, he thought. Dave smiled when he saw Catriona show Electra how to play Sweet Child O' Mine on Guitar Hero. Electra played it well, much to everyone's delight.

I love this girl, finding her was the best thing I've ever done, he thought.
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I'm so happy to find another update today!! :)

I really hope that Kitty and Electra bond. I think that Kitty would be an excellent role model for her. :heart:
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Dave should have taken custody from Pam. I know he had to tour and stuff, but I can't believe he left them with such an evil witch! Thank God they had Dave. Maybe Kitty can make up for lost time and be their maternal figure...
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I feel sorry for Electra.. I hope she and Kitty will get closer too. Catriona wolud make an awesome mum indeed :tu:
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Chapter 180

"Did you see how good Electra plays, Dave? She might be as good a guitar player as you", said Catriona, as she unmade the bed.

"I know, she's definetly a Mustaine", said Dave, taking off his shirt.

Catriona's eyes widened in delight, a gleam in her hazel eyes. She had stripped down to a black lace teddy that molded her body perfectly, revealing every curvy and hollow. Her auburn hair was in a bun, her eyes turning a warm shade of tawny brown.

She walked over to him and nuzzled his throat, her hands running over his chest. "Stop that, Miss Kitty", he chided.

She giggled and squeezed the strong muscles of his arms. "Or else what?", she teased.

Dave said nothing but led her outside towards the balcony outside the window. It was a warm, balmy evening with a breeze coming from the Pacific Ocean. The lights of the city were visible below them, twinkling like fireflies in a jar. They contrasted with the black sky above, the faintest of stars twinkling against the darkness.

"This is gorgeous", she murmured, leaving against the wrought-iron balcony.

"I know, it reminds me of the desert at night", he said, sitting in one of the cushioned chairs and drawing her onto his lap.

Catriona leaned against him, sighing as he pressed a soft kiss on her throat. He lowered the straps of her teddy to reveal her breasts, the pale creamy flesh exposed to the night air.

"Dave, what about the neighbors?", she gasped, trying to stifle a moan when he cupped her breasts.

"No one's going to see us, Kitty. Relax", he whispered, feeling her nipples harden at his touch. Dave nuzzled her throat and toyed with her breasts, hearing her soft moans and gasps. He pinched her taut nipples, chuckling at the surprised sound she made.

Dave turned around to face him, his hazel eyes turning dark brown with lust. He placed his hand on her hip and leaned over, capturing a nipple with his mouth.

Catriona's fingers ran through his red hair as he licked and sucked on her nipple. His red hair glowed crimson in the darkness, his face buried in her cleavage. The only sounds were of her soft gasps and his mouth suckling on her breasts, the air becoming hotter from their passion.

Dave gave each nipple one final kiss and lifted his face from her breasts. Wordlessly, he removed the rest of her teddy and lifted her off his lap to remove his shorts. "Ride me, Kitty", he growled.

Catriona sat down on his lap and gently stroked his erection, before slowly sinking down onto him. They both sighed at the contact, feeling her sink onto him. Dave held her by the hips as she kissed him, wrapping her arms around his neck. She broke the kiss and gave him a saucy grin, before moving up and down on him.

The only sounds in the air were their moans and gasps, their bodies moving against each other. Dave took a nipple into his mouth, hearing her squeal in delight at his touch. Catriona felt the coil of heat grow even hotter in her belly, feeling his lips and teeth raking over the tight pink bud. She could feel him move deeper and harder into her body. Dave could feel her tighten around him as she gasped his name, throwing her head back as her body shook. He thrust one last time into her warmth, feeling her shudders as his seed entered her.

He took a moment to catch his breath, as she climbed off his body. Dave had to smile when he saw her flushed face and her taut, reddened nipples, a languid smile on her face.

"I hope the neighbors didn't see us", she giggled.

"Bad girl. Let's go back inside before someone calls the cops", he chuckled, leading her inside and closing the door.
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That was AMAZING - love the idea of romance outside on a balcony... :blush:
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That was very very romantic. I don't think that the neighbors would mind seeing Dave out on the balcony half naked... at least I know that I certainly wouldn't mind. :lol:

"I know, she's definetly a Mustaine", said Dave, taking off his shirt.

Catriona's eyes widened in delight, a gleam in her hazel eyes.


My eyes would widened in delight too. :drool :drool :drool


Fantastic! :heart:

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love on the balcony, verra nice midear :P
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