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Never Walk Alone; Sequel to Black Friday Rule
Topic Started: May 13, 2008, 10:14 am (47,710 Views)
Oh Hell
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Oh my god, I LOVE this!
I've literally just read everything from start to finish and I'm hooked!
Especially the Shane/Natalya parts. They're so freaking cute!
Dave and Catriona go well together and I am so pulling for Lars getting with Avery!
I almost don't want to see the impending part when he finds out that Elinor is no longer alive...
Oh! And that Andrew... *presents with dick of the year award!*
Love, love, LOVE it.
Can't wait for more!
(P.S. Girl, cum on face, ewww fest.)
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Taimi
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awesome chapter, nasty bitch with cum on her face :puke:
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Thanks Torr for reading the whole thing, ownage :horns:

Chapter 211

Andrew waited impatiently in the alley behind the venue. It was hot outside, but the shadows from the buildings cooled him off a bit. The ripe smell of garbage hung over him, the mewl of a hungry cat the only sound.

His heart beat rapidly in his chest, his mouth dry and his hands shaking. Damn it, where is he? I need my stuff, he thought anxiously.

A short, stocky man in torn jeans and a tattered windbreaker came over to him. Wordlessly, he held out his hand, snapping his fingers. Andrew reached into his pocket and forked over the money, taking the bag and stuffing it into his pocket.

He felt almost cheerful as he made his way backstage. The roadies were getting ready for their show, setting up the equipment. Catriona was talking with an older couple and didn't notice him, to his relief.

I don't want her bitching at me, I am a rock star like my uncle, I can do what I want. And that little groupie did half my coke, she gave great blowjobs, though, he chuckled to himself.

Andrew locked the door behind him, taking out the coke. It gleamed like ground diamonds under the light, and almost as precious to him. He opened the bag and poured it onto his mirror, cutting it into lines. He took out a dollar and snorted it, the heady, euphoric feeling coursing through him like rocket fuel.

Ahh, this is so good. I needed that, he thought with satisfaction.

I think I've spend over a hundred dollars today. Oh well, the album will go platinum and the tour will do well. This is what the rock stars do, it never seemed to hurt Uncle Dave, he mused.

Andrew scowled when he thought about his uncle. I cannot believe she prefers my uncle over me, I am younger and more handsome. It's her fault that I score with groupies, what can she probably want from him? He is an old man with a carping ex wife and children, he thought bitterly, snorting another line of coke.

Andrew heard her talking with Perttu and scowled. I cannot believe she hangs out with those Finnish faggots, it's embarrassing. And my uncle lets them, I thought he dislikes gays. If either of them touches me, I will kill them, lousy fags, he thought angrily.
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Andrew is such a vile loser bastard. If I were him, I'd watch pissing away all of my money. There are many rock stars who you would think would have a comfortable stash of money saved up from tours and shit, yet they are flat out broke. They live way beyond their means. Not all metal bands have the cash that Metallica and Megadeth make. Just because they go on a big fancy tour opening with a huge band doesn't mean that they are going to get shit loads of $$$ from it. Andrew is being very very stupid. I hope he does go broke, and right now he doesn't even deserve Dave's help. I really like that you are going into this element of being in a band Vanessa. It is VERY well written. Awesomeness. :)

I LOVE the way that this story is going Vanessa! I like how all of the little story lines that are going on all flow together and keep it interesting. :)
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I totally agree with Ashley- the way you manage all the storylines is amazing. It's like you are a master weaver of fiction. Such a great story!
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Andrew is acting like an ass.

I actually liked Dave better than Andrew.
But the updates are great :horns:
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Andrew is such a vile loser bastard. If I were him, I'd watch pissing away all of my money. There are many rock stars who you would think would have a comfortable stash of money saved up from tours and shit, yet they are flat out broke. They live way beyond their means. Not all metal bands have the cash that Metallica and Megadeth make. Just because they go on a big fancy tour opening with a huge band doesn't mean that they are going to get shit loads of $$$ from it. Andrew is being very very stupid. I hope he does go broke, and right now he doesn't even deserve Dave's help. I really like that you are going into this element of being in a band Vanessa. It is VERY well written. Awesomeness. :)

I LOVE the way that this story is going Vanessa! I like how all of the little story lines that are going on all flow together and keep it interesting. :)

I agree with you completly, Ashley
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Time that Andrew got a good slapping from Dave methinks.
What a coke-headed ass.
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Chapter 212

"Lars, you want to go out for dinner? I want to talk", said Avery.

Lars looked up from the TV, his eyes wide and startled. "Huh? What is it, Avery?", he asked, still in a daze.

"Men. Lars, I asked if you want to go out for dinner. I want to speak with you", she repeated, as though she were talking to a child.

Lars blushed. "Sorry about that, Avery. I spaced out there. Sure, I'll meet you in a bit", he said, as she left the room.

He quickly shut off the TV and took out a suit. It had been wrapped in plastic to prevent wrinkles, a black tailored suit that included a maroon tie and a white shirt.

Why does she want to talk to me? Does she like me too?, he wondered.

Calm down, Ulrich. You're acting like a teenager. You and Avery are adults, it's not like she's going to throw herself at me, he reminded himself.

Lars put on the suit and adjusted the tie, running a comb through his brown hair. He frowned when he saw that his hair looked thinner, pieces of scalp visible. Damn, I hope I'm not going bald, he thought worriedly, splashing cologne on himself.

Avery was waiting for him downstairs in the lobby. She wore a purple, green and amber paisley skirt with a purple silk blouse, her red hair in soft waves around her face.

She chuckled, an amused gleam in her blue eyes. "Lars, you didn't have to look so fancy", she chided gently.

"I just wanted to look good, Avery", he mumbled.

"That's okay, I've seen you in old jeans with holes in the bum and t-shirts with food stains. It is nice seeing you in a suit for once", she teased.

"I can wear suits now if I want, I can afford it. Those days are behind me", he boasted, leading her into the hotel restaurant.
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I have trouble imagining Lars in a suit. For some reason, Kirk is much easier to picture, probably because I've seen pictures of him wearing some sharp ones.

I wonder what they are going to order at the hotel restaurant. I'm hungry right now, so another food description chapter would rock out. :D
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Oh I wonder what Avery has to say!!
lars in a suit sounds amazing :D
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Sweet! :wub:
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awwl..... such a sweet chapter.... :heart:
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Chapter 213

"Table for two, please", Lars told the maitre'd. The immaculately dressed man in his tuxedo bowed slightly and led them inside. It was plush and elegant, the carpet a rich maroon and soft piano music filling the air.

"Here you go, your waiter will be here shortly", he said, before discreetly leaving.

"What do you have to say, Avery?", asked Lars.

"Aye, you don't beat around the bush, do you? Let us have some wine first", she chuckled.

Lars blushed guiltily and perused the wine list. "I feel like having a Merlot, what do you say?", he asked.

"Aye, that sounds good. I think I might need a few glasses", she chuckled.

The waiter arrived with the bottle of wine. He poured them each a glass of the rich, ruby liquid as it shimmered in the glasses. Lars took his goblet and took a sip, feeling the good wine course through his system.

I wonder what she wants, he thought, his heart pounding in anticipation.

I do hope Lars takes this news well, I hope he can accept and all I need is more proof, she mused.

Their food arrived and they talked of trivial things, their chatter pleasant. Lars felt himself relax, the effect of good food and wine having it's effects.

When their meal was over, Avery signaled for another bottle of wine. "Lars, I hope you don't take this the wrong way, but I must tell you something", she murmured, staring at the wine in her glass.

Lars tried to control his racing heart, as he took a deep breath. "Yeah, what is it?", he asked calmly.

"Lars, I think Olivia is your daughter..."
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Yum, yum, wine. I could seriously go for some wine and after this weekend I will really fucking deserve it. :)

Avery must be pretty tipsy to drop such a bombshell on Lars, especially since she hasn't spoken much to Olivia really. Lars is going to shit. :D


Keep up the awesomeness!!! :dance
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