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| Battery | May 30, 2008, 10:31 am Post #91 |
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Hmm.. Hot... Dave thought he's not jealous, I wonder if he won't feel jealous eventually and if some trouble will come from this, I hope not, I can't wait to see!
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| Verity | May 30, 2008, 11:00 am Post #92 |
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I'm impressed that Dave wasn't jealous. Though if Andrew and Kitty start hanging out and stuff more and more he might....I could see Kitty being into both of them. The more men the merrier. I can't wait to find out what you have next for us!
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| maisy blue | May 30, 2008, 12:38 pm Post #93 |
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This is really good. Perfect summertime read! It's nice to read about a girl getting indulged by two guys- usually only guys have all the fun. That sounded weird, but OH WELL. It's nice to see a fic from a female perspective, but you do that really really well Vanessa. |
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| Wishful | May 31, 2008, 7:02 am Post #94 |
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*PHEW* Time for a cold shower again! dayum that was so fucking good!!! |
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| Lucifer's Angel | May 31, 2008, 9:40 am Post #95 |
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Chapter 25 "All right! We are gonna get a deal!", yelled Robin, swigging from a can of beer. "Not yet. My uncle's management liked our stuff, they are going to get us a deal", chided Andrew, sipping his own beer. "Whatever. It's still something to celebrate", said Jake. "I know. Why don't you kids go out and have fun?", chuckled Dave, getting a root beer for himself. "Sounds good, sir. You wanna come along, Cat?", asked Kurt. "Where are you going?", she asked, raising an eyebrow. "Let's go to a strip club", suggested Jake. "No thanks, I don't swing that way", she joked, as they all laughed. "I'll go. Don't worry, I'll look but won't touch", said Andrew, seeing the look on her face. "You'd better not. I'll come after you", she retorted, opening her purse and drawing a .22 pistol. "Wow, I promise not to, kiska. I am not that stupid", he said, gently kissing her. "You kids go and have fun and if you're gonna come in late, don't make noise", said Dave, as they all left the kitchen. After every left the house, he turned to face her. "What do you want to do, Miss Kitty", he asked, a lazy grin on his face. Catriona said nothing, walking over to the refrigerator and peering inside. "I'll make something, are you hungry?", she asked. Dave's eyes widened in surprise. "Yeah, thanks. It's been a while since anyone cooked anything here, Pam wasn't big on cooking. I'm afraid I'm only good at making peanut butter sandwiches for the kids", he mumbled, blushing. Catriona smiled at him. "That's all right. Mom doesn't let Shane in the kitchen either, he almost burned down the house trying to make macaroni and cheese. I hope you aren't that bad", she teased. "No, I'm not. What can you cook?", he asked, intrigued. "Mom taught me how to cook Polish food, and Grandma taught me to make Mexican food. Since Mom's really busy, I end up doing most of the cooking. Her parents did takeout every night, that's why she learned to cook", she replied. Dave looked at her thoughtfully, a slow smile on her face. "So Miss Kitty, if you could cook for me, what would you make?", he drawled, a twinkle in his hazel eyes. "Well, when Mom wants to cheer up Shane, she makes borscht with dumplings and pirogies with sour cream. All handmade, though. I don't like the ones at the supermarket. But it takes a lot of time, and its' late. I did see some spaghetti, though, is that all right?", she asked. "Of course, Miss Kitty. I'll help, hopefully I won't burn down the kitchen", he joked, as they both laughed. |
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| Verity | May 31, 2008, 11:00 am Post #96 |
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OMG! I can't wait for the next chapter when Kitty cooks with Dave. It should be awesome. I must say that I can't cook. My idea of cooking is taking a cold tostilla out of the fridge and slopping some salsa over it. If we're really lucky I might sprinkle some cheese on it. The strip club part was funny. I really thought that Kitty was going to go. I went to a strip club a couple of times with my hubby and his friends. They play really good music at those places like Pantera and AC/DC and shit. I even put a dollar in the stripper's G-string. She was laughing. Anywho, awesome stuff. I can't wait to read more of Dave and Kitty. I like the thought of her hooking up with the older dude. |
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| Wishful | May 31, 2008, 11:57 am Post #97 |
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Ooooo i can see some foodie sex happening, Kitty being smeared with peanut butter and Dave licking off!!! Awesome update as always Vanessa |
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| maisy blue | May 31, 2008, 12:24 pm Post #98 |
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I love Dave and Kitty together. I think it's super sweet
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| Lucifer's Angel | June 1, 2008, 9:57 am Post #99 |
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Ashley, you are so brave. I could never go to a strip club, I'd be too embarassed And in New Jersey, many of them are run by the Mafia and the girls are being exploited, many of the girls have been kidnapped from Eastern Europe, Latin America or Asia. In good conscience, I can't go to a strip club like that Chapter 26 Catriona and Dave began to prepare dinner, working together in a comfortable silence. He observed her out of the corner of his eye, pleased at how competent she was. Pam never cooked anything, I always had to do it, he thought, frowning. She finished chopping the vegetables and scraped them into a pot. "Saute them in olive oil for a few minutes, now boil the water" she said. "I don't want to sound dumb, but it's been a long time since I woman cooked for me", he said. "Didn't your wife ever cook?", she asked, her cheeks turning red when she realized what she'd just said. Dave chuckled at her embarrassment. "No, Pam just didn't know how to cook. I don't want to say anything bad about her, she's not a bad person and she is the mother of my children". He just grinned wider when he saw the jealous look on her face. "Kitty, the divorce was final six months ago. I'm over her, there's no reason to get jealous. Besides, later on we can have a lot of fun", he whispered, a husky undertone in his voice. Her cheeks were still flushed, as the water began to boil. She added the spaghetti to the boiling water, stirring at it with a wooden spoon. Dave took her hand in his, his own hazel eyes looking into hers. "I hope you don't have any regrets, Kitty. I know that even though you're a Burton, you're a good kid. Andrew and I will never hurt you, if we do anything to anger you, you can walk away, no strings attached", he whispered. "Dave, that is very kind of you. But I am not a baby, like when you rescued me at the mall. I want this, my Mom was so happy with Dad, and I know I'm going to be happy with you and Andrew. I hope that didn't sound all emo and shit", she mumbled. "No, Miss Kitty. You are definetly Burton's kid, he was pretty crazy too", he chuckled. "Did you know my Dad?", she asked curiously. "Yeah, you should know I was in Metallica before Kirk. I do remember one time me and Junior were at Denny's, your parents were there too. Cliff smelled like a damn perfume factory, your Mom was a real lady. They were nice to Junior, so I paid for their food", he said, smiling at the memory. "I know, Mom likes to tell that story. Her and Dad were making lavender jelly, it was a present for Mrs. Hammett, my great-aunt. She still makes all that stuff, marmalade, whatever. It's a the Scot in her", she said thoughtfully. "I gotcha. I don't wanna smell like a perfume factory, but for you, maybe", he chuckled. "I know this feels a bit weird, I'm in a relationship with two guys. How very metal, I'm sure Dad is having a laugh up in heaven", she giggled. "Are you ever sad about Cliff? Or do you just shrug it off?", he asked. "Sometimes, especially in September because that's my birthday and the month he died. Dad made this tape of my second birthday party, right before they went on that tour. We converted it years ago, it was cool. Uncle Kirk got me a toy kitchen, Uncle James a sword, and Uncle Lars got me a princess outfit. Anthrax sent a black Jackson Flying V, Mom and Dad got me an illustrated edition of The Hobbit. Guess which ones stuck?", she giggled. "I'm guessing the kitchen and The Hobbit", he replied. "You guessed right, Dave. Which reminds me, the spaghetti is almost almost done", she said, taking the pot over to the sink. |
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| Verity | June 1, 2008, 11:24 am Post #100 |
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That was a good chapter Vanessa! I like Dave and Kitty getting to the point in their relationship where they talk about things. This will bring them closer, and I wonder what Andrew will think about it I love the thought of Dave and Kitty, but I am a little bit concerned that what Kitty feels to Dave isn't so much love that you would feel towards a boyfriend, but more of a fatherly devotion sort of thing, if that makes any sense. We shall see, it's one of the things that makes this story very interesting and gripping to read. And I'm not that brave. When I went to the strip clubs it was during Mardi Gras with a pack of guys, I did go once with a girl friend of mine years ago, but that was in Canada. I'd never go into one alone though. That woul;d just be really weird. My brother in law often dates strippers and some of them are very nice. You'd never guess. |
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| maisy blue | June 1, 2008, 11:50 am Post #101 |
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I LOVED this chapter. I love Kitty and Dave connecting on a emotional level. They have a strong relationship. Awesome! |
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| Lucifer's Angel | June 2, 2008, 10:01 am Post #102 |
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Chapter 27 Dave sat back in the chair, a beatific smile on his face. "My compliments to the chef", he said gallantly, kissing her hand. Catriona giggled, a flush on her cheeks. "Thank you, Dave. If I had more time, I would've done the sauce from scratch", she replied. "Hey, don't be so modest. You're a terrific cook, believe me. I've eaten a lot worse", he joked. "I can believe it, Dave. You had two helpings of dinner, you are going to get fat", she teased. "No, I'm not, Miss Kitty. I work out, I have a gym in the basement. Before we go on tour, I get in shape. I'm not as young as I used to be", he cracked. "You're not old. You look a lot better and you're in better shape than many young dudes I know. You certainly didn't have any problems yesterday" she teased, placing the dishes in the dishwasher. "I know, and I don't take Viagra either. All I do is stay in shape and stay sober", he replied. "Yeah, Andrew told me. I've smoked pot a few times, and I drink a bit. Not much, though", she added hastily. "Hey, that's all right. I don't go postal if someone drinks in front of me. Hell, if you wanna smoke pot, I don't care, I'm way over that. Sorry about that little rant, Kitty. This may sound dumb, but you wanna watch a movie? I got the Lord of the Rings boxed set and I don't get it. Can you help me?", he asked, the flush on his cheeks making him look boyish. Catriona smiled, kissing his cheek. "How sweet, Dave. But I'd recommend you watch one movie at a time, or else you're going to get lost. Let's dry the dishes and then watch it", she said. Several minutes later, the dishes were put away, as they made their way to the living room. It was done in warm colors, the walls painted a soft orange and the floor a rich polished dark wood. The room was dominated by an enormous plasma TV mounted on the wall, hooked up to a sound system and DVD player. Dave smiled at the look on her face. "I know, it's pretty big. My kids love it, wait until you see a good war movie with this TV", he chuckled, inserting the DVD into the machine. He dimmed the lights and joined her on the brown leather couch. Throughout the movie, she would pause and explain stuff that was unfamiliar to him. Dave was intrigued, seeing her eyes light up as she explained something. Wow, she's really into this. No wonder her and Andrew hit it off, he thought. "So tomorrow, we watch the Two Towers?", he asked when the movie was over. "Yeah, otherwise you're only going to confuse yourself. Did you understand most of it?", she asked. "Yeah, thanks to you, Miss Kitty. You're better than a director's commentary, if only because you're prettier", he joked, as she playfully slapped him. "Very funny, Dave", she retorted. "I like a show of spirit, Miss Kitty. As a reward for teaching me about Lord of the Rings, please follow me", he said, a hint of desire in his voice. |
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| maisy blue | June 2, 2008, 10:13 am Post #103 |
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That was a great chapter. You know me, I love domestic scenes almost as much as I like the saucy ones
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| Verity | June 2, 2008, 10:37 am Post #104 |
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I like that Dave is sober. That's awesome. I also like Dave and Kitty taking time to bond and really get to know each other. It's making their relationship stronger, and I wonder what Andy will think.
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| Wishful | June 2, 2008, 4:58 pm Post #105 |
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Hmmmm this could get interesting, Will Dave and Kitty become closer than close and Andrew feel pushed out? i guess we'll see!!! |
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And in New Jersey, many of them are run by the Mafia and the girls are being exploited, many of the girls have been kidnapped from Eastern Europe, Latin America or Asia. In good conscience, I can't go to a strip club like that
I love the thought of Dave and Kitty, but I am a little bit concerned that what Kitty feels to Dave isn't so much love that you would feel towards a boyfriend, but more of a fatherly devotion sort of thing, if that makes any sense. We shall see, it's one of the things that makes this story very interesting and gripping to read. 
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