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| Taimi | April 20, 2009, 9:11 pm Post #1261 |
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sweet update!!! |
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| Lucifer's Angel | April 23, 2009, 9:03 am Post #1262 |
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Chapter 336 The next few days were tense as everyone drilled with their guns, honing their skills. Catriona, Justis, Phil and Tony were all excellent shots, while Perttu and Antero were hesitant and not terribly accurate; Natalya and Olena were frightened of the guns, Electra being a good shot in spite of her age. The house was silent as everyone waited for Tony to come back from his daily rounds, making sure there were no trespassers on the property. The younger children and Natalya were in the basement just in case something happened, the others waiting in the parlor with their guns at the ready. "This feels weird, this is how the defenders of Helm's Deep must've felt before the orcs and Dunlendings attacked", Catriona mused aloud. "I reckon so, ma chatte. That's the big battle in the Two Towers, right? I hope we're not outnumbered like that, but we got at least four hundred rounds of ammo and our guns at the ready", said Phil. "Vittu, I hope they don't shoot too much, I'm a shaky shot", said Perttu, trying to suppress a shudder. His long pale fingers were wrapped around the barrel of his rifle, tapping at the cool metal impatiently. Antero smiled reassuringly at his boyfriend and kissed his cheek, as he visibly relaxed. Just then, Tony arrived from his inspections. "Phil, I found some strange footprints about f50 yards from the house in the back. I don't think it's hikers, the shoes looked like loafers or city shoes. If it's them bastards, they're mighty stupid to be walking around in city shoes around here. Just keep our eyes peeled", he said. Phil cursed softly in French under his breath. "We gotta be on high alert everyone", he said, as everyone looked around nervously. "Show us where is the house and we'll give you the coke", said the man. Andrew nodded, his bloodshot green eyes darting around nervously. He was in the middle of a godforsaken swamp somewhere outside of New Orleans, looking for Phil Anselmo's house. It was early evening with the sun just having set, the sky a vivid shade of royal blue with a full moon and faint stars above. The chirp of crickets and the rustling of leaves sounded loud in the humid air, almost deafening. I hope we find that blasted house. I need the coke. And I can't wait to see the look on my kiska's face when we shoot her lover and take those kids. No one gets away from me and gets away with it, he thought, a malicious gleam in his eyes. Andrew was livid with jealousy when he heard about Dave and Catriona's engagement. His addiction to cocaine had made him paranoid and touchy, making him feel defensive about everything. She will pay for abandoning me, how could she dump me for my uncle? I'll show her, and I can't wait to see the look on her face when they shoot his son and fuck his daughter, he thought, laughing like a hyena at the thought. |
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| Taimi | April 23, 2009, 9:10 am Post #1263 |
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*horrified shudder* ewwww..... hopefully, those fuckers get killed and andrew gets nailed in his nads..... maybe you can have andrew get his balls nailed to the floor of some abandoned shack and said shack set aflame, while andrew has a rusty tin lid in which to cut his nuts off to escape the burning cabin, if he escapes, have phil shoot him with teh shotgun.... just a idea..... |
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| The Cosmic Gerbil | April 23, 2009, 5:20 pm Post #1264 |
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Good idea CL...Andrew must DIE and painfully too! They could maybe feed him to tha gators too
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| Verity | April 23, 2009, 9:48 pm Post #1265 |
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Andrew needs to either get swallowed whole by an alligator or mutilated by gutter punks. He's a sicko bastard and I hope that Phil can save the day. |
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| aesel | April 24, 2009, 8:34 am Post #1266 |
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uuuh, so close, hope that things end up good!
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| Wishful | April 27, 2009, 4:41 am Post #1267 |
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Vanessa again thanks for giving the break down of what i've missed i will find the time to start from the beginning and catch up..........eventually lol. Aaaaaaaaa Andrew you low down snake in the grass bastard!!!! i hope you get shot to pieces you sick fuck!!! that chapter alone is gunna keep me hooked to this story again! |
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| aesel | April 27, 2009, 9:36 am Post #1268 |
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It would be the greatest with a couple of new chapters in this storrie for the next couple of days, so I have something to keep my mind bussy while I'm in bed with my screwed knee no stress, but it would be great
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| Lucifer's Angel | April 27, 2009, 10:00 am Post #1269 |
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I'm trying to think of how I'm going to write the next chapter, I had something written and it sounded like something from a bad cop show I don't want to post something half-assed, I want to write something awesome. Just be patient, ladies
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| aesel | April 27, 2009, 10:17 am Post #1270 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Patient? PATIENT!? patient does not exist in my vocabulary! take your time, looking forward to it
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| Taimi | April 27, 2009, 10:58 am Post #1271 |
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I understand, Vanessa. I cant even write a chapter on Amaranth with my pc as dead as it is... |
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| Lucifer's Angel | April 29, 2009, 11:24 am Post #1272 |
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Well, I wrote something and I hope it doesn't suck Chapter 337 The tension inside the house was overwhelming, like a suffocating wool blanket. Everyone was gathered inside the house with their guns, just in case. It was late at night in the swamp, the sky inky-black with a full moon wreathed in misty clouds, the stars poking through the hazy veil. "I got a bad feeling about this, they're coming. This how the people of Rohan must have felt before the battle of Helm's Deep", Catriona mused aloud. "I reckon so, ma chatte. Antero, when I give the signal, you take Nat and the girls to the basement and protect 'em. There's a pistol there, don't let the motherfuckers get the girls", he growled. "I know, I won't let them hurt our daughter", he vowed. Phil felt a chill go down his spine, the hairs on the back of his neck standing on end. "Antsa, take the girls to the basement", he ordered. Antero hastily got up and led the kids and Natalya to the basement, the lock of the door clicking into place. There was the slight rumble of a car engine approaching the house. Tony shut off all the lights as everyone clutched onto their guns that had been inspected and cleaned earlier. Phil carefully peeked out the window. A low dark shape was in front of the house, a car with no lights on. He reached for the shotgun and swore when he recognized Andrew, several other men in suits getting out. Catriona cursed under her breath when she saw Bernie and his henchmen. Her fingers curled around the 9mm in her hand, ready to fire at the slightest provocation. Phil, Catriona, Justis, Tony and Perttu all had their guns ready, as the men approached. Bernie had a predatory smirk on his face like a wolf about to devour a sheep, Andrew and his men flanking them. Phil saw one of the men reach for his gun, as he gave the signal. Before the man could take out his gun, the five guns fired simultaneously from inside the house. "Get them!", Bernie bellowed. The men stepped forward and fired their guns where the shots had come. The group had already soon their intentions and ducked as the bullets whizzed around them. Phil and Justis crawled over to another window and opened fire. There were loud curses in Russian as the bullets hit their targets as they both lay flat on the ground. Catriona quickly peeked out the window and saw one of the men aiming for Phil. She quickly fired a few rounds that hit the would-be attacker in the lower belly, causing him to crumple to the floor. She quickly ducked and tried to be still as several more bullets whizzed above them. "Get them already! It's just some hicks and women and fags", growled Bernie. "Son of a bitch", muttered Tony, firing a shot that hit one of the men in the thigh. Bernie was frustrated and angry. What had seemed like an easy task was now starting look like a route. All of his men were wounded except for him and Andrew. "Go in there and get them, and I'll give you the coke", he ordered. Andrew nodded, his hands shaking. His craving for cocaine was such that he would've obeyed the devil himself just to score. He advanced towards the house on shaky legs, his breathing labored and his heart pounding like a jackhammer. "Kiska, I need to speak with you", he said in a pleading voice. No answer. "Kiska, we can talk. I am so sorry, please", he wheedled. No answer. "Fuck, answer the fucking door or I will kill those little bitches", he growled. Just then, there was a flash of lightning and the clouds parted. A ghostly young man with bell bottoms and a Misfits t-shirt appeared. He had an angry look in his eyes and a cold smile on his face. Suddenly, his pale hand grabbed Andrew. He tried to scream but nothing came out as his body heated up and burst into flame. Bernie hastily backed away and tried to make for his car. The young man grabbed him as he too burst into flame, doing the same for all the wounded men. When he finished, the young man melted into door and smiled kindly at them. "I made a vow that I would always protect my family, us Burtons keep our word", he chuckled. "Dad, is that you?", Catriona croaked. "Yeah, the one and only. Phil, I owe you big time for looking for my daughter and grandchildren and the kids", he said. Phil was speechless. "Fucking hell", he muttered. Antero had emerged from the basement with Natalya and the girls. "Moj Bog, are you a ghost?", she asked, clutching onto her rosary. "Yeah, Nat. I said I was gonna protect Kitty, us Burtons always keep our promises. Bernie and all those bastards are dead, I made sure of it", he said. Electra and Olena came forward, their eyes wide with shock. "Don't be afraid, girls. Bernie and his friends are dead, you can go home now", he said, as he faded away. |
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| Verity | April 29, 2009, 11:31 am Post #1273 |
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This line was priceless Phil was speechless. "Fucking hell", he muttered. I'm glad that Bernie and Andrew are finally gone. Poor Electra and Olena having to go through all of that at such a young age. And they had no business calling Phil and Tony hicks. Mandeville is super nice. I can't wait until they are reunited with Dave. I wonder how Pam will react. That chapter did not suck. Far from it. |
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| Taimi | April 29, 2009, 12:52 pm Post #1274 |
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That DID NOT suck, Vanessa, it was excellent |
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| The Cosmic Gerbil | April 29, 2009, 5:04 pm Post #1275 |
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Awesome chapter I loved it when Kitty shot one of those dickheads. And my faveourite part was where Cliff appeared, that was so groovy
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I don't want to post something half-assed, I want to write something awesome. Just be patient, ladies
take your time, looking forward to it

8:38 PM Jul 10