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| Give Me Fuel, Give Me Fire, Give Me That Which I Desire..; James/OFC, 2000 | |
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| Elli <3's Papa Het | June 30, 2012, 4:46 pm Post #1 |
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just found this story in my Journal and thought maybe i should put it here and see what people think. ---------- Summer of 2000 Part 1 "Hey Savannah" i was greeted by Jesse right as i walked in the shop "how are you Babez" oh how i have missed that nick name "im much better now that im back in the shop" Jesse ran his hand down my back "yeah we are glad to...very glad to have you back" we both smiled "i suppose you wouldnt mind starting right away?" he asked and i sped to my station getting the paints ready, i took a deep breath and admired my surroundings the West Coast Choppers shop, my home, my get away from the stresses of the outside world and my paradise "how was your vacation?" Jesse asked taking me out of my trance "it was great but like i said heh its great to be back" he smiled "what you gonna design today?" i pursed my lips together and thought "hmm maybe a Devil Lady" i did duck lips and shook my hips a little he lauhged and kissed my cheek before going off to talk to Mike. Jesse James. my long time friend and the man who made a huge dream come true everyday i look forward to customizing Choppers, Cars, and many Harleys alike. he asked me to work here after seeing my art in a tattoo shop i used to work in, he knows my life story, he knows my struggles and good times. i could tell him anthing. i finally got done assorting the paints and walked over to a beautiful harley "hey there" i said with a giggle and sat on the bike beginning the drawing. a few long hard working hours later i finished, i sat up off the bike and sprayed the gas tank with a glossy spray so that it would protect the art and make it shine "oh, hell yeah" i looked up to see Jesse also admiring the work, we both walked outside as it was the end of my shift, he had his arm wrapped around my shoulder as we talked about my trip to Utah "oh! i almost forgot, im having a bbq party type thing at my place tomorrow at 5pm you should come Babez" he said as i hopped into my 56 ford pickup "i would love to.. see you then" we both waved as my truck roared through the parking lot. As soon as i opened the door to my house i was hugged by my bestie and room mate Charly "ah Savannah your home!" she giggled "how was it.." she asked and i sighed "it was like any funeral" my beautiful Alaskan Malamute came running down the stairs "oh Blue! hows my beautiful girl" she nearly knocked me on my ass.. "oh hey Charly" she lifted her head "theres a bbq tomorrow i want you to come" i smiled and she nodded happily "only if Jesse is there" she said and i laughed "of course its his party" she jumped and i laughed even harder " im going to take a bath and go to bed.. im beat" i told charly "i bet hun goodnight." i siad goodnight and ran up stairs. i turned the water on and let it get hot, taking some of my mascara and lipstick off so it wouldnt run, i lay in the spa tub and thinking heavily about all this mess going on in my head, i looked up at the picture of Andrew.. i lost him in a crash about a month ago, i admired the picture his long black wavey hair, green eyes, and a beautiful smile. he was everything to me that funeral had to be the hardest thing ever, i sank in the tub trying to forget about the bad things. with a heavy sigh i got out, slipped into a silky purple nightgown and crashed on the bed. ------------------ |
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| Sekhmet49 | June 30, 2012, 4:51 pm Post #2 |
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Some Kind Of Monster
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It definitely looks promising!
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| Elli <3's Papa Het | June 30, 2012, 7:44 pm Post #3 |
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Frantic
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------------------- Part 2 my eyes opened slowly to the smell of coffee, i stirred in bed and as soon as Blue noticed i was awake she crawled on top of me and licked my face "ah Blue!!..im awake" i sat up and raided my closet for something to wear, i put on a black tank top, and dark blue skinny jeans. "well goodmorning sunshine!" Charly said with a big smile plastered on her face "excited much?" i asked laughing a little, "ha are you kidding me, i get to see Jesse" this girl was obsessed with him, she liked him a lot and i know hes pretty fond of her as well "well this time are you going to talk to him and not hide behind my shoulder?" she laughed "of course ill talk to him! im not as shy as you" i nodded "you got me there" i sipped on my coffee and stared out the window "wat you thinking Savannah?.." i looked down then at her "oh you know, the usuall" she walked over to sit by me "hun.. i know its hard but please dont sulk about it your whole life,.. ill tell ya what, me and you are going to go out a-" "but Charly you-" "ah!.. i want to take you out, plus you really like the guys that hang around bars n such" we both laughed a little at that "so what exactly do you like your guy to look like anyway?" she asked me that? i smiled "hmm well.. tall, blue eyes, broad nicely toned body, you know the biker rocker type" i giggled. later that evening i stood in my bathroom curling my long black hair so it was a bit wavey, applied eyeliner, mascara and a little eye shadow and some lip gloss. i wasnt wearing something fancy just the my usuall style, tank tops and skinny jeans occasiaonaly a leather jacket but it was hot outside i sprayed a little perfume on then met Charly downstairs "wow Savannah you look great" i laughed "its what i usually wear.." she smiled "yeah but you never know you just might find that guy who gets a woody over that style" we both laughed and i slapped her arm "yeah well look at you! Jesse gonna be all over your ass" she laughed again and said "oh i hope so" we headed out the door laughing. we arrived at his house and parked on the side of the road "wow its packed already?" i looked at her "yeah but hey youll steall Jesse's attention no doubt" we both smiled and got out of my truck, i knocked and jesse hugged us both and his smile grew even wider when he saw Charly "hey im glad you guys came!" we walked in and there was people in the pool out back, people chilling in the living room and i heard people downstairs "jesus Jesse how many did you invite?" i laughed "hey well when you party you party man!" i nodded in agreement i said hello to a few people i knew and hello to new people "meet any new guys?" Charly came up behind me and asked " ah woman i just barely got here" she giggled "have a few drinks and that wont matter" i laughed "woman your terrible!" i sipped on my beer "hey ladies" Jesse came by out of the blue "theres more people on the way so, put as many beers in your bras and claim a seat" me and Charly laughed and she stuffed a cold beer in between her breasts her face winced and i laughed "so how have you been" Jesse asked Charly and i told Charly i will be in the living room. the party got way bigger than i expected and i enjoyed watching Charly laugh and try not to blush around Jesse "mind if i take this seat" i low voice asked "uh go ahead" i scoot over a bit i looked at him a little and he looked familiar. he streched out his hand "im James by the way" i smiled "im Savannah" his smile was gorgeous and thats when it hit me. James Hetfield from Metallica was sitting next to me, i listened to a little Metallica mainly the Load and REload album my heart was beating a little faster "so you a friend of Jesse's?" he asked "yeah i work with him. you?" James shrugged a little "i see him every now and then." i looked over at Charly who was looking at me and giggling i stuck my tongue out at her "so you work on Choppers or?" he aksed another question "well kinda, i mostly paint and air brush designs on them" he nodded and pointed at the tattoo on my upper arm "Carpe Diem" yes he pointed at the tattoo that had a Chopper with banners flowing around it saying Carpe Diem. he lifted up his left sleeve "oh my god!" i said laughing "yeah thats pretty weird" we both laughed admiring that we both had a tattoo that said Carpe Diem on banners "good song by the way" i said and he smiled nodding. god this man was something, surely almost made me pee my pants "im gonna go get another" i said shaking my empty beer bottle "what was that?" Charly asked as i opened the cooler "what.." "oh i saw you talking to Hetfield" Charly knew him? well she was a bigger Metallica fan than me "yeah so.." she laughed "so? god i could see you two together" i scoffed "yeah me end up with a very rich rockstar what are the chances of that i dont even know him" she came closer "exactly. you dont know him" she had a real good point there. --------------------------------------- |
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| Sekhmet49 | July 1, 2012, 5:53 am Post #4 |
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Some Kind Of Monster
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How did she not faint on the spot?!
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| HannahBanana | July 1, 2012, 1:40 pm Post #5 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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More! This is good so far |
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| Elli <3's Papa Het | July 1, 2012, 3:05 pm Post #6 |
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@Sekhmet49 well i did mention she got a bit nervous and felt like she peed right XD i know i would have fainted ha ------------------------------------ Part 3 it was getting late almost 12:30 in fact, i sat on a bar stool by the kitchen and watched as people left and said my share of the goodbyes thinking about what Charly had said about her seeing me and James being a couple, i smiled a little and just shook my head laughing softly. Me and James Hetfield right, i looked around trying to find Charly and thought it wouldnt help if i just sat here and she just poofed in the living room.. i stood up walking slowly around the house making my way through a couple of people god dammit where was that woman i wanted to leave.. i heard her laugh and zoomed around the corner running smack dab into.. James, shit. "oh im..im sorry i just" "hey hey no worries" he laughed a little and i almost melted, he even picked up my little purse "i think Jesse and your friend went off somewhere" he stared right into my eyes with thoes baby blues..was i blushing?..fuck "oh my god heh well if you see any of em just tell em that she can find a ride home" he laughed a little and so did i, i felt my cheeks burn and in between my thighs. fuck fuck fuck!! "well uh se you around im getting really tired.." he moved a little in front of me as i was about to leave "i just wanted to ask.. is that yours" he pointed at my black 56 Ford.. i was about to just jump on him no joke i needed to leave "uh yeah but its nothing much re-" "oh nonesence a vintage car is always something" i sighed with a smile "ok go ahead heh" like a kid in a candy store he immeadiately followed me to my truck and he didnt hesitate to pop the hood. he had the biggist smile put on and it made me smile to he fiddled around with a few things as i sat there trying to keep my composure "you should let me take this baby in sometime" i nodded "love for you to work on it, she neeeds a few fixer uppers" he closed the hood and we both said our goodbyes, i watched him go back in the house and i sat there scolding myself "what the hell, i dont like guys like tha- he- i dont even-"i just sighed and started the truck heading home. i opened the door and come to find Charly was already home, she ran in front of me "how did you-" she inturrupted "he asked me on a date!" my eyes widened "uh uh, well?" she smiled and screamed a little "i said yes of course! oh shit what if i get laid" she was waaaay drunk i could just tell ya that "ha well you know the rule protection comes first" we both laughed and she fell on the couch with a happy sigh and looked at me "sooo did you talk any to Hetfield?" i knew that was coming "a little he looked at my truck and-" "oh! did he get dirty for ya!? did he ki-" "Charly!.. please i know his type" she lifted her eyebrow and laughed at me"oh really? what?" i sighed "you know, more girly" oh yeah great excuse "pshh i saw the way he looked at you when you two where chatting on the couch, and clearly i know you enough, you like him to" i growled "i o not!....ugh ok ok maybe a little" she laughed at me and sang that kissing in a tree song "goodnight!" i yelled as i went upstairs i sat on the edge of the bed. how do i really feel about this? i asked myself.. i thought hard, yeah i had feelings for a man i dont really even know. -------------------------- |
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| Sekhmet49 | July 1, 2012, 3:29 pm Post #7 |
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Some Kind Of Monster
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Like all of us around here! ![]() Good chapter! |
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| HannahBanana | July 1, 2012, 4:08 pm Post #8 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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I'm sure she's James' type
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| Elli <3's Papa Het | July 1, 2012, 6:10 pm Post #9 |
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Frantic
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thanks for the comments, heres another segment. ------------------------- part 4 James' POV i got home and sighed heavily wishing i had some other place to be and someone else to be around, like Savannah we didnt talk much tonight but she intruiged me, she was interesting one look into her eyes and you could see shes been through hell and back i wanted to be let in on that womans life. Damn, i dont really even know her yet, i felt something.. something better than what i have now. "well look who decided to show up" i looked behind me to see her standing there, a chill ran up my spine. "how much did you have hm? how many did you fuck tonight?" i sighed and turned around "you want the honest truth Francesca, i had well about 2 beers and 0 women" she scoffed "like i believe that" in a weird way theres a reason why she shouldnt believe me, but drinking is all that really helps she doesnt help she only adds to my problems.. "i only care ok James" she came closer to me "i can show you that this wont help" she slowly took the bottle out of my hands and her hand ran up my chest.. i really didnt want this. i honestly hated it i really did "ok baby" now both her hands ran up my chest, i squinted my nose a little and took hold of her wrists softly "im tired, i dont want to...sorry" i moved away and sat on the couch "that says it all right there! you just enjoy fucking other wom-" i tuned out of the womans cold voice im tired of these useless arguments "Fran!...enough" she looked at me with thoes eyes, the eyes that used to stare at me with love not anymore. "fine!" she stormed off to the bedroom and came back with clothes stuffed in her bag "your fucking pathetic!" she threw her ring at me and i felt a sharp tiny pain on my cheek from it, i didnt bother to pick it up, instead i replaced that with picking up this bottle this is my medicine. next morning Savannah's POV i walked up the hill to the weeping willow, sat next to it "hey" a soft voice said i looked over to see Andrew sitting on his grave stone i sat up on my knees shocked "wh- what" he laughed "just visiting" my heart dropped..visiting, never coming back "stop it" he said as if he could read my heart...well, he could "you know im always around" i stared down at the grass a tear fell and i felt soft hands wiping them away i looked up and bright emerald eyes "hey now thats not ok, guiardian angels dont cry" i looked up confused-- my alarm rang and it never stopped, i hit the button and read 10:00am his voice rang in my head "guardian angels dont cry" what did that mean.. im the one that needs a guirdian angel "goodmorning sleepy head" i looked up to see Jesse standing there "oh well hello to you to" i said with a smile "what are you doing here" he laughed "well, Charly wanted me to come visit" i laughed a little "of course..you excited for that tonight" he nodded happily and i sat up still feeling asleep "had to much last night?" he asked with a laugh "heh yeah i guess so! jeez!" then he put his hand on my poofy hair and laughed "stop it! i know i know" both my hands flew up to flatten my hair but that failed "ill meet you downstairs" he said on his way out and i just stuck my tongue out at him and he laughed closing the door. i stood up slipping on a hoodie and sweats, then putting my hair up in a messy pony tail before heading downstairs. "hey..wow you look" Charly giggled "oh shush i know i look hungover" we all laughed and Jesse brought us coffee i sipped on it and felt a little better "so, me and Jesse are going to lunch and then tonight your going out with me" Charly informed and i knew where we were going "now i want to be the one getting super happy drunk this time. you drive" i told Charly and she laughed "ok ok" and she stood up "well, im going to go get dressed see you in 10 Jesse" she went upstairs "when she says that she means more like see you in a hour ha" Jesse laughed at my comments and i asked "you ok?" he looked at me "yeah, i just.. i just hope she dont keep her hopes too high that i actually would spend my life with her" i was a little shocked but knowing Jesse.. "hey, i know she doesnt expect that from you, yeah she speaks highly of you and she likes you but i know she is also the type of girl that just likes ot have fun. so dont sweat it she doesnt expect you to give her a diamond ring" i laughed a little and he just smiled "all ready" she said coming down stairs "you ready" she asked Jesse and they both stood by the door "see ya later hell cat, be ready by 9pm sharp" she told me.. jesus where they gonna be gone that long.. oh god i dont wanna know, i laughed at myself and then just stared out the window. thinking about James all of the sudden, i smiled a little and stood up just shaking my head. --------------------------------------- |
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| Shayniz21 | July 1, 2012, 7:05 pm Post #10 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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I really like this story!! Please keep going!! |
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| Elli <3's Papa Het | July 1, 2012, 11:23 pm Post #11 |
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Frantic
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here we go! ----------------- Part 5 i stood facing the mirror in the bathroom holding the curling iron in place, thinking about James how he hasnt left my mind not once today and wondering why i felt like i knew him a lifetime. i shook my head "hes probably happy who he is with, or else he wouldnt be with her right?" i said to myself in the mirror "plus..why would a man who has everything he could ever want, even look at me..why would a perfect guy like him.." i squinted my eyes, "well thats why im going out tonight, to try and find someone for me. someone like me.." i didnt pay any attention to how rediculous i was sounding. i heard Charly walk through the door and come upstairs "oh wow Babez you look hot!" Charly just smiled "heh well thanks.. how was it?" she smiled at me and sat on the edge of the tub "oh my gosh Savannah, hes sweet, so sweet. we went boating after we had lunch" i finished curling my hair and while i was adding hairspray i looked down at her "just be careful ok?" i knew Jesse, he loved the attention from women. she smiled up at me "i know Savannah i will be" she laughed "ok ok im loving this attire is it new?" i laughed also "yeah i went out while you where gone" i had went to a store called Buckle, i bought a red shirt with a small leather jacket, denim skinny jeans with white lacing, and some heels, along with accesories like a iron cross necklace and belt. Charly went to her room to touch up a little, i put my cell in my bag and a water bottle "you ready?" i nodded and we headed out as soon as we got off the freeway i knew exactly where we were the Harley Davidson shop, it was a shop but also a bar and grill because it used a be a resturant a long time ago "your favorite place" Charly said "indeed it is i havent been here in ages". we walked in and Charly ordered a few drinks oh i was for sure ready to get wasted i really needed it, Charly came back with the drinks and i attacked them "ha! woah now im getting jealous i wont be able to get as drunk as you" we both laughed "oh forget about what i said ill have the bartender call a cab if he has to" we laughed even harder "lets go look around" i aksed and me and Charly went up to look at the bikes she tried on some jackets and glasses we laughed the whole time"ok im ready for more, something stronger" she laughed and we went to the front to sit on a couple bar stools. we had a couple, ok maybe a lot of drrinks and we were just laughing up a storm about stupid things "ok now get to the reason why we are here" Charly said and my chest tightened, we both turned in our stools and looked around "oh look" Charly said pointing at what looked like a Sully Erna look alike "oh god!" i laughed "no..no" i pointed and Charly busted out laughing "what?!" she laughed at me even more "he looked like Toby Keith!!" she laughed at me even harder! "so..hes pretty hot to." we took a few more sips of our drinks and i heard a all to familiar laugh i stood still and Charly pointed behind me "ok there you go" i smiled looking at her "look!" i shook my head and she pushed my head to look behind me..James. "i quickly turned away back to drinking "ok James is here the same night you are. oh give it a chance Savanah!" i slammed my drink down "no! Charly.. hes married and you know that" i tried so hard to drop the subject.. she just rolled her eyes "im going to go pee" we both laughed and i watched her walk away, she left just to see if James would get close.. oh that woman just dont se it, or maybe i dont see it "hey, Savannah?" his voice made me turnaround "oh hey." his smile grew so much wider and that made my heart sing..why? he took a seat next to me ordering himself and i a drink "so, what are you doing here so late" he asked and i looked right up into thoes beautiful.. stop it "oh, just chillin' with a friend been wanting to get wasted for a while" we both laughed and he passed me my drink "want to see who can chug the fastest?" he asked "your on!" we both started and i ended seeing he was right behind me "wow! and i thought i was pretty good" he said "another" i told the bartender. after a few chuging contests later i was the giggliest person alive, we both went outside and i couldnt find my truck "ohh shit" i dug in my purse to look for my cell phone and i got a text from Charly he can drive you home, or you can get a cab i laughed and growled "heh friend bail on ya with your truck?" i nodded and he laughed ppatting my back "want me to take you home?" i nodded again barely able to keep my footing "woah heh" he caught me and we were so close to each other he just smiled and i sat in his car. halfway down the road i felt a huge bump "shit" i heard him hiss and we pulled over we both got out and i noticed he was taking the backroads, we were on a long stretch of highway very secluded. "i got a flat, im sorry" his voice was a little shaky "hey no worries James" we both smiled and i sat under a tree, i felt him sit next to me "water?" he nodded and gulped it down "thanks" we both looked at the car and i realized that he had no spare i looked at him "im really sorry Savannah i didnt know that-" "James dont sweat it, im in no hurry" he looked at me "really?" fuuck good job woman "uh well, im never in a hurry.." he just nodded slowly and i looked up, i could see the milky way and the stars were sparkling, he looked up to "beautiful" he said and i smiled we both saw a shooting star "oh! we managed to say at the same time "what did you wish for " he asked looking down, i looked up at him the air thinning between us. ------------------------------------------------------ cliff hanger lol |
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| Elli <3's Papa Het | July 10, 2012, 5:30 pm Post #12 |
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part 6 James' POV so close to her lips her eyes looking up at mine, the reflection of the stars shinning on them. I was completely lost in them i felt as if my whole world was at peace at last, i felt her soft plump lips touch mine, i closed my eyes, her hand held on to my shoulder and my muscles immediately relaxed like i turned into mush from her touch. I kissed her deeper and i felt her hand squeeze mine, i looked at her and she looked down as if i was about to yell like i would have at other women if they refused me, but for the first time all because of her touch it felt like the world and the things i carried lifted off of my shoulders "I'm sorry" she whispered i was a little confused "about what" she giggled a little but it was a sad giggle "for getting you all worked up then not wanting to.." i knew what she meant "hey now, no need to be sorry" i didn't know what to say literally, i mean, i have never felt so at peace with someone and i don't even know how i managed to "hey" she said pulling me out of my mess of a head "look" she pointed and i saw what looked like headlights from a distance. I stood up and got the drivers attention "were to?" he asked and i told him Savannah's address first i was certainly in no hurry to get home. he pulled over by Savannah's house and we both got out, i told the trucker to wait "you going to be ok?" i looked at her "of course, see you soon?" i nodded and almost leaned in to kiss her again but didnt. "goodnight" i watched her head into her house and tried not to listen or think about what Fran would be saying when i got home. Savannah's POV "soooo how did it go?" Charly asked all happy "well for your information, no, we did not fuck nor kiss" she laughed "you liar!" i sighed "ok we kissed.. but that was all!!" i thought about it and wanted to hit myself for even getting that close to him "and! his car broke down.. a flat so i got home later than expected" she laughed "riiight" i just rolled my eyes with a smile and we both laughed i sat on the couch with a heavy sigh "what up girl, something else happened.. i know it" Charly sat next to me "not something else but something" she held my hand and i knew she wanted to hear "i felt it Charly.. the same thing i felt with andrew..even better!" i looked down "just by one kiss and...my god" she pulled me into a hug "get some rest we will talk about it later OK?" i nodded and headed up the stairs my head hanging low. i got into my little silky dress and as i did a small piece of paper flew out of my..bra? i picked it up and read "my number, please call me when you can -James" i smiled "oh your sly" i laughed to myself and lay down falling asleep fast. James' POV looking through the house Fran had basically left me nothing, i sighed and grabbed the Jack Daniels on the counter "fucking hell..." sitting on the couch i looked at my cell and i had no calls and no messages i was a bit nervous because what if i scared her with that hasty move under the tree, yeah, she kissed me first but i wanted to take it higher.. fuck.. i should know better Savannah ain't no hooker or stripper from the clubs, certainly not! but looking into those eyes of hers, she has a past, a past i want to know I'm begging to know what is going on in her mind..her heart. i leaned back in the chair and i was sleepy as fuck but i couldn't sleep my eyes just refused to stay shut, i couldn't stop thinking about how whenever her hands touched mine or whenever i looked into her eyes its like im in a heaven and out of my constant hell. i found my eyes getting heavy and taking advantage of that falling asleep. Savannah's POV i ran up to the willow again looking around "Andrew?" i spun around when i heard him "what?" sitting on his gravestone again "what did you mean by...Guardian angel" he wiped his palms on his pants and looked at me with piercing emeralds, "you will find out soon enough Savannah, you may not know it yet but there is someone, someone just like you with as much pain and as much weight on the shoulders to bear." i sat on my knees "but..im the one that needs a guardian angel Andrew..how could i possib-" he lifted my chin up "Savannah, Babez...i told you i don't want people grieving when i die right?" i nodded..he held my hand.. so warm "i know you miss me, i miss you to..but please there IS someone who needs you" why wouldn't he tell me?! my eyes just all the sudden opened "mother fucker!!" ----------------- lol yup |
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| Shayniz21 | July 11, 2012, 12:10 am Post #13 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Loved this chapter!!!! |
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| Sekhmet49 | July 12, 2012, 4:03 am Post #14 |
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Some Kind Of Monster
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Loved it!
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| Elli <3's Papa Het | July 13, 2012, 3:33 pm Post #15 |
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thanks for the comments guys much appreciated, helps me get motivated to write the next part ----------------------------------- part 7 i read the clock 1:30am its only been a hour and a half since i got home and went to bed, i lay there and all of the sudden i felt sad thinking about what Andrew had said i deny so much in my life but how could i possibly be a guardian angel of anyone!? hell, i couldn't even help myself with anything! i suddenly without a second thought picked up my cell hey its Savannah, you up? i lay my phone on my chest and it immediately vibrated yeah, you ok? i sighed deep inside i really wasn't ok yeah i just cant sleep for all i know i probably interrupted a good night with his wife..shit his wife, and i had kissed him earlier me either..want to come over? i was a bit surprised but then i found myself sending yes whats the address ..fuckin' ugh whatever come out of your box Savannah. He sent me his address and i slipped on a hodie that ironically said Metallica on it, dark blue skinny jeans and Vans. i arrived at his place and knocked on the door, a huge smile spread across his face as soon as he saw me "hello" i said almost shyly and he followed me in "wow, roomy" he laughed at my comment i sat on the black leather couch "want something to drink?" i looked up a little "uh..no im fine but thanks" he sat beside me "whats troubling you Angel" James calling me Angel..i liked it "lots of things that i don't know what to do to get out of my head" he wrapped his arm around my shoulder "im listening" really? he would listen to me? to what im going through? "heh where to start.." he smiled at me and his arm tightened around my shoulder "well..ill start out with i lost someone very special to me about a month ago...uh.. his name is Andrew we been dating for about 4 years" his eyes widened "yeah heh..but anyway, he got in a very bad car accident and when i found out i didn't know what to do, i was mad at the world and hurt" i felt my eyes burn..no god damn "i..just, the funeral was the hardest part.beautiful but hard.." i suddenly felt his gentle fingers wipe my tears away and i leaned on his shoulder instinctively "after the funeral i tried dating again and it was a bad idea most the guys i tried dating would only want one thing and most of them where cheaters so i gave up and my best friend Charly has told me she knows bunches of really nice guys but i have refused every time because i think im just not good enough.. im that hard on myself i am." i looked at him and he was just staring at me paying full attention "there's so much i don't understand that i wish i did. its good to have you listen, not very many people would listen just because most don't understand." "i understand..completely" we both looked at each other "really.." he nodded and matter of fact i wanted to know what he ment "would you mind telling me your story now heh" he smiled a little "its not much really" i held his hand like he was mine "so.. i wanna know" James' POV a chill ran up my spine when her soft fingers intertwined in mine, i usually don't just come out and tell people this but..i loved her "not very many people understand my life really, and i don't blame them its difficult to understand unless you've actually witnessed it yourself" i told her everything and every detail to my life, i could tell she was touched and she was the only person besides my best friend that knew everything i wanted her to know i want her to feel that she can be close to me on anything that im here for her on anything "you can tell me anything..you know that right..that im here" she looked up at me and smiled "thank you" i leaned in slowly and cautiously to kiss her and she let me, i took it slow and gentle my hand softly caressing her cheek her fingers kneaded my shoulders and i let out the first moan i couldn't help it, it felt good. i caught her looking at me and those eyes where saving me i felt so calm and she pressed her chest against mine i lay her down on the couch and i looked at her making sure it was ok to go further she smiled at me adn my heart sang "good girl" she just moaned a little as i kissed and nipped at her neck i felt her hands go under the back of my shirt and i just took it off i rested my forehead on hers and she smiled sweetly. Savannah's POV he was so gentle, his hands went around my hips as he kissed me biting at my bottom lip a little i arched against his touch and he went against me a slightly. he lifted my shirt some more and stopped when his arms flipped the shirt over my breasts he groaned and began suckling he pushed his hands on my back to bring myself closer to him my hands rustling through his hair i was so far gone and so needy. that's when i took my hand to his crotch and he laughed a little after his deep growl he started to kiss my neck and breath heavily against my ear the more i rubbed him i attacked his belt and slipped it off then continuing to his zipper slowly sliding it down, he smiled as he copied my movements to my jeans. one thing was for sure, i felt so small hes so broad and..big my hands managed to make their way and i was surprised a smile plastered my face and his cheeks went light red i just kissed him and slipped his jeans off. he spread my legs a little and rubbed against me a few times before sliding in i moaned adjusting to his size "relax baby i got you.." his voice was so soothing to me i let him move slowly he moaned with each thrust as did i holding on to his back as the pace began to increase, he was killing me slowly that was for sure i took his hand in mine and his breathing relaxed i could tell by his heartbeat that he was close i thrust against him and he did the same but a bit harder growling and breathing against my ear chanting 'yes' a few times before i felt him spill in me. i kissed his plump lips and my hands moved a long his wet shoulders his neck so red. "James" i looked at me and kissed me tender he looked right into my eyes with his dark ones "i love you" he told me and my heart jumped to my throat "i love you to.." did he really or was this just a one time thing to him? -------------------------------- |
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