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THE UNFORGIVEN .....; by the mighty MetalliKirk!!!! Het.
Topic Started: July 13, 2008, 5:03 am (2,457 Views)
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Okay, here's my first contribution to the fanfic section of this site .... I am hoping you will enjoy this tale I have to tell .....


:rockdevil:


PART ONE!

"Shannyn, are you sure this is the right place? It doesn't look like it from here!" Lars Ulrich asked from the back seat of the 1967 Chevrolet Impala I was driving.

"Yeah, I'm pretty sure it is, Lars. I followed the directions Jake gave us," I answered him softly, patiently, as I peered out the windshield, through the sheeting rain at the storm tossed world outside.

Jake Matthews was the record producer who would be working with Metallica on their new album, and it was his spooky old house in the middle of some nondescript American backwoods that we had only just arrived at.

"This place looks pretty spooky to be a recording studio," James Hetfield observed, in the passenger seat beside me.

Being the tallest of the band, he'd claimed shotgun at the beginning of the journey, so that he could stretch his longer legs out easily. Lars sat with Kirk Hammett and Rob Trujillo in the back, squeezed into the smaller space of my beloved Impala. Cramped though they were, Lars was the only one who'd complained so far.

"I'm sure Shannyn knows where she's going," Kirk said, in a quiet aside to Lars. "Has she ever been wrong yet?

Lars shook hid head almost immediately, before saying - "No, she focking has not."

"Well, then, that's why she's always the designated driver .... Her sense of direction has always been flawless!" Kirk said, before turning to look out the window at the teeming rain.

I hid a smile at what Kirk had said. As P.A. to Metallica, it had naturally fallen to me to drive today, because I was the only one who knew where we were going. I didn't think it was because of my sense of direction, but I mentally thanked Kirk for words. It always seemed to mostly be him coming to my rescue whenever I needed it ....

All went quiet then, as I pulled up outside the intimidatingly spooky mansion. I turned off the engine, and we all stared up as one at the large red bricked walls, covered in ivy, backlit by frequent bursts of lightning.

A sudden howl filled the air and it sounded close ... too close .... and it sounded too much like a wolf's howl for my liking ....

"ROB!! DO THAT AGAIN AND I'LL RIP YOUR FOCKING LIPS OFF AND MAKE YOU FOCKING EAT THEM!!!" Lars yelled from behind me, breaking the tension that had suddenly filled the car ...

"It was a JOKE, Lars!!! Jeez!!" Rob groused, amidst laughter from the rest of us.

"We'd best get ourselves inside .... Jake will be waiting .... we don't wanna make a bad impression by being late on our first day .... we are still on time aren't we?" James asked me.

"Actually we're five minutes early, but it won't hurt to go up now ... " I told him, as I checked my watch.

None of us immediately moved still intimidated by the spooky old house.

Until Kirk said - "Well, you heard the lady, get your asses in gear!!!"

I snorted out a laughter at that, before swinging open the door and stepping out into the wind, the rain, the weather of the world outside.

All of us were drenched by the time we reached the heavy wooden front door, and I reached out to grip the impressive knocker, knocking once, twice, three times, and not liking the echoes it made inside.

Somehow it just didn't bode well .....







dun - dun - DUNNNN!!!!

And what is gonna happen to Shannyn and the 'Tallica boys?? Well, stay tuned to find out!!!!
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you pooooooooosted!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH


THANK GOD!!!!!!!!!!

alright! profund analyse now :lol:

you are metallica's P.A.!!! thats sooo cool!!!!!!!!! :nanner:

driving my favorite car? Chevy Impala 67!!! wooohoooooo!!! :nanner:

of course Kirk is on your side!! umm...could there be a romance???

and my favorite line is of course "ROB!! DO THAT AGAIN AND I'LL RIP YOUR FOCKING LIPS OFF AND MAKE YOU FOCKING EAT THEM!!!"

:horns: :lol: :horns:

I loved!!! can't wait to see how is the house!!! sounds spooky!!! you know I love spooky things so yeaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! :nanner: :nanner: :nanner:
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Wishful
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Like it so far deary more soon? :biggrin
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Metallica and a spooky house= A totally awesome combination. I can't wait to see what's going to go on inside. :)

Loved the Chevy Impala part too. My husband used to (way back in the day) drive an 87 Impala but it eventually died. :(


Totally Awesome work! Can't wait to read the next bit, and see what surprises lie in store for Metallica inside the house. :)
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Yeah, the haunted house idea sounds intriguing. And my dad drove an Impala back in the day :horns2 I'd like to see where this goes :)
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Great cliffhanger there!

Maybe some old butler is going to show up now, letting them in....
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So far so good..you got my atention.
Love this part:ROB!! DO THAT AGAIN AND I'LL RIP YOUR FOCKING LIPS OFF AND MAKE YOU FOCKING EAT THEM!!!" :lol:
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Thankies guys, I'm glad you're enjoying reading this as much as I am writing it ...
As you probably can guess, I love all this spooky old stuff as much as I like Metallica, and I hopefully will cram in as much spookiness as I can.

So, on with the tale ....



PART TWO.

"Why isn't no one focking answering the door?? I'm focking freezing and I'm focking cold and I'm focking wet and I'm focking hungry and ... " Lars babbled.

"LARS!! We're all what you just said!! This is a big house! They probably need a car just to drive down the hallway. They obviously haven't got here, yet!" Kirk pointed out calmly to the drummer.

"Well said, Kirk!!" I said, as I tried knocking on the door again.

Lars gave me a look as though to say he expected nothing less of me than to agree with the slim guitarist.

"What?" I asked him.

"Nothin' Shannyn!" Lars groused, with a roll of his eyes and a shake of his head.

"Good!" James said, without even looking at him.

We continued to wait in the rain, getting further soaked to the skin. as the thunder still growled overhead. There was silence amongst us, though, leaving us free to hear the unmistakeable sounds of someone - or some thing - creeping by behind us.

"Tell me you just heard something creep by, just then ... " Rob murmured, quietly beside me.

"I did but I wish I hadn't!" I replied, looking up into the bassist's face to see that he looked as scared as he'd sounded.

"There shouldn't be anybody else here .... There wasn't anybody else here when we arrived .... " he said. "I didn't see anybody!"

"Oh, for Christ's sake you two, there's nothing there!!" James said. "Take a look for yourselves!!!"

He'd already turned around during my brief exchange with Rob, and the courtyard behind us was, like James had said, completely deserted, other than the five of us, and my beloved Impala.

Lightning streaked across the sky above us, illuminating the black paintwork of my Impala, and flaring almost painfully bright against the chrome.

"JEEZ!! DID YOU SEE THAT!!!" Lars shouted, distracting me from my car, but the lightning had faded, leaving only blackness behind, leaving nothing there to see any more.

"Lars, what did you see?" Kirk asked him, peering out into the darkness avidly, his long curly hair plastered almost flat to his head with the force of the rain.

"There was someone standing over by the gate where we came in .... watching us!! A tall man ... !!!" Lars said and he sounded genuinely terrified.

The lightning flashed again, and we all looked over to where Lars had claimed he'd seen the tall man, but there was no one there at all.

"It must have been a trick of the light, Lars," James said, looking down at the smaller man with a relieved smile. "There's no one there!"

Lars didn't look entirely convinced, but he didn't press the fact.

"Jeez!! Dude!! There's a freaking dog, just staring at us!! Right over there!!!" Rob said, his voice strained, as he looked somewhere behind me, over my shoulder.

"Oh, Rob, honestly, there's nothing there ... !" I said, before being cut of by James' exclamation of - "Holy SHIT, he's right!!"

I turned, mouth still halfway open from speaking, as Kirk came to stand protectively beside me.

As Rob had said, there was indeed a large dog standing there, just staring at us ....

Only this dog looked too much like a damn wolf for my liking ...

A noise behind us made us all cry out, turning as one to face ......








:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:



dun - dun - DUNNNNN!!!!

What have turned around to face?

Stay tuned to find out!
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Damn!!! You have again left us all in suspense. Must find out what happens!!!!!! :) :dance :nanner: :dance :nanner:

I love dogs, really I do, but I think that wolfish dog kind of has an evil vibe to him...Or I could be wrong. He could turn out to be a big sweetheart who goes right up to Rob and gives him a sloppy kiss. :lol:

This part was awesome

Lightning streaked across the sky above us, illuminating the black paintwork of my Impala, and flaring almost painfully bright against the chrome.


EEK!! :horns2 Keep up the badass work! I want to find out what happens. :)
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Yeah, me too :blink:
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WWWAAAAAAAAAA what is it? can't wait to find out!
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oh!!!! spoky!!! cool!!!! :biggrin

umm...was that just Lars alucination or is there really a tall man? *thinks*

and that dog or whatever it is sounds really scary!!!!! :blink:

can't wait to find out whats gonna happend!!!!!!
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Thankies again, guys!! Glad you're enjoying it still. :huggie:



MWAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!!!


Time for the third part!!!



PART THREE. (told ya!!)



A noise behind us made us all cry out, turning as one to face .......

A guy standing in the doorway staring curiously, yet coldly at us, as though he was suspicious of our arrival. I had been so distracted by the wolf dog thing that Rob had noticed, I hadn't even heard the door open. Apparent;ly neither had any of the guys, for they looked about as surprised as I did.

A place like this, and I would have expected to hear a creak of door hinges or something at least ....

"Yes? Can I help you?" the guy asked, as coldly as he looked.

Lars nudged me forward, reminding me silently that I was still their PA no matter what had just happened. I nodded thankfully at him, before stepping forward to reach out a hand to be shaken. Unsurprisingly the man did not take the proffered hand.

"Hi!! I'm Shannyn Jackman. I'm PA for Metallica. ummm, Metallica!" I said, gesturing to the four men surrounding me. "Jake invited us here to record the new 'Tallica album ... "

The man nodded once, sharply, before standing back to let us in.

"Come in. Jake's been expecting you," he said, his voice a monotone, his gaze as blank a stare as I'd ever seen on anybody.

I was the first to step int o the expansive hallway, turning only once I'd reached far enough inside to let the others enter comfortably. I couldn't help but notice that I wasn't the only one loathe to get near the butler, if butler he was.

"D'You know there's a big-ass wolf outside your door, man?" Rob asked the butler, warily.

"Wolf? I see no wolf, sir. Must have been your imagination, sir. There are no wolves here ... " the butler said, and I couldn't but pick up on is British accent this time.

As one, we all stared out of the still open front door, to find that the butler was right. The wolf seemed to have gone...

"Why are all butlers English?" Lars muttered to me, surprising a laugh out of me, which echoed queerly in the spacious hallway.

"Sorry!" I said to the butler, when he turned his odd, dead eyes onto me.

The butler said nothing more, than - "Follow me, while I show you to your rooms!"

"Wait, aren't we going to meet Jake?" James asked him, speaking for the first time since we'd all stepped inside the mansion.

"Later, sir. At dinner. It is late, and alas, Master Jake is not here yet. He had to .... leave ... briefly!" the butler said, curtly.

"That's a bit strange, when he knew he had to meet us ... " I distinctly recognized Kirk's quiet tones saying that.

The butler had stopped some way ahead of us once he'd noticed we hadn't immediately followed him.

"Well ... ?" he asked, disapprovingly, making me feel like a naughty school girl all over again.

"Our luggage ..... it's outside ... " I said to him.

"Do not worry, madam. I will get it in presently," the butler said, shortly. "Now if you please, will you follow me to your rooms! I cannot permit you to drip all over the dining table!"

"What's his problem?" Lars muttered. "Wouldn't surprise me if he didn't even have a reflection!"

"Shut up!" I hissed at him, trying to surpress another laugh.

"I'm not even gonna check, just in case!" Rob said, over his shoulder, being the first to move ahead after the swiftly disappearing butler. "After all, we've just seen men and wolves that aren't even there...."

"Of Man and Wolf...." James intoned, spookily, to which we all laughed.

"James, don't you start!" I snorted, as James gave me one of his broad and cheerful grins.

We had to walk swiftly to catch up with Rob and the butler, footsteps echoing in wierd distorted patterns from the marble flooring up to the high ceilings above. I did notice that Rob kept to his word and avoided looking in any mirrors we passed, just in case. He didn't need to worry - the butler owned his own reflection, just like the rest of us.

"Say! Dude! Hey! Butler dude! I didn't catch your name!" Lars yelled at the butler's rapdly walking back.

"You may call me John, sir!" he replied.

"May we? Good!" Lars replied, with a roll of his eyes at James.

The thunder rolled again outside, and the lightning flashed again, sending refractions of light bouncing from mirror to mirror all around us. The electricity flickered once, twice, then stabilised, before going out completely.

Ahead of me in the darkness, I heard Rob swearing eloquently, and I felt James reach out to grip my hand unexpectedly.

A match flared up ahead, lit by our new friend John, who lit a few canles around us. With the ease in which he performed the task, it looked a frequent occurrence.

My suspicions were confirmed when he said - "Do not be overly concerned, sirs, and madam, this does happen rather frequently ... !"

"HOLY SHIT!!!" Rob said, staring wildly around us.

"What is it?" I asked the bassist, feeling alarmed by the look of absolute horror on his face.

I was suddenly glad I was still holding James' hand right then, for Rob pointed out something that should have been glaringly obviuos, particularly to me ....






dun - dun - DUNNN!!!!

What has Rob noticed that nobody else has?


Stay tuned to find out!
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Man, what the hell happened?! :wacko: :o
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"Of Man and Wolf...." James intoned, spookily, to which we all laughed.

"James, don't you start!" I snorted, as James gave me one of his broad and cheerful grins.



I loved that part!!! :dance :dance :dance :dance
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