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THE UNFORGIVEN .....; by the mighty MetalliKirk!!!! Het.
Topic Started: July 13, 2008, 5:03 am (2,456 Views)
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Yeah, who is that hero? :wacko:
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Here is the next update ... :nanner: Hope you like it!!!



PART TWENTY ONE!!! :rockdevil:

I looked to Kirk, wondering what the hell was going to happen to us all, even as the Earth shuddered ominously beneath our very feet. Communing silently mind to mind, we turned to stae fixedly at the Hellhounds, who cowered under the weight of our joiined gazes. Despite the fact that their job was tp guard the gates of the underworld, the world of the dead, the very gate they were stationed before, still they cowered down before us, beings of death and bringers of death ourselves.

"Go!" I shouted to them. "Go and end this once and for all!! Bring them DOWN!! Bring them to their knees and make them PAY for what they have done to us!!!"

Again, I repeated what I had said before, Kirk's voice joining mine, repeating all I had said, as he, too stared fixedly at the ugly Hellhounds, who cowered still before us.

Slowly they rose to all four feet, to bow their heads to us as if in deference to a higher power, before ranging around Jake and John. Jake looked over at us, looking angry, but of course, he could do nothing against the Hellhounds himself, he had no power over them, being a werewolf and no better than they were.

It was John that I was forgetting was a healthy adversary and I would have done well to have remembered this fact sooner. Without even looking, he sent them away with a flick of his wrist to come standing at our feet instead, to snap and to snarl at our toes.

Without looking up at us, he said - "Do not forget, baby vampires, that I am far stronger even than you, that I have far greater power than you, through sheer age. It would be wise to bear this in mind, in future, if future you still have after the gates of Hell open fully!"

"I cannot allow this!! I will not allow this!!! Focking hell, huh!!!" Lars yelled from wghere he still lay on his alter.

He looked as though he was struggling to stand, but his bonds were too tight, holding him firmly to the alter.

I heard Kirk's voice in my head once again, that comforting tickle telling me to send the Hell houds over to Lars to help him. It was obvious that the drummer had something in mind, but neither of us knew what that plan was. I motioned with my head without speaking out loud to the largest of the group of Hellhounds, indicating that we should send their leader to help Lars.

As one we concentrated our efforts, our very will to control that Hellhound, to send him on his way, to bite through Lars' bonds until Lars was free, standing on his own two feet once again.

He stepped forward, shakily, a little unsteady on his feet, but still bravely walking foraward, towards Jake and john, looking angry, yet determined, at the same time.

"LARS!! What the hell are you doing, man?" James yelled at him, looking genuinely scared for his life at that point in time.

Lars appeared not to hear James, merely carried on his unsteady way, towards where Jake and John stood pre-occupied with their many chantings in Latin.

"I am the descendent of Beowulf!!! The greatest hero in all of Denmark!!! It is my duty to defend the lives of my friends, and to defend the memory and the honour of my greatest ancestor!!!" Lars shouted to the skies, finally attracting the attentions of both Jake and John, who stood looking warily at the smaller man.

Lars cntinued on his way, grabbing a sacrificial sword from a table of clutter near toJohn, before giving the traditional warrior's salute with said sword. Both Kirk and I sent all the Hellhounds to follow in Lars' footsteps, as back up for the drummer.

I remembered hearing about Beowulf when I was a very small child, totally unaware that what I had originally thought of as a legend would come to bear on my adult life. I remembered Beowulf being a great warrior back in 5th century Denmark, defeating a heinous creature known as Grendel, as well as Grendel's mother, and also a dragon. Little did I know then that a descendent of said mighty warrior ould be saving my ass one day. Then again, I'd always though of vampires and werewolves as being nothing more than legends, but here was I as a vampire myself, with two people close to me as a vampire and werewolf themselves.

Seemed like good old Lars was the hero in question needed to perfom the ritual.

I didn't dare take one part f my concentration away from controlling the Hellhounds, for they were needed to protect Lars, but still, despite that fact, I could not help but marvel at the figure Lars made, advancing forward with the sword held aloft, an expression of bravey and extreme angry determination to his face.

"You who have betrayed our trust, endangered the lives of all who are close to me must pay with your lives!!! Shame on you for all that you have done, for all that you have dared put us through!! Damn you to the very Hell you planned to unleash on Earth itself!!!" Lars screamed, before lunging forward, sword swinging expertly, as he drove first Jake then John ever backwards, closer and closer to the gates of hell. They tried pleading for their very lives but Laars seemed not to hear. They teeterd on the edge of the gate, but did not fall in. The Hellhounds advanced, guarding the gates they were supposed to defend, so pushing John and Jake to their doom.

I could hear the cries echoing for a long way down, before they were finally silenced forever, never to be heard on Earth again. The gates ground slowly shut, taking the Hellhounds home with it. Even though I would be eternally grateful - literally - to them for helping to save our lives, I was not sorry to see them go. They had a certain frightening presence all of their own, that could even disconcert a vampire.

"Guess this is all over, huh?" came Rob's tired voice from where he still lay, bound to the alter.

It was as if Rob's innocent comment broke the tension, and we all began to laugh ....

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And here is the epilogue, so ending my tale ....



EPILOGUE! (told ya!!!)

ONE YEAR LATER...

I stood looking out across the bay of San Francisco, breathing in the sweetest air I had ever had the fortune to breathe, even though it was dusk. I was still a vampire and so was Kirk, there really was no escaping that at all, but at least Rob had shrugged off the curse of being a werewolf for the rest of his life. It seemed as though the old myth surrounding werewolves was correct, kill the werewolf who'd made you and it lifted the curse. There was no such hope for either Kirk nor I, but it was no great misfortune. I loved being a vampire, beat the hell out of being a crappy human, for sure, and to spend the rest of eternity with a fellow vampire such as Kirk could only be considered a bonus.

Of course we were all indebted to Lars and his illustrious ancestor for saving our lives, and he never let us live it down, but none of us minded. If it wasn't for him, we possibly wouldn't even be alive, and the Earth would be a very different place indeed, over-run and oerseen by devils and demons and the like. It would be quite literally Hell on Earth if not for Mr Lars Ulrich.

The new album was in the bag as of today, and the tour would be soon forthcoming - thes hows obviously being night time for the sake of the resident vampire guitarist. Interviews would be a far greater thing to combat, but hopefully we could find a way to overcome the difficulties of noon question and answer sessions. We should have to see about that when we came to it.

So all in all, it didn't turn out too badly in the end. Okay, so I had to drink blood on a nightly basis, but every day I had to deal with notorious blood suckers in the music business, so to become just like them, quite literally was quite amusing when you really thought about it.

I smiled when I felt Kirk's presence behind me, and he joined me in looking out over the Bay, and I couldn't help but think here we were, two vampires in a sea of humans, abominations under the eye of God or so we'd been told, yet proud to be one of the Unforgiven ...

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THE END!!!

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Wow, I wasn't expecting the Beowulf part, that was awesome :horns2 I laughed when Lars wouldn't let them live it down, typical :rolleyes: Great job, and I would like to read more from you :)
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Sarah, that was fucking awesome! so wow Lars was a descendant of Beowulf that's so, so kick-ass!! well done Lars for saving the day! Sarah got anymore like this at all?
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elena
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This was a very good fiction.I realy liked!I hope you will write a new one soon! :heart:
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MetalliKirk
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Thank you guys!! :huggie: it is much appreciated - I'm glad you enjoyed the story, I did enjoy writing it!!! I will write some more stories in the near future and I'll post them here as soon as they are done!!! :nanner: :nanner: :nanner: :dance


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OMG....this was....


AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! :nanner: :nanner: :nanner:

first of all LARS WAS THE HERO!!!!!!!!! sure he must be!!! he's killer!!! :drool :heart:

Satanic rituals!!! opening the gate to hell...so supernatural style!!! love it!!!!!!!!!!! :nanner: :nanner: :nanner:

this story should win some award!!! :biggrin
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:lol: Ace!!! I thought you'd like that bit, Carla!!! Heroic Lars!!!!! lmao!!!!!

Lars is your hero!!!! :horns: :lol: :horns2


hehe!!!! Thankies, Carla, I'm glad you enjoyed that .... I did enjoy being bitten by ... I mean writing it!!!! ( and award?? No!!! Shut up!!! :blush: No awards for me ... !!! :wink :lol: )
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