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Another Sorrow, Another Breath; Lars/ James, early Metallica
Topic Started: November 13, 2009, 5:44 pm (14,637 Views)
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Ready for some hotness, girls? :nanner: And don't worry, Dave fans... I didn't forget about James and Dave... :biggrin




Pt. 7

Cliff’s large hand roamed up and down my back as we continued to kiss, still laying face-to-face. It ghosted across my ass once, down my thigh, and all the way back up, before finally coming to rest beneath my long hair. Then he kissed my jawline before burying his face in my neck, inhaling deeply. He moaned lightly upon exhaling, sending shivers up and down my spine.

“Ohhh, Cliff,” I breathed, my eyes fluttering shut. My hardening cock strained against my underwear, and I draped my leg over his, using it to urgently pull him closer. I began kissing him once more, moaning into his mouth as I felt his hard cock poking my thigh. He pressed himself hard against me, his hot flesh silently begging for attention. I snaked my hand through the fly of his boxers, slowly wrapping my hand around his generous girth. I stroked his entire length, gasping lightly when I realized just how truly blessed he was.

“You like it?” Cliff whispered into my ear, causing me to shudder.

Holy shit, I thought. “You’ll rip me in two,” I whispered back, already wanting him inside of me.

“I’ll go slow…” Cliff breathed, his large hand sliding underneath the back of my shorts. “I’ll be --” Cliff sipped a wet finger inside of me. “gentle.”

My eyes snapped open as Cliff‘s large forefinger curled and pressed against my prostate. “Cliff!” I gasped, feeling my cock twitch and begin to leak.

“Ohhh…” Cliff groaned against my neck. “You’re so tight… gotta --” Cliff pushed two fingers into me. “loosen you up.”

“Oh!” I cried out, feeling Cliff expertly massage my prostate. I had no idea where he’d learned that trick, but-- “Aaaah!” -- I wasn‘t about to question it. I was already relaxing and opening up for his two exceptionally large digits.

Cliff felt the wet spot on the front of my shorts as my still-leaking hard-on pressed against his bare stomach. “That horny?” he whispered, laying on his back to remove his boxers. Then he practically ripped my underwear off. “So am I…”
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Cliff Burton Lover...
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:gah I missed SO MANY chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And Cliff is having some action!!!!! WHY NOBODY CALLED ME?????????????


Cliff................................ :drool :drool :drool
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:drool :drool
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:o :drool :drool :drool :drool :drool :drool (sorry....can't.....muster....words)
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Jäger.....

:o :drool :drool :drool .... :drool :drool ... :drool ..
can't breath....can't think... :drool
Need more...
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Moar hotness, girls! Thanks for reading! :nanner:




Pt. 8

Cliff’s POV

Lars whimpered as I slowly began to penetrate him, his knees pressed against his chest. I’d found a bottle of lube in his and James’ nightstand, and I’d applied lots of it to myself. Shit, even girls had a hard time taking me, and Lars was not a girl -- pretty like one, maybe, but certainly not as pliant.

“Lars, relax… take deep breaths… please,” I begged Lars. I usually had to say the same thing to the girls I’d been with, which… hadn’t been very many, to be honest. Most of them balked upon seeing my generous -- ahem -- possession. And getting one of them to go down on me? Dream on, Cliff. So, yeah, being gifted in that area was totally overrated.

“Ohhh…“ I groaned deeply, feeling the little drummer’s tightness envelop the swollen head of my cock. Lars shoved a fist in his mouth, biting down on his knuckles as I slowly pushed in another inch. “Relax,” I breathed. “I’m going as slow as I can…”

“All of it,” Lars gasped. “I want all of it!”

“A-Are you su--”

“Fuck me, Cliff!” Lars shrieked at me.

Lars cried out as I pushed all the way into him, and my eyes rolled back in my head as his tightness threatened to squeeze the very life outta me.

“Holy Jesus!” I panted breathlessly, slowly moving myself in and out. Lars writhed and mewled beneath me, murmuring softly in what I supposed was Danish. I blushed, imagining what the small Dane could possibly be saying about me. I brazenly grasped his cock and roughly tugged at it, although blushing even more as I realized he had quite a generous foreskin.

Well, that’s… different, I mused, experimentally pulling at the loose skin and stretching it out. Lars groaned, my curious fumbling quickly bringing him off. His cock twitched in my hand, and as I felt his hot spurts splashing onto my belly.

“Forhelvede!” Lars cried out, his orgasm ripping through him. His internal spasms rippled exquisitely up and down my cock, easily bringing me to my peak. I rocked my hips against his, slowly drawing out my orgasm as I moved leisurely in and out of Lars. As my last spasm finally subsided, I slowly pulled out of Lars and groaned.

“Fuuuuuck…” I collapsed next to Lars, exhausted and spent.

“Thank you,” Lars whispered.

“For what?” I asked.

“For being exactly what I needed.”



(author's note: I don't speak Danish. Did I use the word correctly? What does it even mean? :blush: )
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Forhelvede, I believe is 'Goddamn it'
:biggrin
So yes, it worked...
Oh god did it work...
:drool :drool
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Lars shoved a fist in his mouth, biting down on his knuckles as I slowly pushed in another inch.

oh, poor little tight Larsypoo :wub:
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Ohh, I missed a chapter too...caught up now :) Oh wow, CLars :heart: How awesome was that! Looking forwards to James/Dave too :nanner:
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ahhhh - I missed two parts!!!

I've read both now and definitely need my inhalator!!! *gasp*

Lori, you're great :tu: your writing style boosts up my imagination, and that's already dirty enough :biggrin

If you'd write an erotic novel, I'd buy it immediately :drool
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Nov 16 2009, 04:45 PM
Forhelvede, I believe is 'Goddamn it'

Thanks, I've corrected my spelling accordingly. I knew it was a curse, but what exactly, I wasn't sure... :unsure: Thanks, Torr!!! :biggrin
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No problems :biggrin
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Jäger.....

mmnnn...HOT....poor Lars...or not :drool :drool :drool
MOOOREEE!!!!
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Well, time for a flashback to how James' day went... I'd originally planned on jumping back and forth between scenes and POVs, but I didn't have the finesse to pull it off. So, onwards to James' day! :biggrin




Pt. 9

James’ POV

On the bus ride to Dave’s neighborhood, I was so nervous. I kept feeling as though my heart was in my stomach, the acid there churning away and eating it alive. Dave didn’t really want to still be my friend, as I’d told Lars. He’d called me wanting to fuck me again. Yeah, that’s right. Dave fucked me. This would be the very thing about me that nobody could possibly understand: a ‘top’ secretly craving the ‘bottom.’ I couldn’t explain how it had happened. Yet, there I’d been, moaning and writhing underneath my lead guitarist. And I’d loved every minute of it. Since then, I’d just kept my tendencies to myself… I had an image to uphold, you know. But I never could figure out how Dave knew. I’d never told anyone, yet somehow he knew.

“You want me to fuck you, don’t you?” he’d whispered in my ear.

Fucker.

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I knocked on the door to Dave’s place, almost hoping nobody would answer. From inside, I could hear Dave’s shrill voice yelling at poor David.

“Junior! Junior, get the Goddamned door, NOW!”

I jumped at that jarringly loud last word. Holy fuck, I thought. Glad my name's not Junior…

The door opened slowly, with the auburn-haired David, nicknamed, ‘Junior,’ peering at me through the crack.

“It’s that Hetfield guy,” Junior called over his shoulder.

“Well, let him in, dumbass!” came Dave’s cruel reply.

Junior opened the door and stepped aside, allowing me to enter. I went and stood in front of Dave, with Junior immediately taking a seat next to him.

“Junior, get lost,” Dave harshly told Junior. “James and I have some… catching up to do.”

Junior looked slightly hurt, but got up anyway, then grabbed a jacket and took off out the front door. I gazed after him, almost feeling sorry for the poor fellow.

“Oh, don’t worry about him,” Dave waved his hand dismissively. “He thinks he and I are in a serious relationship. Clearly delusional.” Dave patted the couch next to him. “Sit down, man.”

I did, and Dave immediately draped his arm around my shoulders, sneering at me.

“Back for more?”
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Dave is a bit..........rude?

And poor Junior....:huggie:
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