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Another Sorrow, Another Breath; Lars/ James, early Metallica
Topic Started: November 13, 2009, 5:44 pm (14,636 Views)
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Mrs Ratfield
Nov 16 2009, 09:58 PM
If you'd write an erotic novel, I'd buy it immediately  :drool

You woudn't believe how many of these I've got packed away in my parents' basement... and I've been reading them since I was very young. :rolleyes: I lost my virginity at a young age (12, believe it or not), and even before then I was a big perv. :lol: Oh, and I've also been writing slash stories since I was 12. :biggrin Welcome to my world. :biggrin

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Lori, you're great  :tu: your writing style boosts up my imagination, and that's already dirty enough  :biggrin


Thanks! :D
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Oooooooo 2 chapters CLars was :drool :drool :drool James you're an idiot, Dave is a total twat and you don't need that!!! btw poor Junior
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Poor Junior. Dave's not good enough for him.
He's a manbitch.
Leave James. Quick!
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Thanks for reading and commenting, everyone! I appreciate it! :nanner:




Pt. 10

Dave sparked up a joint and took two hits before holding it in front of me. “C’mon, I think you need it,” he said when I didn’t accept it.

“Well…” I said, considering what I should do. “You’re right,” I finally agreed, taking the joint from him. I took a couple of quick tokes before handing it back to him.

“Why do you stay with that wuss?” Dave asked quietly, still smoking the joint.

“Who, Lars?” I asked, taking the joint from Dave. If I didn’t know any better, I’d say he was jealous. “I don’t know. Because I love him, I guess. He loves me.”

Dave grabbed the joint, took one last hit, and stubbed out the roach. He smirked, putting his hand behind my head, pulling me closer to him. “And this is how you repay his love?”

Dave’s lips pressed urgently against mine, his tongue slipping into my mouth. My own curious tongue came out to greet his, and soon, Dave had me pinned to the couch. Dave placed a hand on my crotch, and I immediately spread my legs like a whore. Fuck, I wanted it. I wanted it so bad.

“You want it in you, don’t you? You little slut,” Dave growled, fumbling with the button on my jeans. He got it open and immediately undid the zipper. “Ohhh…” Dave breathed, sliding his hand inside. “I bet you’re still as tight as a virgin, ain’t ya? I know I’m the only one who’s ever hit it…”

Dave lightly squeezed my balls, then gently gripped my cock, touching his forefinger to the wetness that was already oozing from the tip. That was one thing I’d learned about Dave. As rude as the fucker could be, he was surprisingly gentle with the jewels. But his gentleness ended there: Bitch fucked like a madman. I groaned and thrust into his hand, already growing impatient.

Dave chuckled. “Want it that bad, huh?” Dave sat back on his heels and peeled off my jeans. “I want it bad, too.”
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Sorry I missed another chapter :blush: Oooh, James and Dave are hot together :nanner: Dave is mean to Junior though, he needs a smacked bottom :nanner:
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Another hot chapter :drool

Dave in your story is just as bitchy as I imagine him :biggrin that makes it so realistic for me! This is really getting red hot - please don't stop!
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:drool I don't know why, but I really can't hate Dave............... :drool
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*Squirms*
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Dave in your story is just as bitchy as I imagine him


Same here! :biggrin He seems like a sweetheart when he's sober, but an absolute asshole when he's not. :rolleyes: Anyways, thanks everyone, for reading this! Here's moar hotness! :drool




Pt. 11

Dave sucked on two of his fingers, then pressed them urgently inside of me. I cried out, the sudden intrusion taking me by surprise. Fucker wasn’t about to waste too much time preparing me. It burned a little, but as I threw my head back, a sudden wave of euphoria washed over me as the weed began to take effect. Then when Dave pressed his fingers against my prostate, the pleasure suddenly became greater than the pain. I rolled my head from side-to-side, letting the calming effect of the drug completely overtake me.

“Ahhh…” I moaned, Dave firmly massaging my prostate. I felt my cock twitch and leak even more. “Dave, please,” I pleaded.

“Mmm…” Dave groaned. “I knew I’d have you begging for it…” He pulled out his fingers and spit in his palm, using his saliva to lube up his cock. “You look so sexy when you beg…” In one swift move, my knees were pressed against my chest, and Dave was fully sheathed inside of me.

“Mmph!” I grunted, nearly choking as the head of Dave’s swollen cock brushed roughly against my abused prostate. But Dave was unremorseful, beginning a relentless assault of powerful thrusts. And every one of them was nailing my spot dead-on. Suddenly, I found myself feeling very jealous of Junior. Fucker probably got nailed by Dave every night, just like this.

“Oh, yeah,“ Dave breathed, pumping rapidly in and out of me. I could feel my peak coming on very quickly. Dave was good. I tugged at myself roughly and suddenly came hard, spilling all over myself. I felt my ass caress Dave’s cock in ripples, and he immediately slowed down to savor his own orgasm. His hot spurts splashed deep inside of me and he quickly pulled out, leaving me feeling empty.

“Holy fuck,” I panted. “Holy shit!”

Dave resumed his seat on the couch, looking exhausted. He turned to look at me. “Staying the night?”
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Oh, wow.................. :drool
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Holy fuckballs.................... :drool
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Nov 18 2009, 09:27 PM
Holy fuckballs.................... :drool

BANG!
:splat:
just exploded.

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Awesome chapter :nanner: Dave and James are so horny :D
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Ready for some drama? :biggrin Thanks for reading!




Pt. 12

Lars’ POV

I woke up the next morning with Cliff spooned tightly behind me. I remember falling asleep listening to Cliff chatter away mindlessly, clearly on one of his acid trips. I moaned and stretched lazily. I wasn’t about to get up anytime soon. So I snuggled against him and interlaced my fingers with his. Then my eyes snapped open, hearing someone sit down on the other bed.

“J-James, you’re home!” I stammered, immediately moving to sit up. He was clutching a near-empty bottle of Jack Daniel’s.

“Yeah,” he said quietly, taking a shot of the whiskey. “Thought you mighta missed me by now… uh, what’s Cliff doing in your bed?”

“Sleeping,” I said sarcastically. “Keeping me company, because you so obviously can’t!”

Cliff stirred and woke up at my harsh words, slowly opening his eyes and blinking rapidly. James’ slender form slowly came into focus for him, and he sat up, startled. “James! It’s n--”

“Save it, Cliff,” James interupted. “Because it is what it looks like. Don’t try to fool me.” James took one last gulp and set the empty bottle on the nightstand. The empty ‘clink’ echoed throughout the tiny bedroom, followed by a loud “Ahhh…” from James. James stood up and wobbled a little, shaking a finger at me. “You’re lucky I’m too drunk to care right now.”

“I wouldn’t be talking, James!” I barked. “Just where the hell were you all night, huh?!”

James chuckled slowly, his whole body swaying back and forth. “Dave’s more of a man than you’ll ever be,” James said without thought.

I gulped, feeling a lump forming in my throat. I closed my eyes to the sting that was watering up my eyes, and I took a deep breath to defend against the impending nausea. “Cliff,” I said softly. I didn’t need to say anything more, because he immediately jumped up and stalked over to James, his large hand curling around the blond guitarist’s throat.

“What the f--” James’ words were immediately cut off as Cliff’s huge mitt gripped him hard by the neck. Cliff easily shoved the slightly bigger James against the wall.

“No!” Cliff bellowed. “You tell me what the fuck, Hetfield!”

I looked on in silence, shaking with fear. Oh, my God, Cliff's gonna kill him…
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Way love a bit drama and that was drama alright! go Cliff!!!!!
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