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| I'm The One Who Waits For You...; Metallica, Iron Maiden, James/OFC | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: November 24, 2009, 5:26 pm (66,507 Views) | |
| namenlos | November 25, 2009, 7:50 pm Post #16 |
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The Daft To Your Punk
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djdjahgdfaakjldldkfghkdfdflhdgfjldkaa OMFG girl! Why the hell don't you write more often?!? That was amazingly hot...
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| Oh Hell | November 25, 2009, 8:00 pm Post #17 |
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Okay, you are writing MORE! More stories, Ollie. I won't let you get away with it. *pokes* That was so amazingly brilliant and sexy and aaaaaaaaaah! James' POV gets me crazy. No matter who writes it. It's just THAT much more intense...
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| Kimmi | November 26, 2009, 1:39 am Post #18 |
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That's a dance I'd like to have... That was perfect Olya. I've said it before... you'll have to be writing more. YOU HAVE TO !!
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| MetalSanta | November 26, 2009, 8:26 am Post #19 |
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Imitations are pale...
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RED HOT dammit !!!
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| elena | November 26, 2009, 9:42 am Post #20 |
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That was soooo hot! And I agree with Kimmi,you have to write more. :horns2
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| Olyamet | November 26, 2009, 11:07 am Post #21 |
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Jäger.....
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Oh....the PRESSURE!!!!! Thanks girls!!! I love you all!!!
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| StevieNicks | November 26, 2009, 3:23 pm Post #22 |
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Pictorial Queen
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WHOA fireworks! That was so hot (understatement) and........detailed
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| AryLily | November 26, 2009, 4:38 pm Post #23 |
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Some Kind Of Monster
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I WANT MORE !
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| Olyamet | November 27, 2009, 12:24 pm Post #24 |
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Jäger.....
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Thank you girls!!! More! III. Somewhere in time... (James' POV) I was standing in the middle of a battlefield, holding my sword in tightly clenched fist. Thick blood was dripping slowly from the tip of the blade, heavily dropping into the dirt. The air was filled with the sounds of metal against metal and screams of death, enemies were all around us. I turned my head to the left and saw Angel, but I knew in this world her name was Helen... my Helen, she swung her sword sending Roman soldiers in front of her to the ground. Memories were returning to me slowly. We were fighting the Greek army, who had burned down our village, pushing us into the desert. Helen was my wife, we were two different clans before we got together, fighting with each other for the land, until I met her... the Amazon Queen. I smiled remembering the past. Our group was twice of the size of her small party and we pinned them into a bottle neck between the mountains, with no way out. But despite our advantage she was fearless. I couldn't help but admire her fire and her sword skills during the fight. She turned as I was advancing on her, but when I was at the strike distance, one of her warriors pulled her to the horse, giving her chance to escape. As she jumped into the saddle, she turned and looked straight into my eyes. That gaze made me freeze, lowering my weapon. She smiled, hitting the sides of her horse and it jumped into a gallop, carrying her in safety. Later on, I couldn't put that image out of my head. That smile, that victorious look even as she was retrieving, it hunted me. I knew I had to make her mine. The Amazons were choosing their husbands in battle, and there was no other way. I needed a plan and I needed an allay. I found out that my right hand, had been secretly seeing one of the girls from neighboring camp, and she was willing to help. I also found out that many of my guys were ready to stop pointless fighting and settle down, same attitude was roaming at the Amazon's camp. We came up with a plan, a dangerous one, but if it worked... Helen got her position as a Queen not by the birth right, she got it by her fighting skills. I knew that my life in very real danger, but I was willing to risk it for woman like her. The battle was raging on, Amazons were 'falling' one by one at the hands of my warriors, and Helen couldn't believe how fast my army got the upper hand. She lost her her concentration, when she saw her best friend fall, and I swiftly moved in, taking my chance. Our swords came together with such great force that the steel gave in and her weapon shattered, raining pieces to the ground. She fell to her knees and I placed my sword to her throat. “I beat you in battle, Queen Helen. You belong to me now!” She looked back at me with pride in her burning eyes, her chin up, she looked anything but defeated. “By the will of Gods, my body belongs to you... but you'll never get my heart.” “Helen... I love you!” I dropped my sword and lowered myself to my knees in front of her. “You and your army killed my friends you think after that I could ever love you?” “You are wrong... no one died today.” She looked into my eyes and turned, scanning the field, realizing that it was too quiet. Her amazons were standing up, by the side of chosen in battle warriors. “What is this? How? I don't understand... I saw them fall...” “My Queen, please forgive us... we found love and we knew that you would never go against the rules... you liked him, but you'd never admit it... never abandon Amazon ways... so we staged this battle... please forgive us.” Helen's next in command stepped forward. The Queen nod at her and turned back to me. “You was the only one risking your life? You... you did that for me?” “And I would do it again in a heart beat…” “Thank you…” She smiled at me and pulled me to her lips. ------- Two years had passed in absolute happiness but the new Greek kingdom was expanding its grounds and we were next. The battle was brutal and bloody with our numbers quickly melting, but the enemy solders were tired in their heavy armor. We had a chance. I saw Helen get pushed by four soldiers and rushed to help her, but she killed two of them before I got to her. We stood together, swinging our swords left and right and a few minutes later we were free. We looked around, finding that no one else was left standing. She wrapped her arms around my neck and looked into my eyes, suddenly her eyes widened and she pushed me aside. I saw an arrow in slow motion piercing her chest. She looked down with surprise and fell into my arms. “No! Helen, Gods no... please... don't leave me! Why?” “I couldn't let them kill you.” “Helen... I can't live without you!” “The clan is alive, as long as the King is still standing... I'll wait for you to grow old and then we will meet again... in next life, if we can find each other... now go... don't let it be a waste...” “I promise I'll find you! I give you my word!” Her eyes fell still and she lay dead in my arms. I felt as if my heart died with my love. I dropped down to my knees, pressing her listless body to me and cried out my pain. My eyes scanned the field and saw another wave of Greeks coming from over the hills. I picked up my sword and walked toward them shaking with anger. I wanted to kill them all, I was hoping one of them would kill me, but my body was trained from multiple battles and was acting without my mind. I was too good at killing. My sword was slamming into their bodies, left... right... swing and cut... I didn't feel tired, I didn't feel anything. When my body had finally stopped I was standing alone. I raised my sword to the sky. “Aries! I was born a warrior, let me die like one!” The hot wind of dessert was an answer, the battlefield was motionless. “Is there no one else?” I looked around, hopping to see someone moving, but the field was dead. “Is there no one else?” I screamed again, feeling sharp pain of emptiness in my chest, like someone had removed my heart and this feeling was so strong, it was suffocating me. I dropped to my knees. “Gods! Let me die! Without my love I'm nothing, just a mindless killing machine... I can't live like that... please. Does anyone left to give me honorable death in the battle?” Dead silence was an answer. Alive, but dead inside. I grasped at the dirt with my hands and felt a sharp pain in the palm. A small scorpion fell out of my open hand. “Thank you, Gods...” I tried to get up, but the poison quickly rushed through my body, clouding my mind and I reached to the distance, stretching my hand to Helen's body. “I'm coming my queen… wait for me...” And the world went black. -------- “James! Wake up! James!” Someone shook me by my shoulder and I opened my eyes. “Are you okay? Did you have a nightmare? You were talking and screaming... I woke you up, you okay?” Helen's face was above me, looking worried. I gasped, smiling. “I found you... Helen.” “What did you call me?” She looked at me with wide eyes. I finally shook the last traces of the dream away, waking up fully. “You were in my dream and your name was Helen...” She looked surprised. “My name is Helen.... no one's called me that since my mother called me Hell Angel, after I painted our dog blue... she meant to say my full name but got so upset that it came out as Hell Angel... as Helen Angel.” “I love you Helen Angel, my Hell Angel! Stay with me...” “Tonight? I am.” She snuggle to me, lowering her head to my chest. “Tonight, tomorrow, forever...” I pressed her to me and stroked her hair. “Promise that you'll never leave me...” “Are you sure you can handle me?” I felt her smile against my skin. “James…tell me about your dream.” |
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| MetalSanta | November 27, 2009, 12:31 pm Post #25 |
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THIS IS EPIC, man !!!! How you manage to make the comparison between their/his love in reality, and on the battlefield, this is WELL-DONE !!! And the names were well found too ! Great job, writer, can't wait for the next chapt' !!!!!
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| namenlos | November 27, 2009, 1:05 pm Post #26 |
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Wow! What an awesome twist in the story! You really ought to write historical romances!
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| Oh Hell | November 27, 2009, 1:18 pm Post #27 |
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Woaaah that was really really cool! You should definitely write something Medieval. I love the way you described the dream. He dreamed of her and knew her name without knowing her name. So sweet!
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| Kimmi | November 27, 2009, 7:37 pm Post #28 |
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Awesome, Olya!!
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| StevieNicks | November 28, 2009, 8:45 am Post #29 |
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Interesting chapter, verrrry nice! :horns2
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| elena | November 28, 2009, 9:17 am Post #30 |
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More,please!
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