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| I'm The One Who Waits For You...; Metallica, Iron Maiden, James/OFC | |
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| Oh Hell | July 4, 2010, 1:46 pm Post #466 |
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Outlaw Torn
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LOL what a nerd. He s bears. Me too but, awww!
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| Auluna Raie | July 4, 2010, 5:03 pm Post #467 |
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Shark-Tastic!
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Hmmm, still dont quite trust this guy; but my money's still on Angel
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| mishmash | July 4, 2010, 9:31 pm Post #468 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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I'm also not sure if I trust this guy... but I guess she has no choice, being in the middle of no where and all ![]() I'm certain that everyone will find her soon Thanks for the update!
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| Lenne13 | July 4, 2010, 9:44 pm Post #469 |
Arrogance and ignorance go hand in hand!!
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I think Max is a good guy. But sometimes, we fool ourselves with people, right? PS: Olya, I'm increasingly stuck in your Fanfic!!!
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| the_mighty_het | July 5, 2010, 7:02 am Post #470 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Thanks for the update Olya! I hope Angel's wrist won't get infected..
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| MetalSanta | July 5, 2010, 7:15 pm Post #471 |
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Imitations are pale...
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We're getting close, we're getting clooose ! I'm so happy she met that scientist geek, which is so sweet by the way. (I'm sure he's gorgeous too)I love that jungle trip, exotism, adventure, bugs, all that .... Please please please continue my friend ! Was great (and loved the lines about animals ^^) |
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| Hawkeye | July 5, 2010, 8:55 pm Post #472 |
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Blackened
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Wow, I come back from vacation and there are TWO awesome updates! Can't wait for more...I still can't decide whether to believe in Max or not! |
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| Olyamet | July 6, 2010, 12:52 pm Post #473 |
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Jäger.....
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Thanks girls! More. Hope you enjoy this one! (Chris' POV) Everything is perfect! I slid my hand over the black case on the bed. I know how much she misses her guitars, this is just perfect. I bought it from the collector a long time ago and was ready to give it to Angel in the beginning, but all my plans went out of control and I couldn't visit he. Good thing I set up everything with the food delivery to my house, it's delivered every three days by a car from the local market that was right by the hotel. Long drive, but for good money people here were willing to do anything. Guards or a maid would contact me through the same person who delivered the food. They had orders not to leave my house, and for emergencies they have a small off road Jeep. By the way, tomorrow is a delivery day, I shoud've asked if Angel had any requests, maybe something she needed. Too late now, I'll just fly back here and get it. It would be great to have a phone in there, but it's too far from the city. I could've get a radio phone, but I didn't want to risk connecting that hidden place to my name. I was planning to fly to the house when I just came back to Cambodia, but my father insisted on getting the report today and when I returned this morning, I had to spend all day at the factory to keep up the appearance of working hard. Fucking work! One more delay. But now, now I'll have all weekend with my Angel. I missed her so much, all that stupid greedy whore's fault, but she payed for it in full. I opened the case one last time to make sure my present was perfect. The custom made Les Paul Black Beauty was off-set by the red velvet lining of the box and looked amazing. I know her tastes, she would love it. I closed the case and wrapped a red silk ribbon around it. Earlier this evening I had to pull the guitar out of my car and bring it here to tune it. I took the amp that goes with my present to the car earlier and now was just waiting, counting the minutes to the scheduled flight. I looked at the clock on the night stand. Time to go, by the time I reach the small private airport, my helicopter should be ready, just a bit under two hours of flight and I'll be there. I fixed the big red bow on the top of the guitar case and picked it up. The door flew out of the frame with a loud bang, followed by a heart-stopping loud roar that paralyzed my body. The guitar case dropped out of my hand and I felt the blood rushing away from my face. In slow motion, I saw Hetfield's fist closing in on my face. I'm dead... (Detective Brook's POV) As soon as we entered the hotel, James sprinted up the stairs before I could react and stop him. “James! God dammit!” I ran after him, taking two stairs at a time, but with all my military training I couldn't catch up with the guitarist's long legs. Fuck! He will be the end of me! By the time I reached the fifth floor I heard an animal growl from the room up ahead. “Where is she???” I ran to the open door, which was barely hanging on its broken hinges. James was holding his prey's throat in his iron grip. He picked the equal sized man like a rag doll and smashed him into the wall. Another roar shaking the room. “You cocksucker! Where is she???” “James! Let him go, he has no where to run!” I tried to pull him away, getting the same result as I would get if I tried to stop a runaway train. James sent a series of heavy blows to his victim's face and I saw blood splattering on the white wall. Fuck! Where in the hell is my help? “I'm asking you one last time! Where is my wife?” James' hands returned to Chris' neck, turning his face purple, a few bubbling noises escaping from his crushed throat. “James, he can't talk when you're chocking him! Let go! I'll have to arrest you if you don't! He isn't worth it! Let go!” I pulled on James' arms with all my strength with no result. Noise at the doorway made me turned and I saw three pairs of eyes burning with hate. Fuck! They are going to kill him, I have to stop this. “Guys, listen, if he kills him, he's done, he will be locked up for murder, that fucker isn't worth it!” None of them moved a muscle, I turned to James with one last hope. “James, Angel wouldn't want this for you. Let this piece of shit go.” I saw James' face coming back to a human expression at the sound of his wife's name. He pushed his victim into the wall one more time and let go of him. Chris slid down, leaving a bloody trail as he dropped to his knees and grabbed his throat, coughing. “Let's do this shit right.” I saw the officers that I'd brought with me making their way through the door and stepped closer, pulling handcuffs off my belt. “Christopher Benjamin Barnato, you are under arrest for the murder of Fay Carlsen and for the kidnapping of Helen Angel Hetfield. You have the right to remain silent.” I pulled him off the floor and continued with the Miranda rights, locking the handcuffs on his wrists. “Anything you say can and will be used against you in a court of law. You have right to an attorney, and to have an attorney present during any questioning. If you cannot afford a lawyer, one will be provided for you at government expense.” I pulled him to the chair and pushed him down closing my lips to his face. “That last part is not going to happen in your case you son of a bitch.” ------ I flashed my FBI badge to calm down the hotel security and ordered one of them to stay in Barnato's room in case someone called or came looking for him. We moved to one of the double suites that were booked by Lars. Three hours later, everything finally settled. My officers took a position by the closed door between the combined rooms, keeping the angry rockers away from the prisoner. After they figured out he was not going to tell them anything, they were talking among themselves, planning what to do next. I tried to ask Barnato questions but got dead silence. He didn't scream for a lawyer, he didn't say anything. The only thing I read in his eyes was hate. He was sitting in the chair, time to time spitting blood on the floor, and flashing insane smile at me. I got hold of my boss to report that I had no choice but to make the arrest myself, without Interpol. I told him the truth. After he was done swearing at me, he said he would settle this on the higher end and told me that two other FBI agents that took a passenger plane would be in Cambodia in four hours. “You wait in place and surrender the prisoner to them. After that you can continue working on the case to locate the missing person.” “Understood.” “And Brook, one more screw-up and I'll have your ass and your badge.” “Yes sir.” I turned my phone off and stood up. Something was different, I listened closely and didn't hear voices from the conjoining room. Fuck! I opened the door to an empty room. “Oh, for fuck's sake! What are they up to now?” |
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| elena | July 6, 2010, 1:03 pm Post #474 |
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Outlaw Torn
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They found the fucker! Too bad that he can't say now where is Angel. I'm glad that James didn't kill the fucker,Brook was right,he doesn't worth.Can't wait for more!
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| Kimmi | July 6, 2010, 1:21 pm Post #475 |
Outlaw Torn
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Yay... finally they caught him ! But of course he won't talk... I wonder what the guys are up to... did they just ran off to look for Angel together ?
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| Janee | July 6, 2010, 1:34 pm Post #476 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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yaey they cot the bastard.I would like to see James killing him love the chapter Olya |
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| mishmash | July 6, 2010, 2:23 pm Post #477 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Yay!Finally they arrest that bastard! But now I wonder how they're going to find Angel? Thanks for the update!
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| Oh Hell | July 6, 2010, 3:10 pm Post #478 |
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AAAAAH! BROOK WHY DIDN'T YOU LET HIM TAKE HIM INTO THE WILDERNESS AND THEN KILL HIM?!?!? Sorry. I meant yay, they caught the bastard! James got to smack the son of a bitch. Super yay!
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| Auluna Raie | July 6, 2010, 5:49 pm Post #479 |
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Shark-Tastic!
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Question: Is the moron (Chris) aware that Angel escaped looooong ago?
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| mishmash | July 6, 2010, 6:06 pm Post #480 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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I don't think so! If he knew, he probably would have had his guys searching all over that place. And he sure as hell wouldn't be sitting in that hotel as if every thing's cool
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s bears. Me too but, awww!





Too bad that he can't say now where is Angel.
I'm glad that James didn't kill the fucker,Brook was right,he doesn't worth.

8:39 PM Jul 10