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I'm The One Who Waits For You...; Metallica, Iron Maiden, James/OFC
Topic Started: November 24, 2009, 5:26 pm (66,476 Views)
metalgal4life
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For liberty ...and justice for all!!
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Hehe! Go Hetfield Go Hetfield it's your birthday woots woots!!! :biggrin :biggrin That fucker deserves to have his ass kicked!!
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Auluna Raie
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mishmash
July 6, 2010, 6:06 pm
Auluna Raie
July 6, 2010, 5:49 pm
Question: Is the moron (Chris) aware that Angel escaped looooong ago? :rolleyes:
I don't think so!
If he knew, he probably would have had his guys searching all over that place. And he sure as hell wouldn't be sitting in that hotel as if every thing's cool :P
I was right, he really IS that stupid!
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the_mighty_het
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Yay :nanner: Finally they caught Chris !!!:D
Now let's hope the boys will find Angel :rolleyes:
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Hawkeye
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OMG, omg, omg!!! Awesome chapter! I'm SOOO happy James finally got his hands on Chris...now if he can only find Angel soon :)
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MetalxMilitia
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I hope that James will eventually kill the bastard! :biggrin
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mishmash
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MetalxMilitia
July 7, 2010, 6:17 pm
I hope that James will eventually kill the bastard! :biggrin
That would be awesome :biggrin
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XXIX. Remember Tomorrow.





(Ray's POV)




I figured they went to the factory but I couldn't go there until I handed off the prisoner. I was dialing their phones over and over, getting the voice mails and was ready to kill someone when Lars finally decided to answer.

“Sorry Ray, I must've accidentally turned my phone off...”

I didn't let him finish.

“Yeah, and the other three did the same. Why did you leave without telling me? Don't tell me you are at the factory.”

“We thought you were busy... plus you wouldn't approve of our actions anyway... You said you had no search warrant for the focking factory, since it belongs to the family, not to the psycho.... so..”

“So you decided to go without me? At least with my badge we could've gotten in...”

“Oh, we're in, that wasn't a big problem. And we're coming back, you don't have to come here.” His voice sounded sad. I guess they didn't find anything... damn. Wait, how did they get in?

“Did you sneaked into the factory?” I started to pace around the room. Illegal entry onto private property, illegal search, fucking great.

“Fock no! We just walked through the front gate.”

“Security just let you in?” I stopped by the chair. Maybe it's not so bad...

“Well... They tried to stop us but James 'politely' told them to fock off... and they did.” Mhm, politely my ass.

“I'm sure they're calling to the police as we speak.” Now this whole mess will get out of control and I'll lose my job for sure.

“Um... don't think so... kind of hard to reach the focking phone when you're tied up to the gate...” Oh... no they didn't...

“You broke into the factory illegally and tied up the guards? That is just great... I'm coming there, don't go anywhere, please don't do anything else-” A loud metal noise and swearing in the background didn't let me finish.

“What was that?”

“We tried to talk to the people who work here, did you know this place is focking slavery, they work twenty four seven!”

“Lars, tell me what that noise was.” Tell me you didn't vandalized anything there.

“We showed them picture of Angel, but no one knows about her, or they're just too afraid to talk, so we searched every room, finding focking nothing and now we're a bit ticked off...” Oh shit... they did. James' scream ended with the sound of shattered glass. Fuck...

“What are you doing?”

“I'm focking talking to you... on the focking phone.” Lars smarted off to me.

“Lars!” I'm going to kill them!

“Um... James and Bruce are just taking their anger out on a few cars that we found in the one of the focking buildings...”

I'm dead, fired and dead. The Bentley boys will nail my ass to the wall for this if my boss doesn't do it first. I wouldn't be able to pay for damage... I can't even afford a tire for a car like that. Shit...

“Do you know how much those cars cost? Have they completely lost their minds? My boss will hang me...”

“You're not here, so... it's off you. Anyways, we're focking done here. We'll see you at the hotel.”

Okay, one thing at the time, I hand over Chris, then we can try to figure out what to do. I can cross the factory off my list. Someone had to know something, I need to ask around, hotel staff usually keeps records of phone calls made from their phones, there are cameras in place that could catch something. A lot of work, I just hope we can find some leads, anything.

A knock on the door broke my string of thought and one of my officers opened the door, letting two FBI agents in.

“Hey Brook, boss said you have a package for us.” Agent Ross squeezed my hand and looked at Chris' broken and swollen face.

“Wow! Did you do that to him? It's police brutality you know.”

“Nope, didn't lay a finger on him. He looked like that at the moment of the arrest, I have officers Scott and Roland as witnesses.”

“Wonder what happened before the arrest.” Ross squinted his eyes at me.

“Have no idea, must've pissed someone off before I got to him. Just take this piece of shit off my hands so I can get back to work.”






(Lars' POV)



I hung up the phone and ducked when a piece of bumper flew over my head and smashed into the wall behind me. I looked at what was left of the five Continental S Bentleys. I knew those poor cars had nothing to do with all this but it felt focking good to get at least some of the frustration out.

“Come on guys, we're going back. Ray's all focking pissed off at us.”

On the way back no one said a word. We had such high hopes for the factory and it was a dead end. Even if someone knew something, they were too afraid to lose their jobs, and language barrier didn't help either, I could've tried to give them one of my speeches, but without knowing their language it was focking pointless.

By the time we got back to the hotel, Ray got hold of the security tapes and was questioning some of the hotel staff that was working today. He handed us tapes and we started viewing them one at the time, trying to find any clues, but the few tapes that focker was on, were from today and didn't show anyone with him. Nothing, another dead end. Fock!

“She's here somewhere, I'll turn this fucking country inside out if I have to!” James got up and started pacing around the room.

“You should've let us 'talk' a bit more to that dick.” Bruce turned to Brook.

“It was pointless, trust me I know the type. You could've killed him but he wouldn't tell you where she is.” Ray opened the window curtains and the sun lit the room, he turned the light off and continued.

“Guys, I suggest we take a little break and get some sleep, my brain is refusing to work. I'm sure you're all exhausted too. There is nothing we can do right now until I hear back from the embassy. It will take them some time to find out if Chris ever rented or bought any property here, they also will check with the local housing market for any shady deals.”

I looked at my watch, it's noon already? No wonder I feel like focking shit.





(James' POV)





I was walking in the long empty corridor with hundreds of closed doors. From somewhere far I heard a familiar and oh-so-dear to me voice whisper.

“I'm here...”

“Angel!”

“I'm here...” The words bounced off the walls around me.

“Angel where are you?” Every door I opened was leading into similar corridors with row after row of closed doors. I could hear my heart pounding in my throat and my face was wet from the tears.

“Angel! Please tell me where you are! Please tell me how to find you!” I screamed and my voice echoed in the empty corridors.

“Angel!!!”

“James, wake up, James!” Someone's hand squeezed my shoulder and I opened my eyes. Lars was standing above me.

“Anything?” I sat up on the bed, wiping my eyes.

“Brook got a call a few minutes ago, he wen-”

The door opened and Brook walked in with a smile on his face, my heart sped up.

“Chris had rented a helicopter last night and was stupid enough to pay with a credit card over the phone. I already called that place, he was planing to fly a hundred thirty-two miles west. The pilot knows where, he flew Chris there three weeks ago. We're meeting that pilot on the airfield in forty-five minutes.”


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mishmash
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Awh, poor James. :(

It's good that they found the helicopter Chris was using, but they don't know that Angel isn't at that house.
She's in the middle of nowhere with that dude. :P
Maybe they'll see them while flying there?

Thanks for the update :biggrin :heart:
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Poor Angel! :( It was better if she would have stayed there and not run.But she did what enyone would have done. :(
This story fucking rules! :horns2
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Thanks for update Olya. :horns2
I hope the guys don't get themselves into trouble for what they did in the factory.
At least they're gonna find the place Angel was kept in.
More !! :cool
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Great update Olya!!! :heart:
I'm so glad that the boys are one step closer on finding Angel!!! :D
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I'm dying to know how all this will end ... :hump
Thanks Olya!! My favorite writer at the moment! :heart: :biggrin
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Jäger.....

Thank you all for a comments, it's means a lot to me!
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(Angel's POV)




“Wow, this is a rare sight to see, I can't believe it! Saola! And I'm lucky enough to film this beauty in the wild!” Max looked like a kid, happy to see some small dear-sized animal with spearlike horns.

He quickly pulled his camera out of his backpack and I stepped to the side, letting him get closer to the sight of his passion. I was glad Max couldn't read my mind, since I couldn't help but think that this 'rare sight' would make a great barbeque. I'm sorry, but I hadn't had a decent meat meal for a long time, fruits are nice but I'm a carnivore. Even if I had a gun to shoot it, Max would most likely kill me. Shit! I'm so hungry!

As though the animal read my thoughts, it suddenly picked it's head up, listening for a second before sprinting into the cover of the forest. I sighed, there goes my imaginary meal. A distant noise grabbed my attention, it sounded like a rattle and it was coming closer.

“Helicopter! Hide!”

Max pulled me to the side of the hill, my leg fell thought a soft patch of the ground and I lost my balance falling into the hole, pulling him with me. We slid down on the long wet dirt tunnel and dropped onto something wet and sticky. The rancid stench of ammonia made me gag and I instinctively covered my nose, but immediately pulled my hand away from my face, feeling that it was covered in the smelly substance.

“What in the hell is that smell?” I sat up and tried to hold my breath, covering my mouth with the bottom of my shirt.

“Guano. Ssshhh... Don't talk.”

I felt Max moving by my side and heard a crackling noise before a few glow sticks appeared in his hand, lighting up our surroundings. We were sitting on the ground of a big cave, the ceiling and walls were covered with bats. I felt something moving under me and quickly stood up. The ground was covered with huge and disgusting cockroaches, worms, and centipedes. Yuck!

I made a few frantic movements, feeling something crawling on my back and shook the pieces of bat shit from my clothes, then bent down and quickly tucked my jeans into my boots. What the fuck else is here? I looked around, holding the glow stick in front of me. Please, please God don't let me see a spider. As soon as I thought that, in the corner of my eye I saw something shiny that caught the light. Spiderweb... The cold hand of fear gripped my throat and my body froze in place when I saw a freaky looking white spider in the middle of it. Oh... fuck...





(Max's POV)




“We have to find our way out before we pass out from the ammonia vapors. Come on.”

I started walking, but Angel didn't move a muscle. I looked back and saw her face painted with horror. Oh fucking great! Girls and their fear of bugs and bats. Shit! I quickly walked to her and placed my hand over her mouth holding her close to me.

“Angel, what ever you do, please don't scream. All those bats will wake up, flying out of this cage and giving a sign to our hunters. Please don't scream. It's okay... they can't harm you.”

She didn't move or release a sound and I moved my hand off her lips, looking at her face. Her eyes were closed, with tears running down her cheeks, her body was shaking. Oh shit, she is terrified out of her mind! I hugged her and ran my hand over her head, trying to calm her down.

“It's just harmless bats and bugs, they can't hurt you, come on, just hold on to me and we'll make it to the other side. By the direction of the breeze there has to be another opening there, come on, walk, just try it.” She didn't move and sunk her fingers into my shoulder.

“I can't....” Her voice quivered and I felt her shivering in my arms.

“You have to, I'll help you, just one step at the time and don't look on the ground.” I tried to step away, but her arms held me in place. Okay, she is frozen here, what the hell I supposed to do now? Carry her? Shit, we have to move, I already feel a bit lightheaded, we have to get to the open air.

“Don't look down, just walk, bugs can't crawl up on you if you're moving.” I tried my best to pull her arms off me but she tightened her grip.

“You want me to carry you?”

“It's... it's not the bugs on the ground... there... there is a huge spider... right there... I can't move...” She managed to whisper through tightly clenched teeth.

“Spider? You're afraid of spiders? I don't see any...” I looked in the direction she was facing and saw a whip spider on the web a few feet away from us.

Oh my God! It's so beautiful! How can anyone be afraid of that beauty? There are poisonous five-inches long centerpieces moving by her feet and she's froze from the sight of the small spider? Go figure.

“Are you serious? It's small, and trust me as a biologist, it can't jump on you, let's just move away and go around it.” I pulled her back and she made a few steps, still holding on to me tightly. I felt like a hero, saving the poor girl from evil bugs. It feels kind of nice, her body so close to mine... Can a girl like that and a guy like me... okay, the ammonia vapors are making me delirious.






(Angel's POV)



With Max's help I made it through the bat cave and we followed the long and narrow ways that took us under the mountain. I tried not to think of bugs when we passed a few more smaller caves, but winced every time something crunched under my feet. Thankfully, Max was holding my hand all the way, until we finally stepped out of the side of the mountain leaving the crawling horrors behind.

We came out to the small waterfall that was running from the top on one side of the cave opening. The big rocks surrounding the entrance separated a few pools of water at the different levels on the slopped hill. The crystal clear water looked so fresh and inviting that I felt urgent need to rinse my body of the dirt and dust, not mentioning the bat shit.

“Max, is it possible that we can wash all this off? I still can't shake the crawling feeling off my body.”

“Would be a good idea, considering there is always a danger of catching toxoplasmosis from the bat droppings.” Max pulled his backpack and rifle off his shoulders and placed them on top of the rock

“Toxowhat?” I sat down, carefully pulling my jeans out of the boots, making sure no bugs were there to get to my open skin.

“Toxoplasmosis, it's a parasitic disease, very unpleasant.” I started to unbutton my shirt, but Max voice made me look up at him. He was looking at me with a playful smile on his face at the same time.

“What the fuck are you looking at? You think it's a stripping show? Go find your own pond on the other side and turn the other way.”

“What? No reward for saving you from the big bad spider?” He smiled wider.

Men... all the same. Fine, you want to play, I'll play.

I walked to him unbuttoning my shirt at the same time and his smile vanished off his face when I stepped close enough to feel his breathing. He looked at me with a mixed expression in his eyes as I slowly pulled my shirt open, revealing tank top. My arm reached behind his back and got a grip of the rifle. I stepped back, holding it in my hands.

“I can always just shoot you and take a good long bath while you're out.” I flashed a devilish smile at him and he smirked at me, looking a bit disappointed.

“Sorry... I don't even know why I... it's just ammonia poising... I feel like I'm drunk... sorry...” He grabbed his backpack and I could've swore I saw him blush as he started walking away.

“Just stay there until I tell you that I'm done and dressed.” I smiled, walking back to my previous place, making sure I couldn't see Max and quickly pulled my top off. Sharp pain in my arm almost made me wince and I carefully unwrapped the scarf from my wrist.

The swelling, and redness had spread up to my elbow. The wound didn't looked good at all. It was swollen twice the size of my wrist and the throbbing was pulsating all the way to my shoulder. I pushed on the sides, biting into my lips to hold my scream, and it opened up, leaking with a greenish tinted puss. Fucking great... it's infected. What was that disease Max was talking about? Toxoplasmosis... don't know anything about it, but I don't think it could start that fast.

After I washed the wound as good as I could, I turned my attention to the rest of my body. When I felt clean enough to stop rubbing my skin, I took some time to swam around, enjoying myself, before making it back to the rocks. I prepped my back on one of them, sitting in the water and looking at the sky colored with the amazing red sunset.

This would be a beautiful place for a vacation. Just me and James, a romantic view, no one around. James... I'm almost there, one more night and tomorrow we will reach the city. We need to keep moving. I quickly got out of the water and changed into last clean clothes, feeling my body shiver. Why am I so cold? Brr, better wear the jacket.

I climbed on top of the rock and looked around. “Max, I hope you're dressed and ready.”

I saw my Indiana Bears sitting on the rocks just a few ponds away, holding something in his hands. At the sound of my voice he turned to me and I saw the flashing light of the camera.

“Smile!”

“Oh the paparazzi, can't hide from them even in the middle of the jungle.” I laughed.

“At least I'll have proof, when I'm back home telling all my friend I that spent a few days in the forest alone with a beautiful woman who's a famous rock star, saving her from bugs... They will never believe me.” He pulled a square piece of paper out of the bottom of his Polaroid and smiled.

“See, turned out pretty good, who knew I'd become a celebrity photographer.”



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I really like Max .... but, of course, I understand Angel don't want nothing with him ... after all, she has James waiting for her ... :rolleyes: :bed:

Thanks Olya!!! :heart:
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Awww that was a funny one but, bad Max hitting on her.
James... he's coming for you babes just hold on, he'll find you.
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