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I'm The One Who Waits For You...; Metallica, Iron Maiden, James/OFC
Topic Started: November 24, 2009, 5:26 pm (66,475 Views)
Auluna Raie
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I wonder how much that guys arse tightened up when Angel turned the gun on him :rolleyes:
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Kimmi
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That was funny. The beginning reminded me of Indiana Jones and The Temple of Doom. :biggrin :horns2
I hate spiders too.
I'm guessing James might be a little bit jealous later on...

Great stuff again, Olya ! :tu:
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MetalxMilitia
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Haha, I already love Max :D He's just like Indiana Jones :P

How will James react to this traveling duo..? :biggrin
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the_mighty_het
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Oh God I'm really worried about Angel's wound... :unsure: :unsure: :unsure:
I hope James will find her very soon....
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mishmash
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I think that when Angel tell James she spent all this time with some dude, he's either gonna, thank him, or kill him :biggrin
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Auluna Raie
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July 20, 2010, 3:45 pm
I think that when Angel tell James she spent all this time with some dude, he's either gonna, thank him, or kill him :biggrin
Or both :rolleyes:
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Olyamet
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Jäger.....

Thank you girls for great comments!
Love you all!
:heart: :heart: :heart:

And if you're not tired yet of this story...here is more. :biggrin












(James' POV)





I was standing in the bathroom by the partially broken brick wall. Heart was pounding somewhere in my head, she ran away three days ago. For those three days she was somewhere out there in the jungle, alone.

“Angel, I'm sorry it took me so long...” I whispered to the empty bathroom, swallowing lump in my throat.

“I can't believe she did that... I mean, it's a brick wall!” Brook walked in and stood beside me.

“She didn't wanted to be here, nothing would've stopped her.”

“She is one hell of a girl, can't wait to meet her.” He picked up a scratched out bolt and tried to scrape between the bricks.”It probably took her many days...”

I felt my jaw clench.

“Many days of me sitting and waiting, playing by the fucking rules. She was tired of waiting for me to come and rescue her and did it herself, and now she's out there alone...” I stared at the darkness outside, feeling angry and powerless. Just like in my dream, she was somewhere out of my reach and I was lost in a empty corridors with closed doors.

“Fuuuuuucckkkk!!!!” I hit the wall with my closed fists, knocking a few loose bricks out of place.

“James, we will search the area, but it will take time... it's dark now, she's probably hiding somewhere for night, too many predators here...”

I felt a cold flash of fear racing down my spine. Predators... she is out there alone in a forest full of predators.

“Fock man, here I was, ready to feel like a focking hero, rescue a damsel in distress but your Hell of a wife had to go through the focking brick wall.” Lars pushed himself through the door and kicked one of the bricks.

“For once, I wanted to see her in need of help.. but no! As for the focking predators, all I can say is, I feel sorry for those poor bastards, right James?” He looked at me with an encouraging smile and put his hand on my shoulder. “She'll be okay, she's strong, you know it.”

All I could do is breathe in, feeling the lump in my throat coming back. I wish I acted on my gut feeling on the first day, I wish I'd went after that fucker and ignored police. I wish... none this had ever happened.

“Ray, what else did you get out of that girl?” Bruce called from the bedroom.





(Brook's POV)




“Her name is Nhian, she's fourteen, and her father and older brother were guards. “I walked back to the room and continued.

“They never knew Misses Hetfield was kidnapped, Barnato lied to them, they honestly believed they were babysitting his crazy fiance. In the morning the girl brought breakfast as usual and didn't pay attention to the closed bathroom door, since that was a normal thing, Angel did that every time. They didn't figure out that she was gone till noon. Nhian said her father and brother took the Jeep and went to search the forest but never came back.”

“Do you think that Jeep that we saw upside down in the river...” Steve didn't finish his sentence.

“Who knows... I'll report that to the local police when we're back in the city, let them deal with it.” I rubbed the back of my head. I really expected that we find Angel here and now...

“Fock... does she have any other family? I mean... we can't leave her here alone... it's not like it's her fault...” Lars dropped onto the bed.

“We'll take her back to the city, she said she has an aunt there. Come on guys, let's get out of here, tomorrow early in the morning we'll start searching the forest. I figure she couldn't have gone west, there is no crossing that deep canyon, so it leaves three directions. Considering she walks all day and rests at night, in three days she should be somewhere about a hundred-ten miles from the house, we can narrow our search within that radius from the house.”

If she's survived three days in the jungle... I didn't say it out loud, but somehow I got the feeling that this was on everyone's mind. Bruce was sitting on the chair with his head down, Lars was chewing on a toothpick, Steve was brushing hair back with his hand over and over again, and James was looking out of the window with his fists tightened around iron bars.

The phone rang in my pocket, breaking the dead silence and I pulled it open.

“Brook here.”





(Bruce's POV)



I watched Brook's face carefully, trying to figure out what he was hearing on the other end of the line. By the looks of it, he got bad news and I held my breath when he finally hung up his phone and turned to us.

“Any news?” Me and James echoed each other.

“Not about Misses Hetfield. My boss just informed me that Barnato tried to escape while boarding the plane. He pretend to pass out and pulled a gun from agent Ross. He opened fire in a crowded area of the airport and got shot dead by the security.”

“Good riddance, someone had to put that motherfucker down, I just wish it was me.” I stood up.



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Auluna Raie
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YEEEEEHAW!! Ding Dong, the Dick is Dead!!!
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mishmash
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HE'S DEAD!!! :nanner:
and now, to wait for the part where James goes through the forest wearing a loincloth :biggrin :drool

Thank you for the update, :heart:
I'm certainly not getting tired of this story. In fact, it's getting more and more interesting! :D
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Lenne13
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Tired????? No!!!! I want more! :hump

And in the same time I know that the more you post, closer to the end is. :gah
And I do not want it to end ... That always happens when I'm so envolved with the story... :heart: I just want that the story continue and continue ... :biggrin

Thanks for the update Olya!! :huggie:
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Kimmi
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Woohoo !! The creep is dead. :nanner5: :biggrin
Lol... James thinks she's alone in the forest. He'll be surprised... :P
Edited by Kimmi, July 21, 2010, 12:18 pm.
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the_mighty_het
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I'm definitely not tired of this story!! I would say the exact opposite :D :heart:
Now James must hurry up and find Angel....
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Janee
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James is going to handle it :cool

I love this fiction... it's awsome :drool

love you Olya thanks for the updates :horns: :heart: you rock!
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elena
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I love this fiction! :horns2
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Olyamet
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Jäger.....

I appreciate you take you time to live a comments!
Thank you girls!

More.












XXX. Afraid To Shoot Strangers.





(Max's POV)




Angel was walking beside me on the slope of the hill, she wasn't very talkative today. She must be thinking about her family and home as we get closer to the city. I would've been too, but...

Home... all I have there are my books. I had a few friends as crazy as me about the science, but I'd lost touch with them over the years in this country. No family, no girlfriend. Women were usually eager to meet with me at first but as soon as I start talking about biology they get bored and leave. And the few I met in the world of science looked like... well, they didn't look so hot.

I looked at Angel, she got ahead and was now walking in front of me. I can't believe I hit on her, what the hell I was thinking? I bet it was those ammonia vapors. I would never talk to a woman like that on the clear mind. I can't ever find words to get attention of a girls I like. And then when she started unbutton her shirt... for a split second I thought she was coming on to me... I so would... if she... I would, without second thought. Oh for God sake! She from a different world, married... I like her as a friend, just as a friend.

I must admit I have some attraction to her... any normal men would. That's normal. I'm a guy, she's beautiful woman, and it's not just the looks. She makes me laugh, she's smart and we are together in this, it's only human, to... I looked at Angel again... It's only human to be attracted to her. Okay, do not think about that... ever. She is married and we're just friends. I still can't believe I hit on her...

I think I need to get a girlfriend when I come back to the U.S., I've been single for too long. A long time with no sex, makes Max a horny boy, that hits on friends. That is it. I need to get a girlfriend and … I looked at my companion. And I have to stop staring at her ass! And I can't do that if she walks in front of me like that.

We need a friend-to-friend kind of conversation. Family, let's talk about family. I caught up with Angel and turned to her.

“Thinking about your family?”

“I am, I miss them so much!” She turned to me with a smile.

“Tell me about them... I mean, once we get to the city... you'll get back to your fame filled life and I'll probably never see you again.”

“Not going to happen, I'll never turn back on my friends, especially friends that helped me. And I'm sure my family will be happy to meet you.”

“I don't think so... especially if your husband is the jealous type, if I had a wife like you I would't be so happy to see a man she spent three days and nights alone in the jungle with... I did try to hit on you.” My laugh came out a bit awkward and I mentally snapped at myself. Why in the hell did I tell her that? Better if she thinks that was a joke.

“Don't worry, James a bit overprotective, but he trusts me.” She smiled.

“What's he like?” I really want to know, I mean if a man trusts a woman who is that hot and in the public view. Surely there is a lot of fans, a lot of men, who drool over her... I would be going crazy. Wonder if he's as hot as her...

“He looks a little intimidating at first, but he's most caring person in this world with a big heart, amazing deep and warm blue eyes, and most beautiful smile...” She sighed and I saw her face light up.

“You must be still in love with him... to describe someone you've been married to for so many years like that...” I smiled back.

“I am, always was and always will be... he is The One. The only man in this universe that makes my heart beat faster, the only one who can make the worst day go away with one smile... who makes my blood turn into fire with one touch...” She sounded so soft and I got a little pin of sadness hitting my heart.

I wish one day someone would talk about me this way... so far my personal life has brought me nothing but pain and disappointment. My ex hates my guts and remarried shortly, very shortly, after we divorced. I had a few girlfriends, the longest relationship of my life lasted two years... no kids.

“And your daughter?” I turned back to my companion.

“She looks just like him, our Kitty-Kat, same blonde wavy hair, she got his smile and a cute button nose... she has my eyes... green. I hope this little one gets his father's baby blues.” Angel pressed her hand to her lower stomach and smiled. Little one? Wait....

“You're pregnant? You didn't tell me! I mean... do you need to rest more often, maybe we should stop now?” Oh God, I made a pregnant woman march a hundred and some miles and she never complained... or asked to slow down...

Her laugh stopped my thoughts.“Max, I'm pregnant, not disabled.”

“Still, I feel pretty bad making you walk that much in your condition.”

“You didn't make me to do anything. I want to get home as fast as I can and I'll walk hundreds of miles more if I have to. I never told you that I'm pregnant because for some reason, all the men start acting weird, treating you like a fragile statue, talking about 'condition' like it's some physically and mentally crippling disease. I hate that!”

“Did that... kidnapper of yours knew that you're pregnant?”

“No... and I hope to God, all those drugs that dickhead give me won't affect my baby...” Angel grew quiet, deep in her thoughts.



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Closer to the morning we came upon a small creek and refilled our bottles with water. After walking into the heavy treed area of the forest I notice that Angel was walking slower than usual. When I turned to ask her if she need a rest I saw her shiver, pulling her jacket closer and crossing her arms over her chest. She's wearing a long sleeve jacket and I'm sweating here with only a tee on? It must be at least ninety eight degrees in here! What's wrong with this picture?

“Are you cold?”

“Just a bit chilly, plus I hate to feel spider webs on my skin, you know how much I love those freaks of nature.” She turned to me and smiled. I was about to start a lecture about the role of arachnids in the fauna when I noted the fade dark circles under Angel's eyes and my concerns grew even more.

“Angel are you feeling okay?” Something's wrong, no one can be chilly in this heat.

“I'm fine... Max, how much longer to the city?”

“In four hours or so we should reach the main road, I think it would be safe to say from there about eight-nine hours but it will be easier walking along the road... we can rest a bit now...”

“No, no resting, the sooner we get to the city the better.” She opened her bottle of water and finished it.

Wait... this is her second one, we refilled those just recently and I only drank half of my first one. She put the empty bottle back into her bag and I saw her wince when the handle of the bag hit her right arm.

“You sure, you okay?”

“I'm fine, keep going.”

When sunrise highlighted the sky with pinks and blues we stepped into the older part of the forest with many broken trees and thick vines that were covering almost everything. Angel slowed down even more and I started watching her closer. Something was obviously wrong. She was having trouble getting over the fallen trees and kept catching in the vines.

“We should stop, the road is just three hours from here. Come on, we both need some rest.” I turned to her determined to make her stop.

“No... keep going...” She was breathing heavy and I noticed how pale she was when she passed by me.

I turned to follow her when she tripped over the tree branch. She gripped the nearby tree trunk and tried to hold on, but her foot slid on the ground and she cursed, sliding and falling flat on her back.

“Fuck!”

“Are you okay?” I ran to help her up but when I gripped her right forearm she cried in pain and press her arm to her chest, rolling to her side.

“Fuck it hurts!” I saw tears in her eyes.

“What hurts? Your arm? Did you break it?” I dropped to my knees by her side.

“No I didn't, we need to keep moving...” She tried to get up once more and I helped her, holding her by the waist.





(Angel's POV)




Max's face became blurry and I pull all my strength to stand straight when he helped me up. The forest around me moved in a circular motion and I gripped onto his arm.

“Angel, your hands so hot!” He reached to my forehead and I shivered at the feel of his cold touch.

“Oh God! You burning up!”

“I can walk... let's keep going...” I barely breathed out, feeling another wave of cold shivers taking over my body.

“Why didn't you tell me you're sick?” Max held me by my shoulders.

“Because there is nothing you can do about it... we need to keep moving...”

“How long have you felt sick?”

His voice sounded far away, the colors around me got distorted with yellow flickers and then everything went black.


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