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| I'm The One Who Waits For You...; Metallica, Iron Maiden, James/OFC | |
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| 4everJamie | July 27, 2010, 12:17 pm Post #511 |
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Some Kind Of Monster
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I loved the way Angel talked about James “He looks a little intimidating at first, but he's most caring person in this world with a big heart, amazing deep and warm blue eyes, and most beautiful smile...” She sighed and I saw her face light up. The only man in this universe that makes my heart beat faster, the only one who can make the worst day go away with one smile" Absolutely true!!! "His voice sounded far away, the colors around me got distorted with yellow flickers and then everything went black. " Now I´m really worried about her.....damn...hope James will find her soon!Can´t wait to read the next chapter...
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| Kimmi | July 27, 2010, 12:58 pm Post #512 |
Outlaw Torn
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I hope she's okey... I hope the baby is ok. And yes, Max definitely needs to get himself a girlfriend. Thanks for the update. I always love them.
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| Olyamet | July 27, 2010, 1:09 pm Post #513 |
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Jäger.....
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WooHooo! It's so nice to see you come back to reading my scribbles Katja!
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| 4everJamie | July 27, 2010, 1:32 pm Post #514 |
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Some Kind Of Monster
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*cough* sorry, it took me this long i will do better
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| Oh Hell | July 27, 2010, 2:07 pm Post #515 |
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Outlaw Torn
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Oh no, she's pregnant and passed out! NOOO! If they don't get to her soon, something really bad could happen. And yes, Max needs himself a lady.
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| the_mighty_het | July 27, 2010, 2:32 pm Post #516 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Olya thanks for the update!! Awesome as always! Unfortunately what I was afraid of happened.. Angel's wound got infected.. I hope they'll find a hospital soon And Max is a gentleman.. Alone with Angel in the jungle and he has self control.. |
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| mishmash | July 27, 2010, 2:33 pm Post #517 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Max definitely needs a girlfriend ![]() And I really hope Angel is gonna be alright... That can't be good whatsoever!
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| Lenne13 | July 27, 2010, 9:46 pm Post #518 |
Arrogance and ignorance go hand in hand!!
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Poor Max... I think he gonna find a girlfriend after make his part in this history.... Angel pregnant and sick in middle the jungle .... I'm dying to know what will happen! Olya, thanks for update!!!! I loved more and more this fanfic!!
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| mishmash | July 27, 2010, 9:59 pm Post #519 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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maybe it's cause she's pregnant, but let's also remember that wound she has! maybe it's super infected?!? |
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| Olyamet | July 27, 2010, 10:06 pm Post #520 |
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Jäger.....
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She passed out with high fever from infection of her wound. But I'm not saying anything else. I'm working the next three days, so... My lips are sealed till weekend.
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| Auluna Raie | July 27, 2010, 11:28 pm Post #521 |
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Shark-Tastic!
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Grrrrr |
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| elena | July 28, 2010, 12:14 pm Post #522 |
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Outlaw Torn
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Poor Angel! She has to understand that she needs some rest.
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| mishmash | July 28, 2010, 2:02 pm Post #523 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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I knew it!
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| MetalSanta | July 29, 2010, 10:18 pm Post #524 |
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Imitations are pale...
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I devoured the last 5 or more chapters so eagerly !!! I've missed that fic !!!!! Can I say I can't fucking wait for Angel and James to find each other, that I love this Indiana Bear (too bad she's married to the most handsome guy on the planet) and that I cross fingers for her infection not to worsen ! I hope I won't miss so many chapters the last time I'll pop up here. I LOVE this story, Olya, you're doing an AWESOME work. Keep going !!!
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| Olyamet | August 2, 2010, 7:21 pm Post #525 |
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Jäger.....
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Thank you all so much for reading and for great very encouraging comments! More. (Max's POV) Angel's eyes rolled back and she collapsed into my arms. I carefully lowered her to the ground. I had nothing on me that would help, times like this, you wish you had some simple aspirin or something. Shit! I'm not a doctor but I know I need to cool off her body fast. Think! I quickly put my backpack down and pulled the bottle of water out, pouring it on Angel's face and neck. She turned her head to the side, whispering something through her chattering teeth. “Angel! Come on wake up!” “So cold...” She opened her eyes, glistening with a fever, for a second and closed them again. Shit! If she passed out from the fever, that means her temperature's too high for her brain to handle. I need to cool her off. I looked around in the search of anything that could help. “Just hang in there...” I opened her jacket and saw a redness on her neck and shoulder. I pulled her sleeve off of her right arm, revealing swollen red skin. Shit... infection. Why didn't I see it before? She must've been hurting all this time and never said anything... Shit, shit, shit... This is bad... very bad, I need to get her to the hospital fast. In this heat, with a fever... she won't last long. I need to do something... okay, Max, don't panic, think! I took off her jacket and emptied another bottle of water, soaking her tank top. With my knife I cut her jeans, turning them into shorts. This should help to drop at least a few degrees. Then, I opened her bag, looking for anything important but there was nothing there, just two full and a few empty bottles of water. I took the full bottles and I threw the bag aside, then removed all unnecessary items from my backpack and secured the rifle to it. “Just hang on, we'll get there, please hang on...” I picked up Angel's burning body and started my walk. Moving through the trees was difficult with the extra weight, but I continued forward. Three or four hours later I couldn't make another step. My legs refused to move any further and I dropped to my knees and carefully laid Angel on the ground in the shade of the big tree. I looked at my last bottle of water, still half full. All others were used to soak Angel's clothes in the last few hours. I pulled Angel's jaw down and slowly poured water into her mouth. “Come on, drink... you need to drink...” She made a few swallowing movements and moaned. I took one sip out of the bottle and emptied the rest on her clothes, she gasped and chattered her teeth, shivering. I needed to find some water... there should be something here, a small creek or a spring... we're both fucked without it. I looked around, trying to figure out what to do next. I can dig a hole, hoping to get to the underground water... or walk around and try to find a creek... let's see, by the looks of the vegetation there is no big water supply anywhere close. Digging it is... not here, big trees have big roots, I need to find a clearing in the forest. A distant noise got my attention and I quickly stood up, clearly recognizing sound of an engine. Car! I need a car! Think fast! I grabbed my rifle and ran to the direction of the road, jumping over broken branches. When I reached the road, I stopped, hiding behind the tree and trying to catch my breath. What if it's our enemy? My mind raced with conflicting thoughts. Could be her kidnapper's men... or worse, the drug dealers... I can try to highjack their car. Crazy idea... but I need a car if I want to save Angel's life. If whoever is in that car has no weapon, I would have the upper hand. What if there is more than one person? I can take one out with the dart hoping to cause some panic and get time to reload and take second one down. What if there is more than two people? Should I shoot from here and surprise them? No, I can't harm an innocent person... what if that tranquilizer is too strong for humans? The engine sounded closer and I had no time left to think. I stepped out on the road, raising the rifle in my hands in a desperate move. A military style open cab Humvee jumped out from the turn right in front of me and I saw tires skid on the ground from a sudden stop just a few inches from my feet. The five guys inside stared at me. Shit... I didn't think that through... “I need your vehicle.” My voice sounded dry and hoarse and I felt every word slicing my throat like a sharp blades. What the fuck am I doing? They don't exactly look like guys who'll just step out and run in fear. As to answer to my demand one of them slowly stood up. “Who the fock do you think you are, Rambo?” A late thought entered my mind. I should've shot the driver, reloaded, and then step out in the open. Too late now... “I'm taking your vehicle.” Why do I keep repeating that? The weapon in my hands suddenly felt heavy, I've never pointed a gun on a man before... I'm not sure I can just shoot those strangers... even with tranquilizes... “Yeah, we heard it the first time, why don't you lower your rifle, tell us who the fuck you are, and why you need our wheels, and maybe we can help each other.” The guy with long brown hair and an English accent stood up in the cabin. “First, tell me who you all are.” I moved my weapon, pointing at them. At least they don't seems to have guns... so they're not the drug dealers or hunters... they look European... did I run into some tourists? Nah... Army Humvee... plus they don't look that scarred... definitely not tourists. “Did you see anyone around here? A woman traveling alone?” The short dark-haired driver raised from his seat. A woman... they are looking for Angel... shit! Must be the men hired by her kidnapper. Too many of them to fight off... think Max, think! “I didn't see anyone, why? You lost someone?” I stumbled on the penetrating blue stare and my eyes twitched. Shit... I was never good at lying.... The tall blond owner of the blue steel stepped out and I followed him with my gun. “I'm James Hetfield, my wife was kidnapped and brought here, her name is Angel, she escaped that fucker and no-” “Oh thank God! I thought you guys worked for that Chris guy and-” I lowered my rifle with a sigh of relieve, before I could finish James jumped to me, crushing my shoulders in his arms. “You know her? You saw her? Where is she?” His eyes were piercing me. Is that what she called deep and warm blue? “I carried her as far as I could... she is very sick... I heard the car an-” “Where?” James' breath out, stopping me mid-sentence. I saw the other guys jumping out of the Humvee. “Follow me... she's out, burning with fever... I tried to cool her off but the water is all gone... and it's hot as Hell here..” I keep talking, barely keeping up with the five running men, leading them to the big tree where I left Angel. |
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Now I´m really worried about her.....damn...hope James will find her soon!






I loved more and more this fanfic!!

8:39 PM Jul 10