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| I'm The One Who Waits For You...; Metallica, Iron Maiden, James/OFC | |
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| mishmash | August 2, 2010, 7:59 pm Post #526 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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:horns2 YESS!!!!hang on angel! james is coming!!!!
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| Lenne13 | August 2, 2010, 9:00 pm Post #527 |
Arrogance and ignorance go hand in hand!!
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I think James will be grateful to Max for all life ... Thanks Olya!!! I can't wait to see what will happen....
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| Kimmi | August 3, 2010, 2:05 am Post #528 |
Outlaw Torn
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Awesome !! Finally he found her. :horns2 I'm sure Angel's going to be better fast when she sees James. |
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| elena | August 3, 2010, 3:29 am Post #529 |
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Outlaw Torn
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Finally James will be with her!
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| 4everJamie | August 3, 2010, 11:58 am Post #530 |
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Some Kind Of Monster
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Finally James is one step closer to see her again! :horns2 And I can´t wait until James will hold Angel in his arms again
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| the_mighty_het | August 3, 2010, 11:59 am Post #531 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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YES!! Finally!!Now I hope Angel will be ok
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| Oh Hell | August 3, 2010, 6:33 pm Post #532 |
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Outlaw Torn
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YAYAYAYYAYYAY!!!!! Yes! Oh yay finally they've got to her!
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| MetalSanta | August 4, 2010, 10:15 pm Post #533 |
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Imitations are pale...
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HAPPYYYYYYYYYYYYY !!!!! Please James be cool with our Max, he saved your wife's life ! Hehe !
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| Olyamet | August 8, 2010, 1:28 pm Post #534 |
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Jäger.....
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Thank you so much for reading and for comments! I love you girls! More. XXXI. Where The Wild Things Are. (Angel's POV) The frozen forest around me stood still and I shivered at the cold wind that was blowing black clouds, chasing them across the red sky. Snow covered everything as far as I could see. What the hell is this place? Where is Max? What happened? The ground under me moved, sky turned blue, and suddenly I found myself standing in the middle of a battle field. The sword in my raised hand cried as it sliced across the armored helmet of a Roman soldier. For a second I saw his eyes fill with pain before his body slid down and fell at my feet. What am I doing? Why is this so familiar? I know this... somehow I know this. I looked around, lowering my weapon, and my heart sped up when I saw an oh-so-dear to me figure. James! He turned to me with a smile. I ran to him, jumping over the dead bodies, dropped my sword and raising my arms, ready to wrap them around my love when my eyes caught movement behind his back. I saw the sharp point of an arrow and a face twisted with hate behind it. With all my strength I pushed James aside and a sudden sharp pain hit me in the chest. I looked down and saw a growing bloody stain in my armor with a feathery fetching on the end of the wooded shaft that was embedded deep in my chest. My body felt weak and I fell into James arms. “No! Helen, Gods no... please... don't leave me! Why?” “I couldn't let them kill you.” My mind brought the answer to my lips. “Helen... I can't live without you!” James pulled me close to him. “The clan is alive, as long as the King is still standing... I'll wait for you to grow old and then we will meet again... in next life, if we can find each other... now go... don't let it be a waste...” I breathed out, chocking on my own blood. “I promise I'll find you! I give you my word!” James' face started to fade into the darkness. No... wait.. I have to tell him... “You did! We're together, just like you promised!” I whispered into the emptiness. The world around me changed once more and now I was standing on the green side of the black mountain. I gabbed my chest but the arrow was gone. A low, blood chilling roar made me look up and I felt chills running down my spine when I saw a few creatures circling the top of the mountain. One of them dove lower and I saw a flame shooting down from it's mouth, scorching the ground. Dragons? A tumbling sound shook the ground and a few horse-like animals made their way from the side of the mountain. When they got closer I gasped, realizing that they weren't horses and weren't animals. Centaurs? They're not real... this is a dream... thank God. Before I could catch my thoughts they passed me and vanished into the forest. Wild dream... I just need to wake up. I pinched myself on the left arm and winced. Shit! If I feel it... that means... it's not a dream... I felt chills crawling on my spine. Where the hell am I? A sudden sound of the drums covered the roars of the dragons, it was coming from the big cave at the foot of the mountain. Wait... I know this... this is... The prisoner! Me and Barry wrote that... I know those drums! I almost ran towards the sound, but stopped dead on my tracks as soon as I stepped into the cave. In the middle of the big hall I saw a very familiar figure of a shirtless drummer with long hair, he was beating on the drums filled with liquid fire, splashing burning drops all over his burned, blistering skin. It can't be... “Barry?” My fade whisper sounder like a thunder and the drummer stopped his arms midair, staring at me. “Angel? You shouldn't be here.” He stood up and I stepped back. Barry is dead... he overdosed... “Where the hell am I?” “You guessed it.” He stopped a few feet away from me. “I guessed what?” I saw grief in Barry's eyes and chills rushed down my spine. Hell? I'm in Hell? Oh... God... that means I'm... ”Am I... dead?” It can't be... I don't want to be! I can't! It can't be true... “Nope, don't you know, Angels don't go to Hell, you belong there.” He smiled, pointing up. “You don't know that...” I'm dead... oh no... Barry stepped closer. “I know more than you think, trust me. You're... kind of a visitor... but it's very dangerous...” Loud growl stop him mid sentence and he looked at something on the side of the cave. “You have to go. Go now! They know you're here... Run!” The wall blistered, turning deep red, then split, bleeding a thick crimson liquid and letting a horrible monster crawl through the opening. The beast's mouth opened, baring crooked black teeth and his skin raised and bubbled with bloody puss, multiple limbs gripped at the ground and surrounding walls with terrifying claws. The stench of sulfur hit my nose, making me back against the wall. “Angel, run!” Berry's voice drowned in chilling roar of the beast and the fear bolted my feet to the ground. The beast turned to me and I saw his face honeycombed with squirming, nauseating, little worm-like creatures, his eyes peered at me. I couldn't move in my horror, hypnotized by the eyes of the monster that were living fire whirl pools. A long tongue twisted to me and slid on my right wrist, leaving a disgusting green substance on my skin. I winced in pain, watching my flesh blister and melt all the way to the bone. The pain took over my mind and I almost dropped to my knees. I need to... get out of here... Red fog clouded my vision, covering the beast and I saw him melt, turning into a human shape wrapped in a black cape. A slithering laugh was followed by a familiar voice. “My little girl, why don't you come closer and give your uncle a kiss.” A disgusting smirk twisted uncle Tom's face. “I see you found your true form, you piece of shit.” I stared him down, feeling anger washing over me, overpowering my fear. “Yes, you like it? I love it! My new Master gave me so much power! I can do so much! I was so disappointed when I found out that my death counted as an accident. You got off that one. But I never stopped planning, I found the perfect puppet, I spent so much time whispering into his ears... helping him, I knew if he would try to rape you, you would kill him. Then you'd be all mine. But... someone interfered... want to say hi to my new friend?” He opened his cape and I saw a pale figure take shape from the black fog. “Angel...” Chris stepped out of the shadow. “You! You son of a bitch! It's all your fault! I'll fucking kill you!” I stepped forward but stopped at the sound of a low hissing laugh. “Too late now, little girl, he's already dead.” Tom stopped laughing and continued. “I planned it all so well, but that husband of yours had to ruin my work! Oh well, at least my Master got one soul damned by the murder.” He smiled, baring his teeth and my heart dropped down into my stomach. Oh no... James... what have you done... Some one got hold of my elbows, whispering in my ear. “Angel, you need to come back into your body if you stay here for too long, you'll never find your way back. You will be stuck here forever. Run!” Barry pushed me to the opening, I turned to look back and saw two figures started to grow, changing shape and coming together in the shape of the fiery beast. Barry gripped my hand in his and pulled me along the dark tunnel with a light opening in the distant end. My heart started beating fast somewhere in my throat, constricting my breathing, but he didn't let me stop, pulling me through the darkness. He pushed me forward and I felt like I was falling through an invisible barrier. I turned my head and saw Barry standing on the other side. “Barry... I'm sorry... I...” “It was never your fault. I fucked up my life with drugs. I wanted to quit but it was stronger... I overdosed on purpose. I didn't want to live like that. Now go!” He pressed his hand to the invisible wall. “What about you? Come with me!” He shook his head and sighed. “I'm here for all eternity... suicide, you know... It was nice to see you Angel.” He smiled at me and turned to face the beast that was closing in on him with a loud roar of frustration. Like a black tornado, the monster hit the wall, swallowing Barry's figure and I covered my face when the bright flash of an explosion hit the barrier. The shock wave resonated in my head, knocking me unconscious. ------ I felt cold and so weak. I couldn't move... I'm so tired... I need to sleep.. yes... sleep, rest... “What are we suppose to do now?” A child's voice above me sounded sad. “We have to get her going! We have to!” Another voice, a bit different from the first. I felt small hands pulling on me. “So cold...” I breathed out and the words took the rest of my strength. “Mom! You can't sleep! Please wake up!” Kat? What is my daughter doing here, and who is the second voice? I opened my eyes again and saw two pairs of blue eyes on each side of me. “Mom, you have to get up and walk!” One of the little boys looked at me with a worried expression on his face. “Mom? Did you just... call me Mom?” I barely heard my own voice. The twins looked at each other and back at me. “You are our Mom... will be... time is running out... you have to get back!” I sat up and looked at the boys. “Will be? You mean... the two of you? Oh God!” I felt overwhelming love and pulled them both into my arms, ruffling their long hair and kissing their faces. I'll have boys! And both have James' eyes! And my hair! Their small bodies started shivering in the cold and I pressed them closer, trying to warm them up. “You have go back to your body or we'll die... all of us.” Their voices came as a whisper, fading away, and my hands gripped at empty air. “Hell no! No one will die today!” I pulled all my strength together and stood up. I looked at the frozen forest, realizing I don't remember how to get back. I'm lost... I don't remember where I came from... I don't know which way to go... Oh God... “Baby, I'm here... please wake up...” James' voice bounced around the forest, blowing snow in swirls and opening a small path. |
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| the_mighty_het | August 8, 2010, 1:38 pm Post #535 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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In the beginning I thought that this was the update from the other fiction Oh Angel please come back!
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| Olyamet | August 8, 2010, 2:23 pm Post #536 |
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Jäger.....
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Don't you remember in the beginning, when they met, James had this dream.
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| mishmash | August 8, 2010, 3:35 pm Post #537 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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me too!I was like huh? But I get it now! Thanks for the update!
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| Lenne13 | August 8, 2010, 5:06 pm Post #538 |
Arrogance and ignorance go hand in hand!!
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I swear to you .... I almost cried reading ...... Thanks Olya!!! And I'm looking forward to the next update ...
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| the_mighty_het | August 8, 2010, 7:00 pm Post #539 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Oh yes, you're right! How could I forget?? They were fighting the greek army!!!
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| Olyamet | August 10, 2010, 7:27 pm Post #540 |
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Jäger.....
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Oh, girls! Your comments make me write more and more, thank you so much! Love you! Here is more. (Brook's POV) James reached Angel's unconscious body first and dropped on his knees with a sob. “Angel...baby...” He pulled her into his arms in a tight hug, kissing her face, gliding his hands over her hair. She moved her head, rolling it off his shoulder and a weak whisper-like breath escaped her lips. “So cold...” Her teeth chattered. “I'm here... I've got you...” I saw tears on his face when he stood up, holding his treasure in his arms. “We need to get her to the hospital fast!” I turned and started running back to the road. “Ice! We have ice in the cooler!” Bruce raced past me. When we reached the Humvee, Bruce had already pulled his tee shirt off and was soaking it in the cooler. He filled it with ice and wrapped it around his sister's head. “Drive!” James growled, dropping on the seat, holding Angel on his arms. Before I could reach my place, Lars jumped in the drivers seat, grabbing the steering wheel. “Everyone hold on! I'm not focking stopping if any of you fall out!” I took the seat across from James and griped onto the frame. “Hold on sis... I know how stubborn you are...you can fight this!” Bruce stood on his knees on the floor by his sister's head and pulled the cooler closer. He opened two bottles of water and started to pour it on Angel's face, head, and chest. Steve joined him on the other side, quickly taking her boots off and emptying drinks on her shivering body. After all the bottles were open they started scooping hands full of ice, placing it on her. James held Angel's body in his hands whispering into her ear, then pulled back, looking at her face. “Guys, she's barely breathing! Just dump all the ice on her! Lars! Floor it!” The Humvee's engine howled and the whole vehicle jerked, speeding up. I dropped on my knees on the floor of the car and helped guys to pick the cooler up, turning it upside down over Angel's body. “Baby, I'm here... please wake up...” James swept his wife's hair off her face. Angel breathed in deeply and opened her eyes, coming out of her fever haze. She blinked a few times, looking at her husband, then sobbed. “James...” She wrapped her arms around his neck, clinging to his chest. “I've got you baby... everything is going to be okay... I've got you...” James pulled her closer, burying his face in her neck. I breathed out in relief, noticing just how tense I was all this time. Thank God... This is the best moment of my job, seeing people reunite with their loved ones, just for this it's worth dealing with the scum of the Earth. I smiled, watching James kissing his wife's face, neck, and arms. “I'm so hot...” Angel's head dropped back on James' arm and once again she drifted into a fever induced darkness. “No.. no... stay with me... come on baby... stay with me...” James pulled Angel's head back to his shoulder. “It's a good sign, if she feel hot, that means her fever is going down.” The voice of the man sitting next to me sounded dry and I turned to our new friend. “I'm detective Brook, you already know James, the guy on the left from him is Bruce, Angel's brother. That's Steve and the maniac in drivers seat is Lars.” I held onto the top of the cab when the Humvee jumped, taking another sharp turn, and bounced on the uneven road. “I'm Max... Max Graft.” “Ray, where the fock is closest hospital?” Lars' yell covered the roar of the engine. “Go to the Embassy, they have their own medical block there, it's better than any hospital around here!” I screamed back. “You better focking call them and get everything ready! And they better have the gate open or I'll focking ram through it!” Lars turned the steering wheel, sliding the rear end of the Humvee on the dirt. He would, I had no doubt in that. I pulled out my phone and started dialing the Embassy number. “This is detective Brook, we coming with a medical emergency, extremely high fever, some kind of infection, get everything ready, we will be there in twenty-thirty minutes...” I looked ahead to get the bearings and was surprised to see that we came out of the jungle and were speeding on the street. Lars was driving like a get away driver, chased by the Devil himself, swearing and blowing the horn at every car in our way. “Make it ten minutes, and open the gate!” |
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