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I'm The One Who Waits For You...; Metallica, Iron Maiden, James/OFC
Topic Started: November 24, 2009, 5:26 pm (66,462 Views)
Olyamet
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Well, there is a carnival in town so.... hehehe, boys are kind of stuck with screaming Angel.. for now.

*runs to write continue* :biggrin
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Oh men!!! I can just imagine their stupefied faces as they all stare at her in horror. I laughed so hard!
And Kirk's comments in this part are just priceless!!! You did it again Olya, you made his character and voice unique in the story in only a few sentences!

Well, with the carnival and all and this being Angel's second pregnancy, seems to me like they're all in for a delivery at home! :biggrin

Just kidding, I know it probably won't go that far, but it could be a cathartic experience for all of them!

Can't wait to see what happens next Olya! :heart:
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Thanks girl!
Love you all!
And since I hate to leave people hanging with a cliffhanger... here is more!

Also for some of my readers b-days post it as a present. Happy birthday girls!
Just to remind you girls, what your Mothers went through.
Hehehehe... okay, here is more.












(Lars' POV)



Thirty minutes later the focking situation turned from bad to worse. Some drunk idiot ran into the big rig on the bridge and that route was closed with the ambulance stuck behind the crash. They sent another one, but with the fucking carnival and the overload of people all over the city it wasn't going that fast. All this time I was on the phone with an operator and with advice from the guy somewhere on the other side of the line we found some robes and James pulled the pants off his wife and covered her with the robe. The operator kept telling us everything would be okay, good thing he couldn't see four horrified guys running around like chickens with their focking heads cut off under the loud screams of a woman in labor.

I could hear Angel grunting in pain, as I tried to explain everything to the operator. I tried to answer all the focking questions, telling him what I knew and he sounded more and more worried. He repeated what I said to someone near him and I moved closer to James in case he had more questions. The operator assured me that he had notified the first aid squad and the police, and that help would be there soon. An ambulance with trained EMTs would arrive from the hospital as soon as they could. My hands started to shake, watching Angel in agony, while James held her in his arms, whispering something in her ear between contractions, which were now much stronger and coming nonstop. His face was twisted with a mortified expression, reflecting our thoughts. No focking way we can do that without help, we're not fit to help someone to give birth, no focking way!

Jason started to pace back and forward, running to the entrance door and back, waiting for any help to arrive. The operator asked me to look at what I see and I told him. He swore at me and asked me to look between my friend's wife's legs. I swallowed and touched James' shoulder, not daring to do what I was asked to do.

“Ja-ames... he wants me to look... and tell him... I can't, I mean, she's your focking wife... can you...” I noticed myself shuddering.

“Look where?” James stared at me with teary eyes.

“Um... down there... he want me to tell him what we see...” Another loud scream from Angel pulled James attention. I stepped closer and she caught and squeezed my hand and I almost joined her in a yell. Her eyes glistening with delirium of agony, peering into mine as she whispered in a hoarse voice, breathing heavily between words.

“Lars... I'm really not into shyness right fucking now... do whatever they ask you to do... as long as it fucking helps me... but I can tell you one thing... even without looking I know... they're about to come... I can feel it...”

I picked up the phone and repeated every word to the operator. He listened to me and after a small pause I heard, “Oh, jeez..”

And then he started to give orders that I barely had time to repeat to my bandmates. It took Kirk and Jason some time to find a few clean looking towels, but the operator said in case of twins we need more. Jason spun on his heels and ran out to try and find more. You'd think in a place with a few focking showers, it wouldn't be a big deal to find a clean towel, but with your brain working in fear mode, guess again.





(Angel's POV)



The pain was now one big continuous torture. I felt like someone was ripping my insides out, digging in, stabbing, twisting. Then it changed and I felt strong pulling and the unstoppable urge to push. I was trying to hold it, hopping that professional help would arrive soon. Throughout the haze of pain I heard myself say.

“I can’t do this, I can't... I can't do this!”

I knew in my head that would be a self-fulfilling prophecy if I repeated it too many times. James was holding on to me and kept whispering, “I love you... breathe...” in my ear, his shaking hand moving over my hair, his face was pale white, and there were traces of tears on his cheeks. He looked like he was about to pass out... And for one clear moment, my mind emerged from the agony. He was the single most powerful force getting me through it, he reminded me to breathe. You never even think much about breathing most of the time, but when you're in labor, you somehow need reminding. When the contraction stopped and my body dropped down to the couch I pulled him close, looking into his eyes. I have to do this and he's the only one who can help me. My body arched into another contraction and he sobbed in my ear.

“Baby, I'm so sorry... I love you... I don't know how to help you... I can't help you...”

“James... I can do this... we can do this... please don't fall apart now, I need you. Just pull yourself together and do what I say. We can do this!”

“Okay... we can.. okay, just tell me what to do...” He wiped his tears. I looked at Lars standing with the phone to his ear.

“Tell that motherfucker... it's time... he has to tell James exactly what to do.” Lars nodded and I let go of James' arm, letting him move between my legs. I think the fact that I was taking control gave me more strength and I managed to smile, trying to relax my husband to ease his fear with a joke.

“James, just so you know, you drop our babies, and I'll kill you. They'll come out slippery, one at the time, so make sure you catch with a towel.” A strong urge to push overpowered my body and I screamed, drowning back into the haze of pain.





(Jason's POV)




I heard another of Angel's screams and couldn't help but feel chills crawling on my skin. I shook and Kirk turned to me with a fascinated look on his face.

“Isn't it amazing! I mean the beauty of new life emerging, the secret of secrets!”

“Are you fucking crazy? How can you call this beautiful? The agony she's feeling, what's fucking amazing about that?” I couldn't believe what I heard, was he not hearing the screams?

“Amazing that women can do that! I mean, their body's build to do this, to grow the new life in them. You know, I read that the labor pain is the strongest pain ever, it's like if someone would cut you open, slowly ripping your intestines apart, and women can overpower that. The perfect design, everything their body goes through to give life, that's amazing! It takes two small cells from you and her and it grows into a new person! That's unbelievable!” Kirk looked back through the window in the door. I felt nausea building up in my stomach. He's sick... this is all sickening, no one should be going through that, for no one.

“All I know is after witnessing this horror, I will never ask any woman to do that for me, to go through that because of me...”

Kirk gasped and opened his mouth to answer me, but Lars' loud scream caught our attention.

“The ambulance is here! Go!” I ran to the entrance with a thought pounding heavily in my head. I'll never have kids, I never want any kids, I won't put any woman though this kind of agony... never.

By the time I got to the front door, the EMTs were unloading their gurney out of the back.

“Hurry! She's in horrible pain!” I screamed out, pushing the door open.

They quickly threw their bags on the stretcher and followed me, almost running down the hall. Kirk held the door open and I ran in, leaving the paramedics behind me. I looked at the sight in front of me and words stuck in my suddenly dry throat. James was holding something squirming in his blood covered hands, a stupid smile was playing on his lips, and I realized that this small bloody thing was a baby. A bluish cord was stretching from his body down to Angel, my eyes followed it and stopped on the blood covered towels. So much blood... I felt queasy and my knees buckled, letting my body hit the floor, somewhere far away I heard Kirk's muffled voice before everything turned black.





(James' POV)




From the moment I felt my son in my arms, my anxiety hit the roof and somehow dissolved. The small body in my hands moved and his loud cry was the most beautiful sound I ever heard in my life. I wrapped him in a towel and carefully pressed him to my chest. I looked at Angel, feeling my tears rolling down my cheeks. Her pale face lit with a smile and she whispered.

“You did good...”

“He's so beautiful... and so tiny...” I choked on the last words, feeling my son's small fingers wrapping around my finger. Wow... this is just... Overwhelmed with the feeling, I just sobbed and heard Lars whispering by my ear.

“Look at that little focker... so cool... I mean, he's less than a minute old and he already tries to hold his Dad's hand... that's focking amazing...”

“Lars, watch your fucking language in front of my son.” I heard Angel's voice.

“One down... one to go... James... you watch him... I need to rest before it starts again...” She breathed out and closed her eyes. I pulled her hand to my lips and kissed her palm.

“Thank you...”

“No, thank you...” She opened her eyes and smiled.

Something made a thumping noise and we both turned to the door, seeing Jason on the floor with Kirk on his knees beside him.

“What the fuck is wrong with Jason?”

“I think he passed out.” Angel smiled. And I thought to myself, I was so close to doing that earlier. Seeing my Angel in so much pain, feeling so helpless... funny how it's all gone and forgotten now. All it took was one small touch from my son...

Next the paramedics rushed in and I breathed out in relief. They did their stuff, moving around us, not pushing me away. After I cut the cord, one of the EMTs said the new born needed to be changed into a warm sterile blanket and I swear, I almost growled when he pull him away. I watched his every move and felt myself again only when my son was back in my arms.

The paramedics were about to move Angel to the gurney when she grunted and grabbed her stomach.

“Oh shit... I was hopping I had more time to rest... guess not... James, I want you to help me... you did great delivering your first son, you have to welcome the other one.” She smiled through the pain, pulling on my arm.

I looked at paramedics, they both moved away, letting me closer and one of them stretched out his hands to except the baby from my arms. Hell no, if I trust my treasure to anyone it would be... I turned, looking at my friends. My eyes trailed from Kirk to Lars and he stepped forward with the biggest grin on his face.

“I'll keep him safe, like he's my own. And I swear not to swear.”




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Thank you :heart:

Those descriptions were fucking realistic! I loved how you included several points of view.

I'd be like Jason, passed out o.o
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W O W !! I read the last two parts now and... Wow!! :blink:

I loved Olya!! :heart:


Sorry for not commenting more, but I'm already at the stage of sleep almost here.... :rolleyes:
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January 23, 2011, 9:56 pm
W O W !! I read the last two parts now and... Wow!! :blink:

I loved Olya!! :heart:


Sorry for not commenting more, but I'm already at the stage of sleep almost here.... :rolleyes:
Thanks Lenne!
It's okay, I know how much you like this fic! :heart:
I can feel it and I love you back!

Plus, some of the girls, coughtrinnycough went crazy...lol
Love you Trinny!

@ Julia. Happy b-day dear! And the descriptions... I am a nurse, plus I went through that myself... that is why I only have one child...lol

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January 23, 2011, 10:05 pm
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January 23, 2011, 9:56 pm
W O W !! I read the last two parts now and... Wow!! :blink:

I loved Olya!! :heart:


Sorry for not commenting more, but I'm already at the stage of sleep almost here.... :rolleyes:
Thanks Lenne!
It's okay, I know how much you like this fic! :heart:
I can feel it and I love you back!

Plus, some of the girls, coughtrinnycough went crazy...lol
Love you Trinny!

@ Julia. Happy b-day dear! And the descriptions... I am a nurse, plus I went through that myself... that is why I only have one child...lol

I can totally understand why!!
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Of course she did it! We are designed to do it. and the reason why we can handle that pain is that it is not just any pain, it is the pain that brings your child to this world. With every contraction you're one step closer to holding your child and that feeling cannot match any other form of happiness. OK, I got carried away, sorry.

She guided them through, all 4 of them, that's beautiful and funny at the same time. And James' delivering his sons is, ah, I melted!

I'm with Kirk on this one, the birth of a new life is such a beautiful and mystic yet so natural thing! And I also love Jason's thoughts. He's a sweety with all that "I would never put anyone through this...", so cute.

Even Lars stopped being a smartass for a second. LOL

I loved the different perspectives!

Now I want to know how Angel and James are going to cope with two new babies and all the stress and pressure that brings
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OMG!! This was SO LOVELY!! :heart: :heart: :heart:

All of them were perfect in their roles! :) :horns2

Thank you, Olya! This was an amazing chapter! :heart: :horns2
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Oh this was so.... sooo... :wub: (simply no words)
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Thank you girls!!! You all rock!
Love you!
:heart: :heart: :heart:

Last part of that chapter.













(Angel's POV)




I emerged from a few hours of much needed sleep and heard James' voice.

“...and you boys are the luckiest in the world to have a mother like this... she's strong, beautiful, loving, not to mention cool, she's the best girl I know, and all the other guys will envy you so much... she's the greatest woman in the world... and I love her more than anything...”

I turned my head and saw him sitting by the cradle, smiling. His hand moved from one small arm to the other, then caught a tiny leg that went up, and I was instantly flooded with warm, overpowering emotions. My boys...

“So, what are you guys talking about?” My voice came out distorted, hoarse and almost painful.

James turned to me and smiled. “Nothing, just guy talk, you know, girls, cars, guns...”

“I think it's too early for them to know about girls.” I giggled.

“Nah, I'm starting the education early.”

“Sure, you would be the one who knows all about girls...”

“Just about one. My girl.” He walked to me and smiled, laying by my side. “My Angel girl.”

My heart melted again and I smiled, whispering in his ear.

“James... do you remember when Kat was born... it was different... I didn't feel so.. so overwhelmed with feelings, I mean I loved her from the first moment I saw her, but... this time... going through it like this, with you... with no pain medications... seeing you delivering them... that is so much more, so much stronger... I can't explain it...”

“I know, it was so personal, so... yeah I can't explain it either...” He pulled me to his chest.

“Did you figure out which one is going to be Ray and which will be Max?”

“Well, since Ray was first to help us... he was on the case from day one, it's only fair to name the first one in his honor.”

“Agreed. Can you tell them apart though... I know I can, but...”

“Sure! Ray has a little red spot on his neck and Max is smaller and has more hair!”

“It is different this time, you didn't notice those little details with Kat...” I looked into his eyes.

“Yeah... we were so young... and all those people in the delivery room... I barely had time with her when she was born...”

“And I was too drugged up... it all only sunk in the next day... that I'm a mother...”

“I think it took me a few weeks to finally get it...” He smiled.

“Is that why you let me win when I insisted on Steve and Cindy being named as godparents?”

“That, plus... who in their right mind would argue with you?”

“Yeah... sorry, I guess I was a bit pushy...”

“A bit? You basically told me that it was decided a long time ago, before we even knew each other!”

“Sorry... it was... I guess I thought I had the upper hand, giving birth and all... but this time... the decision is all yours.”

“Lars.”

“Done. He so deserves that title... and the god mother?”

“I have no one in mind, so it's yours.”

“Lisa.”

“Done.”

A loud cry broke out from the cradle and was almost immediately doubled. We both jumped up, rushing to the boys.

“I think they're hungry.” James picked up Ray and I got Max in my hands.

“Um... both at the same time... how do I... I mean...” I sat on the bed, holding one of my sons and feeling torn apart.

“I have no idea... but we need to think of something fast.” We looked at each other and turned back to the boys. Oh shit... there's no way I can feed one and let the other scream... I can't do that. The screams increased in volume and I started to panic. Come on brain, think!





(James' POV)




We decided to deliver the news to our friends one at the time and in private, since last time when we did it, we ended up with six guys screaming 'why not me?' and two happy people in tears trying to hug us. This time we'd be smarter, plus this time we agreed to do it while we were still in the hospital. The hospital rule was two visitors at one time only, and since I was always there and counted as one, the plan was perfect.

When it was Lars' turn to visit, we barely held our smiles, waiting for him to finish talking. He went on and on about everything we went through today, and I finally couldn't wait any longer.

“Lars..”

“... and Jason, he decided not to have any kids ever...”

“Lars.”

“..and Kirk, he was so...”

“Lars!”

“What?”

“We have something to tell you.”

“Okay... I know, I have to go, there are more people waiting...”

“Would you shut the fuck up and listen!”

“What?”

“Lars... we thought, we decided... you're...” I suddenly chocked, just imagining my friend's reaction to the news, I cleared my throat and continued. “Lars, how would you like to be a godfather... for both boys.” I said the last words and saw Lars' jaw drop, he breathed in the out and his eyes flew wide open. For a few minutes he was just standing there, his mouth opening and closing, looking like a fish out of water. I saw a tear running down his cheek and bit my lip, seeing my friend struggling to find words.

“Oh my God, James... you broke him!” Angel looked at Lars, then turned to me, pointing with her eyes to my friend. Oh, for fuck's sake... I walked to Lars and pulled him into a hug.

“Lars... you okay?” He looked at me, pressing his fist to his quivering lips, then whispered.

“You.. you... I... you have no idea what that means to me... that... I mean... both boys... both your sons... me...” He ran out of air and drew in a big breath, choking. I couldn't help it and pulled him into a tighter hug. Oh you big softy...

“Lars, we're not giving them to you, you only get them if something happens to both of us, you know that right?”

“I do... I just, you trust me... that much, it means so much! Thank you, thank you both! I... when I saw them being born... wow... focking... just...” He sobbed into my chest and Angel joined us in the hug.

“Lars... I thought you said we weren't going to do this anymore, this crying in the hospital thing... stop it... or I'll join you both... oh, the Hell with it...” She teared up and I tried my best to blink my own tears away. Who else would I trust other than you, my friend...



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LOL!!! Awww.... Trinny!!! HA HA HA HA HA HA You killed me!! :biggrin

Back to the story.... bwaaaaa!!!! So touching!! :heart: :heart: I love Lars, I loved these chapters! :heart: :horns2

Thank you, Olya! :D :horns2
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Lars crying. Who could see that coming? :cloud9

THANK YOU, OLYA! :heart: More now.

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January 23, 2011, 9:41 pm
FUCK IT ONE MORE COMMENT, BECAUSE I HATE EVEN NUMBERS UNLESS THEY END IN ZERO:

MORE. RIGHT NOW. UNDERSTAND? GOOD.

FFFFKLSADG;LKSD!


okay I'm gone. *leaves*
+1 to this and the 2 comments before it!!!!!!!!! And for the newest update too! :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
Edited by Hawkeye, January 24, 2011, 10:35 pm.
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Awwwwwwww!!! :heart: :heart: :heart:

I loved James trying to tell to Lars, and he not stop talking .. :biggrin

Thank you Olya!!!! :huggie:
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