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I'm The One Who Waits For You...; Metallica, Iron Maiden, James/OFC
Topic Started: November 24, 2009, 5:26 pm (66,449 Views)
Olyamet
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Jäger.....

Tallulah
March 16, 2012, 6:57 pm
I still love this story! I had to re-read the ending again before I gave you a review. This was absolutely beautiful from beginning to end, a total labour of love. Thank you so much for this, it's a great tale.
This one will be forever in my faves, since it was the very first one! Thank you for reading and for stopping to comment! :heart:
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Burnout
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Poor Twisted Me
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I read this once before, but though I already commented, well today I read it again and noticed I haven't, so here goes:
Olya, I don't think I'll ever be able to look at these people you use as characters the same! It's like you bring a whole new level to them that can't just be forgotten! Honestly, I cried through this story, bit my nails at what was going to happen, got shivers, shared the anger with them and pretty much every emotion you put in here! The characters at one point seem so real that you start loving them so much you just can't let go at the end.
Girl, you're AH-MAZING when it comes to writing and from the bottom of my heart I thank you for your stories and hope you keep on writing and I keep on reading them. :)
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Olyamet
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Jäger.....

Burnout
April 8, 2012, 1:11 pm
I read this once before, but though I already commented, well today I read it again and noticed I haven't, so here goes:
Olya, I don't think I'll ever be able to look at these people you use as characters the same! It's like you bring a whole new level to them that can't just be forgotten! Honestly, I cried through this story, bit my nails at what was going to happen, got shivers, shared the anger with them and pretty much every emotion you put in here! The characters at one point seem so real that you start loving them so much you just can't let go at the end.
Girl, you're AH-MAZING when it comes to writing and from the bottom of my heart I thank you for your stories and hope you keep on writing and I keep on reading them. :)
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Thank you hunny!!!
I'm so happy you like my scribbles!
You are too kind!
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Olyamet
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Jäger.....

Okay, since it was my first ever fiction, I had to revisit it... lol

Many parts rewritten completely, some left intact, some just edited.


Hope you all like the changes! :heart:
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jØrdan
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Just read the revised version... it was amazing!! :heart:
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Olyamet
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Jäger.....

jØrdan
June 15, 2012, 5:30 pm
Just read the revised version... it was amazing!! :heart:
Thank you hunny! :heart: :heart: :heart:
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Daughter Of Immortality
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Great story Olya, I needed a few days to read it, but I like long stories.

I liked everything, the love, passion, action and the strong woman. :)

POV's are great! :)

I could not left it. :wink

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-DJ-
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Finally got around to reading this, one of my fav fics on here for sure! Well done! :D :horns:
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Some_Kind_Of_Monster
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First of all, let me thank you for writing this wonderful story. The characters, adventures and connection to real Metallica history is absolutely magnificent. I enjoyed every word and every emotion you successfully conveyed in this fanfic. The knowlegde of pain and happiness, the awarness of human emotions is absolutely beautiful!
Your knowledge on psychology and criminalistics is also worth mentioning!
PERFECTION!!!

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Olyamet
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Thank you girls so much, you have no idea how much I appreciate your feedback!
You are too kind!
Love you all!
:heart: :heart: :heart:

For all the new readers, don't forget to check out a spin off revolving around Jason after his talk with Angel.
Beautiful fiction, by my dear friend and amazing writer Bo (tuesday's gone).

The Reason Is You.


Thanks again girls!
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ForeverHetfield94 <3
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Just read the first 2 entries... UGH DAMMIT HETFIELD!! :lol:

Can't wait to read more tomorrow! :biggrin :heart:
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Olyamet
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ForeverHetfield94 <3
June 27, 2012, 10:42 pm
Just read the first 2 entries... UGH DAMMIT HETFIELD!! :lol:

Can't wait to read more tomorrow! :biggrin :heart:
Ohh!!! Sam!
You are finally got to it!
Glad you like it!!!
Thanks for taking time to leave the comment! :heart: :heart: :heart:
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!JaceyNewkid!
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Wow. Umm just wow. I finally finished reading this. So many emotions throughout. I felt Angel and James' anger and Jason's frustration, sadness and loyalty to James. Thank you for writing this! It's inspired me to get a move on with my fic! I'm sure I'll be reading it again in the future, definitely a fave on here :heart: :heart: :heart:
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Olyamet
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!JaceyNewkid!
October 7, 2012, 7:17 am
Wow. Umm just wow. I finally finished reading this. So many emotions throughout. I felt Angel and James' anger and Jason's frustration, sadness and loyalty to James. Thank you for writing this! It's inspired me to get a move on with my fic! I'm sure I'll be reading it again in the future, definitely a fave on here :heart: :heart: :heart:
Thank you hunny!!! :heart: :heart: :heart:
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Rockfan71
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Rereading it for the third time. Still one of the best out there. Definitely in my Top10 of Metallica stories. I wish you would find time & inspiration to write again.
*hugs*
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