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Wherever I Belong...; Metallica AU with a twist... James/OFC, Kirk/OFC
Topic Started: January 24, 2010, 3:50 pm (46,568 Views)
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asdflkjasdfkjasfkhjsdfjh Olya!!!! :drool :drool :drool

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“So since we did good... can a warrior get a little reward from his Lady?”
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“Are you going like this? Shirtless?” My eyes widened.

“Yeah, it's unbearably hot!”

“You have no idea...”
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Waiting for next part. There has to be some action. :drool
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OK, first, I like Tim already! And I think girls will need his help on more than one occasion... I loved the bra part, you always make these funny parts blend in the overall story so well and they always make me laugh so hard!
It's good that they will have someone on their side though. The tour has just started..

Now, why was that bitch allowed access backstage in the first place?! And James, typical man, trying to do things the easy way. Yes, a very melodramatic way of telling the bitch her time's up but he should have told her that in very clear terms. Of course, she won't drop it just like that. We know it, he knows it...
Still, that tender kiss was a pure killer! I especially like those moments of gentleness, when he forgets about his rough, lone wolf mask and allows himself to put his feelings into action. It was wonderful. So emotional and erotic! And then of course the shirtless moment. Olya! It's good that the story ended there because I'm not sure I would be able to follow further. My mind just stuck on the image of that naked, perfect, sweaty torso and suddenly there was nothing else but him. Oh, I understand Alex's awe completely. Oh, and that wink in the beginning! It just swept me off my feet!!! That naughty man and his winking and eyebrow playing!!! His face alone is unbearably sexy, let alone the rest!

I also loved Meg's POV in the beginning. This is a huge turning point for her as well, it will be interesting to see how she copes with it. She has personal demons to overcome and her first job that she has to do right. Huge, huge pressure on her. Let's hope Kirk will feel that and help her through it.
And Alex is yet to begin with her new work. I'm excited about that!

I wonder if there will be a second reward, or if the perfect moment will somehow be ruined by the lurking bitch or failed expectations of Alex or James or both? What will Kirk do after the gig? the girls still haven't seen it all and somehow I think the worst side of touring is yet to show... I like the slow pace Olya. So many things to consider and we're only in the middle of the first gig!
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Thank you girls!
@ Alma. More, you say? Okay, here is more!
@ Trinny, he is... I had a certain picture in my mind writing that part...

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@ Julia. Oh it will be some action...
@Bo. Yep, James chose the easy way, not the words, but actions. But he is trying, he even went against his own words! "I can't be all lovey-dovey with her in front of the guys." We'll see what comes out of it... And Tim, yes, I like him too! I had to give girls extra help.

Okay, here is more! The continue of the first day of tour, sorry, I tried to make it shorter, but there is too much to say and set everything for the future...










(Meg's POV)


“So did you get any good shots?” Kirk's arms wrapped around my waist.

“Mmnnn... I hope so, I'll find out when we get back to the hotel and I develop the film. It was very hard, you know. I tried to get everyone else, but I think I got at least one roll of just you. Couldn't take my eyes off of you. You looked so incredibly hot in there, so confident. How do you do it in front of so many people?” I turned with a smile.

“Got used to it, I just let the music take me and everything else just melts away.” He moved his face to the back of my neck and pulled away with a smile. “Baby, you smell like beer.”

“I know, I was sprayed with it from the back. I stink.” I sighed.

“Sorry...”

“It's not your fault, I should've ask my father more questions, so I'm more prepared. Now I know what I need for next time.”

“Like what?”

“Like spare clothes and a portable shower.” I giggled.

“It's time.” A guitar tech walked up to us, Kirk looked at me, then quickly whispered something in the assistant's ear. I gave them one last smile and hurried back to the photographer's pit. Seriously, I need to be more prepared next time.




(Alex's POV)


After the gig was over, we went back to the now empty break room and I basically collapsed on the nearby chair, unable to stand a minute longer. My hair was wet and I smelled like alcohol, since many times during the show drinks were flying all around, my feet were throbbing, not to mention that they were wet and covered in mud all the way to my ankles since it started raining again at the end of the show. I sighed and looked at Meg.

“I feel and smell like someone mopped a bar floor with me.”

“I know! I would give anything for a shower and some clean clothes.” She pulled a strand of her hair to her face and smelled it.

“Yuk! At least now we know we need to bring spare clothing with us and wear suitable clothing.” She looked at her feet.

“We need rain boots.”

“And waterproof jackets, like rain coats.” I looked down at my wet legs. “Thank Gods Tim caught me! Can you imagine how I would looked like if I'd fallen into that soup of mud and everything else?”

“Wonder if we can buy some bio-hazard suits... you know, those orange once...” She looked at me with a serious face.

“I wonder if Kirk likes carrots...” I bit my lip.

“He is a vegetarian, why?”

“'Coz you'll look like one big carrot...” I snorted.

“Oh you!” Meg tried to stand up, but her muddy shoe slid on the floor and she end up falling back, missing the chair. I rushed to help her, only to repeat her move, landing on the floor by her, and we both broke out in laughter. At that moment the door opened and Tim walked into the room.

“What are you doing? Are you okay?”

“Yeah, we just decided to have a little mud fight.” I breathed out, pulling myself off the floor and gave Meg a hand.

“You know there's an after party to celebrate the beginning of the tour, you can perform that there.” He smiled. Me and Meg turned to him with the same stunned expressions on out faces, both breathing out at the same time.

“A party?”

I looked at my feet, then back at Meg and she returned my look, whispering. “Oh my God... we look and smell like cats from the dumpster.”

Tim's smile grew wider and he opened the door, pulling in two suitcases. “I think those are yours. It's a stadium, so there's plenty of showers here. The boys took the left side locker room, the right one is all yours.”

“Tim how did you..? I think I love you! It's not enough you were so helpful out there, now this!” Meg finally stood up.

“Thank you, Tim. I feel so bad, Gods... someone had to go and get our stuff from the hotel... so much trouble, just because we were kind of brainless.” I carefully walked to my suitcase, feeling awful.

“Don't thank me, I'm just the delivery boy. I was told to bring it here, show you the showers, and guard the door to the locker room till you're done. I think one of the guy's assistants organized all that, that is what assistants do, they make sure the band members have everything they need.”

“Only we're not band members... I hate to be a problem and extra work for someone. I need to find out who that was and make sure to thank them.” I turned to Tim. He looked at me for a second with a puzzled look on his face, then smiled and opened the door.

“Follow me, ladies.”

While we walk through the long corridor to the other side of the stadium, Meg in front of us, pulling her suitcase, me side by side with our guard, and time to time I caught him looking my way. Finally, I couldn't hep but get suspicious of his looks.

“Tim, is something wrong?”

“No, sorry, I just... you're very different from someone with the status of the frontman's girlfriend.”

“How different?”

“I worked for a few bands before Metallica, and band member's girlfriends usually... well, they usually have this diva attitude, you know, they assume that everyone who works for the band also works for them, and look down on everyone, ordering them around.”

“Well, that's kind of stupid, why would you look down on anyone? I mean, being your boss's girlfriend doesn't put me above you, it's not a title, it's just a matter of fact and it surely doesn't mean you work for me. Even if you did, I wouldn't ever treat you like you weren't an equal.” I said that and thought it would be a good time to ask him the question that had been bothering me on and off all evening.

“Tim... can I ask you a question?” I started, not sure if I should ask James first.

“Sure.”

“I... I don't know if it's my place to ask... and you don't have to answer if you don't want to...”

“You want to ask what happened between me and James when you saw us?”

“It's just... I don't think James is like that... ”

“He had every right to do that. I was out of line.”

“I hate to think that he treats people who work for him that way...”

“He doesn't. I wouldn't stay with them for two years if he did. It wasn't about the work... I said something rude about you and he was right to hit me for that.”

“You couldn't have said something so bad that he'd--”

“I did, and I'm sorry. I assumed you were... I called you Edna and said some other stuff, too...”

“I don't really know what 'edna' means, but--”

“In the Metallica family we call pass-around groupies Edna's, and I assumed that you were one of them. I'm sorry, I... I basically called you a whore and I'm surprised that he didn't kill me on the spot for that. He was right to protect your honor. But now that I've gotten to know you a little better, I hope you'll forgive me for what I said and we can be friends. I'm really sorry...”

“It's okay, you didn't know and you more than made up for that by not letting me fall into the shitty soup that was once the ground.” I smiled at him and he smiled back.

“So, friends then?”

“Friends.”

Meg turned the corner and stopped. “Is this it?”

“Yep. I'll be right outside if you need anything.”

“Gods, that makes me feel even worse.. that you have to babysit us, I'm sure you have other things to do.” I turned to Tim. “There's a lock on the door, we'll be fine, really. I mean... I just don't feel right with you doing all that for us.”

“It's fine, I'm happy to help since you girls don't have an assistant.”

“Well, I'm kind of Meg's unofficial assistant, only I suck at it.” I smiled.

“You did great, I would never trust anyone with my cameras, only you. You're my official assistant.” Meg smiled.

“Woohoo! I have another job!”

“Shit... I forgot you brought your work with you... that book will take a lot of your time. I wish I listened to you back at home and hired someone to help us, at least someone to carry all those bags and watch over my treasures. God, I was so fucking stupid not asking my father for advice, I could just kick myself for being so stubborn.”

“You know, my little brother's just hanging around with me, he wanted to be a part of the crew, so I let him tag along. You girls need someone to help, and I would feel better knowing he's in good hands.”

“That would be awesome! The position is his and the payment that comes with it, too.” Meg's face lit up.

“You really don't have to pay him. He's being the go-get-it boy right now for free.” Tim gave a shy smile.

“Well, now he'll have a real job.”

“Thanks!”

“No thank you! You're like our guardian angel today, solving all our problems!” Meg smiled back, opening the door into a big locker room.


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More, more, more! :biggrin :horns2
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Picture of James being delicious :drool Hmm, great birthday present

Alex has such a positive attitude. It amazes me! :tu:

MOAR. :heart:
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God Olya, I felt as if I was there!!! It seems so real and you painted the whole atmosphere so well, I could just smell the beer in their hair! And I felt overwhelmed by this excitement of the first gig of the tour, the first gig for the girls...

Again, the web of subtle details that you made up this part of is perfect. First, Kirk's arm around Meg's waist. His comment about Meg's smell, I could imagine his boyish face, smiling, but eyebrows wrinkled because of the smell... Beautiful. Then the look Tim gives Alex, how he tries to figure her out, wondering if she's for real with her considerations and politeness. Girls' looking at each other in shock after he tells them about the party, like how the hell are we going to show up looking like this... Just perfect. And the inevitable pinch of humor in that carrot comment.

you make Alex and Meg's dialogues so natural and relaxed, just as real friends should be. I loved their little "mud fight", happiness and trust surrounding the scene. These two are special!

And then Tim. Yup, he's my man! I like him very very much. He is honest and ready to confess a mistake and apologize for it. They need an ally and he will be wonderful in that role.

I love Alex. I just do, she is such a wonderful person. She's realistic and polite and treats people with kindness and respect. I like that about her. And I bet everyone else will. James will certainly get some extra points for himself through her :biggrin

I wonder what happens at the party? Will it be a shock or a pleasant surprise for the girls? Will they be just too exhausted to stick around? How will they be "inducted" into the greater Metallica family? The bitch is going to be there for sure, what can we expect of her? Alex is so nice and trusting, she should be on alert with that chick. And what about the time BEFORE the party, huh? Will someone decide to surprise someone else under the shower? Hmmmm, endless possibilities...

It still looks wonderful and exciting, but I'm sure the hectic schedule will take its toll on them sooner or later. Girls definitely have to be there for each other. Alex already did it for Meg, now it's Meg's turn. What impressions will the European leg leave on Alex, will it bring back memories?
And Alex, trust me, you should start working on that book asap :biggrin
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You know when you love so much a history, and you want to read more and see what will happen, but at the same time, you know that the more the story unfolds, more closer is the end and you already miss it? That's how I feel reading your fanfics! :rolleyes:

I want you to upgrade soon, but I know that the more you upgrade, is coming closer to the end! :gah

Olya, you're the best!! :horns:
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Sorry for a long wait, I'm working on it!
@ Alma. I promise to write more this time off work!
@ Julia.Thanks! Alex sure one kind of a girl, princess and all...
@Bo. THANK YOU! Ohhh... so much to write, so much to figure out, so many possible ways to go!
@ Lenne. Thank you! Don't worry, this one will go for a while...lol I just can't drop it yet. Me and my Looooong fics... :biggrin

Love you girls! Thank you so much for taking your time to read and comment!:heart: :heart: :heart:
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Okay, sorry again for a long wait, my muses were refusing to cooperate... all they wanted is to... well, that what I let them to do, didn't have a choice, they were very persistent... bastards.

Love you girls!
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(James' POV)


A small talk with Tim showed me that I would have to be the one treating her with respect if I wanted my crew to do the same, and it changed all my plans. I had to show everyone that she was not a groupie, so no fucking in the corners backstage, or showers, no groping her in front of them... so damn hard to do! I barely held myself from running to the locker, where our girls were taking a shower. Just the thought of her somewhere naked in a similar locker room, under the water, drove me absolutely crazy. That picture refused to leave my head, and the noises from the neighboring shower stall, where Lars was enjoying his groupie, didn't help my urges, and I had to turn my water to cold to calm my body down.

Me and Kirk waited for the girls before entering the stadium cafe, which was set up for the beginning of the tour party. After we arrived, walking hand in hand, and our tour manager introduced the girls as a new addition to the Metallica family, all eyes were set on us. Everyone was interested to see something they'd never seen before, girls with the official status of girlfriends.

During the party I indulged in a few hugs, a small kiss when we were hidden from view, and a lot of whispering 'you have no idea how much I want you' and 'I can't wait till we alone' in her ear, making her smile and squeeze my hand, with playful sparkles dancing in her eyes. It drove me up the fucking wall! There was a lot of girls and guys preoccupied with each other, and she was mine, she was there, so close, but... out of reach. I just wanted to pull her to me... but I battled with my desire and my old ways, reminding myself that she was worth every minute of this torture.

As soon as we walked into the hotel room and closed the door, my lips found Alex's and I pressed her to the wall with a low growl, sliding my eager hands over her body.

“Ohhh... all evening I wanted to do that!”

“It must've been so hard for you...” She whispered, pulling out of the kiss, and I saw a 'thank you' in her gaze. She knows me so well... how is it possible?

“It was unbearable... seeing you there by me and restraining myself...” I whispered, pulling her top off and throwing my tee over my head and somewhere behind me in a hurry. Our naked skin touched and I felt electrical charges of desire dancing their way to my groin. Oh... yes... oh, baby... finally, the reward I'm sure I deserved!

“You did good... I love you.” She smiled, opening the button on my pants and slowly pulling the zipper down.

“I love you... too...” My body jerked with overwhelming craving for her, and I picked her up in my arms, lowering her on the bed. Needless to say, it took me only a few seconds to get all our clothes on the floor in disarray. My hungry lips devoured her skin, moving over her body. Her hands ignited my lust, her lips answered with passion and I had to shorten our foreplay, unable to hold back any longer. I pulled her on top of me, watching her slide over my cock, and growled in pleasure.

Her legs parted, letting me deeper, and my hands pulled on her hips as I thrust up, arching my body under her. She moaned, moving up and down with my rhythm, and I almost lost it right there, feeling an intense urge to come. I had to battle with my body once more and hold my movements... oh... no... not yet... I need to prolong this pleasure... not just yet... Oh, dear God! My hands tensed up on her hips, holding her still.

As if she'd read my inner combat, she stopped and lowered herself to me, kissing her way to my ear.

“Tell me when it passes...” Her whisper blew over my skin as her lips continued along my face and feather like kisses relaxed me into the loving bliss.

“I think... I'm okay now...” I whispered back and she smiled.

“Good, because I want you for a long ride... it was all I could think of watching you on that stage...”

“So... you're a fan now?” I smiled.

“I am... I loved it... you were absolutely amazing!” Her face lit up.

“So.... you could've become... my groupie?” I wiggled my eyebrows at her.

“Uh! What kind of girl do you think I am?” Her eyes widened and her smile melted into shock.

“Sorry, I was just kidding, I know you're not like that...”

“I wouldn't ever except that kind of proposal, but.... I would've sooo drooled over you and put you into my dirty fantasies...” At the second part of the sentence her voice changed into a seductive whisper, and face turned from a shocked, good girl expression into a vamp like lustful grin.

“Mmmnnnn....” All I could do is moan, feeling her move on me again. Her body arching when my hands flew to her breasts, and slow paced movements submerged my mind into euphoric intoxication. Not a groupie... not even close... not ever...



(Kirk's POV)


As soon as we walked into our hotel room, Meg picked up the bags with her equipment and smiled at me, making her way to the bathroom.

“Give me a few minutes.”

“Ohhh... no... can't we play first, please...” I made my best puppy eyes expression and caught her by the waist, pulling her to me.

“Kirk, I need to develop my film. We have all night to play, baby, work comes first.” She smiled, not pulling away. I could try and make her change her mind...

“Oh, come on... just a little bit...”

“I don't want a little bit, I want long and steaming sex, but after my work is done.”

“Okay... I'll just sit here... waiting... needing... all heart broken and sad...”

“Oh, this is so not fair! Kirk, I let you to do your work, now it's your turn to wait.” She turned in my arms and placed her finger on my ready-for-a-kiss lips.

“Can I help you in there?”

“No, that would make it hard to concentrate on the film, knowing you're right here... within my reach...” She pulled her finger down and kissed me, heating up my passion. Before I could understand what was happening, she pulled out of my arms and closed the door. Fuck... okay, I guess she's right... she has a job to do... fuck! I don't want to wait!

“It'll take just twenty-five minutes, you have time to undress and make the bed ready.” Her voice whispered through a small crack in the door. Oh goddammit!

“You're so cruel... please let me in... what if I have to piss? Oh come on... let me in.” I scratched the door with my nails.

“Oh for fuck's sake! Come in, but you have to promise to obey my rules.” She opened the door and I walked into the still lit bathroom.

“You keep your hands to yourself. I need a clear mind in here, can't go all feral.” She turned and pulled some jugs with chemicals out of her bag, lining them up in the bathtub.

Mmmnnhh... hands to myself... hehehe... I undid my pants and lowered them, my hand gasping my manhood and giving a few strokes to harden it. All ready... and...

“Okay, I'm keeping my hands on myself... done.” A catty smile was plastered over my face when Meg turned her attention back to me.

“Ooohhh... Kirk! That is not what I meant! You are sooo dead now, teasing me like that... you just... you're so...” Her eyes were glued to my movements and she moaned, stepping closer and watching me closely. “Kirk... you're such a bad boy... so bad... you're just... oh, baby... let me help you with that...” Her hand covered mine, her finger sliding over the tip of my cock, and I moaned my victory, pulling her with me to the room. Her lips covered mine, my hands pressed her body to mine, and we fell onto the bed. Our hands pulled each other clothes off with urgency, while our bodies clung to each other, leaving our minds to dive into intense passion.




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Girl .... Your chapter made me have the most naughty thoughts .. But I think someone will like it. :rolleyes: :biggrin

Thanks Olya!! :heart:

And I insist: you should start thinking about writing a book. You have the gift of writing! :horns:
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HOT! :drool :heart: :horns2

Me need more! :biggrin
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I would like to thank your muses for not cooperating this time! :biggrin
And the chapter is so good, I think they cooperated more than you think.

I have to say it again - the two distinctive moods and voices that you build for the two couples reflect your writing skills and undeniable talent! Even if there were not any indications about whose POV you're writing, I would still be able to recognize the different voice of James/Alex or Kirk/Meg. That is one of the things I love the most about this story. Both pairings are so loveable, I always equally enjoy their respective stories.

Another thing that is perfectly captured is their age. They are really young in this story, and you paint that playful atmosphere of their young age so well. I felt so cheerful after reading this part (and not only cheerful, but that's another story :blush: ).
James' POV is the best, as usually. He's so sweet, trying to change his old ways and reminding himself of what Alex means to him. And I loved their lovemaking, so passionate and yet full of emotions, love, belonging, surrender, just what a true lovemaking is. That beautiful scene is rounded up by his realization of her importance in his life in those fragmented thoughts, seemingly meaningless but carrying loads of deeper meanings. Beautiful.

I can't wait to hear an account of the party (I guess there will be one). And I can't wait for the next gig. I'm curious to see how the girls will fit in the huge machine of the tour and what are the traps the future holds for them (let's not forget, stress of Meg's first big job, Alex's translation project, Meg's family situation, the groupie bitch lurking, the issue of Alex's past)! Oh and give us more Tim, nice guys are such a rarity these days :)

Love it. This story really has a special place in my heart!
Edited by tuesday's gone, February 8, 2011, 7:41 am.
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SORRY!!!
This was a hectic week... I have today to myself, so hopefully I will write something.
Again, sorry for a long wait.
Love you girls, hope you still remember what this story about...lol
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