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Wherever I Belong...; Metallica AU with a twist... James/OFC, Kirk/OFC
Topic Started: January 24, 2010, 3:50 pm (46,565 Views)
Lenne13
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What punishment, James! The worst of all! :rolleyes:

Thanks for the update Olya!! :heart:

As always, you rock! :horns:
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namenlos
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Haha, Alex writes like me when I write on paper. I write extra stuff in the margins, in between the lines already written, draw arrows to connect everything... :rolleyes: :lol: So glad I can use a word processor these days. :biggrin

But I'm glad James is understanding and they are trying to work it out. :) :heart:
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tuesday's gone
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THANK YOU for this fix of Jamesiness!!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! :heart: :heart: :heart:

Of course it's perfect again! His thoughts, weighing of options, frustration because he can't find the best way to discuss the issue with Alex, frustration at not caring for her like he thinks he should have (I LOVE his alpha-male traits), silent plea for her to understand what he is trying to show, ah, you made me a puddle!!!!

Then the sight of him in jeans standing by the window, sweet Lord, what a sight!!!

I loved the tenderness with which he kissed her and tucked her in. I also loved the details about their kisses, touches and caresses. I so wanted to be her when she ruffled his hair...
And his "punishment" is a real, essential James!

I absolutely loved this chapter. It is so intimate and full of growing, evolving love, understanding and appreciation between them. They are growing, both personally and as a couple and this is such a wonderful insight into the process! It is beautiful.
Thank you Olya for making my day with this update! :heart:
PS: I hope this "no sight of her period" does not imply anything? :rolleyes:
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I loved this part, so romantic and sweet! :heart:

James cares a lot about Alex, by forcing her to sleep and giving her a 'punishment' :rolleyes: :lol:


Great job! :heart: :tu:
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Olyamet
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Jäger.....

@ Alma. Hehehehe!
@ Lenne. I would be a good girl, so I never have to be punish like that! lol
@ Lori. Well, that is how I used to write, no one ever could read my scrolls.
@ Bo. I'm dead... you killed me again with your comment!
@ Izzy. Some times you have to be cruel to the ones you love to show you care.

Thank you girls!
Your comments mean so much to me!
:heart: :heart: :heart:


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(Kirk's POV)


“You're so... naughty... oh, Meg... oh, shit... mmmnn... someone could see us...” My words came out in gasps between thrusts.

“Mnnn... that... just makes me hotter... Kirk... baby... harder...”

“Oh Meg... oh fuck... mmmnn...”

“Uh... oh Kirk... oh... Yes!” She clenched around me, sending me into my own peak and I burst inside of her, feeling my knees giving up. I had to let go of her to brace myself on the wall and catch my breath.

“You... dirty little devil... I love you... Wow... that was just... short but so intense, so fucking hot...” I tried to catch my breath.

“I love you too...” She slid off the table and quickly pulled her skirt down, leaning against me. Her hands traveled to my butt, pulling my pants up. “Now we can get back to the party.”

I closed my zipper, still feeling dazed and looked at her flushed face.

“Maybe we should stay here for a few more seconds... by the way you look, everyone would know what we just did in here.” I smiled and traced my fingers on her slightly swollen and bright red lips, and her dilated eyes smiled back at me.

“Okay, but only if you kiss me.” She pulled me closer and I happily complied, melting into the tenderness of her lips. My hands found their way back under her blouse and she pressed me closer. If we continue like this, we were never going to get out of here... not that I'm complaining... I'm not... I'm all for it... oh Meg... you're so...

“Okay, break it up! This is a restricted area, just for the chefs.” A tall, bulky waiter was standing in the doorway with a smirk on his face.

“Sorry... we didn't know... we're leaving, we just.. um.. wanted to... kiss in private...” I stumbled on my words, feeling Meg pushing her panties deeper into my pocket and shaking with naughty, silent laughter. Bad girl! So bad, so fucking hot... and all mine...

We quickly walked past him with dirty-guilty smiles on our faces, and when we reached the main hall I turned back and saw the waiter winking at me with a wicked smile playing on his lips. Oh shit...

I turned my head to Meg, making sure she didn't see it. I wonder what she would say if she knew...





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(James' POV)



On the way to the next city and next hotel we came up with a plan that would help Alex to work, at least for today. She said she'd try to write more clearly and see if anyone could read it. And as for the parts she had already written, it had to be typed by her. I put my foot down this time and she, not without some battling, agreed to stay in the hotel one day and miss the gig to catch up.

The tuning room was somehow emptier without her in the corner with her notebook and I kept fucking up the riff, thinking of her, which pissed off Lars a bit. He even made a remark about me forgetting how to fucking play without my girl watching, but I ignored him, no reason to fall for his usual 'brush against the grid' little smirks. Fuck it... plus he was right, I needed to concentrate. I pulled myself together and after a few more songs got back into the game.

“Okay I think we focking got it... anything else we need to rehearse, James?” Lars grinned at me from behind the drums.

“It's sounds fucking good.” Kirk looked at him and turned to me. “You think it's good?”

“Great.” I snarled at Lars and walked to my dressing area. Little danish fucker...

Meg and Brian left the room, getting ready for the gig. A few more minutes and it will be on... and Alex won't be there... why is it bothering me so much? I played before without her just fine... what the fuck? Did I get too used to those encouraging eyes below the stage, those kisses and smiles in the small break between songs? I know one thing, I needed less booze with her being here, and I noticed I played better when I wasn't hungover or drunk... and I remembered the gigs.

The show started and went on and I could physically feel Alex's absence. Everything was fine, just like it used to be, but it wasn't the same. Every time I looked down and saw Meg, I unconsciously looked around her in search for the smile that always gave me a burst of energy when I needed it. Yeah, not the same... need something to drink... suddenly feel a bit thirsty.

The last song before the small break was over, and I pulled my guitar, felt it brushing against my groin with a little tug. I ignored it and went straight to the cooler, fishing out a bottle of beer. There, need some of that... just one... maybe a few, just to perk up...

“Oh James, great gig isn't it!? Oh-oh, I think you're about to lose a button.” Evelyn's eyes were set on my crotch. “I have all I need here... if you just stay still I'll sew it back on right here.”

Before I could say anything she dropped on her knees and pulled a needle from her belt. A familiar urge raised in my body when her eyes looked up at me. Fuck... Just as she read my thoughts, she slowly licked her lips and smiled.

“Don't you move, I have a needle here dangerously close to your cock... I don't want to accidentally hurt it...” Her lips slid into a wider smile and she started popping buttons open one by one, looking at me with lust.

I held my breath and looked away, sipping on my beer to cool myself and chase the long forgotten images out of my head. Her just like this on her knees... lips on my dick... lusty eyes... fuck... Alex, think of Alex... think how much you love her... Alex would never do that... would she? She's so innocent... I can ask her... no... what if she thinks it's dirty? I've lived fine without blow jobs since I met her... that slut just had to remind me how much I miss it, fuck!

“There all done, just need to bite this tread off... sorry I have no scissors with me.” She pressed her lips to my groin and I gripped into her hair, filled with the unstoppable urge to feel her lips on me. My manhood jerked when her face pressed harder to my crotch and I felt her teeth grinding on my growing tension. Fuck... I want her! She looked up at me with her smirking eyes and that snapped me back into reality. What the fuck am I doing? I don't want her... not her!

I quickly pushed Evelyn away from me, letting go of her hair. “Are you fucking done?”

“That's all depends...”

“Are you done with the fucking button?” I growled.

“Yes... with that I'm done, it's all good... want me to button you up?” Her hands returned to my groin but I stepped back.

“I can do that myself.” You already did the damage, no need for more.

“Are you sure there's nothing else you want?”

I want you... out of my sight.

“Not from you.” I wiped my body with the towel and threw it on the floor.

“Not yet.” She gave me a devilish smile and slid her tongue on her upper lip.

Shit, I can't believe I fell for her little trick... bitch knows how to push my buttons... she always was good at that...

“Fuck you.” I growled back at her and she stood up, looking right into my eyes.

“Anytime, anywhere, any position.” She smirked and slowly walked away, leaving me struggling with the buttons, trying to close my tight jeans over my bulge. Fucking slut... got me all hard... fucking bitch... Fuck!


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Harvester of Sorrow
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Evelyn, you cocksucker. Trying to corrupt James, who's trying his best to resist a sea of free strong temptations, that he has tasted before.

Totally loved his mental monologue, especially the bipolarity of what feels good VS. what's the correct thing to do. Blowjobs, his passion, pleasure without the slightest effort from his end. And on the other hand is Alex, his love, who deserves his respect. So far he is putting the most weight on the "correct" plate of the scale, I hope he keeps it that way.

Kirk and Meg's scene was a delight to read. I loved when she shoved her panties down his pocket and how he fought his urges!

I love this fiction, but you already know that. :biggrin
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Lilith
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LOL Kirk and meg so kinky! :biggrin
Oh, James... you horny bastard! :heart: :drool I love you still, but you are so weak... just one day without Alex and you are being tempted by that whore.

I hope he keeps his cool!

Love this, as usual! :horns2
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Ohooo...That was close ... :eyerub

I don't blame Evelyn .. .. After all is James! :biggrin :drool

But his attitude was really commendable! He really loves Alex ... :heart:

Thank you Olya!! :huggie:
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namenlos
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Mmm... Qwirk Quickie... that was nice. :drool :biggrin

Poor James... trying so hard to be a good boy with that cocktease right in front of him. :rolleyes:
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Jäger.....

@ Julie. She wants him back and she'll not giving up.
@ Alma. Temptations, temptations...
@ Lenne. I know! It is James!
@ Lori. It was very HARD for him. Hehehehe

Thanks for reading and commenting, girls!
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(Meg's POV)



Today's gig almost killed me, Brian did great and could've done more, but I couldn't trust this sweet teen reloading my cameras. I battled with myself over it, but the chance, even a slight one, that he would load it wrong and I wouldn't know it until the gig is over and I develop the film, or forget that I turned auto rewind off and accidentally opened my camera, ruining the film.. I just couldn't take that chance.

So, I end up taking less pictures, since I was busy reloading cameras myself. Needless to say, I felt Alex's absence deeply and desperately. James explained to us what happened and why she wasn't here today, and I mentally snapped at myself for not being there for my friend, not noticing her condition and not asking if she needed help. My friend needed me and I was too busy with myself. Shit...

Okay, I can fix this and help her find someone to type for her... Let's see, there's no one here, hiring someone off the street on the road wouldn't work. How about back home? We can send her work there and someone would type it and resend it back, so Alex can reread it and approve, no, that would be too complicated. Plus the chance of losing her work in the mail... Mom's doing nothing and she's good at finding the right people... and she can read it, would Alex be okay with it? I can ask her. What else? There has to be another, easier way...

I have to call Mom and ask for her advice, then talk to Alex tomorrow... hoping she wouldn't miss another gig. Yep, selfish me... I really need her with me and I better pay back by helping her. I can also ask Kirk and my brothers... wait, that's it! My brothers! They're writers, they know everything about it, they can help! Woohoo! As soon as we get to the hotel I'll call Sam, I have a better relationship with him.





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I carefully opened the hotel room, trying to be quiet in case Alex was sleeping. Two thoughts were battling in my head. I wanted her to rest more, hoping she finished her work and was getting some sleep... but on the other hand... I was still feeling horny after that slut got me all excited. The light was on, Alex was sitting on the bed with the typewriter between her legs, reading from her notebook. Oh good, she's awake... but... she's still working... shit... should I let her finish her work or...

“James!” Alex jumped off the bed and ran to me, wrapping her arms around my neck, and I picked her up.

“Hi baby, I see you're still working... did you get any rest?”

“I finished it! All of it, and started working on more, just typing instead of writing, got four more pages done!” She giggled when I pressed her to the wall and pulled me into a kiss, my body heating up, pressing her harder as my hands slid down to the bottom of her shirt and I impatiently tugged it up.

She let go of my lips and smiled. “Did you miss me?”

“Very much...” My lips returned to hers, demanding more, and my hands pulled on the closure of her jeans, but she pulled away once more.

“Wait... I'm... you should've taken my offer yesterday... today... my period's started and--”

“I don't care... I want you...” I ripped her shirt off and pulled mine in one quick move, my jeans went off next.

“We can play in the shower...” She pushed me down on the bed, kissing my chest and trailing down to my stomach, making my skin quivered under her touch. Oh... baby... are you reading my mind? Can I ask her to do that? Meanwhile, her lips danced around my navel and I moaned in response. Oh, baby... just a bit lower...My manhood jerked when her breast brush against it.

“Shower sound good... but this, what you're doing now... is so much better...” I breathed out in a gasp full of anticipation. Her tongue danced just inches from my cock and I unconsciously gripped her hair lightly, tugging her down. Please...

I felt her lips smiling against my skin and she gave in to my will, sliding lower. Oh... yes... almost there... just a bit lower... I tucked the pillow under my head, watching her moving closer to my hardened flesh and she raised her face, murmuring with a devilish smile.

“I guess I owe you that, since you had to leave your groupies for me... I'm just afraid I'm not as good as they are... you know... I mean, I know how it's done.. I just... I've never done this before...” Her lips hovered above my shaft, sending shivers through my core. I couldn't help my urge and lifted my hips in an attempt to reach that desirable mouth.

“Practice make perfect... I'm willing to be your victim... for traininmmnnn...” My last words drowned in my moan when I pushed up, pulling her onto me. Oh... yes... oh fuck...

She pulled up, increasing the suction, and I tightened my grip on her hair, pushing her down. Her tongue danced along the side of my cock, bringing another loud moan from my chest. Oh... fuck... feels so good...

The slow movements became faster as my hands held her in place, while her hands rested under my ass, pulling me closer. My breathing sped up and now was coming out in moan-gasps of approval. I was getting lost in my overwhelming pleasure. I was getting so close... I tried to hold on to prolong my pleasure, but she twisted her tongue around and that movement almost brought me to my peak.

“Ohh... fuck... Alex... mmnnh... you have to stop...”

I unwillingly released her hair and she slowly let me go. My engorged flesh jerked in protest and I almost pushed her back onto me. She raised her head and I pulled her up to me, gazing into her eyes. I'm crazy, I just stopped her... I would've never done this with any other girl... but, I want her to enjoy being with me. Oh fuck, her lips are so blushed now... so desirable... so... fuck... Okay... have to... cool off and let it pass... shake this feral need... God, her eyes are so beautiful, so deep...

I turned her under me and kissed my way to her breasts. She sigh and curved with pleasure.

“James... I love when you do that...”

“Show me how much you love it...” I stated to toy with her nipples, pushing them together, sucking on them, twisting them between my fingers, while I moved one of my hands to her groin. She tried to say something but when I reached her sweet spot she parted her legs with a loud moan. I started to rub my fingers her over her jeans, making her grind under my touch. My lips continued to tease her breasts, bringing her closer to her release. She whispered my name, pulling on my hair and getting deeper into her joy.

I moved my lips to hers and let my tongue dance with hers, heating up the moment. She moaned into my mouth when I twisted her nipple with my fingers and pushed her groin into my hand.

“Uh.. James...” She bucked her hips against my hand, pressing me harder and I returned my lips to her breast, whispering into her skin.

“Come on baby... come for me... show me how much you enjoy this... I want you to come...” I sucked her nipple in and bit on it slightly.

She griped her hand around my shaft and started stroking me, bringing a growl out of me. Her hand moved faster and I started moving my hips into the rhythm she set. She gasped for air when I pulled her nipple with my teeth and convulsed in orgasm, crying out her release.

“Oh... Gods!” Her hand stopped moving and I held my thrusts, letting her ride her pleasure. She took a few minutes to catch her breath, then looked at me with a catty smile and stood up on her feet by the bed, pulling me up with her.

“Um... what are you doing?”

“I want to make you scream, just like you did to me...” She bit her lip and threw a pillow off the bed by her feet. Oh, baby... do I dare to hope, that you'll... As an answer to my thoughts she slowly slid down on her knees, keeping her eyes on mine and holding onto me. Oh yes... my body shivered with feral need and I gasped when she flick her tongue against my tip.

“Oh baby...” Oh fuck... just the way I like it... she always reads my mind... need to be gentle... remember to be gentle... She crowned her lips on my cock and a wave of strong desire to posses her ran through my body, a low growl escaping my chest.

“Baby... are you sure... you want it this way?” As an answer to my question she pulled my hips to her, sinking her nail into my skin and sucking me deep inside her. I shuddered, watching her lips sliding over my hardness. Her hands got hold of mine and she placed them on her head. Fuck yes! My fingers immediately gripped into her hair, pulling her onto me. My tip touched the back of her throat and I grunted with pleasure.

“Oh... Alex...”

Be... uh... gentle... oh shit... oh fuck... feels so good... God I missed it! Be... gentle... be... uh...

“Oh... fuck... Oh baby...” I started to move my body in slow thrusts, watching her lips sliding on and off me, every move bringing bewitching joy, but soon I got lost in a haze, speeding up my movements. She worked her lips on my cock with increased suction and my thrusts became rougher, my fingers gripped tighter on her hair, pulling her closer with every push.

“Oh... yes...”

My mind got devoured by my increasing eagerness to get deeper and I felt a heat of ecstasy building in my core. All thoughts melted in the feral feeling of total domination and I growled.

“Harder... suck me harder... uh, fuck...”

She gripped my hips, working her throat muscles and letting me hit further. A late thought entered my clouded mind. I don't know if I should... I need to pull out before I... Oh fuck... The thought was gone in a second, pushed over by my powerful, unstoppable peak.

“Uhhh... Alex! Oh... fuck...” I convulsed in release, unable to control my body. I pulled on her hair, driving deep inside of her, shaking with the last jerks of my orgasm. She held me tighter to her, sinking her nails into my skin and let go of me only when I stopped moving. My mind slowly rose up from the haze and I released her hair, trying to slow down my breathing. God it was... her first time, and she's amazing! Oh... crap...

Fuck! I should've held it... or at least told her that I was about to come... ask if she was okay with that! I just exploded into her... shit... does she need to spit or did she...? I pulled her up, feeling guilty about my deed and she smiled at me.

“My mouth and my throat... it's all tickling.”

“Sorry... I should've asked if you were okay with that...” I grabbed a can of soda off the night stand and quickly handed to her. “Here, that should help.”

Fuck... I should've asked her... what if she hated it and never does it again? Shit...

She took a few sips and rinsed her mouth, then smiled at my worried face. “I didn't know before... doesn't taste bad, just tickles... so, I'm okay with that.”

“Oh God, Alex, you are the best! I love you... you just... you read me and know exactly what I want... how do you do that?”

“Maybe I wanted that too... I saw it once, not like perving or anything... my brother left a tape in my house... I didn't know what it was...” She lowered her eyes, bit her lip, then looked back at me. “I'm guilty of watching it, not all of it, just the part he left it on... and... I must admit it got me so hot... I wanted to try it ever since... now I know, I do like it.”

“Alex, you're my Goddess! Fuck! I'm the happiest guy in this world!”

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Everything that happened in the beginning was fine, I don't give a shit.

Rest: :drool :drool Oh yeah. jgedlejgwdlhgdlhewglfgbwewhkgcfkef brain cells killed. Ability of thinking lost. :drool WOAH, epic fuck. You give glory to the inglorious blowjobs.

Oh and I was listening to Empty Spaces, so. Intensity added.
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Meg is such a good friend! :)

Oh, that blowjob... :drool :heart: :drool dearjesuscrit... I need a man right now...
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Oh. My. GODDESS!!! :drool

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Well .. I believe that Meg got a way to help Alex... :)

And the part of James and Alex ....HOT!!!! :drool :drool :drool

Thanks Olya!!! :heart:
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KILLER NO. 1 - THIS: “James!” Alex jumped off the bed and ran to me, wrapping her arms around my neck, and I picked her up."

KILLER NO. 2 - THIS: “Come on baby... come for me..."

And that blowjob! Take that you stupid groupie bitch!

Alex has perfect timing and feeling for her man's needs, as always :biggrin

Now, how will James take one of Meg's brothers helping Alex? How will Meg take talking to her brother amidst the tour havoc?

This fic always makes my day! Always! :heart:
Edited by tuesday's gone, April 4, 2011, 9:40 am.
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