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| Wherever I Belong...; Metallica AU with a twist... James/OFC, Kirk/OFC | |
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| ilovejaymz | September 12, 2011, 6:45 pm Post #646 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Yay you're back ![]() Oh more, please, mooore
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| jØrdan | September 12, 2011, 7:08 pm Post #647 |
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Valar Morghulis
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Omgomgomgomgomg!!! Cliifhanger!!! ![]() And don't worry Kirk... who wouldn't love you ![]() Please. More soon! |
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| tuesday's gone | September 13, 2011, 9:36 am Post #648 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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This is one of the best chapters in this story to date!!! So many emotions, changing moods, atmospheres and the sense of doom creeping slowly from the background, just as the darkness swallowed the fiery sun before Meg's eyes and Alex's mind went blank under the penetrating gaze of the gypsy! Beautifully disturbing! Alex's journey through rooms, facing mirrors as reminders of life long gone and life that was just there, a few moments ago, while she still laughed in James' arms and then it all disappeared and became yet another reflection of the past, her face staring back at her as a painful reminder of the two worlds tragically united in her person. Simply beautiful and heart breaking! The whole atmosphere in her part is actually Fade to Black lived out for real, the emptiness, the darkness, the nothingness, the fall. The light giving in to darkness in an explosion of blood-red flames, a sense of foreboding lingering in the wicked eyes sweeping away everything that was. |
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| namenlos | September 13, 2011, 11:30 pm Post #649 |
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The Daft To Your Punk
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^ What she said.
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| Olyamet | September 22, 2011, 10:05 pm Post #650 |
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Jäger.....
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So sorry, I know I left you kind of hanging here. 'She's a good girl...' is taking all of my time and all of my mind right now, but I promise to comeback to this one as soon as it's over. Love you all! Sorry for the wait. |
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| jØrdan | September 22, 2011, 10:09 pm Post #651 |
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Valar Morghulis
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| Olyamet | September 22, 2011, 10:13 pm Post #652 |
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Jäger.....
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Yes, it's all your fault!!! J/K I Love you! And thank you for asking me to write 'She's a good girl..'!!!! It wouldn't be born without you!
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| jØrdan | September 22, 2011, 10:15 pm Post #653 |
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Valar Morghulis
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Don't tell the other girls that!!! ![]() JK. Alright... won't feel bad then. But don't forget about Alex!
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| Olyamet | September 22, 2011, 10:19 pm Post #654 |
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Jäger.....
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How can I? She's my baby!
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| ilovejaymz | September 23, 2011, 8:53 am Post #655 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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That's okey, just as long as "she's a good girl" continues in a good pace ![]()
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| Olyamet | October 22, 2011, 11:28 am Post #656 |
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Jäger.....
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Okay. The She's a good girl is officially over and in finished section, now I can comeback to continue this one. I hope you girls not mad at me for a long wait and I do hope you haven't forgotten this story. Hope to have something in a few days. Love you girls! *goes to write* |
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| ilovejaymz | October 22, 2011, 6:46 pm Post #657 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Naah, not mad.. we got "She's a good girl" ![]() But now i want some of this.... i can't waaaiiiit, cause i really loved this one, from the start.
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| Olyamet | October 25, 2011, 11:04 pm Post #658 |
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Jäger.....
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Thank you girls for waiting and please forgive me for the long period of nothing... I love you all!!! (James' POV) “Alex... I'm sorry... this is all... it's not what you think... it's just... it's so big... and you're her... and you're...” I tried to push myself away from the wall to run after Alex, but my body refused to move, still paralyzed. Mind turned words that slowly crept like a cold streams down my body, freezing my legs to the floor. She's real... it's all real... and she is who she said she is... My eyes focused on the soapstone. She is her... It's not a fairytale, it's the truth... cold, unbelievable truth... and it's so big... so fucking... messed up... mind blowing... Alex's face floated in front of the stone cold image, her ocean green-blue eyes gazed into mine, lips whispered 'James... it's still me. You... you never believed me before, did you?” I did... I believed you, but it was like... like believing that there is a God... somewhere, somehow... and this... this is like meeting him in person. The proof... the fact... cold fact, as cold as this stone, staring at me through the ages with your face. Alex's lips moved, quivering, 'you can't even stand to be touched by me... you think I'm a freak... a monster...' No... no... you're not... you're not a monster... you're... you're... My hand moved over my face and stopped on my neck, fingers slid on the metal of my pendant. You're my Alex... and I love you... and all of this... it doesn't matter... all I know is I love you... whoever you are... Time brought you to me... because we're meant to be together... Nothing would ever make me stop loving you... nothing... not even the fact that you're a real ancient princess... nothing... you're mine... my Alex, and nothing else matters. The group of the people walked into the hall and the guide's words snapped me back from my thoughts. He started his story and a thought hit my mind, gripping into my spine with a cold flash. The rest of our group will be here... and they will hear the story... someone would notice that she looked like Alex... and her pendant, they've all seen it... they will ask her about it... I know that no one will make this unbelievable connection, but they will talk how much they look alike... remind her, hurt her with the questions, and she would have to lie... no... I have to protect her... She trusted me with her secret and I must protect her. I have to find them and... I have do something... so no one will see this. I pushed away from the wall and walked on my still numb legs in the direction that Alex ran earlier. My eyes stopped on a bright red square on the wall on my way out of the hall. No one must see this... The decision only took one second to make, my hand pulled the lever down, a warning beeping flooding the air around me, and I turned the corner, leaving the hall with Alex's secret behind me. In the flashing red lights in the next hall, full of people following their tour guide to the exit, I pulled on the sleeve of the man closest to me. “Have you seen a girl with dark long hair passing through here a few minutes ago?” (Meg's POV) What the hell? I watched my friend slowly get up and walk to the fence, she lowered her face into her hands and I turned to Kirk, quickly fixing my top. “Hurry, something's wrong, she's crying!” I looked back out the window and saw Alex petting a horse that was standing on the other side of the fence. “You think they had a fight?” He handed me my jacket, quickly zipping his pants. “I don't know...” Maybe someone walked in on them doing something and she ran... then where the fuck is James? Maybe they got separated... or.. no.. why the fuck would she cry then? No.. something happened... something bad between her and James... shit... and it has to be now... when me and Kirk... of fuck, I'm such a selfish bitch! I quickly pulled my jacket on, jerking the sides down in anger at myself. What is wrong with me? My best friend is crying and I think of my ruined moment of happiness! Some woman walked out from the museum, looked at Alex, and said something. Alex's body jerked as if she was spooked, and she quickly turned with a white face, backing into the fence. The woman said something again and I saw my friend raising her hand to her throat before dropping down on the ground. “Alex!” I jumped to the ladder, skipping over a few steps and ran out of stables. “What the fuck?” Kirk got ahead of me and dropped on his knees by her listless body. “Alex!” He pulled her into his arms and raised his head to me with worried eyes. “She's out cold...” “Alex! Oh.. fuck... what in the hell?” I pulled my jacket off, propping it under Alex's head and looking at her white, almost mask-like face. “What happened?” I turned to the woman. She looked at me for a second then ran to the door screaming back to us. “Sie sollte nicht hier sein!“ She turned and pointed at a sign on the door that read 'Restricted area. Authorized personnel only.' Suddenly the lights above the door flashed red and the screeching noise of a fire alarm hit the air. The woman ran inside, screaming back. “Ich bringe hilfe!” “I don't fucking speak German!” I looked back at my friend's pale face and shook her by her shoulders. “Alex! (James' POV) I followed the long corridor and the big hall with boxes, searching for Alex, when I heard someone screaming something in German. The big loading door opened, letting a dark haired, dark eyed woman in, and she pulled at my sleeve, pointing outside. “Ihnen helfen!” She pushed me to the door and as soon as I ran outside my heart skipped in my chest. Meg and Kirk on their knees by Alex's body on the ground. “Alex! Are you okay? Alex talk to me!” Meg was shaking her friend by the shoulders, I pushed to her, dropping on my knees, gripping her stone cold and pale face in my hands. “Alex! What happened? Alex!” Her eyelashes twitched, white lips moved with a faded whisper. Blue-green eyes brought her face to life. “Are you okay?” “No...” She looked at me and closed her eyes, pushing out of my hands and trying to sit up, but I pulled her to me, feverishly whispering into her ear. “I'm sorry... I'm sorry I freaked out... I love you... I will always love you, no matter what...” “Oh, thank God, you're okay! You're okay, right? What the hell is all this about? What did that woman tell you?” Meg caught Alex hand. “I'm okay... she.. she just scared me... I.. I don't need help, I can stand up on my own...” She looked into my eyes and I felt my heart dropping down at the sight of pain in her eyes. A lump covered my throat and I gripped into her hand, struggling to find the right words. “I love you... I'm sorry... Alex...” “It's okay... it's...” Alex looked down, pushing my hand away. She looked at Meg and Kirk by her side and stood up. “Everything is fine... I was just... just tired, that's all... too much of everything in one day... to much for everyone...” She looked at me and I tried to pull her back to me, but she stepped away. “Nothing is fine, you're fucking pale, we need to get you to a hospital or something...” Meg wrapped her arms around Alex. “No... I just... I need to... I need to... Meg... I... I need to borrow money from you and... if you can get me to the airport...” “Airport? What the fuck is going on?” Meg's eyes burrowed into me. “Alex no, please... guys would you just let us talk.” I gripped to her shoulder but she stepped back again, turning to the fence. Meg gave me another killer look but Kirk pulled her to back to the museum building and she followed. Some people came running out of the door and Meg turned her attention to them, letting us talk in private. The fear of losing Alex turned the world upside down, making my heart beat fast somewhere in my throat. I pulled her to me, turning her in need to see her eyes, and breathing out the only thing that my mind could come up with at the moment. “Alex, I'm sorry... I'm sorry I freaked out...” “It's okay, James... I understand... your reaction said it all... there is nothing else to say... it's better if I just leave...” Her eyes pulled away from mine and I cupped her face in my hands. No.... no... no... my heart trembled as I desperately tried to stop this madness, stop her from leaving, take that moment back, just rewind it all and erase it. My mind drew a blank, thoughts scattered in fear, and I wrapped my arms around her, breathing out through the suffocating lump. “No, I wont let you... I love you... and nothing else matters.... please forgive me, I was... it was... my reaction was not what I feel... not how I felt... it was wrong and...” “No... it was the right one... the reaction of a man to a monster...” Blue-green eyes full of pain raised to mine and my heart sank. “Alex, you're not... I love you and I... I can't... please don't leave me...” Her tear-filled eyes gazed into mine. My arms pulled her closer, mind scrambled, trying to find the right words, stuck in repeat. I love you.... I love you... I breathed in, feeling her moving in my arms, and panic gripped into my body, making me send my plea to her eyes. “Please read me... you always knew how to read me... read what is in my heart... I can't find the right words... please just read my heart...” Her eyes soften and a tear dropped down, slithering it's way over her cheek. I wiped the watery streak off and looked back into her eyes. She parted her lips with a whisper. “I don't belong here... in this world...” Blue-green oceans filed with pain and love bled another tear, and my heart flew up with an answer. “That's not true... you belong here... you belong with me...” |
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| jØrdan | October 25, 2011, 11:40 pm Post #659 |
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Valar Morghulis
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*cries hysterically* Alex... you- you- belong here with *huccup* James... (ignore the band-aid) Ugh.. read the bastard!!! Know that he loves you!!! Ugh... -_____- This was an awesome update I have no idea what's gonna happen next.. Is that what you wanted, Olya? Is it?? Alex knows he loves her... He was just shocked!!! -sigh- Well.. if you don't post another update soon I might kill myself. So... if you love me, you'll write Awesome!!!
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| tuesday's gone | October 26, 2011, 9:50 am Post #660 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Oh how profoundly emotional, beautiful and sad chapter!!! I loved it from the first word through the last and I ended up in a similar state as Jordan. James POV is beautifully written, you got to the essence of his manly, scarred, confused mind, I felt him completely. The repetition of "nothing else matters" is so full of meaning for the future to come. And the future seems bleak and gloomy, threatening as the Gypsy/museum attendant. With Alex's white engraving on the stone and her stone white face while unconscious is such a warning. It was easy to press false fire alarm now, but why do I fear that the real fire on the horizon will be hard to control. This left me in pieces!!! I am sad. But I love it!
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