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| Wherever I Belong...; Metallica AU with a twist... James/OFC, Kirk/OFC | |
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| Voxx | January 24, 2012, 10:37 pm Post #721 |
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Some Kind Of Monster
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Pure gold! I think James reacted the way any man would, despite the fact that he really didn't do anything wrong. For him, it was definitely a nightmare sort of situation and he was probably acting on instinct and not on logic and reason. What I liked best though, was that Alex remained calm. I respect the fact that she didn't yell, scream or throw a huge fit. I think there are a lot of women out there that would be less than willing to let even something like that go without punishing their man. Looking forward to more
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| namenlos | January 26, 2012, 12:32 am Post #722 |
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The Daft To Your Punk
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I was afraid of what the outcome would be for a minute there... so glad it turned out okay.
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| tuesday's gone | January 26, 2012, 4:30 am Post #723 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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I'm soooooo loving this!!!!! I hope those words she said will stay imprinted in his mind forever! And he never gets tempted again. I hope... And I fear... He needed a confidence boost and I just love how she handled the situation. And how she encouraged him to get over his walls and made him see a different angle in the whole story. What can I say, I just love Alex! Their body language in this chapter is perfect, I could feel every twitch, every sigh, every pang, every move. And now that they've overcome this rough patch, I can't wait for all the sweetness in the wild! Plus, he'll now want to make it perfect for her even more! And there's this little thing in his pocket that he eyes ever so often! So, UP TO THE MOUNTAINS WE GO!!!!
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| SlayingTheDreamer | January 26, 2012, 1:46 pm Post #724 |
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Never talk with strangers.
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absolutely amazing update I really love Alex, her character is wonderful [/i] I loved this part, beautifully written. can't wait to see more
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| Olyamet | February 10, 2012, 1:59 pm Post #725 |
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Jäger.....
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Thanks girl!!! Love you all! Thank you for not forgetting this long fiction and reading updates! Sorry for a long wait... again. Okay, here is more. XXXXXI (Meg's POV) I leaned on one of the orchids decorated columns, watching my wedding party continue. My eyes slid over the crowd. Some people were having conversations at their tables, some dancing, music, smiles, happy faces, the atmosphere mirroring just how I felt. Happy, absolutely happy. To think only yesterday and even this morning I was a complete mess, thinking that nothing was right and now... Look at all this... I would've ruined it all. Thank God for my friend. My eyes fished out Alex's figure and a grateful smile lit my face. I owe it all to her. It wasn't enough that I was freaking out about my family, a few hours after me and Alex were deep in dirty clothes and packing, I got a phone call from Ashley. I remember how my heart dropped when I heard her words, how I broke down in tears, overpowered with the last straw of things going wrong. I was determined to cancel it all and drive to Vegas. The rain and drop in temperature to 50°F ruined the possibility of a beach wedding. Coming out into a windy coast, stepping on the wet and cold sand was not how I imagine my wedding to be at all. While I mourned my ruined by nature itself plans, Alex sprang into action. She made Kirk and James both guard me and not let me go anywhere, she made me promise that I would not make any calls or cancel anything, until she figured it out. She spent a few minutes on the phone, then called my wedding planner, told her to get all available help and decorations and meet her by the Golden Gate Bridge, and left with a secret smile playing on her lips. She came back seven hours later, looking absolutely exhausted, but happy and said that it was all set and it would be perfect. She wouldn't tell me what she did, she just smiled and said 'you'll like it, I promise.' And she was right, I loved it. The ceremony was moved from the beach to the San Francisco Conservatory of Flowers and it was absolutely perfect. The conservatory was closed for the winter, but somehow we were allowed there for the ceremony. Even Ashley was impressed. That place was The Spot for the most romantic and most beautiful wedding and it was booked a year in advance, because it was only open April to October. I don't know how Alex did it, all she said was that she'd called in an old favor to one of the college professors, who's wife is working for the mayor of San Fran, and with a giggle at James face, added: “Don't worry, not that kind of favor.” The place was amazing. I remembered walking down hand in hand with my father on the beautiful ceramic paved trail to a small waterfall, exotic plants and flowers surrounded the trail, plaques with names of the plants invisible under cleverly placed decorations, so the whole place looked like a part of a fantasy forest. It made me feel like a real princess getting married to her prince. I remembered Kirk's face, him standing at the end of the trail... his hand taking mine... it felt like a fairy tale. I remembered his nervous voice, our vows... smiling faces of our closest friends and family. Speaking of family, my family was on their best and never seen by me before behavior all day long. I even caught my parents exchanging a few looks with honest smiles. None of the usual smirks, no arrow pointed words, nothing... And that I owe to my friend too. I remembered the events of this afternoon. I was in my private dressing room, getting ready, when I heard my parents arguing. The ceremony hadn't even started, and they were already in full battle mode. My nerves were at the highest peak and I couldn't help but burst into tears. Alex looked at me, her eyes turned dark, and she stepped out of the room. A second later I heard her screaming over the voices of my parents. “Shut the fuck up!” Dead silence followed. Never in my life had I heard Alex be so blunt and use those kind of words with any adults, especially my parents. I held my breath, waiting for the worst, but I think my parents were so in shock they'd lost the ability to speak. I heard the voice of my friend continue. “I'm sorry I have to use such disrespectful language, but you don't deserve even an ounce of my respect right now! You're acting like spoiled self-centered egomaniacs! You two are so busy trying to make Meg choose a side, to love one of you more, that you can't even see how much pain you're causing her! You never put your swords down to think of her! She loves you both, that is why both of you are here! She's supposed to be a happy bride today, thinking only about her love and Kirk and their day, but instead she's in tears! And those are not happy tears, those are tears of pain, of embarrassment! She spent all day yesterday freaking out, thinking that you two will ruin yet another big day for her! She even thought of canceling the wedding and running away to Vegas because of you! I want this to be a perfect day for her, a happy day, and I can tell you right fucking now, I will not let you ruin it! If you don't stop, I personally escort you both out and trust me, after that, you will not be welcome at anything important to Meg! Is that clear? Now go somewhere private and talk, make peace, and then come back as what you're supposed to be today, loving parents, or don't come back at all!” I remember her walking back in all pale and shaking, a few minutes later the door opened again, letting in both of my parents with guilty faces... they just walked to me and Alex and hugged us. There were more tears, apologizes, loving words, and after that... after that everything was perfect. “Enjoying your day?” My friend's smile pulled me out of my thoughts. “I am, thank you! I owe it all to you. The ceremony and my parents on their best behavior.” “I didn't do much, I think they finally got it, seeing you so beautiful...” Alex smiled. “Nope, it was you, your words. No one has ever talked to them like that, ever. They were famous all their lives, no one's ever dared to tell them off like you did, and that is what shocked them into their senses. Alex, I can't even explain how happy I am... I'm just... it's so big... it's overpowering... everything is absolutely overpowering... and you, I love you for everything, thank you!” I pulled her to me and she smiled. “Honestly... I have no idea how I dared to speak like that... I thought they would kill me... and I know you love me, I love you too! ” She giggled. “I mean it, I love you more than my parents, more than my brothers!” “I do hope you love me less than Kirk!” She smiled at me.””Coz if you don't, you're marrying the wrong person..” “I love you both equally!” I smiled. “It's okay if you love him a bit more. Speaking of Kirk and love, when are you guys leaving?” “What time is it?” My eyes widened when I realized that I completely lost track of time. Alex's hand gripped into the wrist of a passing waiter. “It's almost nine.” “Oh, good, our plane leaves in little bit over three hours.... for a second there I got scared that we missed our exit time.” I breathed out in relief. “So.. are you going to leave now? I mean, you still have to drive to the house and get your suitcases and you know... um... let your husband get you out of this dress....” Alex wiggled her eyebrows at me with wicked smile. “My husband... mmmnnnhh... it would be sooo wasteful not to use this dress for the sexiest play ever...” My eyes stopped on Kirk and he felt my gaze, turning and raising his eyebrow to my clearly lusty expression. “Ohhh... Kirk in that suit, me in this dress... undressing each other... mmnn.. We have to go now... so we don't miss our flight.. plus now you put it in my head and all I can think of is sex... ” “Well, Misses Hammett, let me tell them to bring your chariot to the entrance!” Alex winked at me and quickly waved at the wedding planner. I looked back at Kirk, smiling. Misses Hammett... I am Misses Hammett... oh, my... |
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| MetallicaObsessed | February 10, 2012, 9:19 pm Post #726 |
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Some Kind Of Monster
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I haven't ever commented on this fic before, though I am an avid reader of all fics Olya! "Don't worry, not that kind of favor" she totally gets James' possessive nature |
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| Olyamet | February 10, 2012, 9:51 pm Post #727 |
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Jäger.....
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I know! She can read him really well! lol Thank you for taking your time to leave a comment, Tiffany! I know comments are not that important and most of my readers left Metchicks, so they read as guests and use e-mail to talk to me. Yeah... this fiction is so long, it outlived some members here...lol. I really need to end it! You made my day! Thank you! |
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| SlayingTheDreamer | February 12, 2012, 12:05 pm Post #728 |
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Never talk with strangers.
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you call this part boring? I love girls POV's , I absolutely enjoyed, as I usually do can't choose favorite part, maybe the last one
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| jØrdan | February 12, 2012, 3:54 pm Post #729 |
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Valar Morghulis
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HEHE go Alex! I loved this!!! Can't wait for the next part!
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| ilovejaymz | February 13, 2012, 8:03 pm Post #730 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Noooooooooooooooooo... it can't end.. well, not soon i mean ... this is not near the ending
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| Olyamet | February 13, 2012, 11:45 pm Post #731 |
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Jäger.....
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@ Mia. Thank you dear! I promise, the next part will be more interesting! @ Jordan. @ Naja. Oh it's near... I'm sorry, but I have to. If you continue something forever, it's would become a boring, never ending story. But, I promise that there will be something new after this! |
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| tuesday's gone | February 14, 2012, 10:38 am Post #732 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Oh Meg, the excited bride! That was so cute, I remembered my own "Mrs." moment ![]() I know I keep repeating that I love Alex, but I must repeat it again. I just love her, her character, determination, strength, ability to stay firmly on ground. And yeah, the wedding was wonderful and all, now it's time for the mountains, right? RIGHT? The announcement of the end to this fic saddened me. I know it's necessary and all and I know there is something else in the works but still... |
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| Olyamet | February 14, 2012, 8:13 pm Post #733 |
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Jäger.....
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Thank you Bo!!! Oh...I thought you want some newly wed couple cuddle, no?
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| tuesday's gone | February 15, 2012, 4:26 am Post #734 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Well, yeah *lies* |
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| Olyamet | February 15, 2012, 6:22 pm Post #735 |
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Jäger.....
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You'll get your James/Alex alone moment soon, but I have to write it as planned. Hope no one would kill me for delay...
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