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Wherever I Belong...; Metallica AU with a twist... James/OFC, Kirk/OFC
Topic Started: January 24, 2010, 3:50 pm (46,551 Views)
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olyamet
February 17, 2012, 8:30 pm
jordan!
February 17, 2012, 8:21 pm
Man Kirk is so fucking stubborn :P
And I KNOW that's not all you're giving me of the WEDDING NIGHT. :blink:

Hehe, loved it. :heart: MOAR!!!
Um... maybe...

So far that is all I have and knowing myself, I have no idea what will be next...
Well, I do, but it's the other couple turn. Or Bo will kill me. :P
*whistles innocently* :cool
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idk what to say, the chapters are everytime more and more interesting, but as Jordan said, we're expecting moar :drool
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I absolutely loved this part!
First of all - that's Kirk. All clumsy and cute and romantic and wanting to do things the right way. He's just so loveable!

Secondly, what Meg said about the two of them doing things their way and for themselves, that was so honest and warm and heartfelt and deeply emotional and it moved me deeply.

Thirdly, that place looks so wonderful, I was mesmerized by the photos on the link you posted!!!

Fourthly, well, you know that already, right? *puts her mountaineering equipment on*
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A bag of Prawn Crackers, two pieces of a cheese cake, 2liters of diet coce, a chocolate milk shake, three bananas and bedroom ban for last night, that is the price I paid to read this story!!! :P

And it was so worth it!!!!! :nanner:

I want more :bow

And Olya...

The sex or should I say love scenes you write are just incredible. Every touch every, feeling is just the dreemed way you want feel when you are with the pirson you love. You can describe the emotions in a way not many people can. And the idea of the story itself? Oh may!! I could see it easily to be screened.
Total perfection!!! :bow

Thank you for a night of endless drool :heart: :huggie:

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I need to confess, Immigrant Song and Drunken Sailer - Irish Rovers are two songs I was listening to whilst reading it, You have no idea how well it fits :lol:
Edited by Some_Kind_Of_Monster, February 20, 2012, 6:35 pm.
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Olyamet
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Jäger.....

@ Mia. Thank you hunny! Um... there will be more, but.. moving to another couple. :P

@ Bo. Well, then I did it right, that is how I feel Kirk at least back in 1988! And yes, James and Alex next! Oh, yeah, that Place is beautiful, took me whole day of reaserch to find the perfect spot! :biggrin

@ Kasia. Thank you so much! It means a lot to me. Thank you! :heart: :huggie:
And... I love Immigrant song! One of my faves from Led Zeppelin!
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Awww how sweet :heart:
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February 21, 2012, 4:21 am
Awww how sweet :heart:
Thanks Naja!!! :heart: :heart: :heart:
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Aww! And I thought it's an update :(
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February 22, 2012, 2:29 pm
Aww! And I thought it's an update :(
You and me both! Every time someone posts a comment here, I'm like oh yes, an update!!! And then it's not. :lol:

Oh, the disappointment! :biggrin
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February 22, 2012, 2:31 pm
Some_Kind_Of_Monster
February 22, 2012, 2:29 pm
Aww! And I thought it's an update :(
You and me both! Every time someone posts a comment here, I'm like oh yes, an update!!! And then it's not. :lol:

Oh, the disappointment! :biggrin
Omg! I'm sorry... I'm working on it!
It's has to be perfect, or Bo and Jordan will kill me.. so I'm taking my time... but I promise the very next poat by me will be an update! :biggrin

@ Voxx. Yay! A new reader!!!
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February 22, 2012, 2:51 pm
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February 22, 2012, 2:31 pm
Some_Kind_Of_Monster
February 22, 2012, 2:29 pm
Aww! And I thought it's an update :(
You and me both! Every time someone posts a comment here, I'm like oh yes, an update!!! And then it's not. :lol:

Oh, the disappointment! :biggrin
Omg! I'm sorry... I'm working on it!
It's has to be perfect, or Bo and Jordan will kill me.. so I'm taking my time... but I promise the very next poat by me will be an update! :biggrin

@ Voxx. Yay! A new reader!!!
*sits in a corner and waits*



Yo Voxx I'm waiting on yours update too :P
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February 22, 2012, 2:57 pm
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February 22, 2012, 2:51 pm
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February 22, 2012, 2:31 pm

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Omg! I'm sorry... I'm working on it!
It's has to be perfect, or Bo and Jordan will kill me.. so I'm taking my time... but I promise the very next poat by me will be an update! :biggrin

@ Voxx. Yay! A new reader!!!
*sits in a corner and waits*



Yo Voxx I'm waiting on yours update too :P
@ Olya: I've actually been a reader for awhile....my problem is I tend to read updates for most of the fics I follow on my iphone while I'm at school. And then because I don't want to leave comments that are full of typos and grammar errors, that end up being illegible, I tend to forget to comment when I'm actually on my laptop! :blush: :blush: I know! I'm a horrible person! But I LOVE this story. And like everyone else, I don't want it to end!

@ Kasia: Shh, don't say that so loud or other people will hear!! :lol:
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Thank you girls!
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As promised, my post is an update!


So... here we go to the mountains!











XXXXXII





(James' POV)




I stopped the pickup and carefully moved my foot off the brake, eyes scanning the picture in front of me. A small snowed in cabin, surrounded by a white forest. My hands carefully released the steering wheel and my chest rose up with a sigh. We're here... and now there is no way back. Alex was peacefully sleeping with her head on my shoulder and hands wound around my arm. I looked at the frozen, lifeless house and sighed again. She will hate me for bringing her here, and she would be right. Who in their right mind would want to camp in the middle of winter? If it were summer, with nice warm weather, it wouldn't be so bad, but now... shit... I should've told her the truth before we left.. too late now. We're here...

She was so excited last night, she thought of it as a surprise, romantic getaway... romantic my ass. There is nothing romantic about running through the snow to the freezing outhouse to piss. Fuck... The more she talked about it yesterday, after the wedding, the more gloomy I got, stalling as much as I could. I told her we'd go in the morning, despite her insisting to go right away. I told her that I'm too tired to drive that far and needed some sleep. In the morning I dragged my feet, taking a long shower, taking my time to load the pickup, and driving as slow as possible. And now there was nothing else I could do, we were here. I should've told her...

Alex moved, pressing my arm to her chest and opened her eyes. “Have we arrived?”

I swallowed the feeling of impending disappointment and moved an unruly wave of hair away from her face.

“Yeah.. “

She straightened up on the seat and looked out. “Oh my Gods! It's beautiful!”

To look at, maybe, but what will you say when you find out it has no utilities... I scratched my head, thinking of ways to stall the arrival of the unpleasant moment as much as I could.

“Why don't you stay in the truck while I start the fireplace to warm up the house. Sleep a bit longer, I'll wake you up when it's ready.”

She stretched and turned to me with a smile. “Nonsense! I can help, it would be much faster if we do it together, plus I can't wait to see the inside!” A kiss landed on my cheek.

Her hand flew to the handle, opening the door, and before I could find the words to convince her to let me make this place at least seem more livable, she jumped out of the pickup.

“Wow... it's so peaceful here! Little house in the middle of a snow covered forest. So beautiful!” She spun and took a deep breath. “So clean... so wonderful!”

I looked at her childish expression and let myself relax a bit. Maybe it's not so bad... she likes it so far. Meanwhile, she looked around and when her eyes stopped at the well on the side of the house my heart jumped.

“Oh my Gods! Is that a real well? Like a real bucket on a chain, roll the handle to get it back full of water, well? I hope it works!” Before I could say anything, she was already pushing the handle, face lit up with a childlike excitement.

“It works, it has to... There's no running water here... I never made any modifications... never had time.. I brought a few cases of bottled water for drinking, don't know if that one is clean enough... Alex... I.. I have a confession to make...” I started and she turned to me, letting go of the handle, and I watched it spin out of control, mirroring my jumping thoughts. Here goes nothing... I drew air into my lungs and spoke.

“Here's the truth. I failed to make reservations, I couldn't find anything open, since it's a New Year's.. this was all I had... I bought it for almost nothing, after the Master Of Puppets tour... and... It's just a cabin in the woods, with no.. modern, civilized accommodations.... I'm sorry... there is no running water, no electricity, there is a wood burning fireplace to heat it up... but no shower... I mean, there is a tub... kind of... but--” She didn't let me finish.

“No electricity? So we have to use candles? And haul water in buckets, then heat it, filling a tub to bathe?” Her eyes widened, hand gripping at the edge of the well.

Oh shit... she hates it. Fuck...

“I brought flash lights... Alex, we don't have to stay here if you don't like it... I'm sorry... I should’ve told you the truth...”

She looked at the cabin, then back at the well, then her eyes trailed to the outhouse on the other side of the cabin. When her eyes came back to me I saw them sparkle with tears. Shit... she hates it... She breathed in, fighting her tears and whispered.

“James... I... I love you... Oh, Gods... you have no idea just how much I love you right now...” She ran to me, throwing her arms around my neck and smiling through the tears.

Wait.. she likes it? Or..? I don't get it... she loves me.. but I see the tears... As an answer to my puzzling thoughts she pulled me to her lips, gazing into my eyes with delight.

“It will be the best New Year's ever!”

Well, I'll be damned, she surprised me again... I was sure she would at least whine about the luck of comfort.

“You.. you like all this? I mean, you okay with a primitive.. spartan living?”

“Gods, yes! You don't get it James, do you? This is... this is how I lived! This is how everyone lived back then! Don't get me wrong, I love all the modern things, it's easier, it's wonderful, but this... you have no idea how I missed this! Simple, primitive, barbaric, and so dear to my heart! I... thank you! For giving me the chance to relieve it again, chance to feel like I'm back in time, back in my time... thank you!”

Her lips touched mine, pulling me into tender kiss and my thoughts drowned into bliss. Fuck, I'm such a moron... how could I forget? I let myself smile. I didn't plan it, but seems like I did good, better than good.

“I'm glad you like it..”

“James... this will be amazing! We're all alone, lost in time, and we can sit by the fireplace, or make a fire pit outside, I love open fires! And.. oh my Gods! Open fire! I can cook an old fashioned meal for you! I don't think you can handle real viking food, but I can make shashlick, roasted on a spit! Mnn.. it was always my favorite! And we can bake potatoes in the ashes, just like me and my father used to! And then tomorrow, I can cook rotisserie style chicken! Oh my Gods! How I missed it all!” She spun in my arms, gripping my hand and pulling me to the house. “I can't wait to start! Come on!”

“I... I only brought a few steaks for a barbeque... the rest is a canned food...” I smiled with relief, salivating at the idea of eating all the things she mentioned.

“Fuck canned food! I can use the steak for the shashlick, but I need to marinade it in wine... but it would be so much better to have some nice fresh meat. Is there a village near by? There has to be! We'll go and get everything we need for the best New Year's party ever, Medieval style!” She was glowing with excitement, and her enthusiasm made my heart beat faster. I smiled and jumped into action.

“Okay! There's a farmers market fifty miles from here. Let's start the fire first, so it's warmed up when we come back. We need food, candles, wine and skewers!” I caught her hand, pulling her back to me. “Alex... thank you. I was so afraid you'd hate it here... thank you for being you, for making me feel like I feel right now... for.. for being the best.. thank you.”



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Ugh... James! Haven't you noticed by now.... less is more with Alex!

I think it's so fricken cute how excited she gets.... and how he reacts when he finds out she loves it... hehehe

I love this! I want more! :heart:
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I just knew she would love the cabin :) Bring on the next update!
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