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| Donīt!; Cliff/James first fic donīt kill me D: | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: May 11, 2010, 1:20 pm (1,103 Views) | |
| Plushie_Metal | May 11, 2010, 1:20 pm Post #1 |
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A pretty short fic maybe a one shot, it just come to my mind last night, and well I liked it, and thatīs why I post it here. Summary:James have a cold and Cliff dont want to leave him alone. So any spelling mistake itīs totally my fault and I`ll immediately correct it!. This is the first fic I ever post, so be gentle please! :wacko: I`m totally open to critics ![]() And here we go...D: ----- -Fuck this!!!- James was in a piss mode cause he could not find the tissues box, and actually his nose needed it. The day after he and Lars were walking to the metallihouse when the rain came, and they arrive home all wet. Lars wasenīt sick cause he took a shower, instead of that James just slept. -So he got a cold?- Cliff asked -Yes-Lars responded Cliff lited a cigarrete -So we wont practice today?- Said Kirk -Heīs virtually diying in there-Lars pointed to James room-And you want him to practice?- -Ummhp sorry man!, It was just a question- -Well, dont do stupid questions then- -Chill out dudes- -Kirk started!!!- -Not true! You did started!- Cliff rolled his eyes, and walked towards James room, sometimes is funny to Cliff look Lars and Kirk fighting but not now. Cliff opened softly the door of James room. -Hey, can I get in man?- -Ummph- Grunted James -Well that didn`t sound like a yes but I`m coming anyway- Cliff laughed He looked at James, his nose was in a red color which looked cute for Cliff. -Whad do you wand?- James sounded stupid cause the congestion on his nose. Cliff giggled and smiled at James -Nothing, I just came to see you, to be in bed with you- Cliff said getting inside James bed and huging him -Oh no, no get out !- Said James rejecting Cliff`s hug -Hey man,why you donīt want me to hug you?-Cliff asked concerned, trying to hug James again and failing -Just, no get out please- Then Cliff nearly jumped on top of James, grabbing him by his wrists pinning him in the bed. -Cliff! Get off!- James was squirming -No! Chill out!, Why you donīt want me to hug you now?- -Cause...just no, fuck off!- -James! Tell me now!- Cliff was getting pissed, why the hell James didīt want to hug him? James always do it. -Cause, you...you will get sick too if we make out- James blushed. Cliff mad face become a really funny one. And he started laughing -What? Thatīs the why? O James, dont worry, Iīm healty, Iīll be fine - Cliff kissed James neck. -I`m serious I don`t want a sick Cliff- Cliff raised his head to kiss James lips, James moved his head to reject the kiss. -O c`mon Iīll be fine Jamie, don`t worry- He moved closer to James, James looked at him thinking, after a few seconds he just closed his eyes and kissed Cliff, Cliff kissed him back. They made out a few minutes, but... Cliff sneezed heavily. -I told you idiot! Now you`re sick too- James laughed loudly. Cliff brushed his nose and layed next to James, embracing him. -Well, that`s good- -Good?, Be sick sucks!- -Not for me- -Why?- -Cause now I can be with you in bed all day!- Cliff smiled and kissed James, James kissed back. |
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| Olyamet | May 11, 2010, 2:02 pm Post #2 |
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Adriana, that was very good and funny! Great story! I like it! |
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| namenlos | May 11, 2010, 2:05 pm Post #3 |
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It's cute, but I don't understand what you mean by Lars 'took a bathroom.' Do you mean shower? BTW, if you ever need a Beta reader, I'd be more than happy to do it.
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| Olyamet | May 11, 2010, 2:06 pm Post #4 |
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Jäger.....
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I just PMd her about it!
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| Plushie_Metal | May 11, 2010, 2:16 pm Post #5 |
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Fuck! xD Stupid mistake xD Hahaha, I chekd it 4 times and I didnt notice that xD Stupid me! |
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| Plushie_Metal | May 11, 2010, 2:17 pm Post #6 |
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Yes xD Iīm sorry! Iīll edit the fic now xD Dammit
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| Olyamet | May 11, 2010, 2:21 pm Post #7 |
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Jäger.....
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It's okay, it's just a typo. I'm dyslectic when I'm rereading my fics, I never notice mistakes, thank God for my daughter, she always checks it before I post.
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| GibleTrujillo | May 11, 2010, 2:21 pm Post #8 |
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Johnny Sloth
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CJAAAMES!!! I've had a bad cold for the past week too ![]() I loooove this so far
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| Plushie_Metal | May 11, 2010, 2:30 pm Post #9 |
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Really glad you liked it girls !! xD Thanks for mark me the mistake xD, Jesus! I`m sooo stupid xD Why I didn`t notice that? :wacko: Anyway! Thanks for read and comment Hope you feel better Gible! |
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| Angel Tears | May 11, 2010, 3:08 pm Post #10 |
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that's very funny, i lov a good laugh
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| The Cosmic Gerbil | May 11, 2010, 4:32 pm Post #11 |
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Awww, that was so cute and funny...I loved it
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| namenlos | May 11, 2010, 5:25 pm Post #12 |
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Yeah, even with my perfect English, my fics have mistakes as well, so don't worry about it.
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| 62616658 | May 18, 2010, 12:51 am Post #13 |
Some Kind Of Monster
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amazing and im supposed to be your beta-reader ŽŽ, don't i D:? anyway, amazing fic ^.^ (i'm waiting the one you promised me, btw xD) |
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| Monica | April 22, 2011, 12:24 am Post #14 |
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Bad Seed
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I love the way James tried to resist Cliff ... and James blushed, just so sweet :3 |
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| Jik Hyun | April 22, 2011, 12:35 am Post #15 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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ya know what they say: misery enjoys company lol |
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I just PMd her about it!


4:49 AM Jul 11