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...For love is Immortality.; Hetero, James as Thor/OFC Valkyrie, AU
Topic Started: August 15, 2012, 1:22 pm (15,409 Views)
jØrdan
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olyamet
August 20, 2012, 10:13 pm
jØrdan
August 20, 2012, 10:04 pm
WHERE. IS. MY. POST.

:( :( :(

Fuck your job! We need fic! LOL jk.. :P But I love this. a;lskdjf MORE PLEASE, OLYA. :heart:
LOL
Sorry.. I know what I promised, but I was so busy at work sunday, I swear I passed myself the hall a few times, moving from one patient to another. I was so tired when I got home, I was in no condition to read or reread anything, my brain was dead.
I'm rereading it right now and will post in a few minutes!
When work starts to effect your fic life... that's when we need to get your ass fired.

I MEAN WAT.

LOL hurry and post it so I don't have to call your boss and tell him you've been abusing patients or something! :P :heart:
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Olyamet
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Jäger.....

Thank you girls, I'm glad you like it!
Your comments are always make me want to write more!
I love you all!
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Okay, again sorry about the delay, hope you are still interested...
More.













II.






(Loki's POV)




“Did you have fan?” Sigyn's fingers touched the back of my head and slowly weaved through my hair, bringing me back from my dark thoughts.

“Not really...” I sighed, reclining into her hug.

She walked around and sat on the floor by my chair, looking up at me. “What happened?”

“Nothing... I don't even know why I try.” I lowered my head into the back of the chair. I really don't know why... it's never going to change, he always will be the most popular, loved by everyone, and I will always be just his brother...

“He got the trophy again, didn't he?” Sigyn eased her chin on my knee, hugging my legs and I looked down into her eyes.

“I was so close this time it should've been my kill, but that fucking Astrid threw her spear split second before me, pinning the fire snake to the rock and my arrow missed. Thor's hammer finished the kill. Astrid got 'that was one awesome shot!' form him and Balder and I got 'you should be faster my brother!'”

“Aww... my poor baby...” My girlfriend's lips touched my knee, but I pulled away.

“Don't. I don't need pity. I just wish for the old days back, you know? When it was just me, Balder and Thor, three brothers, good old times... or at least just guys... It's not that I dislike that valkyrie, but it hurts more to lose to a girl. No even that, it's not the same anymore, it was sacred to us, it was better before Thor befriended her. I mean, I don't get it, yeah, she's good, but he doesn’t have to invite her every singe time!”

Sigyn sighed and rubbed my leg. “I would kill her for you, but...”

“But then Thor will be mad at you... and me...”

“Mad? He'll be furious, he'll throw me into inferno of Muspelheim for that!”

“He wouldn't dare go that far, but she is his friend and he doesn't take it lightly when someone messes with his friends, even if they are just Demigods.” I pulled her to my lap and she laughed.

“Friend? Loki, Loki.... please don't tell me you're that blind. She's not just a friend, he's in love with her!”

“Nuh, he just hits on her, it's like their thing. It's how they met. He made a pass at her, she said no, and then they started to talk and became friends. Now it's like a friendly, fun ritual.” I wrapped my arms around my girl and she embraced my face in her hands.

“My dear Loki, open your eyes! He loves her! Remember when she was hurt, when you hunted that beast on Alfheimr? He spend all day by her side and it was just a scratch!”

“He cares for his friends.”

“He didn't do it for Vali. He laughed, making fun of his clumsiness and stopped inviting him on hunts. I'm telling you, Thor loves that valkyrie. He even protected her from Odin and lied to his father that it was his idea to have a horse race on plains of Svartalfheim. He said he made her go with you two and forbade you from telling anyone what he did, so she wouldn't find out!”

“I told you... and only you.” My hand slid on Sigyn's waist and she laid her head on my chest, drawing lines on my neck with her finger.

“I know, that is what made me think that he has feelings for her. I started watching them. His face lights up when she smiles, he goes out of his way to draw attention when she talks with anyone else at the feasts, he keeps propositioning her and keeps taking rejection, when he could so easily just order her to obey.”

She's right... he could, it's in his power. She's only a servant of Aesir after all.

“You know... now when you pointed it out... I witness a few fiery conversations between them and I don't remember anyone who lived after talking that way to Thor... not that many ever dared... but a few who just disagreed with him witnessed his fury. He doesn't take criticism lightly even form equals.”

Sigyn kissed my chest and sat up right, looking into my eyes. “He loves her. Maybe he doesn't realize it himself.. or maybe he does and hides it.” Her smile widened. “ I don't think she knows it either.”

“Really? Hm... I need to think it over... I think I can use it... use it in my advantage somehow...” A smile slowly emerged on my lips and my girlfriend mirrored it. Her finger touched my nose and she pulled away from my hug, standing up.

“That's my Loki. Now I let you think in peace, I'll be back soon, and I want to hear the plan.” She turned by the door and smiled.

“You always were the smart one among your brothers, that is why I chose you.”

“I thought I chose you.”

Sigyn smiled, shaking her head at me.“Honestly... how is that men are always in charge, when they all are so short-sighted?”

Her laugh melted behind the door and my thoughts returned to the newly inquired information. So.. The Mighty Thor has a weakness, and she is not even a Goddess. Hm... how can I use it? My eyes wandered over the room and stopped on the stand with the stone incased tooth of Svartalfheim' bore. Now that was the best kill ever! I wrestled that beast to the ground with my bare hands. Thor raised my hand in victory, congratulating me, and for a weeks everyone talked about that hunt. Those were the days! And ever since that valkyrie joined us, I've got nothing. Not one victory. If before I only had to compete against Thor and Balder, now Thor had an ally. I swear, so many times I thought they could read each other's minds, how easily they were synchronizing their moves.

What if I make sure she's not there for the next hunt? Missing from Asgard.. stuck somewhere... preferably forever... Nuh... if he really loves her he wouldn't be hunting, he would be looking for her.

Wait... I got it! He will be looking for her! It will be just me and Balder here... and father is out of reach for now... So if we're to have some kind of dangerous situation, which I can easily manipulate, I will be the one who saves the Asgard! I will be a hero!

Okay, so I need to make sure that Demigoddess is missing... I need to spy on her and see what I can come up with... my shape-shifting powers will come in so handy. I rubbed my hands together, smiling to myself in foretaste of a new game. As for Thor, I need to make sure he can't easily comeback to Asgard...

A knock on the door dropped me back out of my thoughts and before I could answer, Balder's voice bellowed.

“Are you going to Thor's house to celebrate or are you going to mop the rest of the day?”

“I wouldn't miss it for a world!” I opened the door, hiding my wicked smile. What better place you can find to watch my to-be puppets celebrating their last victory.

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jØrdan
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Sigyyyyyyyyyyyyynnnnnnn, you manipulative hoe!!!
LOL clearly I'm not too fond of her. :P

Okay, what I love about what you did is you set in place Loki being the villain, but you also showed his side. Of course he's bitter and angry... his brother is always in the spotlight, and now a love of his brother's is winning what he thinks should be his.

I honestly feel kind of bad for him... he's already angry and upset, and Sigyn is like a little devil on his shoulders whispering things into his ear.

I wonder how this is going to play out, how he's going to deceive her... and of course she's a sucker for mortal love... so that won't go well, lol.

Amazing writing as always, and you leave me wanting more!!! :P

I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!! :heart:
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Verde Manzanita
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Argh, I already hate that Sigyn whore! :angry

I loved it Olya, I maybe can understand Loki's jealousy and his wish to be not just respected but loved, but taking revenge on his brother is not the way, and Astrid is not guilty at all, but well... we all know Loki, don't we?

MOAR! :heart:
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tuesday's gone
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LOL, you'll start a misogynist movement here, Sigyn is just so wonderfully evil. I love it! I love the smell of scheming and conspiracy and foul games!

And what's with "I hope you're still interested" introduction?! *spank, spank* OF COURSE we're interested! The fun is just starting! Oh, and *hugs* sorry you got drained at work.

Now, Loki... I tend to agree with Jordan and other commenters, in a way one has to feel for him. Thor's shadow so huge, it must suck to be in it all the time. But I have hope for Loki. Eventually. :biggrin

I love your writing. I love your characters. I love this story. And I love you. :heart:
Edited by tuesday's gone, August 21, 2012, 7:23 am.
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^agreed, agreed, agreed.

this is fantastic! can't wait for more!
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cmania
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:lol: Loki ahah he is evil but funny
:cool Maybe such evil plan to make Thor away to help his "love" will be not that bad :heart:

ewhh imagining things on my head :P

moreee
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August 20, 2012, 10:48 pm
Okay, what I love about what you did is you set in place Loki being the villain, but you also showed his side. Of course he's bitter and angry... his brother is always in the spotlight, and now a love of his brother's is winning what he thinks should be his.
I couldn't agree more! That was one thing I didn't like about the Thor movie. They made it seem like Loki just decided to go evil. I like that you gave him a deep purpose and showed the reader that he's not to the point of evil.

You, my dear, are a genius!! Bad ass fic!! LOVE IT :heart:
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Interested? INTERESTED?! My ass is blue if I'm not interested. Don't fancy a blue butt... this Fic is the shit! :heart:
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James as Thor?

:drool :drool :drool :bed:

You've got my attention. :biggrin
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Great update!

I liked the interaction between Sigyn and Loki. I liked all the little details in this. And, well they won't be my favorites.

Can't wait for more!
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HELL YEAH!!! :biggrin :horns2

Oh damn you woman!!!
You know Viking James is my weakness :P
How the hell you get such brilliant ideas into your pretty head? :P
More is all I can finish with :heart: :horns2
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Jäger.....

Thank you girls so much!
Thank you for reading and for your awesome comments!
Love you all!
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III.




(Astrid's POV)



The victory glorification days flew by fast and soon it was forgotten, returning life in Asgard to its normal order. Thor found another Goddess to seduce, spending his charm and most of his time with her, and I found myself drawn back to Freya's hall. I just couldn't stop thinking about that couple, about their love. I started watching the human world more closely, trying to understand their nature.

I watched them fall in love, watched them cherish each other, grow old together. Not all the lives were a perfect love story, but so many of them were. Mortal life was hard and short but strangely full, complete. Besides love they had so many other emotions and they were so strong. They worried about their loved ones, about their families, their children, they protected them and risk their lives for them. They loved, they cried, they hated... they truly lived.

Maybe a part of it was that they were mortal... they knew they are going to die. Die from wounds, disease, a cold, they could die from a broken heart, but they tried their best. I watched their lives, cried with them, laughed with them, and I got attached to them. When I saw the mark of the right of the slain on one of the newlywed warriors, who's wife had just become pregnant I spent all night crying. The mark wasn't something that could be removed, he was chosen, it was the Gods' will and there was nothing anyone could do about it. The next day I came back to the gazing cup with a heavy heart and spent all day watching them in their oblivious to the near doom happiness.

“Help them...” A faint whisper made me jump and turn.

“Who's here?” My eyes scanned an empty hall.

“You can help them...” The woman's voice repeated out of nowhere.

“Show yourself!” My hand slid to the knife on my belt.

“I mean you no harm and you can't harm me...” The voice bounced, moving along the wall.

“Then you have no reason to be hiding, show yourself!”

“I cannot... I've been nothing but a bodiless spirit for hundreds of years...”

Spirit? I knew about spirits that were left in Asgard from the beginning of times. They were never considered to be harmful, they were just forgotten by the Gods and left untended, but no one ever spoke to one, not to my knowledge anyway.

“Help them...” The woman's voice whispered into my ear.

“How? The Goddesses of Fate have already weaved the thread of his future... no one can change it.” I turned to the emptiness beside me.

“Nothing is impossible...” The voice moved to my other side.

“You know a way?”

“I do...” The voice breathed out.

My heart skipped, thoughts started to jump over each other in my hazed by hope mind. I'm crazy... I'm talking to someone I don't even know who or what! This is crazy! I felt a light breeze and a soft voice sigh.

“Only you can help them...”

The memory of the happiness in the eyes of the chosen warrior when his wife told him about her pregnancy emerged in my mind. He picked her up in his arms, twirling her around and laughing as they fell on the bed. His hands pulled her closer, his eyes shining with bliss, her smiling, elated face... The images changed, chasing each other. Her worried sick when he was too long away on the trip... Her eyes glowing with joy when he'd finally came home... Her cooking a meal for him and him stepping from behind her and embracing her figure, his lips on her neck and her happy giggle... Them making plans for the future, laying in each other's arms...

Those plans will never come to be... He will never live to see his child born... he'll die in a few days, leaving her all alone... Another image rose up from my memory. An elderly woman in tears pressing her lost loved one's sword to her chest. The pain in her eyes, the tears on her face... I can't let that happen again... I have to help them, if it is with in my power, I have to help them. I breathed in and exhaled my answer.

“Tell me how.”

“The pendant of a Valkyrie has the power to grant many wishes, but you only need one to help him.” The voice came closer.

“My pendant?” My fingers slid over the glowing blue stone on my neck. “Who are you? How do you know this?”

“I was here when worlds were born, my knowledge is great.”

“Name yourself.”

“My name is lost over centuries that passed by, no one can remember it, not even me...”

“How do I know you are telling me the truth?” I raised my chin and turned to the part of the room where the voice came from.

“What reason do I have to lie? I have nothing to gain by it. I need nothing, I am nothing...” The voice whispered softly, moving across the room.

“Then why are you helping me?” I turned to follow the sound.

“I've watched you coming here for a long time... you reminded me of my pain, my love...” The voice stopped by the gazing cup.

“You knew love? Real love?”

“My heart will be his till the end of times...” The voice sighed, filled with sadness and the image of the elderly woman floated in my mind. If it's within my power to not let this happen again, I must help those mortals. I looked back at the gazing cup and my lips let out my decision.

“Tell me what I must do.”


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tuesday's gone
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Finally!!! I love you for updating! :heart: :heart: :heart:

Who's that mysterious spirit, I wonder?
And Astrid! Why are you so good hearted and trusty? There are people/spirits/perhaps even Gods (I wonder which one...? :angry) who'd like to hurt you!
But of course, she's too into humans, she'll run to help them.

What happens next? Where's Thorr? I want to see James! I mean Thor! I mean... gah!
I want more of this fic!!!
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Verde Manzanita
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I don't really know why, but at least for now I cannot trust that "spirit". I mean, we all know Loki's plans so if I would Astrid I'd be careful (although, of course, she does not have a clue of what Thor's brother is trying to do). Well, I don't know, let's see what happens.

I understand her and her feelings for the human way of life. We can love we can hate, we can laugh and cry, we can be good or evil... not everything is perfect or good but it is true and we can live it, and the fact that all of that has an expiration day because we all are going to die is what makes life interesting and worth to live it. Or at least I believe it that way.

Can't wait for more! :heart:
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