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| ...For love is Immortality.; Hetero, James as Thor/OFC Valkyrie, AU | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: August 15, 2012, 1:22 pm (15,405 Views) | |
| MetallicaObsessed | October 15, 2012, 3:36 pm Post #76 |
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Some Kind Of Monster
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WOMAN! Why must you do this to me!? My heart is racing just thinking about poor Thor's panic and worry, not to mention the fact that I want to know what is going on with Astrid. I'm seriously almost in tears I am so upset by this! But then, mothers always know best, right? |
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| Olyamet | October 15, 2012, 7:36 pm Post #77 |
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Jäger.....
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Awww... Glad you liked it! And, yes, mother knows the best... hehehehe I'm working on Astrid's part!
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| SlayingTheDreamer | October 16, 2012, 2:18 pm Post #78 |
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Never talk with strangers.
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I think I'm in love with Thor also, I NEED to know what's going on with Astrid! write fast Olya! |
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| Olyamet | October 16, 2012, 7:56 pm Post #79 |
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Jäger.....
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Me too... and not just my James-Thor... As for writing, I'm going as fast as I can! ![]() |
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| jØrdan | October 17, 2012, 7:19 pm Post #80 |
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Valar Morghulis
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LOL!^ Okay, so last night, I read the damn thing on my phone (which was hard.) But OMG was it worth it! But you suck for still leaving me hanging! I need to know what's going on with Astrid, first and foremost, and Thor's worry is making my heart melt... lol (cheesy) OLYA MAMA I NEED EET! Thanks for the update, great writing as always.. (just what I needed on a sick day to pick me up!)
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| Olyamet | October 18, 2012, 9:29 pm Post #81 |
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Jäger.....
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Thank you baby, means a lot to me, I know you weren't feeling well and to read on the phone is a torture! Thank you!
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| tuesday's gone | October 20, 2012, 3:26 pm Post #82 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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The most beautiful scene of this update!!! Isn't it symbolic, this mother-son scene, given the real life James' story? So the mother tries to tame her unruly child. Good luck with that Frigg.... One thing she forgets though, it's not only immortality he had left.It's a secret weapon, a driving force, strength above all others. Even he doesn't know it yet. It's romantic! I love it! And Loki. You motherf... Astrid stuck in the mortal world, without her immortality. Thor stuck in the immortal world, without all his powers and only immortality left. Bleak prospects? But wait, love is immortality I hope for an update soon, even though I don't deserve it *puppy eyes*
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| Daughter Of Immortality | October 22, 2012, 3:57 pm Post #83 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Frigg is so cruel. How can she punish Thor so sternly? Thor without powers? He will go nuts. I hope he will find a way to help Astrid, because if he does not show up soon she will think he abandoned her. Poor Astrid, she will pay for Thor’s all mistakes. Worried Loki? Please!!! |
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| cmania | October 23, 2012, 3:36 pm Post #84 |
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Frantic
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Amazing girlThor without powers uhh I can´t imagine it but it´s kinda romantic ^.^o.o Thor you have to help Astrid like .. now !!! Will Thor turn mortal to help and protect Astrid where she is now? Hang on there Astrid don´t give up! There´s someone worried hang on girl! Loki
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| Olyamet | October 24, 2012, 8:21 pm Post #85 |
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Jäger.....
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@ Tiffany, Mia, Jordan, I already answered to your comments (braking my own rule not to bump my fics by commenting every comment...lol) thank you girls!!! @ Bo. Awww.. You rock! You always get deep inside of my mind! Love you! Btw... um... you owe me update! @ Maja. Well, stripping Thor of his powers maybe do him some good... hehehehehe @ Cate. Will Thor turn mortal... hm... we'll see... Thank you all girls! Well, do you think it's time to see what's happening to Astrid? VIII. (Astrid's POV) “Shining stars and the morning sun, fill us all with the precious love... our love is timeless... Off we go in clouds of dust, on the road of shining moon and the songs of the future and past take us home together soon...”* Soft singing invaded my darkness, pulling me from the depths of the abyss to the barely there light. My mind followed the words of the song, rising to the surface of nothingness and I opened my eyes. My blurred vision registered flickering red shadows on the rocks above me and I sat up, taking a deep breath as my body painfully emerged from numbness. A hoarse moan of pain flew from my lips as my hands gripped to the tight bonds on my torso. The singing stopped and someone's hands landed on my shoulders. “Thank the merciful Gods, you are awake!” The face of a young girl with long white hair and a warm green eyes was smiling in front of me. “Where... am I?” My words barely made it out, cutting through my dry throat and I tried to swallow, but the sharp pain in my side made me gasp, pushing another hoarse moan from my lips. My head spun and the thickness of abyss rose, threatening to swallow me again. I gripped to the cold rock wall, and the girl's hands held on to me, pulling me back to reality. “Take it easy, your body is still weak. Don't worry, you are safe here. I found you in a horrible dead field, you were badly burned and wounded, but breathing. I brought you to this cave and did all I could using herbs for your burns and wound. I was afraid you weren't going to make it, you were out for days.” “Days?” I pushed out another hoarse whisper and the girl quickly stood up, returning with a cup in her hands. “Here drink this, it'll help you to regain your strength.” “Thank you...” I whispered between fast gulps of something green, and the bitter-sweet liquid soothed my burning throat. “My name is Lana. What happened to you on that field?” Curious greens peaked from behind the cup. I lowered my drink and opened my mouth to answer, but froze, realizing that I couldn't recall anything, absolutely nothing but darkness before this moment. I looked into the green eyes of my savior, feeling eternally lost. “I... I don't remember...” “What is your name?” My numb mind searched, slowly turning over the blank pages of my memory. “I don't know... All I remember is blackness...” I bent to put the cup down on the rocky floor and the pin of pain dug deeper, making me hold my breath and grip to my burning side. My hand slid over wet sticky fabric, which was tightly wrapped around my body, and Lana's hand covered mine. “I know it's tight, it has to stay in place. It helps you to heal, your wound was so deep, it went all the way through your body, and it kept bleeding, I had to use pine sap mixed with aloe leaves to try and close it, the wraps are holding it closed.” I let go of my side and with the help of my healer leaned back against the wall of the cave. The cold rocks brought much needed relieve and I breathed out easier, looking around the softly lit cave. I don't know who I am, I don't remember anything before I woke up in here... why? My eyes stopped on the fire by the opening of the cave and something stirred in my mind, but it never surfaced, drowning back into the dark fog. My new friend moved to my side with a sigh. “I was so eager to hear what happened to you, hoping you'd tell me who you battled with.” Her green eyes turned to mine. “I thought about it... a lot... I couldn't stop...” The girl lowered her eyes and bit her lip. “I even made up a little story to pass the time... I imagined that it was a glorious battle, the princess warrior against a mighty fire breathing dragon!” Green eyes lit up. “You were fearless, despite your wounds, and the dragon was so powerful! But your sword pierced its fire filled heart as it rose above you for the final attack and its body burst in flames, knocking you out.” The girl's eyes sparkled before turning worried, and she quickly lowered her face. “I'm sorry, don't listen to me, I always come up with silly stories. Everyone hates it, they say those beasts I see are not real, don't exist...” She looked back at me. “You did look like a warrior when I found you. Your armor was burned and bent, you had a winged helmet on and the sword in your hand! Here, I have it right here!” Lana jumped to her feet and pulled out a long shining blade and bent helmet from behind the rock, handing them to me. My weak hand gripped the handle and I almost dropped the unbearably heavy weapon. “I don't remember having it...” “It's okay, maybe it'll come back to you later. Sorry, I had to cut your armor open, I was thinking to go back there later to get it, but that place frightened me so much, it felt so... deathly, so unbearably lifeless... I couldn’t...” “It's okay, it was probably in worse shape than the helmet...” My eyes slid on the charred metal and bent wing on my helmet and looked back at my savior. Green eyes shined as the face of the girl lit with a smile. “I thought you were a viking.” “What is viking?” Something familiar turned in my mind. “My people like to call them barbarians. I've never seen one, but I know they are almighty warriors, like you. My people use swords too, but only for war. Most of the time we use bows and arrows, knifes and sometimes spears, we are hunters and farmers, not warriors.” Spear... hunters... My mind caught those somehow familiar words, but the dark fog thickened once again, making me sigh. Why can't I remember? I looked at the sword in my hand and lowered my eyes to the helmet, sliding my fingers over the blackened metal. “Maybe you're right...” “Well, in my story you were! I didn't know your name... so I named you Sigred. It's a viking name, means a beautiful victory.” “Judging by my state, it wasn't much of a victory...” I smiled at my little helper. “You are alive and that is all what counts!” She smiled. “You survived whatever it was, that's a victory!” “Well, since I have no idea who I am and what my name is, I guess you can continue to call me Sigred.” “Actually, I was calling you Sig for short, I don't like full names. Mine is Svetlana, but I always preferred Lana.” My new friend bit her lip looking at me and I smiled back. “Okay, Sig it is... I kind of like it.” I looked at the happy greens. “So, since there is nothing I can tell you about me, let's hear your story. Something tells me that a girl your age shouldn't be traveling by yourself.” “I'm not that young, I'm almost of age to get married.” My new friend sighed and lowered her chin on her knees after pulling them to her chest. “It's a long story... in short, I ran away.” * author's notes: Lyrics from 'Gypsy star.' song by Tatiana. |
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| jØrdan | October 24, 2012, 8:36 pm Post #86 |
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Valar Morghulis
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Aw, why'd you stop there? I want to hear her story!!! I love this: “Judging by my state, it wasn't much of a victory...” I smiled at my little helper. Hehe... I can't believe she can't remember anything... but I love Lana already! She's definitely a dreamer... hehe. I hope you keep her in the story as her companion for the long haul. I'm already attached, dammit... lol. Her appearance seems cool and perky! OMG... I bet she'll get on Astrid's *cough* I mean... Sig's nerves later on, but it'll be like a little sister, hehe. OMG! I'm so excited for the next update! Shit... what should I call her now? Sigrid? BV? (beautiful victory)??? lol I'll just stick to my original plan and call her "Ass". Hehe, JK! I missed Astrid! Thanks for the update! It was a beautiful victory! hehe |
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| Olyamet | October 24, 2012, 8:50 pm Post #87 |
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Jäger.....
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Well, the next update will be Lana's POV! So you'll know all about her, well, almost all...
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| SlayingTheDreamer | October 26, 2012, 2:48 pm Post #88 |
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Oh, I loved Lana! I already see she'll be awesome character can't wait for the next POV
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| MetallicaObsessed | October 26, 2012, 10:17 pm Post #89 |
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Some Kind Of Monster
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Short, but sweet! I, too, am already attached to Lana. With her vivid imagination, she reminds me of you! LOL I'm glad to know that Astrid/Sig is alive. I am anxious to see how she regains her memory! But I NEED MORE THOR!
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| Daughter Of Immortality | October 27, 2012, 4:18 am Post #90 |
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Poor Twisted Me
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Poor Astrid! She can't remember anything? But I like this twist! She doesn't know anything about her previous life and she doesn't remember Thor. It will be interesting to see how will she adopt to her new life, but most of all, I hardly wait for her first meeting with Thor. I am afraid it will be a long wait. Lana is OK, but I will wait to make my own judgment about her. I hope the next update will be a Thor's POV. I am curious what is happening with him and in him. |
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Amazing girl
but it´s kinda romantic ^.^
Loki

8:39 PM Jul 10