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...For love is Immortality.; Hetero, James as Thor/OFC Valkyrie, AU
Topic Started: August 15, 2012, 1:22 pm (15,403 Views)
Daughter Of Immortality
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Sweet and short! Did I mention that I like to read a long chapters? :) I love you!

Great "part" of the chapter. :wub: I wish to see Thor near to Astrid, but I am not sure I would like the Sigyn's solution of this problem.

But I am curious, what is her plan?

Update soon! :heart:
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jØrdan
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I feel for Loki, too. Not his fault he was born a jealous asshole, lol. Well... he's second always to Thor, and then to Astrid. And now...

I hope he dumps that bitch. lol

Great update, me wants more!
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tuesday's gone
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November 19, 2012, 12:05 pm
why do I always have sympathy for Loki? even though I'm not supposed to.
I guess that's because Olya is such a good writer, I blame you Olya :biggrin
My thoughts exactly!

You make Loki a villain with a soul. He's multifaceted, not black, but grayish, in a way, one has to feel for him.

But then:
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sitting on the floor by the bed

my heart squeezed!

And this
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No one can step foot on Midgard without loosing powers, so no one will help him to get there.

What makes you so sure, Loki?

Why is the mother on her way to see Thor?

And what is that bitch Sigyn up to now!

You teaser, you! :heart: :heart: :heart:

More, more, more!
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Olyamet
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Thank you girls!!!!
Love you all!!
:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

And now the rest of that chapter! And... guess who's POV?
The mother... :biggrin












(Frigg's POV)





She woke up, she pulled through! I sighed with relief and closed the cover on the mirror to all worlds. My eyes drifted to the hidden door at the end of my bedroom. I know what he said, what he asked for, but... I have to talk to him. If his test or what ever it was is over, he has to make it all right. That poor girl doesn't deserve such punishment, she acted from the goodness of her heart, not to gain anything. He has to bring her back.

My legs swiftly carried me to the door but my hand hesitated on the handle for a second before turning it. I stepped in and slowly made my way through the thick white fog of the barrier into the hidden realm. I had never been here before, I never dared to bother my husband when he needed to think things through. It was his sanctuary, his private place, and I always honored his will to be alone. I knew how stressful his life was at times. The burden of being the king of it all, to think of everything and everyone...

“Shining stars and the morning sun, fill us all with precious love... Our life is timeless, and one feels like all, and all feel like one.”

I heard Odin's voice sing and stepped out of the fog, making my way through the beautiful garden. As I came to the opening, my eyes stopped on a dear to me figure by the blossoming tree in the center of the garden. Odin's hands rose up, clipping a few weak shoots of the cherry tree and he stepped back, admiring his work before continuing his singing.

“Off we go in clouds of dust, on the road of shining moon and the songs of the future and past take us home together soon...” One of his wolves joined him with a howl and Odin lowered his hand on Gari's head.

“I agree, it's a great song, I love it too, but we have company.” Odin patted his companion and turned to me.

“Even in this place of serenity and eternal bliss I can feel how troubled you are, my love.”

“I know you asked not to be disturbed... I waited as long as I could, but...” I stepped over the small creek, and my husband lent me a hand, pulling me into his arms.

“I'm happy you're here! But don't tell me you only came because your faith in my word is weakened by worry.” Odin's lips softly touched my cheek and I lowered my head, whispering into his chest.

“A mother's heart knows no rest.”

“Did you talk to him?” My husband's hand slid over my hair as he pressed me closer.

“Today... I couldn't stay long, fearing that I would disobey you and do what he asked for.”

“What did he ask for?”

“To go to Midgard. If I knew how to unbind his powers, I would've... the fear for him to go there powerless stopped me.” I pulled away from my love's arms and looked into his eye. “You never told me how to return his powers... you did it on purpose, didn't you? You knew I would've disobeyed you.”

“Everything must play through, no matter how hard it is.” My husband's hands landed on my shoulders.

“Odin, I trust in your wisdom and I trust in your knowledge of the future, but he is my son. He wants to do what's right, to take her place and be punished instead, isn't that enough? He passed your test, he proved himself to be worthy of the crown, now set it all back to normal.”

“It's admirable that he wants to do the right thing, it's a great quality of a future king. I had no doubt he would ask for that.”

“Then please, stop this madness! Astrid's return with the snap of your fingers, let it all end happily, I beg of you!”

“I can't, my love. It's not over yet... it's all just begun. There is much more to come... and you need to brace yourself for the future events, try to be strong.” My husband's hand slid softly on my arms to my hands, but I stepped back.

“Are you telling me it will get worse than it already is? Why must it go on? What else do you want from them? They all understood their past acts were foolish. It pains Thor to see his friend being punished for his deeds!”

“His friend... he still calls her his friend?” My husband looked at me and turned to his wolves. “You were right... He is not ready yet...”

“Not ready for what?” I stepped forward, turning my husband's attention back to me.

“For the crown.” He sighed and looked at me. “My love, do you know what separates boys from men? A good ruler from a great one? A heart. A heart that is awakened. A heart that is connected to the mind. I would have never become a great ruler if I hadn't met you. My love is awakened my heart, adding to my wisdom. My heart showed me what my mind alone was unable to grasp. Decisions made with the heart and mind in sync are signs of a wise king.”

“Then there is something wrong with that connection between your mind and your heart. Your decision to do nothing when Astrid lost it all was heartless. It was cruel, and now you're making me to be cruel, too. Or has your heart gotten too numb in this still place?” I stepped back, but Odin caught my hand, lightly squeezing it in his.

“Trust me my love, it was one of the hardest decisions I have ever made. Why do you think I'm here? I needed to be away, I needed to stay here, and let it all run it's course. And I have to let it play out to the end. I can't interfere no matter what, it's written in the runes, it must be so. All who are involved must make their own decisions, they must follow their destiny, and we can't interfere.”

A small pin of guilt pinched my consciousness and I lowered my eyes, remembering that I did just that, I interfered. I had no choice, I couldn't stand by and do nothing. I couldn't... I disobeyed my husband's orders to stay in Asgard, and rushed to Midgard when I saw Astrid's fall... I couldn't stand by and do nothing... she was falling so fast and from such a great height with her powers and immortality gone, she wouldn't have survive the fall. I couldn't let her die, I shielded her from the explosive power of the hit and protected her from the blast. I was about to heal her wounds but I heard the howl of my husband's wolves and had to flee... I'm not sorry for what I did, I love that Valkyrie like my own daughter, I couldn't let her die. I rose my chin and stumbled on the penetrating gaze of Odin's all seeing and eternally wise eye.

“Even your choice and your decision to act against my word to save Astrid was a part of it. You acted with your heart, even when I told you to do nothing. All of it was written, all was played as it should be.”

“You knew I would disobey you?”

“I was counting on it, but now, now it's all in the hands of our sons. They must make choices. They've had everything from the day they were born, everything was easy, everything was handed to them. Boys don't turn into men when they are pampered, they need to overcome difficulties, they have to win or lose fights, that is what builds character. And everyone who involved in this ordeal, will make their choices too...” Odin sighed and pulled my hand, bringing me closer. “Stay here with me, you've done your par for now.”

“You just want to prevent me from interfering again...” I felt my heart trembling in my chest, silently screaming my worries out. I can't just stay here and know nothing about the world! Not knowing what my sons are doing... to leave them all alone right now in the middle of this? I can't do that! My eyes stopped on Odin's face and I read that his decision was set.

“Count it as a vacation, away from the noise and the worry of the world.” He smiled at me and I threw the last possible escape.

“But who will watch over Asgard? Thor is powerless and--”

Odin smiled and shook his head.

“We do have three sons, have faith in their ability to act without parental supervision. It's all up to them now, my love.”

“I don't know... Loki is a sneaky troublemaker, Thor is stubborn as a bilchsteim, and Balder is so loyal to his brothers, he'd follow them even if they decide to jump off the Bifrost. They're still just boys, even though all of them are long past teenage years.” I looked at my husband and he smiled at me.

“I'm asking you to keep me a company, I'm not imprisoning you, you are free to leave when you want to. As for our sons, Gari and Freki will keep an eye on them. Won't you boys?” Odin turned to his wolves and both four-legged guards rose their faces, releasing a short howl before vanishing in the white fog of the barrier.

My heart jumped to follow them, burning up with the image of Thor sitting on the floor with a mask-like face, but my husband's arm wrapped around my waist and my heart warmed up, reminding me of my eternal trust in his wisdom. Odin's hands met mine and our fingers intertwined, as always. I breathed in, raising my head up to the never changing sky of this hidden from time realm and the world worries slowly sunk down, letting the feeling of serenity take over.

I looked at the silver hair of the man I loved for so long and smiled when he childishly pushed me to the cherry tree. His hands rose up, tilting my face to his and our lips met, making me melt into bliss. I did miss him... no matter how long we've been together, my love for him had never faded away, if anything, it got stronger with age... despite everything we went through, my love had never died.

Odin pulled back from my lips and smiled as if he read my thoughts. He looked up and my eyes followed his gaze, noticing a blue ribbon on one of the upper branches. Wait... it's... it can't be... but it is... it's my ribbon! I tied it on the small cherry tree to mark the place I would meet him when we were just teenagers... It was thousands of years ago... I used to sneaked out from home to be with my love, against my father's will... It's our tree... he saved it and preserved it here in the middle of his serenity garden. I looked back at my husband, feeling tears of gratitude watering my eyes, and he smiled at me.

“You thought me that there is a higher power, the power that beyond Gods will. It called love. You left your world and lost everything you had to be with me, even though I had nothing when we met. Everything I have, everything I am now, I owe it all to you. You are always were and always will be my strength, my bliss and my serenity, my love.”


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jØrdan
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;;__;; OH MY GOD.

Nurse Olya, come and save me, because I'm kind of like dead.

OMG! This was sooooo beautiful! I loved the whole concept of this update... that you can't be a true ruler or a true man without having love being part of your decisions... that last paragraph made me so giddy... hehehe.

And now I'm waiting for Thor to admit that Astrid isn't just a "friend" to him.

GOD, I NEED MORE!!!

Beautifully written as always, Olya. :heart:
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This is so fantastically written, I don't know what else to say!
I mean, Olya!!!

This is hands down the best piece of your writing I have read!
The choice of words, the sentence structure, the ideas, the setting... It is all brought to absolute perfection!

I am completely blown away, completely!!!

BEAUTIFUL WRITING! Thank you so much for this!

:heart: :heart: :heart:

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Daughter Of Immortality
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Dear Olya, what to say... I am speechless!

Beautifully written part, with so much emotions.

:cloud9

I hope you will surprise us with new update very soon! :heart:
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The mother's POV, how wonderful! Odin must know her very well! I would have been in the same place as Frigg. I am glad he allowed her to help Astrid! I am sorry it has taken until now for me to read this update. Now, I fear, I simply MUST have another! Olya, I am enraptured with this story!
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Thank you girls, you made my day!!!
Love you all!
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Okay, so... here is what you were waiting for. Thor.












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(Thor's POV)




Mother had finally told me what my little Valkyrie did, and It was all my fault... if I had just listened to her that evening... if I'd paid attention to what she was saying, I would've known what she was planning. I would've stopped her. Why didn't I listen? I was too busy flirting with some bimbo... I was only thinking of myself... my pleasure... fuck! I squeezed my hand harder, watching blood dropping on the floor, but the pain of the cuts didn't relieve the pain in my chest. I opened my hand and looked at the broken spearhead.

Astrid... why...? You lost everything, just so some mortal could live a few more years, why...? How could you be so foolish! I should've listened to you, talked to you more. What was she talking about that evening? Something about the spirits... she asked if anyone had ever talked to one.... Could that be what she did? And it told her about the pendant, about the wishes, but forgot to mention that a wish that meant to undo Gods will was too big! I will turn this realm upside down, but I'll find who it was and bring the full power of my fury upon them! I squeezed the spearhead again and it dug into my skin, drawing more blood.

I should've known she'd do something like that... all my fault. Why can't mother understand that I can't just sit here and let her suffer? She is there because I was too stupid to see where her obsession with mortals was leading her! It's all my fault! I closed my eyes, hitting the wall with the back of my head and squeezed my hand closed again, feeling the sharp edges of the broken spear cutting into my flesh.

The breeze from the open window moved my hair, the sound of a closing door followed, and I growled without opening my eyes.

“I already told you Loki, I told Balder too, leave me be in my misery.” Just leave me alone, you can't help me, I won't let anyone else be punished because of me...

“I thought you were avoiding me, but then I heard what happen. You poor thing, you didn't have to prove that you are one of the most powerful Gods.” The soft voice made me open my eyes and I almost immediately closed them back with annoyance.

Sol. The person I least wanted to see. The bitch that pulled me away from Astrid that evening! A wave of anger rose up, flooding my mind, but I pushed it down, closing my eyes. It's not her fault, yes, she was the one who distracted me, but it was my fault, not hers.

“I wasn't proving anything.” Grumpiness still made its way through my voice, but Sol didn't notice it and I felt the air move as her body drew closer.

“Sure you were, you were proving yourself worthy of me! That was so brave, and so manly, ordering your mother to open the portal. You sure know how to get girl's attention.”

My eyes flew open. What? I couldn't believe what I just heard and stared at The Goddess of Sun as she made herself comfortable on my bed, smiling seductively.

“I know that I make guys do crazy things at times, many lose their heads falling for me. Some even pay with their lives for my love. And now the Mighty Thor himself was so desperate to get me that he lost his head and his powers.” She giggled and bit her lip, playing with one of her curls.

What...? She thinks I'm what? In love with her? Wow... I mean I knew she wasn't the brightest one around, despite her being the sun and all that, but... wow... I watched her smiling face, astounded with her stupidity and narcissistic belief that everything revolved around her.

“Sol...” I started with a sigh, but she interrupted me.

“No need for words, you won.” She moved her shoulder, making the strap of her dress fall down, and her voice turned sultry. “Come here and claim your prize.”

Her shallowness was so stunning that I couldn't even find what to say. She bit her lip and played her eyebrows at me, not realizing that the only thing I wanted to do to her right now was to throw her out of the fucking window, but fearing that her ego may not fit through. She was so full of herself and so oblivious to everything else, I couldn't even be angry with her.

“Sol...” I cleared my throat, thinking of a way to get her out of my room. “I can't... not right now. I need to think and... you'd better go...”

“Aww... you're worried that you'll disappoint me in bed without your powers! That is so sweet!”

Fucking brainless cow! I mean really how stupid one can be? Should I just say it straight? It's not about you, in fact, I long forgot all about you! I never was and never will be in love with you, I wanted to fuck you and that's all! Just a few nights of fucking, nothing more! It's amazing how she sees nothing else but herself in everything! I can't believe I was attracted to her! She thinks she's the center of the world and everyone's thoughts!

Meanwhile Sol lowered her other strap, letting her dress fall to her waist and seductively lowered herself on the covers. I looked at her half naked body, and felt absolutely nothing. As she playfully pulled the silky fabric aside, it rose in the air, reminding me of the morning before all fuck broke loose. I can't believe I fantasized about that woman... what did I see in her? I'm looking at her right now and see nothing but self-centered idiot. The fabric slowly settled down and my mind brought back another image of that morning. Waves of black hair on my pillow, alabaster skin... My heart skipped pulling to the vision. I always thought I had plenty of time, that I can play for now, that one day...

“When I saw you just sitting here, all heart broken for me, I couldn't help but come over. Now I'm here, I'm giving myself to you. Come to me...” Sol's voice interrupted my thoughts and her glowing figure bleed through, dismissing my vision.

Yeah, yeah, just go the fuck away. Wait... Saw me... when did she..? “You could see me?”

Sol turned to the side, propping her head on her hand. “I can see everything my rays touch. As my chariot fly over the worlds, my maidens reach to all corners to bring warmth.” Self praising smile lit her face and I jumped with realization. She can see Midgard! How could I forget!

“Did you see Astrid?”

Sol rose up with a stunned face. “I'm in your bed, half naked, and you ask me about some girl?”

“Please tell me you saw her. Tell me she's not harmed. I need to know where she is!”

Sol's face twisted with anger as she yanked her dress back up. “I'm not to be taken lightly, I deserve to be loved and worshiped, and instead of feeding my passion you're asking about some pathetic valkyrie? Lower then valkyrie, a miserable mortal?”

Her words made my blood boil with anger, and it flooded my mind, pushing out a roar.

“Don't you ever talk about her like that, you brainless, egotistic cow! You're not worth one of her fingernails!”

“Brainless, egotistic cow? How dare you?!!” Sol's face flashed red, eyes turned into fire, burning with fury, and her next words came out in spits of lava.

“You want to know if I saw her? I did! She's dead! She burned, just like you will burn for insulting me!” Her eyes burst with flares, setting the room on fire and a wave of hot air pushed me to the wall, blistering my skin, but that pain was nothing compared to the agony in my heart.

Astrid... no... please no... she can't be dead... it can't be true... I.. I can't... I can't loose her... I felt my heart drop. Mother... why didn't you tell me? My head spun, fingers gripped stronger into the heated up to a bright red spearhead in my hand. Astrid... I should've told you, that I've always...

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jØrdan
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Alright, that's it, I'm so SICK of these goddesses who are so full of themselves! SERIOUSLY!

Well he's wondering why Astrid would risk the entirety of her powers and divinity for the life of a mere mortal... but maybe he needs to think on that more to understand that there's more to life, even eternal life, than divine power.

I can't believe Sol told him that she was dead... and then of course he almost admits to himself that he loves her... what is it going to take?

And the spearhead, a great analogy of how he's feeling... Bleeding inside for her, in pain for her... blood dripping down his hand...

Beautifully written. Great update. Gimme more!! :heart: :biggrin
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Finally Thor's POV! We waited for this so long!

What a mess, Thor has a new enemy the egocentric Sol! I am sure she won't help him what more I afraid her role in the story isn't over.

She was so cruel with telling Thor that Astrid is dead!

Great chapter!
I hope you will update soon!
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@ Jordan. He will get it, much later... hehehehe
Love you baby! Thanks for the comment, I know you are crazy busy right now! :heart:

@ Maja.
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I afraid her role in the story isn't over.
I'm afraid you are absolutely right... :biggrin
Thank you for the comment! For this one and the one in PM! :heart:
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I fear the consequences Thor and/or Astrid will face because of Thor's actions. Sol may be a self centered idiot, but those types are mean and nasty when they don't get their way. Sol is also, officially, on my shit list! My only issue with this update, lovely as it was, is that it was TOO SHORT! I am completely enthralled by this story Olya! More please!?!
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Am I the only one who finds this
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my little Valkyrie

so unbearably adorable?!

Ah the blood… I love how he’s bleeding (bleeding me…), just like she does. And how he draws blood with that exact spear…
It’s so strong their bond, so meant to be, it’s sealed in blood, the elixir of life, the symbol of mortal life, blood pumped by the heart, heart finally having its voice heard in Thor’s life…

Will blood lead him to her?

And then the shallow blonde... Of course :biggrin
I loved the funny moment, how he's in awe of her stupidity.

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that I can play for now, that one day...

Ah it just killed me, I can’t help it, I’m a sucker for commitment. He knows she’s the one, it just hasn’t quite sunk in.

And then the fire in the end… The burning. All kinds of things! Burning jealousy, burning desire, burning conscience, burning love! Beautiful! Fire, a force beyond control, uncontrollable, wild, raging… a bit of Thor in it actually. A bit of love he’s about to fight for. A bit of danger they will all face.

Once again, the voice you give James... It is simply the best James there is. :heart:

Absolutely amazing! Next update cannot come soon enough!
Edited by tuesday's gone, December 6, 2012, 5:56 am.
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@ Tiffany.
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I fear the consequences Thor and/or Astrid will face because of Thor's actions. Sol may be a self centered idiot, but those types are mean and nasty when they don't get their way. Sol is also, officially, on my shit list! My only issue with this update, lovely as it was, is that it was TOO SHORT! I am completely enthralled by this story Olya! More please!?!


You are absolutely right, those types are boil in anger forever. And as you know me, I never put any new characters in my fics just for one update...heheehehe
We'll unfortunatly see Sol again later on. :(
Thanks Hunny!!! :heart:


@ Bo. You always find all the little clues I leave!!! I love you!
And the blood... the blood and the fire it's all symbols of love, you are right my friend.
Thank you!!!!
Well, since I told you what is coming next, I know you can't wait for the update...hehehehe

*runs back to writing*
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